Wonderfully written and I especially enjoyed the reveal. Now they know how they feel about each other...oh my! What will she have to say when she finds out he's Professor Snape?

Well, well, well, I suppose DD won't be amused.... Great chapter, though. I enjoyed it very much!!!

Finally! I was wondering how long and when Severus would learn that the girl with the tattoo was Hermione. Won't Jared be so disappointed to know that "Adin" won the girl he was after. Good. I don't really care for Jared.

Did Dumbledore see them? I can't imagaine he'll be happy.

So she did have the gryphon tattoo after all...I never would have thought lol.

Yea!!  The reveal is complete! - but wait, Adin is revealed - we still have Snape to go!  Yes - more prose - wonderful!!!!

How perfect a night... and a kiss, erm kisseS. I hope he won't take Albus' words too seriously for once and enjoy himself more than one night. And he definitely has to tell her who he is now.

Yay! You enjoy yourself Severus/Adin (But is it Severus or Adin that is attracted to Hermione? I hope Severus stirs it up doesn't it hehe)! I wonder what the morning after will bring? Also what will Dumbledore say?
Look forward to more.

i liked that severus has grown protective of neville.  and am amazed i remembered to mention that, given everything that happened in this chapter!  omg!  i loved severus allowing himself to enjoy things, and getting to be with his dream girl.  and i loved that he let himself admit to hermione that he wanted to kiss her.  mostly i love how you are letting him relive his youth and making it right.  of course, if dumbledore finds out about this, i suppose it might be a problem.  old spoilsport!  :D

I loved this. You've written it so well that you can almost hear the two separate personas that Snape/Adin has. The ending was a bit fluffy but it was really sweet too so I can forgive you for that :p I really love your work and can't wait to see what you come up with next! I was also in stitches over the whole "custody of the cats" thing. So funny :)