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Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament Bad Moon Rising
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Bad Moon Rising

1: debjunk – Meteoroid Beater

2: beaweasley2 – Comet Chaser

3: BrenaMarie – Asteroid Beater

4: Elizabeth – Moon Chaser

5: phoenix_writing – Gravity Keeper

6: Southern Witch 69 — Black Hole Chaser

7: silverdoe — Supernova Seeker

Bad Moon Rising

Saturn

281 Reviews   |   281 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance Action/Adventure Psychological Alternate Universe Epilogue compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament 14,395 Words 7 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Harry Potter Kingsley Shacklebolt

Severus Snape receives a mysterious letter from Unspeakable Hermione Granger, prompting him to meet with her. In hopes of stopping a clever mastermind, he agrees to give her whatever help she needs. Will he lose his heart to her along the way?

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Chapters (7)

Chapter 1: debjunk – Meteoroid Beater

Chapter 2: beaweasley2 – Comet Chaser

Chapter 3: BrenaMarie – Asteroid Beater

Chapter 4: Elizabeth – Moon Chaser

Chapter 5: phoenix_writing – Gravity Keeper

Chapter 6: Southern Witch 69 — Black Hole Chaser

Chapter 7: silverdoe — Supernova Seeker


About Saturn

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Saturn

Member Since 2009  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 16  |  0 Reviews Written  |  473 Review Responses

This is a round robin team created for The Petulant Poetess Intergalactic Quidditch Cup Tournament.

The authors/players who make up Saturn and their team positions are:

debjunk Meteoroid Beater
beaweasley2 comet chaser
BrenaMarie Asteroid Beater
Elizabeth Moon Chaser
phoenix writing Gravity Keeper
Southern Witch 69 Black Hole Chaser
silverdoe Supernova Seeker

Please show your support for our team by reviewing and guessing what might happen next! Cheers! :)






Reviews for Bad Moon Rising

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MuseAmusant

I'm very impressed with this mature, self-assured version of Hermione, not fussed at all with any of Severus' old intimidation tactics. Good thing too, since they hardly have time for any of that, what with someone apparently setting out to restore Voldie and very little time to left to catch him. Or her.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Well she did grow up after the war and she's come into her own, so to speak. Yes, well, time is ticking, and she's not sure what she's got, yet. Thank you for the support. bea~

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MuseAmusant

Seems only fair that Severus be told exactly what's going on, especially since it's clear his hide is on the line just as much as Hermione's. I think you've captured Severus perfectly here, and I really like this matured version of Hermione.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Grins wildly!  Thanks so much!  I'm glad you like it so far.  I have to tell you, Severus is quite fun to write.  I'm always stiving for him to sound in character, and I'm thrilled that he seemed so for you.

10/10

pyro3

Bravo! Well written, thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter!Pyro

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thank you from all of us on Team Saturn.

0/10

simo

Moody? I'ld never guess. Thanks for a very good story (and for the pillar box!)

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

You're very welcome from all of us. Thank you:)

10/10

apisa_b

Oh, what an ending!You've chosen well with your villain; he behaved rather classical, what with all the talking in the end :-)You had me totally mislead about who was going to be resurrected. Again, well done!Nobody cares for the feelings of pillar boxes! I would have thought better of Hermione.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Don't blame Hermione. I mean who could say no when dealing with Severus. Thanks for the review and the support.

10/10

LuciannaMalfoy

What a wonderful action filled story! Wonderful ending! And Severus was so brave! And the villain was very  well picked, I would've never thought it'd be Croaker!

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thank you from all of us on Saturn. I am glad you liked the stroy.

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FruGal

Who is the villian trying to revive - Voldy or Dumbledore?

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Hey

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

!  Thanks for the review!  I hope you enjoyed the ending.  Much Love ~ Brena

Response from FruGal (Reviewer)

I did enjoy the ending. Was the "Moon" in the title suppose to be a hint?

10/10

Stefdarlin

Wow, what a chilling end to the chapter.  Nice way to keep us at the edge of our seats, Brena.  I like the way you gave us more information.  Just enough to keep us teetering and guessing.I hope it isn't Voldy.  Ewwww.  =o)

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Hey Stef!  Thank you so much for the review!  I'm so glad you enjoyed my chapter!  I hope you enjoyed the ending of our tale!  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

Jinxie

Too funny turning Harry into a Pillar Box and then the comment about him not knowing how long he was one while they're otherwise engaged.  ;)  Nice way to end it.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thank you. I am sure he won't mind. :)

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phoenix writing

Tee hee hee.Harry as a pillar box is still the best thing ever, and I can just imagine Hermione explaining afterwards about how it took them a little while to wrap everything up and change him back....  :DNice job concluding, silverdoe.  The image of Croaker bits dripping off the ceiling is gruesome and amusing all at once, and I thoroughly enjoyed Severus snarking the moment he was conscious.  Nice explanation of what happened to poor Kinsley, too.Thanks for a lovely addition to our story.  ^_^

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

I'm sorry, Harry. I just had to get in another snog. :)Thank you.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Great work, silver! :) xoxo

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thank You! It was a lot of fun doing this with all of you.

10/10

Jinxie

Nice touch with Harry as a pillar box and the comment that he'll never know how long he was one...  ;)

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

I am sure they won't let him saty that way too long. They still need to clean up after Croaker and see to Moody :)Thanks for reading, reviewing, and supporting Saturn.

10/10

Clairvoyant

What a great job.  Up until the end, I swore it was Dumbledore chosen to be resurrected by... you had me guessing there, too.  I would never have taken Croaker as the obsessive, evil type of fellow.  But that's a testiment to this team's clever writing.  And in the end, Severus and Hermione are together.  That's what it's all about!  Well done.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

I am glad we were able to keep you guessing and reading. Thanks for reviewing.

9/10

sevibaby

Poor Harry, but at least he is alive.  I don't know if the magical world could have handled a resurrected Moody.  Thank goodness we will never find out.  You really wraped up this story very nicely.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thank you!

10/10

sevibaby

OMG,  I don't know how I missed this last week.  I am so sorry I didn't review then.  Well better late than never.  This chapter was awesome.  But Croaker needs to be hexed for two reasons.  One,  he interuped Severus and Hermoine enjoying each other and second, it seems that he is the bad guy.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Hey, that's okay! I'm glad you've read it now. :) xxoxxoxox

10/10

snitchette

That was a fantastic story that I enjoyed a lot. Thanks to who dver got the brilliant idea oh this challenge.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thanks from all of us on Saturn. We are glad you liked it.

0/10

Elizabeth

I love it, I love it, I love it!!!! How great was that? It was awesome! You did it, silverdoe! Everything was there, you got it all in. I am so proud of our team! Great job. The pillar box bit was great, very cute. ;)

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

I was a little worried I wouldn't get it all in there, but I am happy with how it worked out. Thanks for all the help.

10/10

Sampdoria

A great story, I have enjoyed reading it!

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thank you. It was fun to write with all of these talented ladies.

10/10

makaem

That was a perfect ending!

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thanks :)

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kittyperry

Excellent ending. Pillar box Harry is a delightful picture in my mind.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

LOL, well it was the perfect way to get him out of the way. Thanks or reading, reviewing and supporting Saturn.

10/10

barbied011

Awesome twist.  I never saw Moody coming!  :)  Great job!

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thanks!

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Elizabeth

I just realized that I didn't post a comment on here! Duh. I'm so sorry. This was a great chapter. You combined so much and brought all of it together. I'm so glad we got to have so much in our story and it all makes sense. And the heated kissing was very nice. Cheers, mate!

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

LOL That's okay! :) Thanks for doing so. ~grin~ xoxoxox

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sunny33

Harry as a pillar box.  ROFL! :)

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

:) I take it you liked that. Thanks, sunny, for reading and reviewing.

10/10

neelix

Nice chapter! Great work, guys! Loved this story.

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thanks and thank you for reviewing.

10/10

debjunk

:) Lovely way to wrap it up, silver! Excellent job! It was totally awesome working with all of you guys!

Response from Saturn (Author of Bad Moon Rising)

Thank You. It has been a great experience. I enjoyed it.

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