I love to see an adult Neville!  So often people skip right over him, but you've done a nice job bringing him to life.  I agree with him, though: a friendly Snape probably would be even scarier than the original ^_^

I loved Andromeda's conversation with Snape about allowing people to forgive him ... so true to life, and so well done!  Kudos.

You fleshed out the concept quite nicely and gave our dear Sevvie some depth.  Well done!

Interesting start to the story ... well done.  Off to the next chapter!

I still find this kinder Severus amazing.

I can't wait to read about their date. Well set up.

Another good chapter! Handyman Snape! I like it very much.

It wasn’t until much later, at St. Mungo’s watching Neville and the nurse administer the potions to the Longbottoms, that he began to wonder what he’d got himself into.Severus Snape at a Muggle wedding? What has he got himself into, indeed.

They appear to live in a steampunk age where all the technology can be understood by someone clever.

"Of course he would help; it was what he did these days, and especially when looked at in that way by this witch."^ *grins*  Does she know the power she has over him, lol?  Flinging herself at him was awesome.  :DOne typo: You're missing a quotation mark at the end of 'I do beg your pardon, Mr. Snape, I was a little overwhelmed.One word usage: 'indelibly'.  It's a synonym of "unforgettably" or "memorably".  If someone is asked "You remember Luna Lovegood?", none of those words works as an answer (though it would be perfectly acceptable to say that she is unforgettable or that she is imprinted upon his memory indelibly, etc.)I found the chapter well-written, but the "indelibly" brought me up short, so I wanted to bring it to your attention.I loved the image of Severus stuck in a room with Luna and her father.  His un-eagerness for his free copy of the Quibbler was beautifully understated.  Draco demanding weekly correspondence was quite funny, and Severus being worried about the wedding when he's made it through everything else in the fic so far made me smile.Looking forward to next week.  ^_^

Great chapter. Can't wait for the final part.

i love that everyone pitched in to help. Great chapter. Your A/N made me laugh.

Just brilliant. I really love this chapter, and I cant wait to see what happens next! Nice work, honey x

Nice continuation.  I liked your description of Xeno's printing press, of all things.  At least Severus is a red-blooded male, and he can appreciate a sweaty, curvy woman.  Now, on to the wedding!

Wel, at least the Quibbler is back in full swing. 

I can see Severus overwhelmed, but he really should tell Hermione about his feelings.

This was another good chapter.  All of you authors are creating a really good story.

Romance always occures at weddings. I can't wait! Great chapter.

Fabulous!

Poor guy's overwhelmed by people willingly seeking him out no longer out of necessity but friendship!  LOL, like the reminder about the wedding.  We'll just have to see how that goes...

He'll need a secretary soon for all his correspondence! :)

This is great!  I like the way the changes worked out.

Really, what HAS he gotten himself into? Hopefully the potion will work, and they'll have more than a wedding to celebrate.

Hey Robbi!  This chapter was awesome!  It was a lot of fun and really easy to picture.  I loved it!  Thanks for a wonderful update.  Much Love ~ Brena

I love this Severus and Hermione, all business, a bit flip, just right for  the start of something good.  And Millicent Bulkstrode and Gregory Goyle making it in the Weasleys' wine cellar?  Positively brilliant!