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Potions Under Duress Yet Everything Stays the Same
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Yet Everything Stays the Same

1: The Fate of a Child

2: Time Out of Mind

3: A Very Dangerous Man

4: Searching for Answers

5: Don't Raise Your Eye

6: Tea?

7: Stockholm

8: The Tale of Beetle the Bard

9: Déjà vu

10: Hindsight

11: Unlocking the Future

12: Just Like That

13: Everything Had To Stay the Same

14: Breathe

15: And In the End

16: The Hero Dies in This One

17: Was It Worth It?

Yet Everything Stays the Same

astopperindeath

216 Reviews   |   216 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Humor Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant post-DH/DH compliant Potions Under Duress 67,542 Words 17 Chapters Complete
Aberforth Dumbledore Albus Dumbledore Dobby Harry Potter Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Regulus Arcturus Black Ronald Weasley Rubeus Hagrid Severus Snape Sibyll Trelawney Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Bellatrix Lestrange Rose Weasley

In spring 1980, Severus Snape hears a portion of a prophecy that will change the course of wizarding and Muggle history. The Dark Lord must choose a boy, but which? Snape is sent to discover the boy’s identity, but the answers he seeks are not to be found in his world. Rated M for violence and eventual sexual situations. SS/HG.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: The Fate of a Child

Chapter 2: Time Out of Mind

Chapter 3: A Very Dangerous Man

Chapter 4: Searching for Answers

Chapter 5: Don't Raise Your Eye

Chapter 6: Tea?

Chapter 7: Stockholm

Chapter 8: The Tale of Beetle the Bard

Chapter 9: Déjà vu

Chapter 10: Hindsight

Chapter 11: Unlocking the Future

Chapter 12: Just Like That

Chapter 13: Everything Had To Stay the Same

Chapter 14: Breathe

Chapter 15: And In the End

Chapter 16: The Hero Dies in This One

Chapter 17: Was It Worth It?


About astopperindeath

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astopperindeath

Member Since 2009  |  29 Stories  |  Favorited by 80  |  132 Reviews Written  |  919 Review Responses

Twentysomething lover of Harry Potter fic. I have served as a beta (btw, i am P.I. accredited) for many authors, and welcome the opportunity to do more. I also serve as co-moderator of the LJ community ptterpr0nprmpts along with the fantabulous tonksinger.

I've been around the fandom for a long time... probably since 2003. I've spent most of it lurking, but published some stories under an old pseudonym. Upon entering the fandom, I immediately became a fan of the Snape/Granger pairing. I prefer Hermione to be a bit older, but have been known to deviate from that preference. Other ships that I prefer include Draco/Ginny, Draco/Harry, Snape/Lupin, and Snape/McGonagall. I am open to most ships and recommendations, as ultimately it is this universe that I love.

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Reviews for Yet Everything Stays the Same

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10/10

Owlbait

How intriguing that young Sev should be having true dreams of what happened to his older self. He doesn't seem to be thinking about the dream much, but I suppose finding himself unfettered would be pretty distracting. "The last thought that crossed his mind before his body hit the floor was at least he wasn’t bleeding to death this time"  Fascinating that he should think this!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you for the review!  yeah, i thought the unfettered bit would be distracting, so that's why i went that way with it.  and honestly, i don't think Snape's a guy that passes out that often, so i thought him actually being aware of it would be a little funny.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you for the review!  yeah, i thought the unfettered bit would be distracting, so that's why i went that way with it.  and honestly, i don't think Snape's a guy that passes out that often, so i thought him actually being aware of it would be a little funny.

0/10

AuntieL

OK. I *might* stop whinging about how nothing's going to change for Severus. This was extremely well done, and a very good support for the cause of your plot. :) 

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you!!!

Response from AuntieL (Reviewer)

ROFL. It's not like you *really* need my permission (or that you were even asking for it). I might just stop complaining. I know I've been a complainy whinger. *sheepish grin* I just really like the story, but am a bit heartbroken that it still ends... well... the same.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

i should feel bad about that, but given my really bitchy ANs on the first two chapters, i really don't ;) :p

Response from AuntieL (Reviewer)

Yeah. I read the ANs. I swear, I did. I still love Severus and hate that he died that way. *sigh* I really don't mean for my whinging to discourage you or annoy you. Hope it doesn't.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Oh it doesn't. I knew I was going to piss everyone off. 

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you!!!

Response from AuntieL (Reviewer)

ROFL. It's not like you *really* need my permission (or that you were even asking for it). I might just stop complaining. I know I've been a complainy whinger. *sheepish grin* I just really like the story, but am a bit heartbroken that it still ends... well... the same.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

i should feel bad about that, but given my really bitchy ANs on the first two chapters, i really don't ;) :p

Response from AuntieL (Reviewer)

Yeah. I read the ANs. I swear, I did. I still love Severus and hate that he died that way. *sigh* I really don't mean for my whinging to discourage you or annoy you. Hope it doesn't.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Oh it doesn't. I knew I was going to piss everyone off. 

0/10

AuntieL

Argh! BUT BUT BUT.... It *doesn't* all have to remain the same! Why couldn't he change it????? *sigh* I know. I know. Go read chapter 9. :)

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

b/c i said so! :P

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

b/c i said so! :P

0/10

tenoh27

A lovely chapter, as always, but if the letter and the whole explanation about Ron's motivations, intentions and behaviour were supposed to paint him in the best possible light, I am afraid that I only got half-of-the-point. Reading the letter only made me think that yes, they should make up and be friends again, but that should be the end of it. In anyway, as always, Harry can be relied upon to paint Ron as the guy-with-the-best-of-intentions, so I suppose I should not be surprised. I think the biggest peeve I have is with the fact that Ron is described as one the kindest and gentlest friend Hermione has had. LOL.Thank you very much for this chapter, but I assume that now I can safely think that this story will be fully canon-compliant. :)Still strongly anticipating the next update. :)

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

well, the warning on the first chapter was supposed to make people it'd be canon-compliant, but hey, you're not the only one who thought i was lying :p.  thanks for the review!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

well, the warning on the first chapter was supposed to make people it'd be canon-compliant, but hey, you're not the only one who thought i was lying :p.  thanks for the review!

0/10

tenoh27

This is a truly mind-blowing story so far, very different yet something inexplicably familiar. I am really trying not to hope too much for a different epilogue-ending to canon. Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful story and looking forward to future updates.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

i'm so glad you're enjoying it so far!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

i'm so glad you're enjoying it so far!

0/10

aliciana

Hi....another incredibly good chapter. And I'm sure Harry is utterly fed up being the go-between for these two all this time. So yes...they should both clear the air...admit each others faults...and then agree to disagree. I have missed the lovely Severuses in this chapter but as your writing is so good it's not really much of a hardship. Hope your sojourn is fruitful and enjoyable. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

i'm so glad you enjoyed it! i look forward to your continued feedback!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

i'm so glad you enjoyed it! i look forward to your continued feedback!

0/10

pansycat

Hi there,I like this version of Ron and Hermione.But why does future Snape believe he has to die ?Why is it important ? It seems like he is still blaming himselffor his deatheater past....But if the nosebleed problem could be fixed , why not ?Pansycat

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

because this story is canon compliant ;)

Response from pansycat (Reviewer)

OK, but why present a nosebleed problem which is possibly fixable ?Now I know that JK presented an explanation after the fact, about his portrait not appearing. But did he abandon his post ? Really ??It's obvious that Severus thought he was dying and the trio thought the same.....In fact most likely he did die.But there isn't anything in canon that shows an examined dead body. And if you are going with canon compliant, why present the nosebleed, which might be looked into ?I realize that you have already written it. But your story does present these questions...Although I do realize that if he doesn't die,who would she end up with young or old Snape :).What I said wasn't meant as a criticism, just curiosity...Carry on !!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

because this story is canon compliant ;)

Response from pansycat (Reviewer)

OK, but why present a nosebleed problem which is possibly fixable ?Now I know that JK presented an explanation after the fact, about his portrait not appearing. But did he abandon his post ? Really ??It's obvious that Severus thought he was dying and the trio thought the same.....In fact most likely he did die.But there isn't anything in canon that shows an examined dead body. And if you are going with canon compliant, why present the nosebleed, which might be looked into ?I realize that you have already written it. But your story does present these questions...Although I do realize that if he doesn't die,who would she end up with young or old Snape :).What I said wasn't meant as a criticism, just curiosity...Carry on !!!

0/10

PHONELADY

uhg harry  gees  nice chapter. thanks

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thanks!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thanks!

0/10

Proulxes

Loved Harry's spectacular condescension!  He truly is the Boy-who-takes-it-upon-himself-to-make-the-world-the-shape-he-thinks-it-ought-to-be!  Come on, Hermione! Think Slytherin!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

i love harry, too.  he's not a ron-basher, which i always appreciate.  thanks for the review!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

i love harry, too.  he's not a ron-basher, which i always appreciate.  thanks for the review!

0/10

Minerva

I really like your unusual twist on timetravelling and your portrait of young Snape, thank you.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thanks!!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thanks!!!!

10/10

HalfBlood

Who would have thought? Oh, I love this story! 5 stars!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thank you so much!!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thank you so much!!!!

0/10

matts mom

this chapter was awesome! keep it coming...

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you!!!

10/10

Darque Hart

You know this story is absolutely brilliant!  It took me to the end of the chapter and reading the chapter title again to get the lightbulb to turn on.  Such a dunderhead wondering who was going to Sweden... yes, like I said, brilliant. 

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you so much!!! i'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you so much!!! i'm so glad you're enjoying it!

0/10

AuntieL

Oh MAN. I LOVE his perusal of the house and meeting his portrait. He probably now has a TON of questions, and at least a few answers.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you!!!  yes, there will be lots of questions ;).

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

thank you!!!  yes, there will be lots of questions ;).

0/10

Proulxes

Brilliant. Loved it. Excellent evil cliffie. More please! X

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thank you!!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thank you!!!!

0/10

Severus49

WOW!!! Hermione was trying to protect him, but Portrait was expecting him! So he does remember what happened - at least Portrait remembers. But he left no notes or recollections of the time travel anywhere in his personal writings, which leads me to believe there must have been an Obliviate at some time afterward for him not to have written down what he went through. Hurry with more!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Mwahahahaha. Thanks for the review!!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Mwahahahaha. Thanks for the review!!!!

0/10

Sortiane

It's the best chapter indeed.Thanks

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thank you!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thank you!!!

10/10

Isode

Fantastic chapter I'm so excited to read the next. This just shows that sometimes writer's block can be a good thing.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thanks!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thanks!!!

0/10

AuntieL

Drunk Snape was fun! Nicely done!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thanks!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thanks!!

0/10

aliciana

I'm really enjoying this story and avidly looking forward to each new chapter. I feel you have caught Severus's young cocky voice and characterisation spot on. So well done for that. BTW...I live in Lancashire...near Rawtenstall...a former mill and if I'm not mistaken mining community..,and guess what? On Bocholt Way...town twinning thing....there is a chip shop called The Cottage. Spooky. Now then off to watch Murray hopefully beat my muched loved Federer....I'm a Scot after all....and hope that a certain Mr Rickman might be back again at Wimbledon. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Haha!  I actually did research and found The Cottage's website when writing this.  So not as spooky.  Sorry to ruin the magic ;).  Next chapter in a couple days.  Thanks for taking the time to review!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Haha!  I actually did research and found The Cottage's website when writing this.  So not as spooky.  Sorry to ruin the magic ;).  Next chapter in a couple days.  Thanks for taking the time to review!!!

0/10

nagandsev

Yum! I love the chemistry between them, and Sev's brashness, drunk and sober, towards Hermione intermixed with his uber-clever young Death Eater's radar and inventory of everything she says and does--no Mufliatto? Oooo, can't wait to hear what Sev's going to hear! Hmm... Me thinks Hermione is softening up--just the way Severus likes a witch to soften- lol! Great chapter!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Hehehehe!  Methinks y'all have no idea what's coming ;).  Thanks for the review! :D

Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)

I, for one, know I haven't any idea of what's coming at all--and I'm enjoying every agonizing second of it! It'll give me something to *muse* about out in the wilderness and look forward to coming home to & civilisation, knowing that your next chapter will be up by then!xxx

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

ha!  good luck in the wilderness.  take some bug repellant!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Hehehehe!  Methinks y'all have no idea what's coming ;).  Thanks for the review! :D

Response from nagandsev (Reviewer)

I, for one, know I haven't any idea of what's coming at all--and I'm enjoying every agonizing second of it! It'll give me something to *muse* about out in the wilderness and look forward to coming home to & civilisation, knowing that your next chapter will be up by then!xxx

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

ha!  good luck in the wilderness.  take some bug repellant!

10/10

Owlbait

Heehee. Drunk horny young baby death-eater Snape is a giggle and a half. I wonder how he'll react to what he learns eavesdropping.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thanks!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thanks!!!

0/10

Severus49

Oh, crap! No Muffliato! He's really going to get an earful now! This is my absolutest favorite story at the moment, and I am so glad you updated!!!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thank you!  Sorry it wasn't updated a few days sooner.  Jet lag + stomach virus = ded stopper.  And thanks for such positive feedback.  I can't wait to post the next chapter and see what you think!!

Response from Severus49 (Reviewer)

Oh, I'm so sorry to hear that! I hope you're feeling better now!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

Thank you!  Sorry it wasn't updated a few days sooner.  Jet lag + stomach virus = ded stopper.  And thanks for such positive feedback.  I can't wait to post the next chapter and see what you think!!

Response from Severus49 (Reviewer)

Oh, I'm so sorry to hear that! I hope you're feeling better now!

0/10

Proulxes

Welcome home! Great chapter. The mystery deepens... Just what will he be prepared to do to get away?  And I do love a drunken Snape.  Even better, a young drunken Snape! All that pent up frustration and control gone for a burton. ;). Looking forward to the next chapter! 

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

ha!  yes.  drunk!snape is a particular crutch of mine.  but i do love him so.  as to the mystery deepening, in my mind, this is where the action really starts to pick up.  we'll see what you think.  thanks for the review!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

ha!  yes.  drunk!snape is a particular crutch of mine.  but i do love him so.  as to the mystery deepening, in my mind, this is where the action really starts to pick up.  we'll see what you think.  thanks for the review!

0/10

linlawless

It's so amusing to see Hermione trying to lie and being so bad at it.  And I love that we're seeing little hints of attraction between them here and there.  Can't wait for more! :)  And welcome back from your trip! :D

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

oh there will be more.  there. will. be.  *evil cackle* :-P.  thanks for the review!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Yet Everything Stays the Same)

oh there will be more.  there. will. be.  *evil cackle* :-P.  thanks for the review!

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