Cute.  Hermione's grading Severus was original and funny.  I enjoyed the chapter.

I love your story, except who was Jason supposed to be? Some Muggle stranger Hermione met in summer? That wouldn't be credible from her. At least we know she  felt something for Viktor sometime, and she kept writing him long letters. I enjoyed her dialogue with Ginny. I guess that's very much how girls talk goes, doesn't it?

Hey there!  OMG this chapter was awesome!  I loved the part where Hermione and Severus were fighting in the classroom!  I could totally feel the tension between them, it was awesome.  And I can also understand why Hermione said I don't know if I want to slap him or kiss him!  Hahaha.  Very great addition to this wonderful fic!  Thanks for the update!  Much Love ~ Brena

You've written such an enjoyable story, I love it. I love Hermione's baiting of Severus, it's keeping him off guard. Thanks for the lovely, long chapter, I enjoyed it.

I definitely wouldn't be showing that homework to my best friend, no matter how close!  I only hope Ginny can keep her mouth shut - poor Severus deserves that at least!  Under the circumstances, and particularly after the classroom incident, I think he's behaving very well & showing a little known tolerant side!If I were Hermione I wouldn't push it any more - best to keep on his good side I reckon; could pay dividends in the end! This continues to be a very amusing fic! :-)

I was really, really amused by this chapter and I'm rather sure that was what you were aiming for.I just can't recognize Hermione. She really is pushing any border around, isn't she?

An E... serves him right :DAnd oh boy, how I look forward to the wedding night and Snape's first time - I'm just so curious how you will write that :D Looking forward to next chapter ;)

loved the fireworks - can't wait for more!

really fun! thanks so much for taking the time to write and post!!

But I wanted that detention to take place.She could have turned the tables on him and insisted he practice his foreplay techniques.Great tension going on there!

I started reading this less than an hour ago.  I can't wait for an update.  It was funny in all the right places.

I'm afraid we part ways here. I was somewhat ready to suspend disbelief at the whole - Hermione the school girl discovers something that apparently a whole bunch of intelligent educators have managed to miss - only then - Hermione with the maturity of a 10 year old and thought processes of a 10 year old despite apparently incredible intelligence - and - Hermione, alive after being the cause for this kind of abolishment of freedom for her school mates; Snape the virgin and then, on top of that, Snape and Hermione marriage where he is forced and she is essentially all of the above ... I see no way this could end well and be believable so that's it for me.Good luck with the rest of the story.

You know I nearly spit my coffee on the screen once again. Please for next time, could you add such a warning so I save myself the trouble of cleaning the mess?

This is great fun!!! More, please?

Thank you so much for the update! Again: I really love this story:-))

I'm really enjoying this.  You've made this tale your own with amusing twists, and although they both want to make the marrage work, it is not unrealistically moonbeams and roses.  Delightful chapter

I just found this!  It is so amusing and touching.  I'm really enjoying it.

Hermione is sharing ALOT of information with Ginny.  I hope for her sake Severus doesn't ever find out how much.  Sharing his homework with her would have mortified him!

I can't wait until the wedding.

What a chapter!  I think Hermione is about to go off the deep end.  I couldn't believe she actually showed Ginny his essay.  Severus is being really wonderful under the circumstances.

omg!! This is just fantastic... and I think they're a little in love already!Please update as soon as you can!

You know what worries me about this whole thing?  Boy babies are going to be even more prized as "the desired sex," and female babies and children are likely to suffer for it.  And how will they make sure that they haven't overcompensated and will be having enough female children as well?It all seems like neither Hermione nor the Ministry really thought it through.

LOLI really enjoyed this chapter. Hermione is bossy and thinks she knows everything, Snape is surly and in need of a helping hand ... I'm looking forward to what is going to happen.

love the story. hermione is coming off as a bit of a conceited know-it-all, but it works in the story. i can't wait for her reality check (hopefully from a snarky snape;)

Okay, I just have to say thank you.  Seriously I love the dialouge here between Hermione and Ginny.  It was great seeing Hermione get to act like an 18year old for a change.  Sometimes its just refreshing to get to see her talk like this.  Very Squee-Girly stuff.  Its a nice change of pace thank you so much.  I totally love everything else you are setting up in this tale and can't wait to read more!  Much Love ~ Brena