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Journey to Redemption
Mars1235 Reviews | 4.54/10 (235 Ratings, 0 Likes, 44 Favorites )
At Draco's suggestion, Severus decides to make amends to some of the people struggling in the aftermath of the war. In the process, he restores old friendships and makes new ones.
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My brother's girlfriend and I were talking just the other day about how cliquish we all were in highschool and now, so many years later, none of that matters any more. Nice to see that the Hogwarts House rivalries didn't last very long.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Yeah, I notice that with Facebook, everyone talks and no one worries about who was a jock and who was an outcast.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
Wonderful update, I loved it. I loved how they all worked together, but most of all, Rons choking when hearing about their date....:-))
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
This chapter is quite amusing. It was just the adjustment we needed to show that he's becoming comfortable with this new role he's developing.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
Ahhhh... and they all lived happily ever after. I do like that not only is Snape making reparations for his past, but everyone seems to have forgotten old alliances, prejudice etc. I'm not sure that taking him to a family function will silence the questions. It will probably just bring on a different set of questions. The Snape of old would have put them all in their place. With this new Snape, I don't know. But I won't criticize him. I kind of like him this way for a change. Nicely done!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. :)
I like the idea of a magical engineer and Terry being one. How long does the training take?
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Three years. Maybe at some point I'll actually do a story about that. I like the idea of a magical engineer and Terry being one. How long does the training take?
Who gets sore from smiling?Any one who doesn't use the right muscles enough. It takes more muscles to frown than to smile. I'm sure Snape has thought it worth the extra effort all these years!he smiled and found his face wasn’t sore, after all.There now. Just a little practice and repetition does wonders. Somehow I think there is going to be a fair amount of smiling in Snape's future.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
He's probably annoyed that he's been using mroe muscles all these years. Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
Yes, so very peaceful. Severus... the first name I think of when I want harmony in my home! Cute job!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Yep, someone who's name starts with... SEVER. :P Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
"Smugly pleased when Ron started choking on his drink, he smiled and found his face wasn’t sore, after all."^ LOL There's the Severus we all know and love. I enjoyed the continued snark along with the desire to do good.It was fun to see such a nice mix of students from Hogwarts, showing that they don't have their Houses branded on them for all eternity. ;)Brilliant author's notes, btw. ^_^
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
XD Thanks. They were fun to write. I'm glad you liked them. The A/N, I mean. Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
:) I really liked Snape in this one. Seemed more like himself. And what? No Mickey D's?? LOL
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
HEY, I only had 2000 words to work with. :P
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I totally had a breakfast burrito today! ahahaha
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
i hate you. *sobs and glares at this damn crumpet*
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)
What the hell is a crumpet? hahaha A kind of bun thing comes to mind (along the lines of a donut or honey bun).
I loved the Author's notes. They moved me. And a date! Whoot! I love it.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
*snicker* I'm glad they moved you. XD Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
Poor Severus... seems like being kind and civil is awfully hard work. :DGreat chapter, I enjoyed it very much!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Yup. Especially when it's not in your nature. Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
That was an adorable chapter. An oldfashioned house-raising.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Yup. I was also thinking about the parable of Stone Soup. Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
ROFL. Knew Pleasant!Snape couldn't last forever, although he is still trying to be a good boy. :)
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Well, even _I_ can be civil once in a while. Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. :)
Great continuation. I agree with Neville, congenial Snape is scary; he must have a hidden agenda.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
LOLThank you for reading and reviewing.
The story is moving along well, especially since it has multiple authors.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you.
Clever chapter.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed our story!
A sticky situation nicely written, with a touch of humor.
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Thanks so much,
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"Opinions ranged from a Brain Befuddlement Charm to Severus Snape having fallen in love, which some people put on the same level."^ Hee, hee, hee.I also enjoyed Neville finding the kind Severus scarier than the mean one. :D It was nice to see Neville all grown up (barring the Snape-induced regression, of course). Prince Albert as a wizard was also quite fun. ^_^
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
I'm glad I was able to entertain you - it was my purpose, after all.Thannk you for reading and reviewing.
Aw... Snapie, now I know you mean to change if you're helping Neville cure his parents. I was most intrigued by the thought that Voldemort's last "burst of energy" might have seared anew the souls of people he had tortured.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
It's frightening, isn't it?Thank you for reading and reviewing.
"I can't take him to the park any more. I'm afraid I'll bring home the wrong little boy." I laughed my a-- off at this line and quite a few others. You made my day, sweetie!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you! I have one about that age, and if she could do something like that to get a few more minutes at the park or library, she'd do it in a heartbeat, LOL!I'm glad to make your day!
The Janus Thickey ward?! I don't mind Mrs. Black screaming at Lockheart, but those poor Longbottoms... or are you hoping her blood-curdling curses will shock them out of their oblivion?
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
I get the feeling the Longbottoms wont have to worry for long!
oh wow, this was cool. can't wait to see where it goes!
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Me too - just joking :-)Thank you for reading and reviewing, asid.
this chapter was so lovely. i loved what you did with teddy, and andromeda was just so sweet.
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you. I'm starting to enjoy Andromeda.
Hey apisa_b! Great job with chapter 4! I feel so bad for Hermione that she missed out on the Royal Library. Maybe Neville can get her in at some point later. Its awesome to see Severus blowing peoples minds, and wanting to cozy up to Hermione too! I can't wait to see what happens next. Much Love ~ Brena
Response from Mars1 (Author of Journey to Redemption)
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Brena.