Bad Moon Rising
Saturn281 Reviews | 4.77/10 (281 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )
Severus Snape receives a mysterious letter from Unspeakable Hermione Granger, prompting him to meet with her. In hopes of stopping a clever mastermind, he agrees to give her whatever help she needs. Will he lose his heart to her along the way?
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Member Since 2009 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 16 | 0 Reviews Written | 473 Review Responses
This is a round robin team created for The Petulant Poetess Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament.
The authors/players who make up Saturn and their team positions are:
debjunk Meteoroid Beater
beaweasley2 comet chaser
BrenaMarie Asteroid Beater
Elizabeth Moon Chaser
phoenix writing Gravity Keeper
Southern Witch 69 Black Hole Chaser
silverdoe Supernova Seeker
Please show your support for our team by reviewing and guessing what might happen next! Cheers! :)
Reviews for Bad Moon Rising
I love this: it's full of mystery and suspense, and I haven't read that kind of things for a long time. I didn't even noticed how I missed it. Thank for having reaquainted me with the genre. You have my full support.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. We are trying for a mystery story! Hope you like the rest. Thank you very much for the support and the review. Hugs~bea~
what an interesting chapter! i loved the kidnapping, haha.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
LOL can you kidnap the semi-willing? lol Thank you very much for the review.
She's caught his interest, so now to work! :)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Oh yes, he's intrigued! Thank you so much for the review, sunny.bea~
Nice to see Snape recognize and appreciate Hermione's maturity. Lovely mystery you're weaving here—you have me puzzling over the clues, as well!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Well, he is the observant type. lol Yeah, we opted for a bit of mysterious fun! Thank you for the support and the review. bea~
I like Hermione as an Unspeakable. Intriguing start!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you! Hope you like the rest.
Gods, what an intense chapter. All those magical plants and ingredients, the security measures ... impressive.Loved the idea of apparating from the Knight Bus.I am suspicious of the kitten.You have me floored with your mystery. I'm a happy camper :-)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you, yep, Hermione's been doing her upmost to figure this out. Yeah, good diversion, the bus. lolLOL 'kitten' was one of my words and I love cats. Sorry, but I didn't intend anything but a cute ball of fur. We'll see what my team mates do with her, if anything. I'm glad. Hope you like the next chapter! Breana should do a great job!Thank you very much for the review.bea~
It's a really interesting opening. Looking forward to the rest.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you! Glad you found it intriguing.
Its getting interesting. I like the way you've got the interaction between Severus and Hermione progressing.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. I jsut gave him a tiny nudge. lolThank you for the review, kitty.bea~
Loved the knight bus scene, a bit fishy about that cat, and the lists are incredible. A complex and intriguing story.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. I loved the bus idea, and ingredients are my thing, I love potions! 'kitty' was one of my words, so the kitty is just a bit of fluffy fur - unless one of my team mates decides otherwise. Thank you for the review, myst.bea~
That's a lot to do in a few weeks and still find time for romance.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Well, 22 days actually, until the next full moon! Al lot can happen in 22 days. We on the other hand have only a handful of chapters... so expect a ripping ride around our rings!Thank you for the review,
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
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LOL, forgot I could review this! I especially enjoyed the Knight Bus scene. A great diversion, and not something I've seen before!All around good job, bea!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
well, doll. I appreciate the support! You were a tough act to follow (because you're so good) but I did my best. Hugs~I'm glad you liked the bus bit.Thank you for the review. See you in the locker room!bea~
Well done! He's noticing more and more about her and likes what he sees! Very interesting with the ingredients and the poems - can't wait to see what happens next!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much! Yes, our guy is observant and she's not the swot he remembered - well, not annoying anymore at least! Thank you, the poems were fun. The one with the bird, tree, bell and fish are from the Glasgow seal. lol I jsut thought it was cute.Thank you for the review, jinxie.bea~
This continues to be a tense mystery over-flowing with shiny details. Well done, Team Saturn
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. Yes, it's going to be fun solving this one! lolThank you very much for the review.bea~
Hey honey! Thanks for all the clues! I think if I had to set this up, my head would have exploded. Great Job. Much Love ~ Brena
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Oh, Brena, thank you. I just know you'll come up with something great! I'm here if you need me!Hugs~ I'll see you in the locker room!bea~
Great update, I am completely intrigued by your story. I wonder: if the mark left at the sites is a dragon, is Draco involved?I am very much looking forward to read more.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. Ohhh, good guess - but you know I can't answer that one! You'll have to wait and see. 
Thank you very much for the review, sampdoria.bea~
Clever Hermione! I love the idea of Apparating off the Knight Bus. Very Original. I like the clues left behind, and Hermione's list of ideas. How like Hermione to make a list!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. Good diversion tactic! Yes, she's trying to sort it all out and solve the mystery - on a dead line! Lists, a graph, and a detailed report! lolThank you for the review,
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
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Interesting update - I look forward to where this is going x
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much,
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
. I hop eyou liek what we have in store!Thank you very much for the review, doll.bea~
this is an interesting tale and unique to me - impressive considering how much ffic I have read.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Wow, that is really a compliment! Thank you. I hope you like what we have in store!Thank you very much for the review.bea~
I love the story so far and I am voting Team Saturn all the way!!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Sweetie, thank you very much for the support. I hope you like what we have in store! There are a few surprises coming!Thank you very much for the review.bea~
The mystery unfolds a little further. Can't wait to see where this is going. It will be too bad if Severus and Hermione have to spend a lot of time together working this mystery out ;)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Yes, you have a look at what Hermione has emased as her 'clues' but are all of them what they appear to be? lolOh, he's now in the game, and they will be working closely together! Thank you very much for the review, hbar.bea~
This was great. I really like the riddle at the end. It adds a lot for us to work with later on.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much, doll. I really appreciate yor support. I especially wanted to thank you for your helpful suggestions. I think this is going to be a great mystery ride! Thank you so much for the review.bea~
Good chapter. I really liked your inventive use of escape via the Knight Bus. I look forward to round 3! Good luck, JoAnne
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. Yes, well, it just hit me! I'm glad you liked the bus bit. Thankyou for your support, JoAnne.bea~
I like it. The story is moving along nicely and I can't wait to find out what happens next week.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm so glad that you do! Thank you so much for your support, barbied, and for the review. bea~