Definitely one of the more unusual stories I've read, but i liked it very much, particularly them telling sirius that they were married lol. Glad it had a happy ending also!

"You should have told me."
Told him what? That she was pregnant, or that by doing the mental-link magic she'd be flung into this dreamworld, almost not getting out of it? Or did Snape really only killed Voldemort at the cost of his own life?

Lovely story.

Beautiful story. I'm. Not usually a reader of Snape paired with and OC but Rawa was a fascinating and believable character.  

*snip*Dear Miss Akapana,I am writing to offer you the position of Professor of Defence Against the Dark Arts for the coming academic year, as word of your extraordinary talents has reached my ear.* It is rumoured, for example, that you possess the power to compel truthfulness; such a skill would likely prove quite valuable when dealing with the garden-variety magus adolescens. I would be remiss in my duties if I failed to advise you that we have had some difficulty in keeping this position filled during the past decade: more than one of your predecessors has unfortunately lasted less than a year. However, I feel certain that if your magical abilities are as your reputation has led me to believe, you will have an excellent chance of success.If you are agreed, I will send a conveyance for you at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Albus DumbledoreHeadmaster*I cannot imagine why it has reached one ear and not the other, but there you have it. HAHAHAHAHA! That is AWESOME! LOVE IT!

fascinating plan, I love how Rawa wants to believe in Snape, but no wonder she's concerned.

“Come with me, dear,” she said. “You and I need to have a talk with Dumbledore.”  oh my, yes she does.

“When you sacrifice the losers on big stone pyramids,” she said.   ROFL, she does have a point. Isn't there some question about whether it was the losers or the winners that were sacrificed?

Way to get Ron ferretboy behaving. Snicker

I thought I envied the magical folk for Reparo and Evanesco, but a mosquito repelling charm? Want.I love the interaction between Rawa and Sev, her pov on his nose is hysterical and good for her sniping back at him.

Poor Hagrid, he did ok in the mountains going to see the giants, but then he walked so there was time to adjust.

What a fascinating character your Rawa is, I'm sure she'll make quite the impression on Hogwarts.

Better. And try to remember that my name is Esnep. He's gotten to like it, hasn't he? that's so cute :o)

Brutally honest description of one approach to teaching - a female version of Snape.  Given the view of professors in canon and film, Ron's observation seems dead on.  Hence, establishment of authority by penalizing those who vocalize the obvious.  Shades of Umbridge.  This is assuming you wish to display a character defect of the protagonist.  Cannot rate this chapter because it is not clear this is intended as a character defect.

Hagrid rides a flying motorcycle, but gets soroche?  Perhaps the Aviation Regulatory Agencies class him as General Aviation and restrict him to below 5000 feet.  Good touch with the finches and Filch.  And she has brought a lovely assortment of hallucinogens and poisons.  Good frisson at the end. 

A development chapter, but it still manages some drama.  I take it the humor is that our heroine can understand American-style English.

A powerful opening.  Different.

Just found your story through Thanfiction-he drew a stunning picture from your story and I was fascinated and had to come see what it was about. This first chapter is amazing. While I am not very versed in South American lore, everything you have written so far has sounded right, has had the weight of a fully realized world and culture and is so different that what one normally finds in HP fanfiction. I love this line ____________________________________________________ What was a conveyance? she wondered. Another letter? Some kind of contract? Well, it hardly mattered—she had no intention of traveling half the world away to teach in a language that made her teeth hurt. _____________________________________________________ It made me laugh and it rings true.I love your discription of the condor, that he does not speak like a human would, that he is the voice in her head as well as his own powerful entity.  And this sobered and warmed me at the same time___________________________________________________________________ Daughter, you know that no one is ever told when and where they are to die. __________________________________________________________________ Finally, I love that it costs something to use magic, to reach the spirit realm. It sounds weird that the high point of this chapter for me was her vomiting in the snow but, there you go. Wonderful chapter and I am heading on to the next with high hopes!

Lovely ending! Lovely! Original work? Plz?

Great finish.  Simple and understated, but perfect. :)

I think of the line from that song as it applies to Rowlings Severus Snape ...A man gets tied up to the ground, He gives the world its saddest sound, its saddest sound...mmmm.Lovely love story!

Aha!  More is explained...so that's why Severus deviated from his usual custom by asking to use the pool when he requested the services of Malavi at The Wayward Wand.  He was trying to recreate the scene of Rawa in the bath as closely as possible so that he could act out what he had wanted to do at the time...although it's not quite clear why he chose a cold pool instead of a hot bath.  As I already noted when I left a review for The Wayward Wand, he must have chosen Malavi because she of all the women probably looks most like Rawa with olive skin and straight black hair.

Scary!  Hope he gets back in time! :)

Scary!  Hope he gets back in time! :)

See.  telling the truth is good for you! :)