Javoher - Moon Chaser
Chapter 6 of 7
Mars1At Draco's suggestion, Severus decides to make amends to some of the people struggling in the aftermath of the war. In the process, he restores old friendships and makes new ones.
ReviewedWith a small pop! Severus Snape Apparated into the alley next to twelve, Grimmauld Place. Straightening his cloak, he mounted the steps and knocked on the door. Kreacher opened it immediately.
'Miss is telling Kreacher to wait by the door,' grumbled Kreacher under his breath as he shut the door behind Severus and took his cloak. 'Miss is saying she and the Professor have important work.'
'That's right,' Severus replied. 'And I must be getting on with it. Where is Miss Granger?'
'Basement, sir,' said Kreacher as he led Severus down the hall and to the kitchen, still grumbling. He opened the door to the basement at the back wall and pungent steam billowed through it.
Severus entered the house's potions lab, immediately seeing his young friend. 'Miss Granger,' he called.
Hermione straightened up in surprise. 'Oh, good, you're here! I just finished preparing the second base as you asked, and the ingredients are ready.' She gestured to the worktable behind her, where slabs of marble and wood held several shredded and diced herbs and plants.
'Excellent,' Severus grunted and pulled out the jar of Herbal Dei. Placing it upon the table with the other ingredients, he then inspected her work.
The steam and smoke from the fires wafted towards the vents in the back wall. Hermione was dressed in a loose sleeveless shirt and loose pants, her hair bound on top of her head, curls escaping their clips, sweat beading on her brow. Severus made a concentrated effort not to look at how the material clung to her as she watched him closely and asked several questions, to which he did her the honor of giving her decent answers.
Finally he was satisfied. 'It'll do, Miss Granger,' he said. 'Now we begin the trickier part.'
'I thought you said it wouldn't be hard!' Hermione replied.
'It isn't, if you're a Potions master,' Severus said with a smirk. 'Start with the first base. Bring the diced weeds from the bottom of the Serpentine, then thin the Glumbumble parts with the pure alcohol.'
And with that, they bent to their work.
Hours later, the brew in the cauldron glowed in a violet haze, surrounded by a yellow stasis charm. Sweat poured down Hermione's back, causing her shirt to stick. Severus had spent the last hour doing his level best to avoid looking at her long, curved back and her rounded hips below it; his temper was frayed from the strain.
'That is enough for now,' he snapped at Hermione. She looked at him in surprise. 'The brew must cool for a day before we can bottle it. Potter's house-elf can take care of the cauldrons.'
'Then I'm for tea and sandwiches,' Hermione replied cheerfully. She ascended the stairs, Severus on her heels. Gratefully they emerged into the cooler kitchen. Severus sat while Hermione efficiently took food from the larder and put the kettle on with a flick of her wand.
'What's this?' asked Hermione absently when she'd sat down and dug in. She picked up the roll of parchment from under the pile of post. 'Why, it's from Luna!' she exclaimed. Avidly she read through as Severus watched her from behind a lock of hair. Her face fell at the end, and she sighed.
'Her...er, Miss Granger? Is something amiss?' he asked.
'You remember Luna Lovegood, I assume?' she explained. 'The Ravenclaw who kept losing her shoes?'
'Indelibly,' Severus replied dryly. 'Is she well?'
'Yes, but she's very concerned about her father. She fears this time he simply can't repair the thing. He's just convinced they could expand their readership to what it was before the war if they could just get it working properly. Thing is, it was second-hand when they bought it many years ago, and the repairs they made after the house blew up just aren't holding like they need to.' Hermione stopped as Severus looked at her in amazement. She returned his look tremulously, her lower lip caught in her teeth. 'I don't suppose... that is, it would be terribly presumptuous of me, but... do you think you could...?'
'Could I do what?' asked Severus, trying manfully to mask his impatience. 'You haven't even told me what 'it' is.'
'Could you help the Lovegoods to repair their printing press?' asked Hermione in a rush. 'I know it's a lot to ask, but The Quibbler was such a big help to us when no one else would believe Harry. Do at least say you'll think about it, Mr. Snape?' Her big brown eyes held a spark of hope.
Severus put down his tea. Of course he would help; it was what he did these days, and especially when looked at in that way by this witch. It was just that Xenophilius Lovegood was a man to be taken in small doses.
'You may tell Miss Lovegood that I will be there at ten o'clock tomorrow morning, if it is convenient,' he said finally.
'Oh, Severus! Thank you!' cried Hermione, and she launched herself out of her chair at him. Severus grunted in surprise to find warm arms around his neck, a feminine body pressed against him, and a delicate scent in his nose. He decided that he was not averse to this proceeding.
'Right, well then,' murmured Hermione as she disengaged herself, spots of color high on her cheekbones. 'I do beg your pardon, Mr. Snape, I was a little overwhelmed.'
'Not at all, Miss Granger,' Severus replied with as much nonchalance as he could muster. 'Now if you'll excuse me, I do have other matters to attend to before I visit the Lovegoods.'
'Of course, Mr. Snape,' said Hermione politely, her eyes gleaming with good humor. 'So I'll see you day after tomorrow?'
'Yes, yes, I'll be here,' Severus replied. And with that he took his leave, quite pleased that he had spent a day with Hermione Granger's undivided attention.
At precisely ten o'clock the next morning, Severus appeared at the bottom of the hill where the Lovegoods resided. A pretty gate opened to a lane with flowers on either side which wound up and away from a stream. A short walk later, Severus knocked on the bright green door.
Luna answered promptly. 'Professor!' she said with her dreamy smile. 'We're so happy to see you.'
'Good morning, Miss Lovegood,' Severus replied stiffly. 'Did Miss Granger inform you of my intended visit today?'
'Oh yes, we got her owl this morning,' Luna said. 'It's so very kind of you to take time to look at our little problem, especially when you've got so much to do for Neville's parents.'
'Indeed,' replied Snape.
Suddenly there was a clattering from above, causing the walls to creak and shudder. Then a loud BOOM! restored peace for a mere moment before thick, black smoke began to curl through the cracks in the ceiling as a loud exclamation resounded from upstairs.
'Oh dear,' said Luna with a sigh, opening the windows with a practiced flick of her wand. 'My father was trying a new oiling charm this morning to keep the rolls of parchment from grinding together. Doesn't seem to be working. I told him I think there are doxies in it, so I'm making more doxycide.' She went to the bottom of the stairs and shouted up them, 'Daddy! Professor Snape's here!'
Boots made noise over their heads, then Xenophilius Lovegood stomped down the stairs. 'Ah, Snape!' he cried, extending his hand cheerfully. 'Just the man we need. My Luna told me her friends would ask your assistance.'
'Mr. Lovegood,' Snape replied. 'My pleasure. What seems to be the trouble?'
'It's the blessed printing press. It took a beating when Death Eaters attacked the house that one time Luna's friends came to call. I tried to put it back together, but it didn't work quite properly. Been limping along ever since. And now, it's giving up the ghost.' Shaking his head, Xenophilious turned and led the way up the stairs.
At the top was the machine, belching black smoke as a groan came from its depths. The parchment roller jerked back and forth, trying to roll forward and failing miserably. Severus bent to examine it as the movable type chattered. 'Well, let's get to it then,' he said and lifted his wand.
In no time he and Xenophilius had the covers off. The gears were examined and twisted, the excess oil was Evanesco'ed, the belts tested and repaired. Severus cast several Revealing charms on the inner springs and found the Perpetual Motion spells on the shafts had frayed as well. The two of them cast new spells, lubricated joints, replaced drums, and cleaned up the ink wells.
Finally, four hours and twelve Cushioning Charms later, the machine was ready. Xenophilius raised his wand and cried, 'Ennervate!' With a hum, the printing press came back to life. The giant roll of parchment fed through one end, the magical metal quills made the words appear on the page, the cutters cut and the folders folded. Shortly, a stack of newspapers began to grow at the end of the line.
'Well, that looks to be in working order now,' said Severus thoughtfully, checking a level on the container of Occam's Everlasting Oil.
'Too right it is,' said Xenophilius, pleased as punch. 'Can't thank you enough. Don't know what we would have done otherwise.'
Severus nodded his head. 'My pleasure, Xenophilius.'
'You'll receive your copy of The Quibbler by post in the morning,' said Xenophilius, his eyes on the machine and his wild white hair bobbing in time with the rollers. 'Free of charge, of course.' He gave the stack of newspapers a brilliant smile.
'I... look forward to it,' replied Snape. 'Now since that machine is in proper form, I'd better get going.'
And with that they descended the stairs, Luna showing him out the door with a happy wave.
The next morning Severus was feeling a little overwhelmed. Arthur Weasley had sent him notes about the continuing remodel of his house, Neville Longbottom had sent him updates on his parents' condition, Andromeda Tonks had sent him messages from Teddy Lupin and letters of her own, and Draco demanded weekly correspondence. By the time he arrived at Grimmauld Place, he was in a temper.
'Now what is it?' asked Hermione after she'd settled him in the library with his usual cuppa.
'I had a lot of post to attend to this morning, is all,' Severus groused into his cup.
'Then I have just the thing to cheer you up,' said Hermione brightly. 'The potion is in perfect order, according to the books.'
'Hmh,' grunted Severus. 'I'll be the judge of that.' They descended to the potions lab. Indeed the cauldron was just the right temperature, and the potion inside had darkened to a medicinal shade of violet-black. He poured it into the bottles and sealed the glass stoppers.
'This should do it,' he said. 'I'm off to St. Mungo's.'
Hermione looked at him. 'I can't thank you...WE can't thank you enough,' she said softly. 'Neville, Luna, the Weasleys, Tonks's mum... their lives are better because of you.' She smiled at him. 'And you have the generosity to accompany me to a Muggle wedding.'
'A-a wedding?' echoed Severus. Her eyes were big and brown, and he was drowning in them. 'Yes, of course I'll go to a wedding with you.'
'Next Saturday, then,' Hermione said. 'At four o'clock.'
It wasn't until much later, at St. Mungo's watching Neville and the nurse administer the potions to the Longbottoms, that he began to wonder what he'd got himself into.
A/N: Words used: Doxycide, Glumbumble Parts, The Serpentine, stream.
Many thanks to writermerrin and her extreme patience with my fumbles, and the team for great suggestions.
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235 Reviews | 4.54/10 Average
ah, that was sweet - not in a saccharin way, but as in a nice way to end. :)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Oh, I didn't realize that I didn't log into this account to answer your review! Thank you!
i liked the scene at the lovegoods', especially the image of mr. lovegood bopping in time to the printing press. :)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Cool! Yeah, that's his baby.
hee hee. i liked that his face hurt from smiling. nice addition to his good deeds. :D
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
it seemed more him to be annoyed by having to be civil. thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it. :)
nice chapter. i have to agree, friendly snape can be quite alarming at times! :D
Hey, WM! This chapter was perfect! Just want this fic needed as an ending. Loved it! Thanks for putting a pretty bow on this journey! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you for reviewing! I am so bad at endings that I worried a little about being last; I'm thrilled you liked it.
An entertaining story with a good ending. Well done!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you! I wanted to be sure to start them on their way.
I am looking forward to Hermione and Snape's date in the next chapter. Good chapter here.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks!
Hey Javoher! Great job with this chapter! Sorry I'm so far behind! Loved the ending! Severus at a Muggle wedding! LOL! Much Love ~ Brena
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
You're not behind, you're right on time. Thank you!
After asking you to rewrite this twice, I can't tell you how happy I am with it, though I miss the beautiful descriptions of the outfits they wore to the wedding. I love what somoene said about it being 'steampunk.' Thanks for bringing that aspect to this story; I think we need more of that clever kind of writing.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Aw, what a wonderful, sweet thing to say! Don't worry about the rewrites, I'm just glad you were so patient with my silly mistakes. I'll put the outfits into the closet and pull them out again for the next wedding.
Thanks for the clever way of bringing more characters (and a date) into the mix of this story. This chapter could have been a whole story in its own right.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks! I felt limited by the 2000 words but somehow managed. :D
Very cleverly written chapter with lots of memorable phrasing and ideas. You really helped to give us direction with this chapter. Thanks so much!
Awwww! What a perfect ending! They've each devoted so much time to helping others. It just seems so right that they should be each other's reward. I see a bright shiny future for our favorite couple. So long as Hermione can keep her flirtatious aunts under control! I can't blame them for trying, though.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
*BIG SMILE* Definitely can't blame them for trying. Thanks so much for the review!
Wow, yes, I really like this ending. I especially liked your use of dialogue to show the change in their wants. A nice story and I'm glad that he's going to have his own business.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks. I like that they can help each other learn about themselves.
Wow, I can't believe I never thanked you here for giving us such a good start. You brought up so many things for us.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Oh, it's all right, Merrin. I tried to give him the most believable start I could see that would allow all of our teammates enough to build on. :) Thanks for the review and the appreciation.
*Sigh*You did an amazing job with that final chapter, WriterMerrin.I had to laugh about Hermione's aunts flirting with Severus, and felt as uncomfortable as Hermione when she talked about reasons for him to help her move.And in the end a content sigh escaped me.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
*blushes* Thank you.Your note really encouraged me to bring out that scene, and I'm so thankful.Yay!
A lovely ending to a lovely story. Well done to the entire team.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
On behalf of my team, we thank you. I've enjoyed writing this so much, and I've been really looking forward to getting Hermione and Severus to this point.
Such a tender, beautiful ending to a wonderfully original, creative tale! Bravo, team Mars!!!(Btw, this line – "‘First it’s “cool” and then “like”? Your vocabulary used to be more refined.’" – had me rolling in my chair from laughter.)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you so very much. I'm so glad that line made you laugh.
Aaw, poor Severus! I imagine it can definitely be more than a tad overwhelming for him!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Well, he wasn't expecting quite so much friendship in return. He'll take it, though.
"‘I had tea with Neville Longbottom today and sent him into shock. I view it as a medicinal necessity.’" *cackle*"‘No, Mr. Snape, I just mentioned it in a moment of gloating.’" ROFLMAO!!! Incredibly witty, that Granger girl!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks mate. I'm glad I made you laugh. Thanks for the review. :)
Oh, your Neville is so adorable!!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you! After DH I thought he might be more confident, especially if he does something he is really good at. Some things will never cease to frighten us, though.
I love the idea of Teddy copying everyone's appearance – and it was truly brilliant the concept of Andromeda needing assistance so that she could be sure she brought the correct child home, lol! I do have a question, though – was it a Muggle park, or Wizarding one? I just ask because I wonder how Andromeda managed to hide Teddy's perpetual transformations in the midst of Muggles, if it were a Muggle park... and if it were a Wizarding one, did other parents feel slightly annoyed at Teddy's presence, assuming that they, like Andromeda, were afraid of taking the wrong kid home?
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
LOL, you don't know how I've been hoping no one would notice that! It's the flaw in my chapter, for sure.The answer is that I'm not really sure. I do know that even when we're watching our kids at the park we don't have our eyes glued to them every second, so I don't think anyone realizes when he's transforming. They just look one minute and then he's a different kid when they look again. It would seem that his clothes would be a givaway, too.Probably it's a park with mostly Wizarding kids and the end of the afternoon has some mamma dragging Teddy and the kid he looks like over to demand that Andromeda help figure it out.Thank you for the review!
Response from KingPig (Reviewer)
LOL, "some mamma dragging Teddy and the kid he looks like over to demand that Andromeda help figure it out" – that makes such a hilarious, adorable mental image!! I can just imagine Andromeda's long-suffering expression!
Hilarious solution to ridding the house of that ancient hag!
Ooo, what an original idea! I honestly never considered Snape volunteering before – rabid plot bunnies are multiplying by the second!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Oh, thank you! It is a rather new idea that certainly could be explored. *gives carrots to the plot bunnies*
Nice ending, forcing them both to say what they've wanted to for some time.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you. It was interesting for me to figure out how to make that conversation come about.When you've read all of the stories, be sure to go to LJ and vote: http://community.livejournal.com/petulantpoetess/2532.html