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Caramel
corianderpie765 Reviews | 6.74/10 (765 Ratings, 0 Likes, 384 Favorites )
Is there such a thing as a harmless crush? Over the course of a year, two people experience the perils of wanting what they just can’t have.
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"I'm mad about you... destroy this." I know it's not part of this chapter, but it's oh, so delicious! As for this chapter, I loved the glamour, and won't he be so pleased with his witch for coming up with it. Great premise with the wards in Draco's mind. Scary though.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
thanks, Debjunk. Sorry it's taken me donkey's years to respond to this review. *iz not proud* *squishes you*
Sigh... I guess they can't all be packed with excessive Snape/Hermione yumminess. Still, there's lots to like. I had sort of lost sight of all else that was going on in the world. Love her version of "sneaking around" with her sad little list. I liked what Bella did with Draco's mind. Original, but sounds like something she could and would do. Your Draco seems a little edgier than canon and that works well. And, the snippet from the next chapter looks promising!! Looking forward to more.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Hi
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
. Yeps, I am responding to older reviews. *blushes* Holidays were a smeary blur. Thanks for your judicious comments. It does get hard, though, doesn't it, when authors insist on keeping the supporting plot going when there are SO MANY MORE INTERESTING THINGS that could be happening. :D
Great Chapter and I loved the nod to The Hobbit.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Thanks, preciousss!
And the plot thickens. What you proposed, that Bella inserted some kind of barracade into Draco's mind to keep Snape out, makes much more sense than JKR's version. In the book it seems that someone who is just learning the art of Legilimency can already keep Snape out. Somehow I just couldn't swallow that.Well done.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
I agree. I'm sure Draco has studied Occlumency, but the idea that he's a master... yeah. Does't fly.
I want that mirror for my sons. :)
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
EXACTLY! Narcissa knew what she was doing. :D
I must say i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Hai
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
. *iz responding to older reviews* *looks at date and blushes* *squishes you*
"I'm mad about you. Destroy this." *jumps up and down in glee* Once again a fab chapter :) You know I got so caught up in the dungeon scene from the last chapter I forgot all about Draco and his plan! Even Voldie was temporarily absent! You can credit your excellent writing that draws me into the Universe that is SS/HG :) I am eagerly awaiting your next update and may or may not stop jumping up and down at some point. SG x
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Hi SG. Yes, I am responding to this review MANY WEEKS after you wrote it. Sheesh. I'll just say thank you thank you thank you, and I hope the jumping stopped. At some point it gets bad for your knees. ((hugs))
‘Stand up straight,’ said the mirror irritably as Urquhart approached it. ‘You’ll grow a hump on your back and no one will ever love you.’Hah! I LOVE this mirror!
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Thanks! I love the mirror, too, gossipy thing that it is. :DDD
lol... I love the skulduggery of them sneaking about, and I can't wait to get to the good stuff!
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Good stuff percolating... :D See you there...
This chapter was to awesome for words but I'll try. Wonderful, perfect, adorable, great, tremendous, precious, and unbelieveable.I find the A/N's to be very enjoyable, keep up the great work.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Thank you, my dear. You are very kind. :D Next chapter is just about ready to post; I hope you enjoy it. xoc
I believe for Severus to be any hotter he would have to be on fire. I'm so glad they are finally getting together.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Yeah. He super duper wants her. ;P
OMG, that was so hot my laptop is steaming.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
heheheh. *dusts hands* That means my work is done. :D
Percipio Corium is one heck of a spell, I didn't think Hermione would actually go through with it, but I'm really glad she did.A really fun chapter.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
I knew she would go through with it, but I also knew she had to get a bit desperate (and, as it turns out, a little bit drunk) to do it. Unrequited adoration is hard to bear in silence!
Severus is so precious, it's hard to believe all that insecurity and gruffness can fit into one person. He is totally in love with Hermione but doesn't fully realize it yet. She totally loves him too.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Oh, yes yes yes. He has an extremely devoted heart that got broken again and again when he was very young (by his parents), and he had to build the World's Most Powerful Defenses in response. This is why we all love him, and write stories in which he ends up with the Best Girl. :D
Severus, appology, same sentence, who would have thought.Lavender seems to have to much time on her hands. She needs to get a life, and stay out of Hermione and Severuses way.Wonderful chapter.
Response from pearl city princess (Reviewer)
I clicked submit before proof reading it's apology not appology sorry.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
*g* Typo no problem! I knew what you meant, and I totally agree. Severus + apology = shocking, but it was a strategem, which is 100% Severus. Lavender is too observant by half...
Interesting dreams they were both having, it makes me wonder what's ahead for them.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
hehehehe -- keep reading, dear reader, and you will see... *dangles carrot* *walks off whistling*
I knew eventually they would have a bit of a falling out over Harry and Ron. I guess it's better to get it over with sooner than later. I'm totally in love with this story, great writing
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Thank you so much! At this point in the story I thought it was time for his jealousy to start kicking in. A sign of his growing feelings, though he is SO not admitting them yet.
Brilliant idea to have her make tea and leave it for him when he returned, the note was a wonderful touch.My favorite chapter so far.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Oh thanks. I like this bunch of chapters where they are becoming friends and he is slowly beginning to not be able to do without her. :D
It was good to see how moved he was by her gift, also that he wanted to keep her on as his assistant.Charming chapter, very well thought out.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Wasn't that the most thoughtful gift ever? He'd be beyond hope if he didn't respond well to that...
Hermione is so cute when she's flustered, and Snape is dead sexy when he's flustered.Perfect chapter.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
I loved writing this chapter! Lots of opportunities to use things that happened in canon for my own purposes. :D Thanks!
I do love Minerva and her wonderful directness. She always knows how to handle Severus. Great chapter.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Thanks again. Minerva is a great, sympathetic character. She and S could be good friends if he weren't so unhappy and shut down.
Seriously Hermione, Cormac McLaggen, yuck, yuck, yuck. Great chapter despite Hermione's questionable tast in a party date.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
I know. WHAT was she thinking *facepalm*. Well, we know what she was thinking. It just was not her best idea ever.
What a charming chapter, these characters are so wonderful, I just love them.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Oh thank you! Me too. (Which is good, as they spend a lot of time sitting around in my brain these days. :D)
Bless Hermione's heart, she is such a sweet heart.Truly great chapter.
Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)
Thanks! She does have a great heart, full of love and courage.