Soroche
Chapter 2 of 26
HechiceraA witch from the Andean altiplano arrives at Hogwarts to teach DADA. Culture clash, conflict, and smut ensue.
ReviewedShe sat beside a large trunk, surrounded by an assortment of bottles, jars, and packets. Here was an earthen tinaja filled with waka waka beetles packed in salt; there a bundle of achuma quewillu spines. An array of small stoppered bottles held all manner of liquids, including a variety of poisons. One by one she carefully packed each item into the trunk, cushioning it with straw and eucalyptus leaves.
There were live creatures as well, although these did not go into the trunk: brilliantly colored arrow-poison frogs in a small glass vivarium, and a large cage fashioned from dried vines, housing several dozen finches.
There were boxes and boxes of books as well, and an ancient carved wooden chest holding the hundreds of knotted kipu on which were recorded generations of spells and potions.
A commotion down by the road made her look up from her task. A small knot of students was running up the hill, pointing towards her house, and in their midst was a most improbable sight: a huge motorcycle, ridden by the biggest man Rawa had ever seen.
He was absolutely enormous, with a great mane of wiry hair and a beard that looked as if it might house a family of birds. He roared up the hill, surrounded by the excited swarm of students, and came to a noisy stop in front of her. The motorcycle belched forth a final cloud of malodorous smoke and then was mercifully silent.
The giant dismounted and, extending a hand the size of a small pig, said something enthusiastic but completely incomprehensible. When it was clear that Rawa had not understood a word, he repeated himself, this time more slowly and considerably louder. Finally, on the third repetition, she caught the name “Dumbledore,” and, turning to one of the students, said, “Find me Sammy Begay.”
Sammy Begay was that rarity at Yachay Wasi, a student from the US—or, as the students insisted on calling it, Gringolandia. The practice of real magic in the States had dwindled almost to extinction. Counterfeit magic—illusions and crystals and astrology—was alive and well, but such true practitioners as remained were limited to parts of Louisiana and the Navajo Four Corners. It was from this latter area that Sammy Begay had come two years ago, hoping to expand upon his training as a tribal shaman. At the time he had known only a smattering of Mexican Spanish, and of course no Quechua at all, so the ensuing months had been difficult for him. Rawa thought of him now with a fresh sense of empathy—soon she would herself be in that position, trying to make her way in a foreign land and a foreign tongue.
And God help her if all the ingleses spoke like this one.
At first, Sammy did not seem to be having much more success than she had had, but after much back-and-forth with the visitor, he turned to her and said, “I think I have this right, Q'ala Chaki. He says his name is Jegrit, and he’s come to take you back with him to Jaguars.”
“In that?” she asked incredulously, pointing to the motorcycle with its rickety-looking sidecar.
The enormous stranger reached into a pocket and pulled out a crumpled bit of parchment, which he handed earnestly to Rawa. On it was written, in the now-familiar slanting hand:
I assure you, it is much safer and more dependable than it looks. As, for that matter, is Hagrid. --A. D.
She looked up at him. “Jegrit,” she said carefully, and he broke into an alarming smile, nodding vigorously.
“Tha’s right, Hagrid!”
She gazed dubiously at the motorcycle. The layqakuna did not normally use magic for transportation—indeed, they used magic very little for everyday tasks that could be accomplished without it—so she had naturally planned to travel to Scotland in one of the airplanes of the runakuna. But she had no wish to offend Dumbledore by declining the transport he had sent for her, so she nodded assent, smiling nervously.
The plan, apparently, was that she was to sit behind Hagrid on the motorcycle, and her belongings were to go into the sidecar, whose capacity seemed magically infinite. Her students set about the task of stowing all of her trunks and boxes, but she stopped them when they came to the frogs and finches, uneasy about the welfare of living creatures inside what seemed to be some sort of magical compression device.
“Sammy,” she said, “ask him what we should do with the animals.”
Sammy ran over to Hagrid, who was sitting on a nearby rock, demolishing a stack of empanadas. After a brief conference, he returned and said, “He says not to worry—care of magical creatures is his specialty and the animalitos will be quite all right in the sidecar.”
Just at this moment there was a tremendous crash, and she looked over at the rock where Hagrid had been sitting a few seconds earlier. It was empty, and on the ground beside it lay the foreigner, looking like a beached leviathan. He was holding his head and groaning horribly, thrashing back and forth. Hurrying to his side, Rawa saw that his face was gray and covered with sweat.
“Ask him if he can feel his hands and feet.”
A garbled exchange, then, “He says his head hurts like hammers.”
“I can see that for myself—what about his hands and feet?” Impatiently, she reached up and pinched one of Hagrid’s sausage-like fingers as hard as she could, but he did not react at all. His lips were now noticeably blue, and his eyelids had begun to flutter.
Rawa cursed under her breath. “It’s the soroche. I’ve never seen it hit anyone this fast, or this hard. We have to get him down the mountain.”
“You can’t cure him?” Sammy asked in surprise. “What about mate de coca? You gave that to me when I first came here. I was pretty sick for a couple of days. Although,” he admitted, “not like this.”
“No, this is the worst I’ve ever seen,” she agreed. And then, in answer to his question, “There’s no cure, magical or otherwise, for soroche. The mate de coca makes you feel a little better, but soroche is like starvation: you can use magic to ease the pain, but you can’t keep a starving man alive with magic. You have to get food into his belly. With soroche this bad, the only cure is richer air, and quickly.”
“So how did I get over it, then?”
“Most people do, in a few weeks. Your body adjusts, your blood gets thicker. It helps if you’re young and strong.”
“Well, what’s wrong with him? I mean, besides that he’s an anciano.”
She raised an eyebrow. “He’s not that old, Sammy. I think it must be some difference in his blood, or his lungs. I mean, there’s clearly at least one giant up his family tree.” She reached up and felt Hagrid’s pulse, then turned back to Sammy.
“Run down and ask Miguel Huamán if we can borrow his truck. And a tow bar.”
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Latest 25 Reviews for Soroche
75 Reviews | 5.52/10 Average
Definitely one of the more unusual stories I've read, but i liked it very much, particularly them telling sirius that they were married lol. Glad it had a happy ending also!
"You should have told me."
Told him what? That she was pregnant, or that by doing the mental-link magic she'd be flung into this dreamworld, almost not getting out of it? Or did Snape really only killed Voldemort at the cost of his own life?
Lovely story.
Beautiful story. I'm. Not usually a reader of Snape paired with and OC but Rawa was a fascinating and believable character.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Oh wow, thank you so much! Lucky for me, I wrote this story before I was ever involved in the fandom or had read any fanfic at all. If I had, I'd have known how averse people are to reading SS/OFCs because of the prevalence of Mary Sues, and I'd probably have lost my nerve and/or second-guessed every line. As it was, I toiled on in blissful ignorance.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
No, I think it was fantastic and I'm glad you shared this. She had many facets and her life was very interesting to read about.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Oh wow, thank you so much! Lucky for me, I wrote this story before I was ever involved in the fandom or had read any fanfic at all. If I had, I'd have known how averse people are to reading SS/OFCs because of the prevalence of Mary Sues, and I'd probably have lost my nerve and/or second-guessed every line. As it was, I toiled on in blissful ignorance.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
No, I think it was fantastic and I'm glad you shared this. She had many facets and her life was very interesting to read about.
*snip*Dear Miss Akapana,I am writing to offer you the position of Professor of Defence Against the Dark Arts for the coming academic year, as word of your extraordinary talents has reached my ear.* It is rumoured, for example, that you possess the power to compel truthfulness; such a skill would likely prove quite valuable when dealing with the garden-variety magus adolescens. I would be remiss in my duties if I failed to advise you that we have had some difficulty in keeping this position filled during the past decade: more than one of your predecessors has unfortunately lasted less than a year. However, I feel certain that if your magical abilities are as your reputation has led me to believe, you will have an excellent chance of success.If you are agreed, I will send a conveyance for you at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Albus DumbledoreHeadmaster*I cannot imagine why it has reached one ear and not the other, but there you have it. HAHAHAHAHA! That is AWESOME! LOVE IT!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Why, thank you! I tried to make it appropriately Dumbledore-y.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
It IS! So perfect! Love that bearded wizard!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh - and you're quite brave to introduce ayahuasca into your fic. I spent a summer in Peru and that vine is some NASTY stuff!
fascinating plan, I love how Rawa wants to believe in Snape, but no wonder she's concerned.
“Come with me, dear,” she said. “You and I need to have a talk with Dumbledore.” oh my, yes she does.
“When you sacrifice the losers on big stone pyramids,” she said. ROFL, she does have a point. Isn't there some question about whether it was the losers or the winners that were sacrificed?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Indeed there is--but I'm taking license to decide that Rawa has inside info.
Way to get Ron ferretboy behaving. Snicker
I thought I envied the magical folk for Reparo and Evanesco, but a mosquito repelling charm? Want.I love the interaction between Rawa and Sev, her pov on his nose is hysterical and good for her sniping back at him.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
I can't tell you how pleased I am that Soroche is getting a read!
Poor Hagrid, he did ok in the mountains going to see the giants, but then he walked so there was time to adjust.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, also the Andes are much taller than any mountains anywhere in the UK. Cotopaxi--which is where the Yachay Wasi school is located--is 5000 metres high.Worst. Headache. Ever.
What a fascinating character your Rawa is, I'm sure she'll make quite the impression on Hogwarts.
Better. And try to remember that my name is Esnep. He's gotten to like it, hasn't he? that's so cute :o)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
At least he's paying attention!
Brutally honest description of one approach to teaching - a female version of Snape. Given the view of professors in canon and film, Ron's observation seems dead on. Hence, establishment of authority by penalizing those who vocalize the obvious. Shades of Umbridge. This is assuming you wish to display a character defect of the protagonist. Cannot rate this chapter because it is not clear this is intended as a character defect.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Nope, not intended as a character defect at all. She's not punishing Ron for stating the obvious--she's punishing him for saying something disrespectful and inappropriate to the venue.When I was teaching high school, I would definitely have called a student out for remarking audibly that I was fuck-worthy.I don't see it as Umbridge-like at all.
Hagrid rides a flying motorcycle, but gets soroche? Perhaps the Aviation Regulatory Agencies class him as General Aviation and restrict him to below 5000 feet. Good touch with the finches and Filch. And she has brought a lovely assortment of hallucinogens and poisons. Good frisson at the end.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
I always figured Hagrid flew pretty low to the ground on the motorcycle--at any rate, nowhere near Cotopaxi's 19,000 feet.
A development chapter, but it still manages some drama. I take it the humor is that our heroine can understand American-style English.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, it's more that she can understand standard "textbook" versions of English, but not Hagrid's rather intense regional dialect. A bit like someone who had learned Spanish in school faced with someone speaking Argentine Lunfardo.
A powerful opening. Different.
Just found your story through Thanfiction-he drew a stunning picture from your story and I was fascinated and had to come see what it was about. This first chapter is amazing. While I am not very versed in South American lore, everything you have written so far has sounded right, has had the weight of a fully realized world and culture and is so different that what one normally finds in HP fanfiction. I love this line ____________________________________________________ What was a conveyance? she wondered. Another letter? Some kind of contract? Well, it hardly mattered—she had no intention of traveling half the world away to teach in a language that made her teeth hurt. _____________________________________________________ It made me laugh and it rings true.I love your discription of the condor, that he does not speak like a human would, that he is the voice in her head as well as his own powerful entity. And this sobered and warmed me at the same time___________________________________________________________________ Daughter, you know that no one is ever told when and where they are to die. __________________________________________________________________ Finally, I love that it costs something to use magic, to reach the spirit realm. It sounds weird that the high point of this chapter for me was her vomiting in the snow but, there you go. Wonderful chapter and I am heading on to the next with high hopes!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Woot! I was so thrilled to get to the top of the commission queue and get that picture, but it honestly never occurred to me that it would result in more people reading my fic! Because it's an OC fic, it doesn't get a whole lot of exposure. Serendipity!I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for the details. I researched this fic for several years before starting to write it, and the cultural and linguistic informatin is as accurate as I can possibly make it.
Lovely ending! Lovely! Original work? Plz?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you so much!Not sure I know what you're asking there?
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
Sorry about that; I blame my swedishness. I'm not always clear on all the english stuff. Have you got a story hidden somewhere here, that is all your own? You know, whithout borrowing the characters from the divine Rowlings? I absolutly think you are good enough, you see, and since I like your stuff I would like to read it. Yes I am shamelessly flattering you, so I can get to more of your stuff.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Ooh, flattery, my favorite. More, please!Thank you so much! I don't, at the moment, have anything finished. But I'm working on it. Are you in LJ?
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
LJ? No. I have no idea what that might be?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
LiveJournal. Get thee thither.
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
I'm now thither, what to do now I wonder?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Friend up. See you over there :-)
Great finish. Simple and understated, but perfect. :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you.It's hard to let them go.
I think of the line from that song as it applies to Rowlings Severus Snape ...A man gets tied up to the ground, He gives the world its saddest sound, its saddest sound...mmmm.Lovely love story!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you so much--I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Aha! More is explained...so that's why Severus deviated from his usual custom by asking to use the pool when he requested the services of Malavi at The Wayward Wand. He was trying to recreate the scene of Rawa in the bath as closely as possible so that he could act out what he had wanted to do at the time...although it's not quite clear why he chose a cold pool instead of a hot bath. As I already noted when I left a review for The Wayward Wand, he must have chosen Malavi because she of all the women probably looks most like Rawa with olive skin and straight black hair.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, the bath at Hogwarts was more like a pool in size, if not in temperature. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
Scary! Hope he gets back in time! :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Do you doubt him for a single moment?