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Potions Under Duress Caramel
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Caramel

1: The Way These Things Begin

2: Pastoral

3: Detention in the Dungeon

4: Riches Strange and New

5: Ships in the Night

6: Girl Talk

7: Magic for Modern Lovers

8: Iecur Fortis

9: Realisation

10: Rationalisations

11: Mischief Managed

12: Recuperation

13: Triangulation

14: Dark Corners

15: Conversations among Friends

16: Many Meetings

17: Stormy Weather

18: Visitations

19: Reconciliation

20: Hidden Fire

21: Percipio Corium

22: Reciprocation

23: Temptation

24: Understanding

25: Research

26: Exploration

27: Satisfaction

28: Preparations

29: Becoming

30: Caramel

31: Concealment

32: Scarred

33: Sweet Appetite

34: Discontent

35: Oblivion

36: Reckoning

41: Mr.

42: Mr.

Caramel

corianderpie

765 Reviews   |   765 Ratings, 0 Likes, 384 Favorites )

Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 117,093 Words 42 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Severus Snape Ronald Weasley Dean Thomas Bellatrix Lestrange Susan Bones Tom Riddle (Voldemort) Lavender Brown Poppy Pomfrey Rubeus Hagrid Horace Slughorn Cormac McLaggen Neville Longbottom Seamus Finnigan Cho Chang Draco Malfoy Moaning Myrtle Winky Sibyll Trelawney Irma Pince Remus Lupin Fawkes Nagini Padma Patil Parvati Patil

Is there such a thing as a harmless crush? Over the course of a year, two people experience the perils of wanting what they just can’t have.

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Chapters (38)

Chapter 1: The Way These Things Begin

Chapter 2: Pastoral

Chapter 3: Detention in the Dungeon

Chapter 4: Riches Strange and New

Chapter 5: Ships in the Night

Chapter 6: Girl Talk

Chapter 7: Magic for Modern Lovers

Chapter 8: Iecur Fortis

Chapter 9: Realisation

Chapter 10: Rationalisations

Chapter 11: Mischief Managed

Chapter 12: Recuperation

Chapter 13: Triangulation

Chapter 14: Dark Corners

Chapter 15: Conversations among Friends

Chapter 16: Many Meetings

Chapter 17: Stormy Weather

Chapter 18: Visitations

Chapter 19: Reconciliation

Chapter 20: Hidden Fire

Chapter 21: Percipio Corium

Chapter 22: Reciprocation

Chapter 23: Temptation

Chapter 24: Understanding

Chapter 25: Research

Chapter 26: Exploration

Chapter 27: Satisfaction

Chapter 28: Preparations

Chapter 29: Becoming

Chapter 30: Caramel

Chapter 31: Concealment

Chapter 32: Scarred

Chapter 33: Sweet Appetite

Chapter 34: Discontent

Chapter 35: Oblivion

Chapter 36: Reckoning

Chapter 41: Mr.

Chapter 42: Mr.


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The Contessa

Dear corianderpie.Your story is well worth the wait. Your description of our two lovers is sweet, charming and ... well ... downright hilarious. From Severus´ playfulness and lack of concentration to Hermione's frustration with him and her wicked ways of getting even, it was just priceless. I wish you a happy holiday, and look forward patiently to the next chapter.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

thank you, dear Contessa. It's taken me a while to respond, but your kind review is no less appreciated. :D

10/10

mhgood

Yay!  I was just thinking about you and this story today, wondering when you'd be back to bless us with more naughty lovliness.  And here you are!Congrats on placing in the Best New Author category of the awards!  Good for you; you're amazing.Loved this line from this chapter:‘Apology accepted.’ She made the words sound more like, ‘You have a reprieve from your blood-soaked death. For now.’ Not really the tone to make a man feel at ease.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Thank you! I think I was channeling PG Wodehouse a little on that line from Ron--Bertie Wooster, who is always getting in deep dutch with girls. Good old Ron. No good for our HG, but still ah luvs him.

10/10

kallonista

holy wow that was hot. I bet Lavender saw the flush in the Great Hall... 

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

She just may have. Trouble, trouble, trouble, Miss Brown...

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lilyreally

The next chapter?? I'm still gulping in air from this one. Goosebumps all OVER me body!!

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

La la la! Let the smutty goodness flow! :D

10/10

sinbad

Delicious chapter!

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

nom nom nom! Thanks! :D

10/10

barbied011

Still loving this story.  I'm just so disappointed I didn't start reading it sooner.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Glad you are still loving! *smiles at you*

10/10

braye27

So THAT's why it's called the Restricted Section!  I'll tell you what, Cori, this chapter was unbelievably sensuous, and I thought Hermione's reaction to his "ministrations" was perfect.  How could she just go back to her Common Room and act as if nothing momentous had happened?  I couldn't have.  Whew-boy!  That's was some kinda hawt, and I think you've created another wonderful memory for both of them. (I'll certainly never forget it!)Well done!Beth

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

One of many reasons it's called the Restricted Section. :D I don't know if this is a common place for hawt luv in SS/HG, but it sure is a favorite place for Dramione authors (and probably a dozen other ships)...

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BulletTimeScully

Ooohhh...yummy!

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

:DDDD

10/10

Nessa

In the library hmmm I like!

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

I know, right? ;)

10/10

barbied011

I always see this story on the list of recently updated fics but have felt too busy to start something that is already over 25 chapters long...but I took the plunge this morning and am very glad I did.  I'm totally hooked and can't wait until tonight when  I can read some more. :)

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Yay! *dances with you* Thanks for taking the plunge, and thanks for letting me know the water's fine! :D

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gurlimargrethe

I love this story. I am allways a bit nervous when reading a 6'yearstory. Allways hoping that at least one person who know Severus and loves him will know he is not a traitor, well I will see eventually what you have in store for them. at least for now he has some joy in his troublesome life. Looking forward to updates  

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Thank you so much. I do want him to have both joy and vindication. Hope you keep enjoying the story. :D

10/10

sevibaby

This was a totally awesome chapter.  Can't wait for your next update.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

I squish you! Thanks!

10/10

snapesbeatrice

Ha! So hilarious that Hermione has to write a checklist (what? Not color-coded and charted?!) to be sneaky. She's just been so *good*! And now what is Sylbil Tretipsy going to do? The combination of thick headedness and drink is a little concerning. "wink"

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

I think the thickheadedness will save the day in this case. Sybill mostly wants to be left alone with her cooking sherry. Full of additives as it is. Tsk. :D

10/10

pearl city princess

Wow, They certainly aren't wasting any time are they, and in the library no less.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

I agree. Moving fast. No time to waste! :D

10/10

sunny33

It will be hard for her to act normally around him now! :)

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

You speak the truth!

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noxeh

oohwee. very hot! though i'm beginning to wonder how they deal with the pressure of not getting caught.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Me too, sister. Me too. O.o Thanks for R&R!

10/10

HBAR

This was delicious!  And, "letting the notion of Irma Pince’s private life go unexamined" made me laugh.  She probably feels the same way about him.It was also funny that no matter what amazing things he was doing to her, somewhere in the back of her mind, the well being of the books on the shelf takes precedence.Oh, did I mention how hot the library scene was *fans self*Love it!   Must have more!

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

"Moar!" she cried. "Moar," quoth I. "Ten-four. Can do. Yes Maam." :D

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Canny

I will leave you with the first words that came *ahem* to mind: "Good bubotubers! Why, oh why did I quit smoking?" And yes, I do use 'good bubotubers' frequently.Thank you for the extra fun in one week. Much appreciated. *waves from under the mountain of papers to grade*

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Bubotubers iz good? *contemplates bubotuber omelet* Ah, you had papers to grade. Good old November. Now it is January. Soon they will be drifting like teh drivn sno all across your desk. Will try to keep a wee bit of fanfiction of drifting across yr desktop. :D

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mhgood

<<Figured some of you would probably rather read this chapter a little sooner than later, if the preview was all that was lacking.>>Well, I'd rather get lost in the library with a certain Potions Master, but, eh, this will do.  [grin]

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

*g* Yes, me too. Thanks, friend! (h)

10/10

Snapegirl1

Yay! You absolutely and completely rock! Fab chapter! Naughtiness in the restricted section... I don't know about Hermione's fantasies but it's certainly one of mine! :)  I was without internet for 36 hours and nearly went insane. So imagine my delight at your wonderful update when it all started working again :D Thank you for an excellent chapter and you can probably guess just how excited I am for the next update :))) Loveyoulots SG x

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Thanks, SG. I'm am shamefacedly responding to reviews from, yes, November. Just know that I got it and read it and loved it and am now thanking you for it. *le squish*

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HermioneJeanSnape

So much love to you! Wonderful, WONDERFUL chapter. So lovely. So, so good. On tenterhooks for the next one! :D

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Love back to you! *snugglesquish* *looks at date on review* *gulps* Happy New Year! :D

10/10

pearl city princess

Only Hermione would have a special sneaking around list, she is so adorable.  I love all the "talismans" Severus has in his pockets, how romantic.  He is simply perfect.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

He is a bunny, isn't he? *looks around* Hope he didn't hear me say that--he'd curse me into next year. :D

10/10

braye27

Whew!  I'm exhausted just reading about all the things that happened in this chapter.  The battle of wills between Severus and Draco was fierce– enough so to give even Severus a bloody nose!  Poor Draco.  He doesn't want to do the task Voldemort has set him, but he sees no way out.  And this reminded me that before the term was out, Severus would have to kill Dumbledore, and Hermione would have to try to make sense of what has happened.  She is so happy now, and I can only imagine how devastated she will be.  And it's not the kind of thing that Severus could tell her about before hand.There were several things that made me laugh, too.  Hermione's list making cracked me up.  Only she would make a list of all the things she needed to do for her part in this newly discovered love affair.  But I have to admit that all of them were important things.  I loved it when she inserted 3a between 3 and 4.The book the young Slytherins were poring over in their Common Room was a hoot, too.  But even funnier than that was when Severus reduced it in size and put it in his own pocket.  I'm sure he will enjoy reading ‘101 Ways to Drive a Witch Wild, by the editors of WQ Magazine,' and coming up with his own list of ways to please Hermione.The description of how he thought of her handkerchief was good for another laugh:  "It was another talisman: his lady’s favour, embroidered with tiny pink flowers and stiff with dried tears and snot."  I probably laughed harder at this than anything else... until you said in your A/N:  It has sssuch interesting things in its pocketses, Preciousss!  There's a little of Gollum in all of us.  LOL!Thanks for a wonderful and busy chapter, Cori.  It's been a real pleasure.Beth

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Hi Beth. Well now. November 18. Yes, I remember November. Barely. :D Thanks, as always, for your kind and detailed review. Glad you enjoyed the snotty handkerchief. Like the kids say these days, just keeping it real. xoc

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CosmicSev

Wondeful! I can't wait for the next chapter . . . must have it soon! So much tension.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

Thanks! *smoochies*

9/10

sevibaby

Poor Severus, he has to try to help Draco and keep Hermione from spilling the beans.

Response from corianderpie (Author of Caramel)

True, he always has so much on his plate. Much of it of the cold spinach variety. Happily Hermione is something much sweeter than the usual!

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