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Subversa560 Reviews | 6.76/10 (560 Ratings, 0 Likes, 447 Favorites )
After the fall of Voldemort, an inexplicable illness plagues the surviving Death Eaters. Albus Dumbledore has a plan to save Severus Snape—but how, exactly, is Hermione Granger involved?
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Thoroughly enjoying it so far..look forward to seeing which house Severus get sorted into this time around....
Ooooh, a cracking good story AND a male anatomy lesson! I really had no idea about age-related changes in the male form (I'm in the process of learning all about the female changes, darn it), and your description lent a lovely verisimilitude to what is shaping up to be yet another wonderful account from your "pen"! Thanks for writing!
Hello, Subversa!
Well, I'm hooked... I like the developing plot and also the details of your writing - like the "boy stuff" ;)
I hope, you'll update soon.
Regards
Poetica
A nice fill-in chapter. So nice to see him enjoying his second chance. I wonder if he meets up with the owner of the tatoo? *snicker*.Thank you for updating so quickly, but eagerly awaiting more. Cheers.
Awesome, as always! Waiting for more soon! Thank you for sharing and BTW, love the picture!
OK. So who has been researching erections, then? ;)
Yay! A new story by Subversa, a bit of a new take on the old time-turner fic which I usually can't stand. This isn't strictly one, so it looks promising! I can't wait to see where you'll go with this, I'm definitely enjoying the first two chapters.
Look forward to reading more!
~Jo
I particularly liked the Author's note regarding erections. I don't remember being so accurately informed before and made a mental note to discuss same with mr neelix later on... lol...
Anyway, on to the story... so happy to see an update, and it's superb so far. And he has a Kneazle! Yay! I always thought he needed company.
Loving this, can't wait for more!
Thanks a lot for the update! Waiting for more.
You and your fab fics are why I never get anything done. You have sucked me in again with only one chapter. I can't wait to read the rest of this fic. It's kind of like a reverse time turner fic. Instead Hermione going back to be with him, he's aged down to her. This is going to be great, i'm so excited.....Severus a moody teenager LOL!
I can't wait for more!
I haven't even read it yet - just printed the first two chapters which I'm going to take with me while I watch my children playing outside... but your stories are always my favourite! Thank you for writing another one!
Well, well. I almost never read stories over here, but happened to see this one. Quite interesting and looks like fun.
‘Why not?’ Severus asked querulously. ‘I’d do it for you, if you asked me.’
Dumbledore’s eyes twinkled, damn him. ‘Then let us be thankful I never asked you to do so,’ he said gravely.
The irony of these two lines made me giggle, but it clearly shows that, in this story at least, HBP and DH are things that never happened.
I really like how you set up the misery of Severus's existance at this point. Hopefully, (if the title of your story is any indication) it will give Severus the impetus to live his teenaged life differently while he's looking for a cure.
Oh, and I love, love, love the banner. It looks like teenage Snape will be a Gryffindor?
*cheers* I have a feeling that I am about to read one of the best stories ever! Now, to wait patiently as chapters are posted here, or to start clicking over at the exchange? *looks at admin work* *looks at beta work* *looks at housework* I'd better pace myself, but I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this! "The cusp of autumn's equinox" indeed! Squee!
Poor Severus might have been better off not knowing, but--squee!
Response from WriterMerrin (Reviewer)
PS: I got too caught up in the squee to remember, but yes, I also liked that you hung a lantern on the fact that your Dumbledore never asked Sev to kill him.
Explain Menelaus daughter please, It looks like a good one- which you are FAMOUS for
A very promising story! Are you writing a sequel, aren't you? I look forward to reading more.
That sounds like the start of a great story! I'm anxious to see more!!
That was...fabulous!
I really love this story so far! Post some more soon, please. :D
Ooh! Intriguing start! Looking forward to reading more!
Pyro
Yay!!! I love stories where ages change and Severus gets to hide in plain sight. Fabulous start!
You made my day. I have been looking forward to the day another story from you would appear - and here it is. The first chapter is very promising - looking forward to updating.
I am thoroughly intrigued, dear author, as to why Hermione is 'the daughter of Menelaus.'
I must admit that 'Snape is a teen in a man's body' is one of my favorite ways to see this ship played out. What do you have in store for them?
Hmm. I always love a well thought out, believable story where characters stay true to canon. I've enjoyed your previous stories and look forward to seeinh where this goes.