The Wayward Wand
Chapter 24 of 26
HechiceraA witch from the Andean altiplano arrives at Hogwarts to teach DADA. Culture clash, conflict, and smut ensue.
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Thanks as always to RedSkyAtNight, my wonderful beta and Britpicker.
Those of you curious about the Wayward Wand establishment may want to check out the story of the same name.
“So glad you could make it for dinner, Severus.”
Snape and Rawa were walking down the steps of twelve Grimmauld Place into the cool evening when Sirius delivered this sarcastic parting shot. Rawa looked up at Snape, and as soon as they were out of earshot, said, “I just realized. This is the first time you have stayed for dinner after an Order meeting.”
“Yes.” His voice was carefully neutral, but she thought she could detect, in the soft light of the streetlamps, the barest hint of a smile.
“Why did you always leave before?”
“I had more interesting things to do.”
Now she was sure it was a smile. They were ambling along, with no clear destination, and she felt his hand move smoothly downward from the small of her back where it had been resting. It was one of the oddities of his character that while he never, within view of their colleagues, made the smallest gesture of affection toward her, in semi-public places he was ruthless in his liberties. Tonight during dinner, for instance, he had sat next to her with apparent indifference, but after dessert was finished, his left hand, concealed under the table, had slipped through the slit in the side of her skirt and roamed over her thigh, his fingers at one point hooking into the elastic of her knickers and searching out the cleft between her legs.
She had squirmed in her chair, and clenched her teeth to keep from moaning aloud. Reaching under the table, she pinched his arm, but instead of removing his hand, he had pinched her back, on the inside of her thigh. By the time they rose to leave, she was so wet that she was sure she must have left a damp mark on the chair.
Now in the half-darkness he drew her into a doorway and grasped her buttocks in both hands, pulling her up against his growing erection. He kissed her hard, sucking her lower lip into his mouth and biting it gently, and began with both hands to lift her skirt.
“More interesting than this?” she asked, rubbing against him through the fabric of his trousers.
To her surprise, he laughed, and she pulled back slightly and said, “What?”
“Not more interesting, no. But undoubtedly less expensive in the long term.”
Her eyes narrowed. “What do you mean, less expensive?”
He smiled but said nothing, and she said, “Where did you go, after those other meetings?”
“To a modest establishment in Knockturn Alley called The Wayward Wand.”
“A wand shop? You went after every meeting to a wand shop?”
He was grinning broadly now. “Hardly. I was there to have my more . . . non-magical needs tended to.”
Suddenly she understood, and her jaw dropped. “This place—it is a prostíbulo, a place where men go?”
“Men . . . and some women as well.”
“And what did you buy there that was so relatively inexpensive?”
“I paid a woman—well, a number of women, actually—to suck my cock.”
She was speechless. If they lived together into old age, she would never understand him. He had seemed mortified when she had teased him about the little bottle in his bedside table, but now, admitting casually to frequenting a brothel, he was not just unapologetic but positively smug.
They stood in silence for a moment, and he finally said, sounding a little amused, “What did you think, that I lived like a monk? That ‘sucks me off like a pro’ was just an expression?” He took her hand and placed it back over his erection, which was harder than ever, and she realized that the conversation was arousing him.
“Of course not. I just . . . ”
“Didn’t think I would tell you about it, is that it?”
She nodded ruefully.
“Is that what you want? For me to lie to you? To conceal things from you?”
“No,” she said immediately. “It is just . . . Severus?”
“Yes?”
“When was the last time you went there?”
“The night we went to see the Dark Lord.” He grinned. “You were annoyed with me, and went off to your rooms. It seemed unlikely that you would be willing to personally relieve me of all the tension you had caused, climbing out of the bath like the brazen little tart that you are, all naked and wet and . . . naked.”
Not that I would have known at the time that I was causing you any “tension.” She reached for his belt buckle. “You like to see me naked?”
He seemed surprised. “Of course. It’s . . . naked.”
She unzipped his trousers and took his penis in her hand, rubbing her thumb lightly across the underside of the shaft.
“Oh, Christ,” he said. “Rawa . . . “
“Yes?” Her fingers teased along the little thread of skin at the base of the head.
“Suck my cock.”
“For free?”
“Bitch.”
She pulled his penis free of his trousers and began to stroke it lazily. “You have not returned to that place since we were married?”
“No, no, ah, god, please, I want your mouth on my cock.”
She dropped to her knees and leaned forward and licked delicately at him. “You will never go back there again?”
“No, never, I swear it, now suck me off before I come all over your face.”
She pulled his trousers down around his knees and took his penis in her mouth, sucking hard and working her tongue against it.
“Oh, fuck,” he gasped. “Oh, Christ almighty fuck.” His hands clutched at her hair.
Her left hand was braced against the ironwork of the steps, and she wet her right forefinger and slipped it between his buttocks and into his anus. He groaned, and she felt his muscles clench around her finger as her mouth moved up and down along his penis.
“Oh, god, Rawa, you filthy whore, oh, fuck, I’m going to come.” He pulled away slightly, but she buried him in her mouth, feeling the liquid rush, hot and salty and bitter, against the back of her throat. She sucked him clean, and swallowed, and raised her face to him, her lips tingling and slightly numb.
His knees bent, and he sagged back against the railing. “God almighty,” he said. “Come here.”
She stood, and he pulled her skirt up around her waist and reached a hand inside her knickers. “You’re so wet,” he said, slipping two fingers up inside her. “How can you be so wet before I’ve even touched you?”
“I want you,” she answered. “I love your . . . your cock, in my mouth.”
“Really? You like to suck me off?” His fingers were exploring insistently inside her, and she groaned and pressed forward against him.
“Ay, dios, yes, the taste, the smell, everything. Oh, please, your fingers, that feels so good.”
He began circling his thumb over her clitoris and she cried out.
“Oh, Severus, touch me, yes, like that,” she said, holding on with both hands to the railing and grinding against his hand.
“Is this good?” he asked, working his fingers in and out of her, and stroking harder with his thumb. “Do you like it when I do this?”
“Oh, yes,” she cried, “there, right there, así mi amor, así, me vengo, ¡me vengo!” and she came, shuddering, against his hand.
Slowly he withdrew his fingers, making her twitch violently by sliding one gently over her clitoris.
“What do you call that?” he asked.
“What?”
“That.” Another gentle touch, another involuntary jerk.
“Raka k'akara.”
“You must be joking.”
“No,” she laughed. “That is what it is called. The place that feels good, the little button.”
“By the time you ever finish asking me to touch that, the moment will have passed. You had better say clit, if you want me to respond in a timely manner.”
“English is so much more efficient,” she said, nuzzling against him.
“Come on,” he said, straightening up and smoothing her skirt back over her hips. “A warm bath awaits. And bed. And perhaps another vocabulary lesson. If you’re good.”
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75 Reviews | 5.52/10 Average
Definitely one of the more unusual stories I've read, but i liked it very much, particularly them telling sirius that they were married lol. Glad it had a happy ending also!
"You should have told me."
Told him what? That she was pregnant, or that by doing the mental-link magic she'd be flung into this dreamworld, almost not getting out of it? Or did Snape really only killed Voldemort at the cost of his own life?
Lovely story.
Beautiful story. I'm. Not usually a reader of Snape paired with and OC but Rawa was a fascinating and believable character.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Oh wow, thank you so much! Lucky for me, I wrote this story before I was ever involved in the fandom or had read any fanfic at all. If I had, I'd have known how averse people are to reading SS/OFCs because of the prevalence of Mary Sues, and I'd probably have lost my nerve and/or second-guessed every line. As it was, I toiled on in blissful ignorance.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
No, I think it was fantastic and I'm glad you shared this. She had many facets and her life was very interesting to read about.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Oh wow, thank you so much! Lucky for me, I wrote this story before I was ever involved in the fandom or had read any fanfic at all. If I had, I'd have known how averse people are to reading SS/OFCs because of the prevalence of Mary Sues, and I'd probably have lost my nerve and/or second-guessed every line. As it was, I toiled on in blissful ignorance.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
No, I think it was fantastic and I'm glad you shared this. She had many facets and her life was very interesting to read about.
*snip*Dear Miss Akapana,I am writing to offer you the position of Professor of Defence Against the Dark Arts for the coming academic year, as word of your extraordinary talents has reached my ear.* It is rumoured, for example, that you possess the power to compel truthfulness; such a skill would likely prove quite valuable when dealing with the garden-variety magus adolescens. I would be remiss in my duties if I failed to advise you that we have had some difficulty in keeping this position filled during the past decade: more than one of your predecessors has unfortunately lasted less than a year. However, I feel certain that if your magical abilities are as your reputation has led me to believe, you will have an excellent chance of success.If you are agreed, I will send a conveyance for you at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Albus DumbledoreHeadmaster*I cannot imagine why it has reached one ear and not the other, but there you have it. HAHAHAHAHA! That is AWESOME! LOVE IT!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Why, thank you! I tried to make it appropriately Dumbledore-y.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
It IS! So perfect! Love that bearded wizard!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh - and you're quite brave to introduce ayahuasca into your fic. I spent a summer in Peru and that vine is some NASTY stuff!
fascinating plan, I love how Rawa wants to believe in Snape, but no wonder she's concerned.
“Come with me, dear,” she said. “You and I need to have a talk with Dumbledore.” oh my, yes she does.
“When you sacrifice the losers on big stone pyramids,” she said. ROFL, she does have a point. Isn't there some question about whether it was the losers or the winners that were sacrificed?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Indeed there is--but I'm taking license to decide that Rawa has inside info.
Way to get Ron ferretboy behaving. Snicker
I thought I envied the magical folk for Reparo and Evanesco, but a mosquito repelling charm? Want.I love the interaction between Rawa and Sev, her pov on his nose is hysterical and good for her sniping back at him.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
I can't tell you how pleased I am that Soroche is getting a read!
Poor Hagrid, he did ok in the mountains going to see the giants, but then he walked so there was time to adjust.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, also the Andes are much taller than any mountains anywhere in the UK. Cotopaxi--which is where the Yachay Wasi school is located--is 5000 metres high.Worst. Headache. Ever.
What a fascinating character your Rawa is, I'm sure she'll make quite the impression on Hogwarts.
Better. And try to remember that my name is Esnep. He's gotten to like it, hasn't he? that's so cute :o)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
At least he's paying attention!
Brutally honest description of one approach to teaching - a female version of Snape. Given the view of professors in canon and film, Ron's observation seems dead on. Hence, establishment of authority by penalizing those who vocalize the obvious. Shades of Umbridge. This is assuming you wish to display a character defect of the protagonist. Cannot rate this chapter because it is not clear this is intended as a character defect.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Nope, not intended as a character defect at all. She's not punishing Ron for stating the obvious--she's punishing him for saying something disrespectful and inappropriate to the venue.When I was teaching high school, I would definitely have called a student out for remarking audibly that I was fuck-worthy.I don't see it as Umbridge-like at all.
Hagrid rides a flying motorcycle, but gets soroche? Perhaps the Aviation Regulatory Agencies class him as General Aviation and restrict him to below 5000 feet. Good touch with the finches and Filch. And she has brought a lovely assortment of hallucinogens and poisons. Good frisson at the end.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
I always figured Hagrid flew pretty low to the ground on the motorcycle--at any rate, nowhere near Cotopaxi's 19,000 feet.
A development chapter, but it still manages some drama. I take it the humor is that our heroine can understand American-style English.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, it's more that she can understand standard "textbook" versions of English, but not Hagrid's rather intense regional dialect. A bit like someone who had learned Spanish in school faced with someone speaking Argentine Lunfardo.
A powerful opening. Different.
Just found your story through Thanfiction-he drew a stunning picture from your story and I was fascinated and had to come see what it was about. This first chapter is amazing. While I am not very versed in South American lore, everything you have written so far has sounded right, has had the weight of a fully realized world and culture and is so different that what one normally finds in HP fanfiction. I love this line ____________________________________________________ What was a conveyance? she wondered. Another letter? Some kind of contract? Well, it hardly mattered—she had no intention of traveling half the world away to teach in a language that made her teeth hurt. _____________________________________________________ It made me laugh and it rings true.I love your discription of the condor, that he does not speak like a human would, that he is the voice in her head as well as his own powerful entity. And this sobered and warmed me at the same time___________________________________________________________________ Daughter, you know that no one is ever told when and where they are to die. __________________________________________________________________ Finally, I love that it costs something to use magic, to reach the spirit realm. It sounds weird that the high point of this chapter for me was her vomiting in the snow but, there you go. Wonderful chapter and I am heading on to the next with high hopes!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Woot! I was so thrilled to get to the top of the commission queue and get that picture, but it honestly never occurred to me that it would result in more people reading my fic! Because it's an OC fic, it doesn't get a whole lot of exposure. Serendipity!I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for the details. I researched this fic for several years before starting to write it, and the cultural and linguistic informatin is as accurate as I can possibly make it.
Lovely ending! Lovely! Original work? Plz?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you so much!Not sure I know what you're asking there?
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
Sorry about that; I blame my swedishness. I'm not always clear on all the english stuff. Have you got a story hidden somewhere here, that is all your own? You know, whithout borrowing the characters from the divine Rowlings? I absolutly think you are good enough, you see, and since I like your stuff I would like to read it. Yes I am shamelessly flattering you, so I can get to more of your stuff.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Ooh, flattery, my favorite. More, please!Thank you so much! I don't, at the moment, have anything finished. But I'm working on it. Are you in LJ?
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
LJ? No. I have no idea what that might be?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
LiveJournal. Get thee thither.
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
I'm now thither, what to do now I wonder?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Friend up. See you over there :-)
Great finish. Simple and understated, but perfect. :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you.It's hard to let them go.
I think of the line from that song as it applies to Rowlings Severus Snape ...A man gets tied up to the ground, He gives the world its saddest sound, its saddest sound...mmmm.Lovely love story!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you so much--I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Aha! More is explained...so that's why Severus deviated from his usual custom by asking to use the pool when he requested the services of Malavi at The Wayward Wand. He was trying to recreate the scene of Rawa in the bath as closely as possible so that he could act out what he had wanted to do at the time...although it's not quite clear why he chose a cold pool instead of a hot bath. As I already noted when I left a review for The Wayward Wand, he must have chosen Malavi because she of all the women probably looks most like Rawa with olive skin and straight black hair.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, the bath at Hogwarts was more like a pool in size, if not in temperature. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
Scary! Hope he gets back in time! :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Do you doubt him for a single moment?