kingphilipswench - Gravity Keeper
Chapter 5 of 7
Mars1At Draco's suggestion, Severus decides to make amends to some of the people struggling in the aftermath of the war. In the process, he restores old friendships and makes new ones.
ReviewedSeverus downed his drink and scowled at the empty glass.
Longbottom. He shuddered.
At least the potion won't be too difficult to brew, assuming I can clear out a space at Spinner's End that hasn't been taken over by doxies. Hogwarts did have its benefits.
Motioning to Tom for another drink, he rubbed his face in frustration.
I think I'm actually sore from smiling. Who gets sore from smiling?
Molly Weasley entered the Leaky on her way into Diagon Alley; Severus slouched down further in his chair and tried to make himself invisible.
I've used up my daily allowance of pleasantness. Possibly my annual reserves as well.
The fates, as usual, were against him.
'Severus!' She bustled over to him as he scowled again at his empty glass. Tom caught his eye and brought the bottle over.
'Hello, Mrs. Weasley.'
'It's a bit early for that, isn't it?'
'I had tea with Neville Longbottom today and sent him into shock. I view it as a medicinal necessity.'
She plopped down in the chair opposite without waiting for an invite.
Realizing he would, in fact, now have to make conversation, he sighed and rolled his eyes.
'And what brings you to the Leaky Cauldron, Mrs. Weasley?'
'You can call me Molly, you know. We've only known each other for over twenty years.'
'Fine. Molly. What brings you to the Leaky Cauldron?'
'Supply run into Diagon Alley. The repairs we did following the Death Eater attack were rather slapdash, I'm afraid. Things are falling apart at the Burrow again. I'm out of Spellotape, among other things.'
Snape squeezed his eyes shut.
'You're not attempting to repair your domicile with Spellotape, are you?'
'Of course not. Not the structural parts, anyway. I just need Spellotape for the smaller items. It's all I can work on right now, anyway. I'm several men short for repairs: Ron and George have been busy at the shop, and Charlie can't get away from Romania. Bill helps Arthur in the evenings and on weekends.'
'What about Percy?'
Molly gave Severus a wry look. 'Percy is... less than helpful when it comes to manual labour.'
Severus felt the hands of fate prickle the hairs on the back of his neck.
'I'll be there at ten tomorrow.'
'What? That wasn't a request for you to come do it, Severus. I was just explaining why I need Spellotape.'
'But you need help. And I am available. I will be there at ten tomorrow.'
Molly frowned. She really hadn't meant to guilt Severus into helping them rebuild the Burrow.
'Well... if you insist.'
'I do.'
^^^
Severus arrived at ten, exactly, dressed in Muggle jeans and a thick work shirt. Molly gave him a tour of the house: broken beams, holes knocked through walls, leaking thatched roof... and he wasn't sure if the foundation of it was stable at all. It had always been a bit dodgy, as far as he could recall, living space stacked upon living space haphazardly as it had been added as needed, usually in a rush.
'We did a number on this place, didn't we?'
'You didn't do it personally, Severus.'
'Perhaps. But I'm just as responsible. Molly, I don't think the foundation is stable. Let me see if I can find an engineer to come take a look before we start disturbing anything that is going to fall in on you.'
'Really, Severus, it's not necessary for you to go to all this trouble...'
The look he gave her cut her off and she fell silent. He stalked off into the yard and Apparated away.
^^^
'Mistress Hermione? Master Snape is here to see you,' Kreacher informed her. She was surprised; she'd not been expecting Severus to stop by. Closing the tome she'd been reading, she found Severus waiting for her in the sitting room. Her eyes widened at his attire: jeans, a work shirt black, of course and boots.
'Hello, Mr. Snape. This is a pleasant surprise. What brings you to Grimmauld?'
'I was at the Burrow to help Molly with repairs, and I don't think the foundation of the structure is safe. Do you know any Wizarding engineers who could come take a look?'
Hermione thought for a moment and then smiled.
'Terry Boot is an engineer. And it so happens, he owes me a favor. I'll Floo him and see if he's free.'
'I don't want you to have to use up your favor with Mr. Boot on my account.'
'I don't mind, Mr. Snape. Really. If it makes you feel more balanced, though, you can owe me in turn. You can, in fact, do the same thing for me that I did for Terry.'
A raised eyebrow was her response. She giggled.
'You can go to a family function with me next weekend to keep my relatives at bay.'
'Your relatives at bay?'
'Do you have a boyfriend? When are you getting married? You're going to die an old maid...' Hermione mimicked in a high-pitched voice.
'Ah. And you did that for Mr. Boot?'
'Yes, his parents think he should get married quickly, and he's obsessed with helping making sure everything is put to rights from the war. Let me Floo him and see what he says.'
She ducked into the sitting room Floo and came out a few minutes later.
'He'll be here in five minutes. I think he needed a break from Percy mismanaging him at the Ministry.'
A few minutes later, Terry Boot tumbled out of the Floo. Dusting himself off, his eyes widened when he saw Severus.
'Snape!'
'Yes.'
'Sorry, sir, you startled me.'
'Terry, Mr. Snape needs you to look at the foundation of the Burrow and see if it's structurally sound.'
He looked surprised, but recovered himself quickly.
'Lead the way, Mr. Snape.'
^^^
Severus was impressed with Terry's efficiency and professionalism. He went through the Burrow and made lists of everything that needed to be done to the foundation. After about two hours, he turned to Severus.
'Mr. Snape, this is going to take some work. I've made a list of things that need to be done, but there's manual labor as well. I'm going to go get Justin and Blaise and see if they can join us.'
Severus was taken aback; Terry simply jumped in with no thought about the fact that it wasn't even his project or responsibility.
'So... more hands would be optimum?'
'Yes, in addition to the wand work, you're going to need some people to physically move stuff while we work.'
'I'll see what I can do. Shall we meet back here in an hour?'
'That sounds fine, I'm sure Justin and Blaise will want to escape from whatever monotonous thing they're working on.'
^^^
Back at Grimmauld, Severus pondered who to ask help him while explaining the situation to Hermione.
'I'll come, of course. What about Gregory? Or Adrian?'
'I'll come, too. I'm ashamed to admit that I hadn't even thought that the Burrow might be still in a state of destruction,' Harry chimed in.
'Right. So I'll Floo Gregory and Adrian, and then we'll all meet at the Burrow in an hour?'
'Agreed.'
Severus sneered. It was bloody annoying that two-thirds of the Golden Trio still answered in unison.
^^^
Molly was cautiously pleased when a mob of people, including Adrian Pucey, Blaise Zabini, and Gregory Goyle, who'd brought his girlfriend Millicent, arrived at her house to put the Burrow to rights. Terry Boot took charge of the project, and everyone fell into line, recognizing his brilliance with magical structures. Severus handled the assignments for the physical labor based on Terry's recommendations, and Hermione and Harry, for once, did what he said.
As Hermione and Severus fitted a wall into place, Hermione snuck glances at him. He was surprisingly strong; while she'd never thought that Severus was a weakling, his thin build didn't lend itself to being synonymous with brute strength. On the other hand, people probably also thought the same of her.
'The Herbal dei should be ready tomorrow. But I've hit a snag,' he said suddenly.
'What's that?'
'My lab at Spinner's End is in quite a state of disuse. I'm afraid that my years of having access to the finest lab Hogwarts could supply rather spoiled me.'
'Easily remedied. There's an adequate lab at Grimmauld.'
'And you'll allow me to use it?'
Hermione rolled her eyes.
'No, Mr. Snape, I just mentioned it in a moment of gloating.'
He stared.
'Yes, idiot man, you may use my lab. You may even steal supplies out of my storeroom, should you be so inclined.'
A chuckle escaped him, and he almost smiled.
'You should smile more.'
'I can't, I'm already sore from dealing with Mr. Longbottom yesterday.'
'Then you should practice so you don't get sore anymore.'
'They'll just cart me off to St. Mungo's. I will bring the Herbal dei tomorrow.'
'Cool.'
'Did you just use slang with me?'
'Yes.'
'Hmpf.'
^^^
By the time everything was said and done, it was evening. Arthur, Percy, Ron, and George had arrived home and been flabbergasted to find that not only had a large group of people invaded the Burrow (a fairly standard occurrence) but almost all of the repairs had been finished. Molly fixed a late supper, and things took on a party atmosphere. Severus gazed around him, taking in the sight of Justin Finch-Fletchly passing a turret of gravy to Millicent Bulstrode and Blaise laughing at a joke Ron had just told. Terry, Percy, Adrian, and Hermione were talking amiably, but that was to be expected; they were all brilliant.
What an odd turn of events.
Keeping with the party atmosphere, Arthur put some Muggle music on. It came out of a box that he called a sea-dee player. He'd apparently charmed it to work without 'ekletricty.' Everyone moved into the expanded living area and continued chatting as if they hadn't been at each other's throats in a past life.
'Severus, could you get some more white wine out of the cellar?'
'Certainly, Molly.'
I knew the day couldn't be this good forever.
'Argh! This is worse than that time I caught Draco and Marietta Edgecombe in the Prefect's bathroom. Gregory! Millicent! Put on your clothes. Just because the Weasleys breed like rabbits doesn't mean you have to follow their lead.'
Retrieving two bottles of sauvignon blanc, he bolted back upstairs and poured himself a glass, trying to wash away the sight that had greeted him when he opened the cellar door. He felt someone touch his elbow.
'You do realize that this is a very good thing you've caused today, don't you?'
He raised an eyebrow at Hermione.
'Yes, peace, love, and happiness, thy name is Severus. Now, perhaps you could give me the details about this date we're supposed to go on next weekend.'
Smugly pleased when Ron started choking on his drink, he smiled and found his face wasn't sore, after all.
A/N: Words used: storeroom, Prefect's bathroom, Spellotape. Um...author's notes... author's notes... author's notes... First I want thank Pan the Goat God for making it all possible. Next, me mum and dad for teaching me how to read and write. Finally, I want to thank Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II for... you know... running England and stuff. Of course thanks to the team for giving this a read through... um... GO TEAM MARS!
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235 Reviews | 4.54/10 Average
ah, that was sweet - not in a saccharin way, but as in a nice way to end. :)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Oh, I didn't realize that I didn't log into this account to answer your review! Thank you!
i liked the scene at the lovegoods', especially the image of mr. lovegood bopping in time to the printing press. :)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Cool! Yeah, that's his baby.
hee hee. i liked that his face hurt from smiling. nice addition to his good deeds. :D
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
it seemed more him to be annoyed by having to be civil. thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it. :)
nice chapter. i have to agree, friendly snape can be quite alarming at times! :D
Hey, WM! This chapter was perfect! Just want this fic needed as an ending. Loved it! Thanks for putting a pretty bow on this journey! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you for reviewing! I am so bad at endings that I worried a little about being last; I'm thrilled you liked it.
An entertaining story with a good ending. Well done!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you! I wanted to be sure to start them on their way.
I am looking forward to Hermione and Snape's date in the next chapter. Good chapter here.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks!
Hey Javoher! Great job with this chapter! Sorry I'm so far behind! Loved the ending! Severus at a Muggle wedding! LOL! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
You're not behind, you're right on time. Thank you!
After asking you to rewrite this twice, I can't tell you how happy I am with it, though I miss the beautiful descriptions of the outfits they wore to the wedding. I love what somoene said about it being 'steampunk.' Thanks for bringing that aspect to this story; I think we need more of that clever kind of writing.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Aw, what a wonderful, sweet thing to say! Don't worry about the rewrites, I'm just glad you were so patient with my silly mistakes. I'll put the outfits into the closet and pull them out again for the next wedding.
Thanks for the clever way of bringing more characters (and a date) into the mix of this story. This chapter could have been a whole story in its own right.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks! I felt limited by the 2000 words but somehow managed. :D
Very cleverly written chapter with lots of memorable phrasing and ideas. You really helped to give us direction with this chapter. Thanks so much!
Awwww! What a perfect ending! They've each devoted so much time to helping others. It just seems so right that they should be each other's reward. I see a bright shiny future for our favorite couple. So long as Hermione can keep her flirtatious aunts under control! I can't blame them for trying, though.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
*BIG SMILE* Definitely can't blame them for trying. Thanks so much for the review!
Wow, yes, I really like this ending. I especially liked your use of dialogue to show the change in their wants. A nice story and I'm glad that he's going to have his own business.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks. I like that they can help each other learn about themselves.
Wow, I can't believe I never thanked you here for giving us such a good start. You brought up so many things for us.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Oh, it's all right, Merrin. I tried to give him the most believable start I could see that would allow all of our teammates enough to build on. :) Thanks for the review and the appreciation.
*Sigh*You did an amazing job with that final chapter, WriterMerrin.I had to laugh about Hermione's aunts flirting with Severus, and felt as uncomfortable as Hermione when she talked about reasons for him to help her move.And in the end a content sigh escaped me.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
*blushes* Thank you.Your note really encouraged me to bring out that scene, and I'm so thankful.Yay!
A lovely ending to a lovely story. Well done to the entire team.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
On behalf of my team, we thank you. I've enjoyed writing this so much, and I've been really looking forward to getting Hermione and Severus to this point.
Such a tender, beautiful ending to a wonderfully original, creative tale! Bravo, team Mars!!!(Btw, this line – "‘First it’s “cool” and then “like”? Your vocabulary used to be more refined.’" – had me rolling in my chair from laughter.)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you so very much. I'm so glad that line made you laugh.
Aaw, poor Severus! I imagine it can definitely be more than a tad overwhelming for him!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Well, he wasn't expecting quite so much friendship in return. He'll take it, though.
"‘I had tea with Neville Longbottom today and sent him into shock. I view it as a medicinal necessity.’" *cackle*"‘No, Mr. Snape, I just mentioned it in a moment of gloating.’" ROFLMAO!!! Incredibly witty, that Granger girl!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks mate. I'm glad I made you laugh. Thanks for the review. :)
Oh, your Neville is so adorable!!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you! After DH I thought he might be more confident, especially if he does something he is really good at. Some things will never cease to frighten us, though.
I love the idea of Teddy copying everyone's appearance – and it was truly brilliant the concept of Andromeda needing assistance so that she could be sure she brought the correct child home, lol! I do have a question, though – was it a Muggle park, or Wizarding one? I just ask because I wonder how Andromeda managed to hide Teddy's perpetual transformations in the midst of Muggles, if it were a Muggle park... and if it were a Wizarding one, did other parents feel slightly annoyed at Teddy's presence, assuming that they, like Andromeda, were afraid of taking the wrong kid home?
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
LOL, you don't know how I've been hoping no one would notice that! It's the flaw in my chapter, for sure.The answer is that I'm not really sure. I do know that even when we're watching our kids at the park we don't have our eyes glued to them every second, so I don't think anyone realizes when he's transforming. They just look one minute and then he's a different kid when they look again. It would seem that his clothes would be a givaway, too.Probably it's a park with mostly Wizarding kids and the end of the afternoon has some mamma dragging Teddy and the kid he looks like over to demand that Andromeda help figure it out.Thank you for the review!
Response from KingPig (Reviewer)
LOL, "some mamma dragging Teddy and the kid he looks like over to demand that Andromeda help figure it out" – that makes such a hilarious, adorable mental image!! I can just imagine Andromeda's long-suffering expression!
Hilarious solution to ridding the house of that ancient hag!
Ooo, what an original idea! I honestly never considered Snape volunteering before – rabid plot bunnies are multiplying by the second!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Oh, thank you! It is a rather new idea that certainly could be explored. *gives carrots to the plot bunnies*
Nice ending, forcing them both to say what they've wanted to for some time.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you. It was interesting for me to figure out how to make that conversation come about.When you've read all of the stories, be sure to go to LJ and vote: http://community.livejournal.com/petulantpoetess/2532.html