Southern Witch 69 — Black Hole Chaser
Chapter 6 of 7
SaturnSeverus Snape receives a mysterious letter from Unspeakable Hermione Granger, prompting him to meet with her. In hopes of stopping a clever mastermind, he agrees to give her whatever help she needs. Will he lose his heart to her along the way?
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Severus arched an eyebrow and then widened his eyes in surprise. "Hermione!" he called out triumphantly. "Come quick!" A moment later, the clicking of her shoes against the tile of her kitchen could be heard.
"What is it?" she asked anxiously.
The appreciative smile on his face faltered as he saw Potter follow her into the room. He'd momentarily forgotten the boy was still there briefing her on what he knew of the unfruitful search for Corner. "Glumbumble parts."
Hermione cocked her head to the side. "I don't follow."
Impatiently, Severus gestured to the potion and said, "When they are mixed with the berry of a belladonna plant and the yolk of occamy eggs, a revitalizing agent is produced. Look at the difference in these glumbumbles." He pointed to the dead insects they'd been using as test subjects. "This one was in the same condition as that one, but then..."
"Oh my God," Hermione said, sitting in a nearby chair. "You've done it, Severus! I never thought about belladonna berries."
"I thought the Fiendfyre destroyed the lot?" Potter asked.
"Doesn't mean he didn't procure some before the fire," Severus said rather snidely.
"And these berries are harvested in autumn," Hermione said, nodding. "So, that's what the occamy eggs were used for." She grinned. "How in the world did you figure in the glumbumble parts?"
"It's actually the fluid it secretes." He shrugged. "This one still had some inside...I hadn't collected it all...and when I pushed down on its thorax to add the occamy yolk and berry solution I'd prepared for the experiment, it dripped out. Just as I did so, I had an epiphany and remembered something Slughorn once mentioned. The change began immediately." He snorted. "It's safe to say that the person behind this does not suffer from triskaidekaphobia. The required anti-clockwise stir count? It's thirteen, not twelve as we'd thought."
Hermione beamed brightly, stood up to hug him, and then turned to Potter to do the same. "I've got to inform Croaker!" She set about sending a Patronus when Potter sat down in the chair she'd vacated.
"Thanks for your help on this."
Severus simply nodded.
"I've wanted to be an Auror for a long time."
"Yes, I remember."
"Yeah, you said I'd never become one."
"Is there a point, Potter?"
"No, just trying to think of something to say. And failing." The boy shook his head. "I wish Tonks were still alive. She would have loved this kind of thing. She was excited to think we might work together one day." Potter sighed. "I was just talking to Kingsley earlier, and he said that he would have offered Lupin a job. You know how brilliant that would have been? He could have..." His words trailed away as melancholy filled his expression.
Severus wasn't sure what the boy wanted him to say, so he remained silent, his eyes moving over to Hermione's form as she walked back to them.
"Poor Lupin," she commented. "As far as Tonks, just think what her mentor would have done with all this. He would have been in his element!"
"Moody," Severus said with a sneer.
"Was a good man," Harry interjected.
"Was a man who didn't know his boundaries," Severus said, but then added, "but a good man all the same I suppose."
"Tonks took his death so hard," Hermione said, remembering the night Moody had been killed. She'd shed many shocked tears as well.
"Yeah, I hear Croaker mourned for a long time, too," Harry said.
"Indeed?" Severus asked.
Hermione touched his hand briefly. "Moody trained him, helped him get an education after his family was murdered I believe. There's a portrait of Moody in his office, along with some others...his lost family, if I'm not mistaken."
"I wish I could have buried more than his eye," Harry said softly, looking at his watch. "Ah, anyway, I've got to get ready for tonight. Kingsley wants a word with me before I go. They want as many Aurors as possible at the lineament to help the Unspeakables." He gave them a lopsided grin. "I get to ride on my broom tonight to look down for anything suspicious."
"Ever the broom rider!" Hermione quipped. "I'll see you in a few hours then, all right?"
Thinking of the full moon, which was set to rise shortly, Severus said, "Bad moon rising."
Everyone remained silent for a moment, each lost in thought, before Hermione walked Potter to the door. When she came back, she walked right up to Severus and said, "You've been quiet."
"I've been working...you know how important it was for us to figure out the steps of the potion we were missing. And now only a few drops of this can be added to the antidote... just in case our perpetrator is successful." He proceeded to do just that, looking smug with his success.
"About the other day..."
"In the storeroom?"
"Yes." Her voice had become breathless.
"Do you... Would you like to explore that a little more?" he asked boldly. He'd wanted to broach the subject before now, but no time had seemed quite right.
"I want that, Severus," she admitted softly, stepping forward and lifting her hands to his face before tiptoeing up to brush her lips against his. The kiss was light and exploring before one of them moaned...Severus?...and then it became quite intense.
Hermione's hands moved of their own volition and buried themselves in Severus' hair as if afraid he might try to escape. The pounding heart in her chest gave way to tingling in her stomach as their tongues tangled and tasted. When Severus ended the kiss, he didn't pull away from her, instead moving his mouth to her neck, nipping and laving until he found the sensitive spot just behind her earlobe.
"Oh, God, yes," she murmured, craning her neck to give him more access. She then realized that they'd moved away from the table he'd been experimenting on and were now pressed against the nearest wall. When she felt his hard erection press against her stomach, heat flooded her veins as if setting her on fire with want. How could a man provoke such feelings by simply using his mouth? What would it be like if he also used his hands or did more than press his glorious hardness against her body?
"Hermione," he whispered suddenly.
She was uncertain what he'd meant to convey, but her name sounded like a lifeline for a drowning man. Or, perhaps, was he asking her a question? Moving her roaming hands back up to his face...they'd found their way down to his back and arse...Hermione looked into the black depths of his eyes, trying to read them. Deciding that if he'd asked a question, he deserved an answer.
"Yes," she said softly, a small smile gracing her lips.
Decision made, he gifted her with a smile in return and lowered his lips back to hers, one of his hands ghosting over a breast before coming to rest on her waist. However, the moment was not meant to last. Croaker's voice filled the room.
"Granger! I've got Corner! He's at the lineament. The base of the second mountain on the northern side has a bloody cave! I've alerted the others! Bring Snape and be careful!"
Hermione's head cleared instantly. What had she been thinking? Stunned, she looked over in the direction of Croaker's Patronus and saw wisps of smoky light vanishing.
"Finally!" she said, pushing Severus back.
"Where is the nearest checkpoint to the mountain he's talking about?" he asked, composing himself and snatching up a phial of the antidote he'd just completed.
"It's right near there. I wonder how we didn't find the cave after all this time searching?" Frustration laced her words.
"It's a huge lineament, for one. Enchantments, for another," he said, stating the obvious and smirking at her.
She swatted at his arm playfully before grasping him firmly. "I'll Side-Along with you." With a loud crack, they Apparated to the checkpoint nearest the mountain that held the cave opening.
"Where's the Auror on duty?" she wondered, looking around.
"He's probably gone to help Croaker. I can't wait to get my hands on Corner and his accomplice. They need to be incinerated!"
"Either you're out for blood or you've a fondness for malapropism. Don't you mean incarcerated?"
"The bastards nearly killed us...you...in that fire!" His expression turned dark as he thought back to that night. Then he pointed behind Hermione. "Look! An unearthed trail. Follow it!" Severus said, sprinting off with his wand drawn.
Hermione did the same, brushing past shrubs, ducking under branches, and jumping over a small stream. Finally, they were at a partially concealed cave. "We probably passed by here at least once," Hermione said in disappointment.
"It's not the easiest terrain to navigate; besides, there's no time for that now," Severus said, blasting the rocks and dried branches out of the way. "Just be glad we've finally found the little prick who's been, up until now, as slippery as the banks of The Serpentine! I shall go first."
"Severus..." Before she could voice her objection, he'd already ducked through the entrance. She did the same, wand at the ready. "It's so dark. Ugh... it stinks. It smells like that maggoty haggis at Nearly Headless Nick's Death Day party... mixed with Doxycide."
"Definitely not pleasant, and I wonder if...blahwoo arfnom! Waaggfff!"
"Sorry? What are you saying?" Hermione saw the terror on Snape's face before she could make sense of his tongue-tied words. Her eyes moved to the direction his were set on, and she gasped.
Slowly striding toward them was none other than Albus Dumbledore...sort of. His body seemed to be made of dust. "Murderer," he said, extending a finger towards Severus.
Severus' wand clanked to the ground and ropes appeared from the darkness, binding him and slamming him against the wall. All the while he tried to speak but could only mumble unintelligently.
Hermione pointed her wand at Dumbledore's figure. "Headmaster? What are you...he didn't murder you! How could you say that?" She was breathing heavily and debating on which hex to use when someone said, "Lumos!"
The cave lit up as a fire in its center roared to life and several candles flamed brightly.
"Unspeakable Croaker!" she called out happily. "It's Dumbledore Corner's trying to bring back! And Severus! He's been hexed or something. I think..." She looked around, taking in everything. "Where's Michael?" When her boss said nothing, and only glared at Snape, she asked again, "Where's Corner?"
The smirk he gave her sent chills through her body. Something was quite wrong.
The words we used this week are: Triskaidekaphobia, Malapropism, Maggoty Haggis, Doxycide, Glumbumble Parts, The Serpentine, and Stream.
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There was no one in the hallway, Hermione only wanted to have some 'quality closet time' with Severus ... still, it worked out quite well.
How's Harry going to react to their conclusion?
okaaay, Cormac is the mole. But I agree with S., that he seems not to be clever enough for a plan like that. On another note, I like the beginning attraction between S.&H. And I love the whole read, it's great fun. On to the next chap - but only tomorrow, it's late in my corner of the world.
Hehe, that was fun - not DD, but Moody as the greatest Wizzard of all times, and Croaker behind all. Clever, amusing plot.
Many thanks to all members of the saturn team for the entertaining time you've given me.
So Croaker's office is bugged. So the mole must be someone in the Ministry.
I also can't quit to wonder about the sizzling dragon as the new sign over the raids. And the wording "... most powerful Wizzard" and "mentor" - all these clues lead me more to Dumbledore and Harry, and not the Dark Lord at all.
A guy who loves poems, or riddles? And values potions as a means to gain what HeShe wants? I haven't a clue...The nice kitten is really a cat and not some Animagus?Thanks again for an interesting chap.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Yes, a smart girl/guy who likes potions, knows how to write poems, or solve riddles, and knows a great deal about plants and magical creatures. Scarry huh?Nope, kitten was one of the words and I tried to use as many as possible. You are very welcome. Than you for coming out and supporting our team. bea~
"Thanks" for this intriguing beginning, "update" - no, that's not necessary because there's already the next chap there. See you later on.
Excellent. I'm happy to see I was right in who was not being brought back but I was thrown off at the end for a bit. I also managed to figure out it was Croaker as the evil villan. Poor Harry. It's probably a good thing he didn't know what was going on while he was a pillar box! Fantastic story. I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter!
Hmm ... I am very curious ...
Definitely an interesting start. I'm intrigued. Thankfully this story is complete so I won't be left in suspense for too long. Off to the next chapter.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm glad you like the beginning!
Wow....what an ending!
Alastor Moody really? I never would have thought that.
Great job to all involved.
Good story. I figured out Croaker was going to try to resurrect Moody just as this last chapter was starting. Well done!
Hey silverdoe! Great job with the ending! I had so much fun participating in this challenge with you!!! Much Love ~ Brena
Interesting twist going into the last chapter. I'm off to read the next!
you did a nice job of resolving the ending. i don't think moody would have appreciated the efforts of his mad protegee to bring him back to life. kind of mean to make harry stay a pillar box while they fooled around, though, given he was only there to try to help.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank yoy. I am sure Harry won't mind too much.
nicely written. i don't understand why dumbledore would call snape a murderer, but i suppose it will all become clear momentarily when i read the next.
great chapter! i loved snape's thoughts on being trapped innocently in the storeroom and his accidental groping of her chest. hee hee. and great cliffhanger ending. luckily, i don't have to wait for the next chapter to post.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm glad you enjoyed it; I think inadvertent groping would really embarrass someone like Severus--which makes it really appealing as the author to make him suffer through it, poor dear. :DThanks for taking the time to review.
i kind of miss snarky snape. it seemed a bit sudden for him to be saying he'd hold her for all eternity. but the mystery is interesting.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Yeah, I wanted to make him more snarky, but we didn't have time for another conflict. Thanks for reviewing,
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
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hmm. i have to say, after the wormtail debacle, i do not trust that fluffy little kitten.
i would have thought kingsley would be more cooperative.
very interesting. i liked the little details about the potion ingredients.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. I love POtions, it'd be my fav class in school if only... Thank you for the reveiw, love. Hugs~
Poor Harry! For their sake, I hope he doesn't have any consciousness as a pillar box! Excellent wrap up of the mystery. Nice twist to Moody being resurrected in the end. No doubt Harry will see to a proper burial this time. As soon as he can move again!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I woul like to think they gave him the respect he deserved. Thanks for reviewing.
Moody’s remains were surprisingly untouched. The same could not be said for the former head of the Unspeakables. Severus was sure there were bits and pieces of him dripping from the ceiling.Um, ew.Nifty ending, though. :)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thanks :)
Now there's a nightmare situation, when it turns out the person you'd like to incarcerate--or incinerate, as the case may be--is none other than your very own boss.
Yikes!
Fishy, fishy indeed. So... if their quarry's isn't interested in resurrecting Voldie, then who? Curiouser and curiouser.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Read on, dear reader--though you probably have done by now, lol--and you shall find out. ;)I'm glad you're intrigued, and I appreciate that you took the time to review.
Kiss interrupted, argh! As for the rest, is Corner working for the culprit or is he merely being used to distract our duo from the wizard behind the curtain?
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
The wizard behind the curtain, hahahaha! I love it. I think you're on the right track there :)Uninterrupted kissing will resume shortly...
So the plot thickens... and sickens. Add in a smarmy Michael Corner into the mix, but is he the culprit or merely a red herring? Well done!