Treachery
Chapter 11 of 26
HechiceraA witch from the Andean altiplano arrives at Hogwarts to teach DADA. Culture clash, conflict, and smut ensue.
ReviewedA/N: As always, profuse thanks to RedSkyAtNight, who really had her work cut out for her this chapter, correcting my errors regarding academic institutions and terms, which were legion.
Thanks to all of my readers and especially to those who take the time to review!
Concerning the new Potions laboratory that was being donated to Hogwarts by the Malfoy family, Rawa knew three things: first, that Dumbledore was not especially pleased about it; second, that knowledge of it was making Draco Malfoy even more insoportable; and third, that she was not sure what she was going to wear to the festivities. Dumbledore's announcement of the event had been heavy with ironic overstatement, the kind of communication with which no one can find literal fault, but so fulsome in its effusiveness that neither can they mistake its true intent. He had used the phrase "full dress regalia," which Rawa took to mean formal ceremonial robes, of which she had none.
None, that is, of the kind the ingleses wore: silk or velvet, in black or some other somber color.
She was disinclined to buy new robes for the occasion...largely because she so disliked the guests of honor...and in the end decided to wear the clothes she already had. There was pride involved, certainly: her own ceremonial garb had been in her family for many generations, and there was honor and dignity in wearing it. But to the extent that she was honest with herself, she had to admit that her decision was in part motivated by a knowledge of the kind of reaction these particular clothes were likely to provoke.
The celebration was to take place in the Great Hall on a Sunday evening. The pupils were assembled first, seated with their houses at the long tables. Then Lucius Malfoy and his wife Narcissa, resplendent in black velvet, took their places of honor at the high table. Finally the staff entered, proceeding in single file the length of the hall between the Slytherin and Ravenclaw tables on one side, and Hufflepuff and Gryffindor on the other. Dumbledore, at the head of the line, wore dark purple robes trimmed in gold; Snape as usual was all in black; and Minerva McGonagall wore dark green velvet robes and her signature tall black pointed hat.
Rawa was close to the end of the line, and when she walked in, she could hear the buzz of conversation among the students, and see clearly the rising anger on Lucius Malfoy's face.
As the professors ahead of her took their places at the table, facing the hall, they caught sight of her for the first time. She saw the twinkle in Dumbledore's blue eyes, although his face maintained a suitably solemn expression. Flitwick and McGonagall were much less guarded in their amusement, while Snape . . . Snape looked as though someone had struck him.
On her head, Rawa wore a parrot-feather crown nearly half a meter high. Her feet, as always, were bare, her ankles adorned by dozens of thin circlets of gold. Wrapped low around her hips, a cloth of hummingbird feathers, once worn by Pachacuti himself, floated, nearly weightless, about her.
Any one of these things would have been a remarkable departure from traditional wizards' robes, but none of them, at the moment, was exciting any comment at all, because there were two aspects of her appearance upon which every pair of eyes in the hall was focused.
The first was her face, which was painted in bold red diagonal stripes, with a thin black line bisecting it from forehead to chin, and black cross-hatches on either cheek.
The other was the hammered gold breastplate that covered...just barely...her chest. It conformed to her body in such exact detail that she looked as though her breasts had been gilded by a thousand daubs from a tiny brush. Her black hair hung in one thick dark plait down her naked back, swaying gently from side to side as she walked up the steps and took her place at the high table between Snape and McGonagall.
Gradually the hum of voices died down, and, when Dumbledore rose and walked to the lectern, quieted entirely. Before he could begin to speak, however, Lucius Malfoy's voice...dripping with disdain...pierced the silence.
"If the school has sunk to such a level, Dumbledore, perhaps I should have funded the appointment of a properly qualified Defense Against the Dark Arts professor rather than a laboratory."
Turning to him, Dumbledore said evenly, "I'm sure I've no idea what you mean, Lucius."
"I mean," said Malfoy, "that under your direction a once-respected school which I was proud to call my alma mater has been reduced to employing half-naked savages in the place of qualified academics."
Rawa had begun to have a very nasty feeling. This was more than just a routine display of the Malfoy family tradition of arrogance and insult; there was a calculated quality about it that suggested some deliberate purpose. Crossing her arms casually across her gold-plated chest, she quietly enveloped herself from head to toe in a Shield Charm. Beside her, she felt Snape shift in his chair and knew he must be sensing the slight ripple caused by its presence. Without turning his head, he glanced quickly at her out of the corner of his eye.
There was a fresh murmur of voices and Dumbledore, his tone still mild, said, "If you are referring to Professor Akapana, I can assure you that her credentials, and her abilities, are equal to those of any person present."
"Really?" said Malfoy. "Then she will surely not object to favoring us with a little . . . demonstration?" He turned his gaze to Rawa, and she looked back steadily at the pale blue eyes, determined not to show the anxiety and confusion she was feeling. Why was he doing this? And why now, at an event where he was the guest of honor? He was going to be the center of attention anyway; all he had to do was sit quietly and be showered with accolades. Why create a disruption?
"A duel, Professor Akapana?" he suggested, raising an eyebrow.
"Mr. Malfoy!" McGonagall had leapt to her feet. "Really! You are a guest in this hall!"
"A guest?" Malfoy said. "I think not. More of a patron, wouldn't you say, Minerva?" His cold eyes stared contemptuously at her. "And it would seem to me, that given the size of my financial investment in Hogwarts, I have a right to verify the bona fides of any new member of staff."
"Then there is a time and a place...not to mention a proper procedure...for doing so. And challenging a member of staff to a duel in front of the whole school is not it."
The "whole school" was as quiet as Rawa had ever seen them. No one moved or spoke, but every eye was on her. She knew that if she did not accept this challenge, she would lose all credibility with them. No matter that Lucius Malfoy's challenge was discourteous and untimely; what they would remember was that their Defense Against the Dark Arts professor, when presented with the opportunity to defend herself against the Dark Arts, had chosen not to do so.
Slowly she rose to her feet. She could feel the fluid warmth of the shield around her. Inclining her head in Malfoy's direction, she said, "I will duel with you, Mr. Malfoy."
"No!" cried McGonagall. "Albus! This is outrageous! You must put a stop to it!"
But Dumbledore just smiled and said, "If Professor Akapana is willing, I see no reason on such an occasion not to provide a little entertainment of an educational nature. Professor Flitwick, will you do the honors?"
The diminutive professor nodded and stepped forward. "Mr. Malfoy, will you choose a second?" he asked.
"Severus Snape."
Stony-faced, Snape walked over to join Malfoy, and the two men walked together to the far end of the high table.
Flitwick turned to Rawa. "Professor Akapana?"
She was caught out for a moment, because she too would have chosen Snape, if for no reason other than his skill. Having him at her back would have been the surest guarantee against treachery by Malfoy. Now who could she choose? Dumbledore was out, as of course was Flitwick. Minerva was a skilled witch, but not especially quick with her wand. Sirius? He was too much of a farolero, likely to seize on any pretext to start a fight with Malfoy. She needed someone Malfoy would respect too much to cross, but who could be trusted not to needlessly escalate the duel. She looked out across the crowd of expectant students and was struck with a sudden inspiration.
"Draco Malfoy."
There was a second's silence, and then a cheer went up from the Slytherin table and Draco stood and walked up to the dais.
As soon as he was close enough for her to see his expression, Rawa regretted her choice. It had felt like a clever tactic...Lucius was unlikely to endanger his own son...but she hadn't stopped to think how Draco might feel about it. His face was paler than ever, and rigid with tension.
"What do I have to do?" he whispered to her.
"Nothing, really," she said in a low voice. "Just stand down here at the end of the table." She smiled to take the seriousness out of her next words. "And pursue justice for me if there is treachery. Which there will not be." She leaned forward and kissed him lightly on the forehead, to a chorus of whistles and catcalls from the Slytherin table. "I am sorry, Draco. I should not have dragged you into this."
He shrugged mutely, and stood back as she leapt lightly onto the table. At the far end, Lucius Malfoy stood facing her, his white-blond hair luminous against the black velvet robes.
There was absolute silence in the hall. Flitwick brought down his wand, and Rawa raised both hands in front of her. "A la izquierda, amachay," she thought, spreading first her left palm, and then her right, "a la derecha, hark'apay."
Malfoy slowly, dramatically, raised his wand, and slashed it in a downward diagonal in front of him. A stream of violet fire shot forth, and Rawa raised her shielded right hand and deflected it, passing it back and forth between her two hands until it formed into a phosphorescent purple ball. Holding it made her stomach cramp slightly: this was some powerfully destructive curse.
She was shocked, although at some level not surprised. She had expected Malfoy to take the opportunity to try to humiliate her with jinxes that dissolved her clothes, or made her break out in boils; instead he was using the kind of curse that could do real damage.
He pointed his wand directly at her and loosed a bolt of red lightning; this too she caught, adding it to the glowing ball of purple fire. It was hot, even through the shield: some kind of flesh-burning curse, she guessed.
She took a step towards Malfoy just as he unleashed another jet of fire at her, this time a bilious green. By now the fiery sphere that she was tossing from one hand to the other to keep from burning herself was growing quite large, and glowing almost white. She walked towards him steadily, as stream after stream of malevolent power surged forth from his wand, and each one she caught and added to the blazing globe in her hands.
When finally she stood directly before him, she saw that his face was a frozen mask of fear. All she had to do, she realized, was toss the fireball at him and the combined power of all those curses would surely kill him.
She looked steadily into his ice-blue eyes and let him wonder what she was going to do. After a moment she threw the ball into the air and clapped her hands together, and it exploded with a loud bang into a huge cloud of black smoke.
She held out her hand for Malfoy's wand. "Vente," she said, and it leapt into her hand. Then she turned, the feathered skirt floating, light as air, about her legs, and began the long walk back down the length of the table. The hall erupted in a cacophony of applause, cheers, and whistles.
Draco was waiting for her, a stricken look on his white face, holding out his hand to help her down from the table. Instead of stepping down, she placed his father's wand into his outstretched hand, and said again, "I am sorry," but her voice was lost in the din. He gave her a brief nod, pocketed the wand, and then held out his hand again to help her down. She was reaching for it when she heard an unfamiliar voice behind her, shrill above the tumult, cry out, "Avada Kedavra!" and a tremendous blow struck her between the shoulder blades. There was a smell of burning hair; a feeling of crushing, suffocating pressure; and then everything went white.
Illustration for this chapter by Thanfiction.
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75 Reviews | 5.52/10 Average
Definitely one of the more unusual stories I've read, but i liked it very much, particularly them telling sirius that they were married lol. Glad it had a happy ending also!
"You should have told me."
Told him what? That she was pregnant, or that by doing the mental-link magic she'd be flung into this dreamworld, almost not getting out of it? Or did Snape really only killed Voldemort at the cost of his own life?
Lovely story.
Beautiful story. I'm. Not usually a reader of Snape paired with and OC but Rawa was a fascinating and believable character.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Oh wow, thank you so much! Lucky for me, I wrote this story before I was ever involved in the fandom or had read any fanfic at all. If I had, I'd have known how averse people are to reading SS/OFCs because of the prevalence of Mary Sues, and I'd probably have lost my nerve and/or second-guessed every line. As it was, I toiled on in blissful ignorance.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
No, I think it was fantastic and I'm glad you shared this. She had many facets and her life was very interesting to read about.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Oh wow, thank you so much! Lucky for me, I wrote this story before I was ever involved in the fandom or had read any fanfic at all. If I had, I'd have known how averse people are to reading SS/OFCs because of the prevalence of Mary Sues, and I'd probably have lost my nerve and/or second-guessed every line. As it was, I toiled on in blissful ignorance.
Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)
No, I think it was fantastic and I'm glad you shared this. She had many facets and her life was very interesting to read about.
*snip*Dear Miss Akapana,I am writing to offer you the position of Professor of Defence Against the Dark Arts for the coming academic year, as word of your extraordinary talents has reached my ear.* It is rumoured, for example, that you possess the power to compel truthfulness; such a skill would likely prove quite valuable when dealing with the garden-variety magus adolescens. I would be remiss in my duties if I failed to advise you that we have had some difficulty in keeping this position filled during the past decade: more than one of your predecessors has unfortunately lasted less than a year. However, I feel certain that if your magical abilities are as your reputation has led me to believe, you will have an excellent chance of success.If you are agreed, I will send a conveyance for you at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Albus DumbledoreHeadmaster*I cannot imagine why it has reached one ear and not the other, but there you have it. HAHAHAHAHA! That is AWESOME! LOVE IT!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Why, thank you! I tried to make it appropriately Dumbledore-y.
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
It IS! So perfect! Love that bearded wizard!
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Oh - and you're quite brave to introduce ayahuasca into your fic. I spent a summer in Peru and that vine is some NASTY stuff!
fascinating plan, I love how Rawa wants to believe in Snape, but no wonder she's concerned.
“Come with me, dear,” she said. “You and I need to have a talk with Dumbledore.” oh my, yes she does.
“When you sacrifice the losers on big stone pyramids,” she said. ROFL, she does have a point. Isn't there some question about whether it was the losers or the winners that were sacrificed?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Indeed there is--but I'm taking license to decide that Rawa has inside info.
Way to get Ron ferretboy behaving. Snicker
I thought I envied the magical folk for Reparo and Evanesco, but a mosquito repelling charm? Want.I love the interaction between Rawa and Sev, her pov on his nose is hysterical and good for her sniping back at him.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
I can't tell you how pleased I am that Soroche is getting a read!
Poor Hagrid, he did ok in the mountains going to see the giants, but then he walked so there was time to adjust.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, also the Andes are much taller than any mountains anywhere in the UK. Cotopaxi--which is where the Yachay Wasi school is located--is 5000 metres high.Worst. Headache. Ever.
What a fascinating character your Rawa is, I'm sure she'll make quite the impression on Hogwarts.
Better. And try to remember that my name is Esnep. He's gotten to like it, hasn't he? that's so cute :o)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
At least he's paying attention!
Brutally honest description of one approach to teaching - a female version of Snape. Given the view of professors in canon and film, Ron's observation seems dead on. Hence, establishment of authority by penalizing those who vocalize the obvious. Shades of Umbridge. This is assuming you wish to display a character defect of the protagonist. Cannot rate this chapter because it is not clear this is intended as a character defect.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Nope, not intended as a character defect at all. She's not punishing Ron for stating the obvious--she's punishing him for saying something disrespectful and inappropriate to the venue.When I was teaching high school, I would definitely have called a student out for remarking audibly that I was fuck-worthy.I don't see it as Umbridge-like at all.
Hagrid rides a flying motorcycle, but gets soroche? Perhaps the Aviation Regulatory Agencies class him as General Aviation and restrict him to below 5000 feet. Good touch with the finches and Filch. And she has brought a lovely assortment of hallucinogens and poisons. Good frisson at the end.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
I always figured Hagrid flew pretty low to the ground on the motorcycle--at any rate, nowhere near Cotopaxi's 19,000 feet.
A development chapter, but it still manages some drama. I take it the humor is that our heroine can understand American-style English.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, it's more that she can understand standard "textbook" versions of English, but not Hagrid's rather intense regional dialect. A bit like someone who had learned Spanish in school faced with someone speaking Argentine Lunfardo.
A powerful opening. Different.
Just found your story through Thanfiction-he drew a stunning picture from your story and I was fascinated and had to come see what it was about. This first chapter is amazing. While I am not very versed in South American lore, everything you have written so far has sounded right, has had the weight of a fully realized world and culture and is so different that what one normally finds in HP fanfiction. I love this line ____________________________________________________ What was a conveyance? she wondered. Another letter? Some kind of contract? Well, it hardly mattered—she had no intention of traveling half the world away to teach in a language that made her teeth hurt. _____________________________________________________ It made me laugh and it rings true.I love your discription of the condor, that he does not speak like a human would, that he is the voice in her head as well as his own powerful entity. And this sobered and warmed me at the same time___________________________________________________________________ Daughter, you know that no one is ever told when and where they are to die. __________________________________________________________________ Finally, I love that it costs something to use magic, to reach the spirit realm. It sounds weird that the high point of this chapter for me was her vomiting in the snow but, there you go. Wonderful chapter and I am heading on to the next with high hopes!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Woot! I was so thrilled to get to the top of the commission queue and get that picture, but it honestly never occurred to me that it would result in more people reading my fic! Because it's an OC fic, it doesn't get a whole lot of exposure. Serendipity!I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for the details. I researched this fic for several years before starting to write it, and the cultural and linguistic informatin is as accurate as I can possibly make it.
Lovely ending! Lovely! Original work? Plz?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you so much!Not sure I know what you're asking there?
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
Sorry about that; I blame my swedishness. I'm not always clear on all the english stuff. Have you got a story hidden somewhere here, that is all your own? You know, whithout borrowing the characters from the divine Rowlings? I absolutly think you are good enough, you see, and since I like your stuff I would like to read it. Yes I am shamelessly flattering you, so I can get to more of your stuff.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Ooh, flattery, my favorite. More, please!Thank you so much! I don't, at the moment, have anything finished. But I'm working on it. Are you in LJ?
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
LJ? No. I have no idea what that might be?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
LiveJournal. Get thee thither.
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
I'm now thither, what to do now I wonder?
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Friend up. See you over there :-)
Great finish. Simple and understated, but perfect. :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you.It's hard to let them go.
I think of the line from that song as it applies to Rowlings Severus Snape ...A man gets tied up to the ground, He gives the world its saddest sound, its saddest sound...mmmm.Lovely love story!
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Thank you so much--I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Aha! More is explained...so that's why Severus deviated from his usual custom by asking to use the pool when he requested the services of Malavi at The Wayward Wand. He was trying to recreate the scene of Rawa in the bath as closely as possible so that he could act out what he had wanted to do at the time...although it's not quite clear why he chose a cold pool instead of a hot bath. As I already noted when I left a review for The Wayward Wand, he must have chosen Malavi because she of all the women probably looks most like Rawa with olive skin and straight black hair.
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Well, the bath at Hogwarts was more like a pool in size, if not in temperature. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
Scary! Hope he gets back in time! :)
Response from Hechicera (Author of Soroche)
Do you doubt him for a single moment?