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Journey to Redemption
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At Draco's suggestion, Severus decides to make amends to some of the people struggling in the aftermath of the war. In the process, he restores old friendships and makes new ones.
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Bravo!! Brilliant chapter, I loved it!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you, dear!
Delightful. I love this version of Severus Snape.
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Me too,
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.Thank yor for reading and reviewing.
I totally loved Neville in this. And his last line - A friendly Snape is even scarier than a scowling one - Oh, too funny! I was grinning the whole time. Figures Severus would know the ingredient, and how to make improvements!
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Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing,
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Poor Neville. Hopefully he will get over his fear of Severus. And yes a friendly Snape is a scary Snape.
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Thank you for reading and reviewing,
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.I don't know how long it will take, or whether Neville will ever be entirely comfortable in Snape's presence, but I'm sure he will overcome his fear.
Snape being friendly to Neville? I am sure Neville thinks the world is going to end. Good chapter.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Yes, poor Neville.Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Andromeda gave Severus some very good advice. I hope it helps him.
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Thank you! So far he seems to be getting something from that advice...
Nice start. Enough to keep me wandering what will happen next.Good work!
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Thanks,
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Good start. I look forward to reading what comes next.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Aw, thanks, jessa!
Okay, filling in the hole left in canon.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Yup! :)
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it wouldnt mean as much if he wasn't using his own personal life savings, would it.
good start, luv.
although i still cant believe that story title won.
Author's Response: You know, it probably wouldn't.
interesting start. i can't wait to see where this goes!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks!
INO, this line of work is a bit out of character for Severus, but there is great potential in lessons to be learned and entertaining (as well as heart-felt) situations to be dealt with.Hopefully, not another "My Name is Earl" type of scenario, although the potential for some comedy is there as well.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
I think there's going to be a lot learned by all involved.
Very interesting setup you have presented. I look forward to seeing how Snape interacts with -- or even talks to -- some of the people from his past. Good luck, JoAnne
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks for the luck, JoAnne; it's appreciated. :)
If a philanthropic Severus Snape seems odd, you cushioned the surprise by having Draco Malfoy (of all people!) suggest the change. Still wondering about that. What a neat beginning.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Draco seemed like the perfect choice to suggest the change as he was one Severus knew. (I figured he might let family suggest it and he'd be less apt to overreact-- many people will let family get away with saying things that they wouldn't allow anyone else to say.)
that's an interesting idea - severus doing volunteer work. wonder where he'll end up. :)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks, kitty!
it will be interesting to see how Severus will be recieved. Hopefully he will make a friend or two in the proces. looking forward to updates. this challenge is very interesting, a lot of stories in new settings
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I, too, hope he'll make some new friends over the course of his volunteer time.
Snape volunteering to counselling war victims? OMG, u have me on the edge of my seat to see how THAT plays out... Hooray for the Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament =)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
It is an interesting and unique idea. I'm sure he'll encounter all sorts of things along the way. :)
I liked Draco's reasoning when he told Severus that he would have tried. Very nice. It will be interesting to follow Severus in his attempts to help others.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks; I'm glad you did.
This is original... and I like it. I hope he is well received *scrolls back up to check for AU rating* ok, probably not going to happen, but intersted to see what does happen. Hopefully, he won't regret his change in direction.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks, I'm glad you like the idea. I don't think he'll regret it since he's doing something to help others
Oh, so he's goin gto become a philanthropist? Interesting. I haven't seen this before. But wouldn't it be better to have joined a organization than use up his life savings? I mean, it will run out eventually. Draco proposing something like that, I almost thought that he'd had a charitable organization in mind? But then I suppose Severus could start one? We'll have to see where you all take this, won't we?
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Yup. It may have been a better idea if he did join an organisation, but I think it means more that he's doing it on his own dime.
Good start. Can't wait to see how people react to Snape in volunteer mode.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks. Their reactions are bound to be interesting.
Wow, that's an original start, Severus becoming a volunteer!
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Aw, thanks,
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Off to a fine start. Can't wait to see how Hermione will figure into the mix with Severus.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank ya!