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Journey to Redemption
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At Draco's suggestion, Severus decides to make amends to some of the people struggling in the aftermath of the war. In the process, he restores old friendships and makes new ones.
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Interesting, Draco persuading Severus into doing something Altruistic. Who knew a Malfoy could be capable of altruism? But Severus's life after he turned to the light was actually an altruistic life. He may have been a cruel and sarcastic altruist, but everything he did as Dumbledore's spy and while he was headmaster,especially, was for the altruistic goal of protecting Harry, the student body, and defeating 'He Who I Find Most Tedious & Tiresome.
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I like to imagine that Draco is nothing like his father now that he's grown. And you're right: Severus did lead an altruistic life full of peril, and he had every right to be sarcastic and a bit grumpy at times. Stress will do that to people.
Now that wasn't too painful, was it? Nice going. Severus might be good at this helping thing afterall. Good luck, JoAnne
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You know, I think he may secretly wear his underwear outside his trouser...
Lovely introduction of Hermione into this story. I'm looking forward to seeing more of them together ;)
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Thanks! I can't wait to see how this develops.
Nicely done. I really like how Severus got rid of the portrait
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Thanks,
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- and I love your user name!
I would have just cut around the portrait and replaced the wall. But your idea worked just as well. Looking forward to more!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Lmao! I wish we'd thought of that... but this way, Hermione looks realllly good!
An excellent choice for the first person to assist. His fear of rejection should be somewhat qualmed by now. He has made amends with Harry and gained a possible new friend in Hermione. A good day's work by anyone's standards!
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I like to think so too! Thanks for reading x
That was fun.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you! I hope you read and enjoy the next few chapters x
What a beginning - I really wonder where Severeus road to redemption will take him.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks! I, too, wonder where this journey will take him and how much he will have changed by the end of it.
I can't wait to discover what will happen to him in this new life of his. I hope he'll find love along the way.
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He may just find what he needs on this journey of his.
Time to enter a brave new world! Draco is right. It is time for Severus to move on. I can't wait to see who he approaches first in his search for redemption and a life of his very own.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Oh yeah. It's time Severus starts to live and find all that he needs.
Interesting. ^_^ I definitely don't usually see Severus as the volunteering type, so I'm looking forward to seeing how you guys pull it off. Severus does have a lifetime of regrets, though I hope to see that some people recognize all he's done over the course of the war....Glad to see it's summer, lol, and Severus isn't leaving Minerva in the lurch during term time. ;)
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I'm sure some people will see that he means well and is genuinely interested in leading a different life. I don't think Sev would leave Minerva in the middle of term - he'd give her time to find someone.
I liked the relationship between Draco and Severus. I'm curious to see what Severus will do to attempt redemption.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
It is easy between them, and Draco can say what he needs to without really offending Sev.
I like the evolution of one Severus Snape. You guys are doing a great job -- fun and interesting situations in each chapter. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
Okay, God save the Queen and Severus.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
Even after having read it already, I can't help myself grinning. :-)I like your humour, I really do!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Stop, people will think I'm paying you to say that. :PGlad you liked it. People tell me... I'm... funny. :P
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So, own up :-)
Wow ! Apart from the Spellotape that I did remember from the list, I never saw the other two words so good they were put into context. Well done !!
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awesome, thanks. :) thanks for the review. :D
Sweet and funny. This story is going quite nicely, a real team effort. but the individual chapters are good, too. Thanks for this amusing update.
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Thanks,
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. :) glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
Aw, I think friendly Snape is sweet. I daresay Neville will get over his fear after a while. Provided he is given enough of a while. Very nice chapter, i love the confident, grown-up Neville.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Yes, even a confident Neville will need a lot of time to get over this particular fear. LOLThank you for taking the time to review!
An excellent chapter. This has become one of my favorite stories in this challenge. I'm looking forward to next week's installment.
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked our story. Thanks for the review. :)
Oh that was delicious!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
I love the camaraderie in this chapter. Folks from different Hogwarts houses working together in harmony. Severus is doing well on his redemptive journey and has a date with Hermione planned. Things are improving for him in this lifetime.
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Yep. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
Awww... I totally loved this chapter! A bowl of lo mein for you, I think!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
wow that sounds really good right now. but chinese food in britain... sucks. :(thanks for the review.
‘Did you just use slang with me?’‘Yes.’ ‘Hmpf.’He he he, cute!"Smugly pleased when Ron started choking on his drink, he smiled and found his face wasn’t sore, after all."Muahahaha - too funny! Love it, can't wait for more!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
Funny how it was mostly Slytherins and Gryffindors that put the BUrrow to rights. And for free! For only one of Molly's home style meals. Very magnanimous of them.
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Yup.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
Fantastic! I really enjoyed this chapter. Everyone working together, Snape needing brain bleach after finding Goyle and Bulstrode en deshabille... a great accompaniment to my breakfast.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Excellent. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Thank you for the review. :)