“Oh, yes! Severusss!”*Wiggles screen about looking for the next bit*No!  It can't stop there.... want more!Poor Severus, I can't help but feel that could have the same effect as a bucket of iced water.  Probably best for Hermione/Grace that he's wielding the wrong wand for hexing at the moment.

OMG!  Whoops!  Nice spicy chapter, but I'm afraid the less fun type of fireworks are coming next..

I don't know wheter you're evil or simply amazing. Evil because you're leaving us here. Amazing because well, I think it's well written, Severus is finally about to find out who she truly is, and you leave us wanting more. And there is the fact that after been on a short holiday I could read 2 chapters in quick succesion (before classes start tomorrow). 

AH!  How can you leave me like this?  I love this chapter.  Very clever how you wrote their thoughts like that, and they sounded so real, too.  Brava!  And while I could have used a little more detailed and prolonged description of the saucy stuff (what can I say?), I do like how you wrote it to mimic real thoughts and feelings.  The tension was fantastic!  This whole chapter truly felt like that almost unbearable build up of tension and release that happens between two people in real life.  Very, very cool.  Next chapter soon, please?

HA!!  I knew that was going to happen.  Oh NOOOO.  What is Snape gonna do now?!  AGGGG!  This is not good.  Or maybe it IS good.  What an evil, nasty cliffy!  Love it.

“It’s a commonly used symbol. I’m sure if you thought about it you could divine the meaning.”That sentance alone should have set his Professor Snape senses tingling, but then he was distracted :P

Oh hell.  That's going to be a problem, aye "Grace"? I am afraid for her, and him.  Oh no. *sigh*Thank you for sharing, such a lovely scene~

Slowly, as the fires continued to build within, Snape eased between her parted thighs and rediscovered nirvana. This time, they moved in a rhythm of peace and harmony, allowing the sensations to envelop their every nerve ending until with a gasp, Grace Henman called out in exultation.“Oh, yes! Severusss!”Er... oops?

That was funny and hot and beautiful and moving and hot and delicious and hot and funny and even a bit scary and, did I mention it was funny and hot?But, Oh dear! Hermione, you might have wanted to cry out "Sssidneeeeeeeeeeeeeey!" or perhaps haven't revealed yourself a bit sooner. Or at least with a lot more intent.Grrrreat chapter!

I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!! I knew she'd call out his name in the throes of passion! Heeee heeee! Oh, this was just delicious, all heat and insecurity and perfect Severus stream of consciousness. I loved it!

OMGOSH..NOW WHAT WILL HE DO....How is 'GRACE' going to explain how she knows his REAL NAME!!!  LOL!!! Poor Hermione..I am so loving this story and can't wait to see what happens next..Egads i hope he accepts the truth and doesn't turn her away and go all SILENT and SNARKY and denying it all....Well done!!

Lovely, lovely, WHA??????????

If there was a way to give you more than five stars, I would.  Bloody brilliant, mate.  Just brilliant.  I bow down to your monumental skills.


Author's Response: Hey, I'm just happy there was no bucket required! :P

Oh, now I get it...Hermione was born in September, and her tattoo is the sigil for the astrological sign Virgo (an M with an extra loop).  I couldn't figure that out at first...very clever!

Oops. Well, there's the opening for their conversation.

Ruh-roh!

 Uh oh! has she let the Kneazle out of the sack!?

Methinks that she has just given the game away - though will he guess her identity now that she has revealed she knows his true face?Can't wait to read the next installment.  Wonderful writing and enjoyable reading.

Uh oh... He's going to flip, isn't he? I can just see it coming. Nevermind the fact that Hermione knew exactly what she was getting into and who he was all along, he;s going to be all "you have no idea of what you're getting into... you used me... etc etc.' Or maybe I have just read too much fanfic. maybe I will be surprised? I'll just have to wait and see!

oops!Well done.  My guess is that the flood gates are now open.

Oy!  The cat's out of the bag now, so to speak.  Fabulous chapter, Sunny.   Loved the internal monologues, especially Snape/Sidney.

Ah!  I screamed out loud at that last sentence!!  I can't imagine the chaos that will rain down after that!  Not sure that was the opening she was looking for lol!  Keep up the FANTASTIC work on this AMAZING story.  You rock!!

oh. fuck. gigglesnortflail - that was a fabulous lemon - the alternating POV, the incoherent thoughts, the hints, the mess,  ~squeeezes you~ but oh, my, the shit is going to hit the fan.   Can't wait :o)

Ooops!  I meant Sidney...uh is that the time?  What happens next Sunny?  Can't wait...

Opps.  LOL now the cats out of the bag.  I hope he doesn't totally thorw her out on her ear.