How he handled her was so cold and how he said he would break her - I do not know what Hermione is going to do but with the dragon I am curious what he showed her - on to the next chapter- good work.

Oh crap - confronting Severus at his home and then not knowing it was her husband and then she goes to take his amulet off and then the bracelet turns the other direction - the shit is about to hit the fan...

The Mirror revealing all the Horcruxs and the details of how to destroy them was very creative thinking. I loved the ending the best how she blurted out that she loved him - cannot wait to see the next chapter to see what he says...

It was great how she cooked for him and it was cute when he pulled the sick card and wanted his warm toast. How imaginative to use the mirror to find a way to destroy the cup - the ROR is a nice touch as well.

Great chapter - how he sent her the message and the trio went and saved the Grangers. I loved the whole Miss Figg and Hermione getting the Hufflepuff cup back. Good thinking and planning. The state that she found him in - dear me Voldemort was absolutely in a rage - well at least she is going to him with the needed supplies to help him.

I loved the whole scene where all four of them were at the ice cream parlor...He knows her favorite but I do not think her friends know. The whole getting a stolen moment together at the motel was good and how he iniated the sex well - that was just erotic.

The rest of the honeymoon was just as sexy as the beginning - great chapter - loved how the dragon curled around her neck and how everyone seems to take her marriage.

The marriage consummation was so intense and hot - my dear your certainly know how to write passion and erotic - then the table and him and her having sex and he sucked her toes - fan I need a fan - is it hot in here????

I loved how he kidnapped her - dont mind me - Haa Haa. Then the whole thing of games and getting to know him -a great idea and a good imagination. Must read on this is very good.

The whole battle scene was scary and great. I loved how she activated the time slower and destroyed the locket and stopped Ron from being killed. Then the whole portkey to Voldemort was terrifying to say the least and how she used that one minute of time to snap the ring on her finger - I was sitting on the edge of my chair.... The dragon appearing - NOW THAT IS ONE HELL OF A GUARDIAN. Good imagination.

Well she got a little physical - not the full deal but pretty hot none the same - The scene you wrote between them was very good - I was wondering when he would take the plunge and kiss her.

Interesting the way the Canadian put her hand on his thigh - must be Severus. The whole outting is interesting - I cannot wait to see what happens in the chess match.

oh now this chapter is even more interesting - Ravenclaw's wand - the fact that they can see it unless they go to the show - being inducted into the order and then telling everyone that they can tell them nothing about their quest - good show.

The bath scene and the tablet was so erotic - I was reading it think oh my.... I cannot believe they are doing this - off the charts sensual - great smut.

The paper airplane was a fantastic idea to use in the story. I loved the chapter especially when the trio were in the Headmaster's office and they would Albus - good show - has me reading it non stop because it is so well written.

What an action packed chapter from the Colins home being full of deatheaters to Severus contacting Hermione with the ring. Your story is rich in details and action and I simply love it.

Excellent first chapter - quick thinking on Hermione's part and interesting story line - I cannot wait to see how it plays out and how she will react when she finds out it is Severus.

I think this is one of the best Severus/Hermione fan fiction written. I loved how you showed the dicotomy of Snapes spy persona. I thought that the differnces shown were thoughtful and Prof. Snape's snark and snarl was spot on. I also appreciated, though I can say it was painful to read, that Hermione had a 'subscription' full of issues after she discovered whom she had married.

I have enjoyed a good many of your fictions; thank you for sharing them. They are well written and interestingly planned out.

Kia Mira

Now I’ve reached more than a third, and I finally wanted to tell you how immensely enjoyable this story is, very fascinating and intriguing. I’m reading one or two of the wonderfully long chaps every day, and it gives me always something to look forward to.

Snape as Russel is great to read. It’s highly understandable that he wants to live someone other’s life, to live out other aspects of his personality. This would be awkward as Snape, but as Russel it’s just fine.

But how long will Hermione give her Cupid to stay in the hide? She’s just too curious for her own good. Anyway, it has to come out some times, and I’m sure she will go crazy about it and I’m also sure that you’ll make it an impressive roller coaster to read.

Btw, I do like your Hermione/Jane very much; she’s very courageous in the handling of the different situations and not only the planning brain of the trio behind the scene.

The battle at the wand exhibition was terrific, very stirring! And the appearance of Sigurd was simply genial, with his “She issss the princesss” at every proper or not so proper moment. At the Granger’s he was sooo cute! But why did he react to Violetta - perhaps she’s a thread, that means, she’s the spy in the Order for Voldimoldy !?

I think this is truly the best SS/HG fic I've read yet.  You managed the gargantuan task of maintaining both a fascinating plot, a heart wrenching SS/HG relationship, and some marvelous writing in general. Not to mention the sizzling sex scenes!  Thanks so much for an awesome read.

wonderful, wonderful, marvellous,  just off to the bookshop to look for a Sword.

Aww what a lovely way for Albus to go,  feel the love!

oh goodie he got off, wonder what they are going to do now??

WOW, the press are having a field day , and Harry still can't get the comparison between his actions and Snapes.

You are one evil, warped, devious, imaginative, brilliant woman.  Will you have my children .. no seriously I have an 18 yr old son who really needs to leave home instead of sitting in front of his laptop all day.. (don't know where he gets that habit from)..take him , go on!