Bad Moon Rising
Saturn281 Reviews | 4.77/10 (281 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )
Severus Snape receives a mysterious letter from Unspeakable Hermione Granger, prompting him to meet with her. In hopes of stopping a clever mastermind, he agrees to give her whatever help she needs. Will he lose his heart to her along the way?
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Reviews for Bad Moon Rising
Now I wondered about that myself earlier. Loved the interlude inthe closet. Good job!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Yes, it took our hero and heroine a little longer than many of our readers to get there. ;) I think they live in a Voldie-centric world.I'm glad you enjoyed the closet scene, and I appreciate that you took the time to review.
Very good, I'm enjoying thier developing relationship and the almost kiss :) The fire was terrifying, good work
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm glad you liked the fire and the relationship. Thanks for the review.
wow chilling, can't even think of the posibility Voldy will relaly return ughhh, good work
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey Gersknightlady! Thank you so much for reviewing! It's a chilling thought isn't it? Some fruitcake out there trying to bring him back. I hope you enjoy the conclusion which will be posted today! Thanks Again. Much Love ~ BrenaMarie
Amazing thought and detail, making the Potions ingredient's interesting.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you very much. It was a fun chapter to write. Thank you so much for the review.
Good start but Horror of Horrors thinking the monster could come back to plague Severus again.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I know! Wouldn't that be the worst? But the only good thing would be that Severus could kill him!
Great chapter, SW. The almost sex was good too and of course, the evil cliffy.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
hehe! Thank you. :)
I must be slow because I still haven't figured it out yet and must wait for next week. ;)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
LOL That's okay! Thanks for reading.
AHA! Okay, so it wasn't Umbridge trying to bring back Fudge, But someone trying to bring back Dumbledore was my second guess!Croaker, I would not have suspected though, but it does make sense. He woulod have wanted Hermione to bring Severus in on the case in order to get closer to the person that he blames for Albus's murder. And I see from LJ, which I was happy to vote for saturn, that the votes are going quite well! Congrats! You guys make a wonderful story!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you so much for reading and supporting us. :) We appreciate it!
Wow, I kind of figured. This is interesting.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thank you! :)
What bloody good chapter. I would like to be stuck in a closet with Snape. Nice cliffie too. Although I did suspect that it might not be old Voldi that was being resurected a few chapters back.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think we'd all like to be stuck in a closet with Severus, lol. :DHermione and Severus were indeed a little backward in their considering whether it might not be Voldie who was coming back; I think they're hard-wired to think of him as the big bad.Thanks for taking the time to review.
Hmm is it really Dumbledore they're trying to bring back or is it Moody? Is it Croaker behind it all or is he Imperiused? Yet again poor Severus and Hermione! Now to wait and see...
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
dun dun dun! One more week and all the answers will be out! Thanks so much for reading
Ha! Knew it was old Dumbles! Tricky getting that triskaideka whatsit word in! :)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
When I saw it, I said Trisackofwhat? LOL
I love the warped golden trio reference there... very funny! :P Especially with Severus replacing Ron -- right-o for Hermione, alright!I enjoyed this!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm glad that you found the comparison amusing. I'm certainly part of the "Severus is better-suited for Hermione than Ron" camp--and no matter how much relations have improved between Severus and Harry, sticking them together as part of a trio and seeing what happens just makes me laugh.Thanks for taking the time to review.
Hmm, I'm still hoping maybe it's Dumbledore lol.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
LOL I'm glad you're speculating and living in hope. ;) Thanks for taking the time to review.
Good grief! I still have no idea exactly what is going on. What I do know is that this was another great chapter. This story is all about the mystery person who is trying to bring back the mystery wizard, and I find myself very intrigued. Then I find my thoughts drifting back to Severus, Hermione, and a certain storeroom waiting to be officially christened...
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Yeah buddy. I'd love for them to finish up that "scene." Hehehe. We're nearly done now. Thanks so much for following! :)
Mwahahahahahahahaha! Now what?
Wonderful continuation, southern! I was totally impressed with your use of the words, too. Good job! Now for the final act!!!!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thanks, mate! :) xoxoxox
Oh god Percy's not trying to resurect Crouch is he?!?!? Sorry i tend to pick dandiilions out in left feild.Love cant wait for the next chappy
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hmmm... I can totally see that! Thanks tons!
Great! I can't wait to find out! My vote's with Dumbledore. And Harry's the one who's trying to resuscitate him. (Hee, hee--just grasping for the furthest fetched possible straw.)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
LOL Well, anything is possible, right? (Especially in fanfic. ;) )I'm glad you're looking forward to what's coming up. Thanks for taking the time to review.
The story continues to be grabbing my attention. I like the way these two are dancing about one another. And yet the mystery stays in the forefront as well. Good pacing for you all. I look forward to the next submission. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thanks, JoAnne. I'm glad you like the story. I'm glad we're able to juggle both a mystery and a romance at the same time with such a tight word allowance. It makes things interesting.
Intriguing, really. I hope you'll be able to mantain this high level both with the plot and the writing, because I want to read the full story!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
! Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I also hope you've continued to enjoy the more recent chapters of our awesome fic! Thanks again. Much Love ~ Brena
Why Severus thought Michael a pervert? I can't recall anyhting about that in cannon. Apart from a phrase in the end when you put a lot of words of this week's list that is too obvious, you continue the story very well.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
In the last chapter, he was too forward with Hermione, so Severus called him a pervert because he was forcing himself on her to the point that she was uncomfortable with the situation. It has nothing to do with canon, just our story.I know, I shouldn't have slammed at the words in there. I already had the amount needed for the story, but I couldn't help myself...Thanks for the review.
Interesting. And I like the use of Belladonna making Hermione show her feelings like that.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Wouldn't it be nice if we knew for sure when someone else liked us. It would give me a confidence boost, that's for sure. Thanks for reviewing.