Bad Moon Rising
Saturn281 Reviews | 4.77/10 (281 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )
Severus Snape receives a mysterious letter from Unspeakable Hermione Granger, prompting him to meet with her. In hopes of stopping a clever mastermind, he agrees to give her whatever help she needs. Will he lose his heart to her along the way?
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Reviews for Bad Moon Rising
bravi!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I earned a bravi! Wow!
Thank you very much.
Michael Corner, sounds about right, but who's the puppeteer behind him?Nice touch with the Belladonna, at least she's not apologising for her actions or trying to deny her feelings to him!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
The puppeteer...well, time will tell who the master mind is.I'm glad you liked the belladonna!
Thought Corner was a slime-ball. :)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Good insight ;)
Great update, I am completly intrigued by your plot, it is magnificient!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Glad you're hooked. Now you are in our control!
It was Corner!! Suspense, suspense... I can't wait for more! Btw, love the growing affection between Severus and Hermione...More, more!!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Sorry, you will have to wait until next Sunday for more suspense and romance. But it is going to be a whopper. That is for sure!
Is it too late for a review? Do you still get points? I hope you do, cause I was bogged down with work and only had a chance to read!Good work, anyway... off to read the next chap.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
It's never too late to review. All reviews are worth gold and chocolate and many many smoochies!Than k you very much for the support and the compliment. Happy reading!
Michael Corner... I should have known that weasel was involved. She was certainly affected by the belladonna. He should bring her a large bouquet in a vase... or plant her an entire garden... or... *getting awfully hot in here as daydreaming begins*
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
LOL. Yes, they should replant the entire field of belladonna together.
Oh no, that man already has the body!! I love the suspense here and the way you inserted the tiny fact that Croaker's office was bugged. Lovely.Severus saving Hermione from jerks are definitely a bonus and a delicious one too!Excellent!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
! Thanks for the review! Yeah the bad guy does have the body! <gasp!> I really enjoyed writing this chapter and I hope you've continued to enjoy our story! Much Love ~ Brena
Oh, this was just great! At least that Belladonna was good for something! LOL. Wonderful continuation!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Ha ha. Yes, the Belladonna was good for something. Too bad Croaker interupted their little would-be love scene...
Michael Corner! That little weasel, er I mean mole. I agree with Severus, though. He's just not bright enough. The master mind is still out there and the clock is ticking! Being chased by Fiendfyre is a scary experience. Severus may not have gotten a kiss from the damsel he saved, but he did gain some very heartening information. I think he'll be getting more than a kiss once they solve this case!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
I'm sure Severus is also waiting for us to finish this story so he can get his reward! So, who do you think Corner is working for?
A good chapter with a fair amount of action. I liked it.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Action is always good. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks.
It's great, Elize. Love the Fiendfyre and Corner and just... eveyrthing!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Thanks, team captain! I'm glad you like it.
Snape should probably tell her he's interested.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
LOL, probably. I'm sure he will, when the time is right.
Great chapter, Elizabeth. Nice mix of suspense with a little romance in it.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Why, thank you
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
. I'm just glad it's over with. *wipes brow* ;)
I've got it. Harry is working to bring Sirius back! No, his body disappeared behind that stupid curtain. Oh well, it was just a thought... Great guessing game though.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
! That's a cool idea! I'm glad I've got you guessing! Thanks for the review. And I hope you've continued to enjoy this story. Much Love ~ Brena
I kept thinking that someone wanted to bring back Dumbledore, but I could not think of anybody wanting to bring back Dumbledore, who would think so derisively of Hermione.Good chapter, I really liked it.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey Apisa_b! I know Dumbledore is one of the top contenders for the "Who's being Ressurected?" category. I can totally see your point here. I am unable to confirm or deny your suspicions though. ;-) Thank you so much for the review! Much Love ~ Brena
Brena, you did a great job with the creepy ending. I love Severus' protectiveness towards Hermione. Thanks for the great chapter so I can follow it with ease!
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
! Thanks for the review and the support! I'm so glad that you're comfortable following me! I loved writing Severus defending Hermione! That was soooo much fun! Thanks Again. Much Love ~ Brena
Very exciting! The race is on to see if Severus and Hermione can solve the mystery in time. I'm guessing that Rita Skeeter is about to make some trouble...
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey honey! I'm so glad that you're finding this story exciting! It's definitley an exciting ride to write so far! I sure hope they can solve the mystery in time! And deal with whatever trouble comes their way! Thanks for the review. Much Love ~ Brena
Cleverly done. I enjoyed the various puzzles you posed in this chapter.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Why thank you, Prof. We should answer some of those puzzles shortly. Until then, care to take a guess and solve them? ;)
Awesome job. :)
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey there Blazen Paths! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you keep up with this fic! Much Love ~ Brena
Great Chapter, Brena. I love the end.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey Silverdoe! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for all your help when I first started working on it. It's been so much fun working with you on this! Much Love ~ Brena
Is this going to be another Neville Longbottom twist?I could think of a few ironic resurrections, but we'll just have to wait and see. Makes me wonder if this Michael Corner character shows up at this point just before we find the office bugged is for any particular reason...
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
! Thank you so much for reading & reviewing our story! I love how you're thinking, it's readers like you that I had in mind when designing my chapter. I can't tell you if you're on the right path or not. But I will tell you I appreciate the time you've put into trying to figure it out, and I hope you enjoy the ride. Thanks Again. Much Love ~ Brena
So whose our baddie? Great chapter.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
! Thank you so much for reading & reviewing! I can't tell you who the baddie is! You're just gonna have to hang in there with us and see what happens! Thanks again! Much Love ~ Brena
This is getting really mysterious and exciting. I don't know who the bad guy (girl) may be, but I'm not sure he/she wants to bring the Dark Lord back. Maybe another influent person. Anyway thatwas another great chapter.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
! Thank you so much for reading & for the great review. It seriously makes me glow. I'm so happy that you're enjoying the mystery and the roller coaster ride that this is turning into. I'm sorry that I can't confirm or deny your suspicions. You're just going to need to hang in there with us for a few more weeks and see what happens! Thanks Again! Much Love ~ Brena
Interesting, is it Voldemort being resurrected? or Grindlewald? or Umbridge? (now that's scarey!) Looking forward to seeing who is the resurrector and who is the resurrectee.
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
Hey
Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)
! Thank you so much for reading & reviewing! I'm sorry I can't tell you who the resurrector and resurrectee are, but I'm very happy to hear you're looking forward to finding out! Hang in there! Thanks again. Much Love ~ Brena