phoenix_writing – Gravity Keeper
Chapter 5 of 7
SaturnSeverus Snape receives a mysterious letter from Unspeakable Hermione Granger, prompting him to meet with her. In hopes of stopping a clever mastermind, he agrees to give her whatever help she needs. Will he lose his heart to her along the way?
"I don't know how I let you talk me into this," Severus grumbled as he crept along the corridor.
He already had no idea where they were, but Hermione was moving with confidence.
"Talk you into this?" Hermione was restrained to a whisper as they were anxious to avoid detection. "You insisted upon coming."
He had been concerned for her...but he was hardly going to say that.
"Quite recently, you were nearly consumed by Fiendfyre. I think it unwise for you to go anywhere on your own."
She huffed a breath, and he thought that he was about to be treated to a fine example of her temper, but all she said was, "Then stop complaining. You're worse than Ron and Harry."
Severus grimaced and abandoned the topic.
"Treacle fudge," she said presently.
"What?"
"Hush."
He felt the wards come down and realized that the nonsensical words had been a password.
They walked on; then Hermione reset the wards, adding a complicated-looking flourish with her wand.
"What was that?"
After a moment, she admitted, "A little Unspeakable trick. Ensures no one can tell we went through."
A nice trick he'd like to learn.
She led him deeper into the bowels of the building until she stopped and announced, "Into the storeroom."
"I beg your pardon?"
A shove propelled him into the small room. He ran into a mop and bucket, could vaguely make out various maintenance, cleaning, and office supplies.
He turned back to face her. "Hermione, you can't possibly..."
She pulled the door closed behind herself. It was very dark. Hermione was practically on top of him. He shuffled hurriedly, trying to get all important bits out of too-close contact.
Hermione cleared her throat. "I hadn't planned this for the two of us. The patrols will be out of the area soon."
"This is almost as clichéd as an assignation in the prefect's bathroom," he hissed.
"What was that?"
"Nothing."
He had caught students up to all sorts of inappropriate activities in areas like this back at Hogwarts. He had never believed any of their excuses...and yet here he and Hermione were, waiting out a patrol in a storeroom.
Several very stilted minutes of silence passed. The handle of the mop was pressing most uncomfortably into his back, but he couldn't let himself simply lean more into Hermione.
Did she have any notion how lovely she smelled and how difficult it was not to bury his face in her hair? Wrap his arms around her? He was quite certain that they could fit more tolerably in this space if they arranged themselves in that manner, but he rather doubted that he would be able to convince her of the pure practicality of his suggestion.
His elbow was wedged very uncomfortably against one of the shelves. When he finally succeeded in moving it, he had to scramble to catch what he'd hit before it could make too much noise. He grasped at the items, relieved that they had not hit the floor.
They felt like rolls of spellotape. Who had organized this storeroom? It was hardly logical to put them at the edge of the shelf where they could be so easily knocked off.
"Would you mind moving your hands?"
Hermione's voice was slightly breathless, and Severus realized just what part of her anatomy he had caught the tape against. He shifted immediately.
"I beg your pardon," he said stiffly, appalled by his gaucherie.
He cast about for a topic which would take his mind off the fact that he'd recently had his hands all over Hermione's chest.
"Have you come across any other leads?"
As if she wouldn't have told him right away. Less than a week until the full moon, and they didn't seem to be getting anywhere. Which was, of course, what had led them to this particular gamble.
"Nothing. The Aurors are still investigating Draco Malfoy..."
He scoffed. "Going after every Slytherin you know?"
"That isn't fair, Severus," Hermione said crossly. "Someone cast the equivalent of a dragon Morsmordre in the sky above the crimes. It's a legitimate line of inquiry."
"Yet I don't suppose it occurred to you to investigate Charlie Weasley, someone who has more to do with dragons than simply the etymology of a name? Gryffindors are all..."
His words cut off as his foot was stomped on. Rather deliberately, he suspected.
"I led the investigation myself," she said, voice vibrating with emotion. "Ron still isn't speaking to me, but I have no intention of allowing sentimentality or prejudice to cloud my judgement on this matter. As I was trying to say, there is no indication that Draco Malfoy is involved. Nor that Charlie is."
Now the silence wasn't just awkward. He thought it was more than angry, too. He was pretty sure that he had hurt her.
"You have always had a pronounced ability to do what you believe is right; it was rude of me to ascribe motives to you that would better describe someone like Sirius Black."
He heard her swallow in the darkness. "Thank you."
"Obviously you are not unduly prejudiced against Slytherins or you wouldn't be here with me now."
"In the closet, you mean?"
There was a thread of laughter in her voice now, and Severus was relieved.
"Something like that."
Silence fell again, easier this time. He could feel her exhalations fluttering against his cheek.
It was quite intimate, and he blamed this for his speaking again.
"Your research for this case suggests that you have maintained your Potions acumen."
"I find it useful for a variety of cases."
"Your knowledge is formidable."
"Thank you." She sounded pleased.
"I imagine that you are aware, therefore, of the properties of belladonna?"
She grew quite still.
And suddenly, Severus couldn't think of a single other property of the plant which he could mention to turn the subject.
Hermione sighed. "I was wondering how long it would take you to bring that up. I apologize."
"You could hardly help yourself."
"But I know how awkward it is to have someone you're not interested in practically throwing themselves at you."
"I..."
"You were just trying to save me, and I behaved like a complete fool. I should have realized, should have..."
But it seemed that Severus had hit upon a way to effectively silence Hermione Granger.
It also turned out that it was much more comfortable in the storeroom if Hermione's arms were wrapped around his neck and his around her waist. The handle of the mop was still digging into his back, but that didn't seem nearly as annoying as it had done.
She tasted like honey and cinnamon, made little noises in the back of her throat when he moved a hand up to twine in her hair. He realized that he'd wanted to do this ever since she had waltzed back into his life and caused such upheaval.
Only now Hermione was pulling away from him.
"Time," she muttered, voice rough. "We've got to get moving."
In the light of the hallway...positively brilliant compared to the storeroom...he could see that she was flushed and somewhat rumpled, and she straightened her hair and clothing as they continued down the corridor.
Severus was somehow right back at the Dark Lord wreaking havoc on his personal life. He wasn't sure that he had ever been more annoyed.
Which was, of course, why they had to ensure the man stayed dead.
They hadn't made it more than twenty yards before they were suddenly dodging spell-fire. Hermione threw up a shield while Severus sent a Blasting Curse back at their attacker.
"Stop that!" Hermione exclaimed.
Severus hardly thought that would help, only the attack ceased immediately.
"Goddammit, Hermione, you scared the hell out of me!"
Harry Potter.
Severus should have realized that Hermione would be chary about this; though they had been caught, it was by one of Hermione's best friends.
Severus had to wonder about the wisdom of pulling the Man Who Triumphed off the lineament...thanks to Hermione's insistence...only to put him on guard duty here. Perhaps Potter had simply refused to be taken out of the action entirely.
"Are you out of your mind, sneaking around like this?" Potter demanded.
"We have to see if the body's there."
"Did it occur to you to ask?"
"Of course it did." Hermione's glare skewered Potter. "Kingsley told me it was here but wouldn't let me see for myself. Actually said I was causing a foofaraw...as if trying to raise Voldemort from the dead is a trifle."
Potter was frowning.
"I'm not sure that I can trust what he's saying."
"We're talking about Kingsley."
"I know," she said softly. "But it wasn't normal behaviour."
Potter stood there for a long moment, irresolute, and then he nodded. "Shift change is in less than an hour."
They started moving again, and Severus wondered how he'd got himself into this. Breaking in to the Ministry to see Voldemort's body with Harry Potter and Hermione Granger. Did this make him part of a warped Golden Trio?
"I still can't believe they put you down here alone," Hermione said.
The Auror shrugged. "After what happened with Corner, everyone's a little leery of nearly everyone else. But they all agree that Harry Potter wouldn't let anyone get at Voldemort."
Hermione rolled her eyes. "Still no news about Corner?"
The younger man shook his head. "Not a bloody thing. I've never had much use for him, but.... Yes, he's an Auror; he'd know a fair bit of the information that's been leaked. Everyone's agreed he can't be the mastermind behind all of this, but I honestly can't even see him as a decent lackey or getting laying low right. He's always been loud and obnoxious and..."
"...a miserable excuse for a human being?" Severus suggested.
"Yes," Potter said with a grateful nod. "Now he's eluding all detection, and it just doesn't feel right, you know?"
Hermione nodded.
Severus had already shared his doubts with Hermione; he couldn't help but feel that there was something fishy about the whole thing.
They finally reached their destination. It took Hermione and Harry fourteen minutes to break through the formidable wards, and Severus was reluctantly impressed.
When they stepped inside, he told himself not to be paranoid, but all the hairs on the back of his neck were standing up. The room was small and seemed to be devoted solely to the Dark Lord laid out on a long table and surrounded by more wards.
The body was badly decayed; the two pieces of his snapped wand lay across the remains of his chest next to the skeletal hands.
"I can't believe he's here like this," Severus uttered involuntarily.
"Don't look at us," Potter grumbled. "We've been trying for ten bloody years to get them to burn him and have done."
Severus stepped closer, staring down at the earthly remains of the man who had been his master for almost two decades.
Wordlessly, he uttered the spell, and a deep twinge in his left arm told him everything that he needed to know.
"It's him."
"Can you be sure?" Potter asked.
"The spell identifies the wizard who cast the Dark Mark upon me. There is no doubt."
They stared at the remains.
It was all here. The broken pieces of the wand. The body. No indication of tampering, no indication that it was being preserved.
Hermione and Severus came to the same conclusion at the same time, and she beat him to the question.
"What if it's not Voldemort they're trying to resurrect?"
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There was no one in the hallway, Hermione only wanted to have some 'quality closet time' with Severus ... still, it worked out quite well.
How's Harry going to react to their conclusion?
okaaay, Cormac is the mole. But I agree with S., that he seems not to be clever enough for a plan like that. On another note, I like the beginning attraction between S.&H. And I love the whole read, it's great fun. On to the next chap - but only tomorrow, it's late in my corner of the world.
Hehe, that was fun - not DD, but Moody as the greatest Wizzard of all times, and Croaker behind all. Clever, amusing plot.
Many thanks to all members of the saturn team for the entertaining time you've given me.
So Croaker's office is bugged. So the mole must be someone in the Ministry.
I also can't quit to wonder about the sizzling dragon as the new sign over the raids. And the wording "... most powerful Wizzard" and "mentor" - all these clues lead me more to Dumbledore and Harry, and not the Dark Lord at all.
A guy who loves poems, or riddles? And values potions as a means to gain what HeShe wants? I haven't a clue...The nice kitten is really a cat and not some Animagus?Thanks again for an interesting chap.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Yes, a smart girl/guy who likes potions, knows how to write poems, or solve riddles, and knows a great deal about plants and magical creatures. Scarry huh?Nope, kitten was one of the words and I tried to use as many as possible. You are very welcome. Than you for coming out and supporting our team. bea~
"Thanks" for this intriguing beginning, "update" - no, that's not necessary because there's already the next chap there. See you later on.
Excellent. I'm happy to see I was right in who was not being brought back but I was thrown off at the end for a bit. I also managed to figure out it was Croaker as the evil villan. Poor Harry. It's probably a good thing he didn't know what was going on while he was a pillar box! Fantastic story. I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter!
Hmm ... I am very curious ...
Definitely an interesting start. I'm intrigued. Thankfully this story is complete so I won't be left in suspense for too long. Off to the next chapter.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm glad you like the beginning!
Wow....what an ending!
Alastor Moody really? I never would have thought that.
Great job to all involved.
Good story. I figured out Croaker was going to try to resurrect Moody just as this last chapter was starting. Well done!
Hey silverdoe! Great job with the ending! I had so much fun participating in this challenge with you!!! Much Love ~ Brena
Interesting twist going into the last chapter. I'm off to read the next!
you did a nice job of resolving the ending. i don't think moody would have appreciated the efforts of his mad protegee to bring him back to life. kind of mean to make harry stay a pillar box while they fooled around, though, given he was only there to try to help.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank yoy. I am sure Harry won't mind too much.
nicely written. i don't understand why dumbledore would call snape a murderer, but i suppose it will all become clear momentarily when i read the next.
great chapter! i loved snape's thoughts on being trapped innocently in the storeroom and his accidental groping of her chest. hee hee. and great cliffhanger ending. luckily, i don't have to wait for the next chapter to post.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm glad you enjoyed it; I think inadvertent groping would really embarrass someone like Severus--which makes it really appealing as the author to make him suffer through it, poor dear. :DThanks for taking the time to review.
i kind of miss snarky snape. it seemed a bit sudden for him to be saying he'd hold her for all eternity. but the mystery is interesting.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Yeah, I wanted to make him more snarky, but we didn't have time for another conflict. Thanks for reviewing,
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
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hmm. i have to say, after the wormtail debacle, i do not trust that fluffy little kitten.
i would have thought kingsley would be more cooperative.
very interesting. i liked the little details about the potion ingredients.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. I love POtions, it'd be my fav class in school if only... Thank you for the reveiw, love. Hugs~
Poor Harry! For their sake, I hope he doesn't have any consciousness as a pillar box! Excellent wrap up of the mystery. Nice twist to Moody being resurrected in the end. No doubt Harry will see to a proper burial this time. As soon as he can move again!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I woul like to think they gave him the respect he deserved. Thanks for reviewing.
Moody’s remains were surprisingly untouched. The same could not be said for the former head of the Unspeakables. Severus was sure there were bits and pieces of him dripping from the ceiling.Um, ew.Nifty ending, though. :)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thanks :)
Now there's a nightmare situation, when it turns out the person you'd like to incarcerate--or incinerate, as the case may be--is none other than your very own boss.
Yikes!
Fishy, fishy indeed. So... if their quarry's isn't interested in resurrecting Voldie, then who? Curiouser and curiouser.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Read on, dear reader--though you probably have done by now, lol--and you shall find out. ;)I'm glad you're intrigued, and I appreciate that you took the time to review.
Kiss interrupted, argh! As for the rest, is Corner working for the culprit or is he merely being used to distract our duo from the wizard behind the curtain?
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
The wizard behind the curtain, hahahaha! I love it. I think you're on the right track there :)Uninterrupted kissing will resume shortly...
So the plot thickens... and sickens. Add in a smarmy Michael Corner into the mix, but is he the culprit or merely a red herring? Well done!