Marriage by Numbers
sunny33832 Reviews | 6.74/10 (832 Ratings, 0 Likes, 183 Favorites )
Hermione is back at Hogwarts for her seventh year. Voldemort is dead, and life should be good. That is, until the results of her special Arithmancy Project provide some unwelcome realisations for the Potions master.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Marriage by Numbers
I like this Marriage Law fic a lot. It seems more believable than most of the other Marriage Law fics I have read. I am looking forward to future chapters.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Thanks!
Hermione is very ... uhm ... bold in your story. I wonder why Severus backed down regarding his provisos; or was he the one leading her on?Anyhow, a very entertaining story.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Yes, she is, bold and bossy. I figured she has camped out in the woods for months, run afoul of snakes, Death Eaters' Bellatrix Lestrange, and goblins. She is pissed off with the Ministry and feels guilty about the position Snape is in because of her work. So she is not going to let a little thing like his hang-ups regarding sex stop her saving him! He was trying to make things easier, but realised it wasn't worth the argument. Like Ron said, she's brilliant, but scary!Thanks for the review!
*grin* oh, this is going to be fun...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Oh, I certainly hope so!
I like this Hermione. I'm sure she'll get what she wants hehe.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Once she figures out exactly what she does want...
i love the overall story, but i hate to say hermione is coming off as an annoying little snot. please, please, please do not let severus continue to be a doormat. although there is good potential after he has married her . . . 
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Don't worry. He is still in shock at the moment, but he starts getting his own back soon!
This is sooo great! Poor Severus!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
He's been hit by cyclone Hermione!
Outrageous Hermione is just what Severus needs to liven up his life. Oh, are Millicent and Trelawney in for a rude awakening. I shudder to see how Umbridge will take it. LOL, too funny, I loved it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Well done!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
They really think they have a chance!
I love assertive female characters! They remind me of myself. another charming chapter! Thanks so much for this delightful twist on the typical MLC. I like McGonagall's reactions to it all!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
LOL. Thanks!
This just gets better and better. I love that he's met his match!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Thanks, deb!
Wow, they're moving kinda fast!Good action--Hermione is BOLD in this one...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
She's onloy got a few weeks to get him used to the idea of having sex with a student. If she displayed any nervousness, he might chicken out!
Great chapter. Just love Hermione's take-no-prisoners attitude. She'll straighten Severus out and he'll thank her for it.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Bossy!Hermione has evolved into Confident/Assertive! Hermione. Thanks for the review!
I am enjoying your take of the "Marriage Law". I love this Hermione, far from the shrinking violet she takes charge and is fearless in the face of the "marriage bed" good for her!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
If you gotta do it, you may as well plan to enjoy it!
Yes! He said yes! And boy is he in for the ride of his life? Shagging like bunnies? Is she really such a horn dog? Wow. I can't believe she touched him! In front of McGonagall, thank goodness she didn't notice. Please update soon. I want to see what she thinks of his living quarters! And the wedding of course! Great story.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
She isn't so much a horn dog, but now she has had a taste, she is not scared of sex. She is teasing him because he is being such a prude about it all. Thanks for the review!
the MLC fics are some of my all time favs. I am glad someone is adding to this wonderful plot bunny.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Thank you!
I like the Sadie Hawkins aspect. You've found something unique in the well-tilled soil.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Thanks, Karen!
That was too good. Poor Snape.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Por Snape indeed. He doesn't know what hit him!
snicker snicker.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
LOL, more snickering coming up...
hilarious that snape has to be rescued. hilarious.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Makes a change, doesn't it?
I applaud your "solution" to the irrational part of the marriage law's insistance on people getting married Right Away. the youth factor. okay. However, magic has proven to be a resilient gene, yes? what would the actual problem be (in terms of magical population) if it was all girls? remember, seamus finnegan's mam married a muggle. magical society wouldn't die out, it would simply suffer a demographic change. which in and of itself is not bad. god I hate the ministry in these marriage law fics. I do love seeing how people work with the premise, and your ideas are really interesting, I just hate the stupid ministry.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
You have a valid point. But then, Hermione wouldn't have to marry Sev, and where would the fun be in that? :P And what's NOT to hate about the Ministry?
Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)
eh. my parents both work for the government, so i have fellow feeling. and really, I can't quite believe that such intelligent people can be so stupid. and plus, beaurocracy doesn't work that fast! if the way the gov is set up involves a minister of magic, several other ministers, and the wizengamot, surely there are some checks and balances??
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
You are absolutely correct of course. The way governments usually work, it would take ten years or so to act on such information, and only after a few select committees, and a referendum or three. LOL
aswome, what a little vixen she is.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
She is!
I have to say that I am totally enjoying this unconventional story. I didn't expect to like it, but you have drawn me in. Great job! I find myself longing for more chapters, if only to see what Hermione will do next! Or will Severus grow a pair and start ordering her around? Or at least trying to?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
He's on the back foot and somewhat overwhelmed at the moment, but he will start fighting back soon. Sneakily. :)
Okay, I have a permagrin, and I wasn't even the one that got to cop a feel! Great chapter--poor Severus doesn't know what he's in for :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
LOL. Thanks!
aw, now i'm sad it's over. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
There's still an epilogue to come. Does that help? :)
haha. i think i giggled through this whole chapter. very funny. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Thanks. :)
hahaha. i LOVED the line "Oh, fuck. Snape is thirty-eight. I’m so dead." lol. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Marriage by Numbers)
Hehe. Thanks! :)