Oh wow!  So now he can go back to being himself but does he really want to?  Wow!  And what does he have to do?

That was an incredible chapter.  You accomplished a lot!
Looking forward to the next!

OMG, This chapter was amazing!  I'm so happy they're back!  I completely understand what they were dealing with trying to stay away from eachother.  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Much Love ~ Brena

This story is amazing.  You manage to stoke such strong emotion in me while reading, I feel like I'm on a thrill ride with every chapter.  And on top of that, your Severus is so much like the one I see it's almost like you plucked him right out of my head!  How did you do that?! 

I really hope he's done being hard-headed now and will come up with a solution for his future - with Hermione.  Personally, I'd love it if he stayed as he is.  To me, he deserves a fresh start in every sense of the word.  But at the same time I'd miss my Snape.  I guess I'm just wishy-washy on this!

Whatever you decide to do, I can't wait to read it! 

PS - Your Luna is amazing too!

Great chapter, I am following this story with great anticipation!

yay! they made up!

Well, that problem is sorted at least! :)

Great chapter, loved the fact that Hermione was so upset that Severus called Allison a "Know-it-All"  eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Great chapter!! I'm already anxiously awaiting the next one!!

What's he going to do? Tell Dumbledore that he wants to be with Hermione when he goes back to Severus Snape, or that he wants to stay as Adin? I do hope it's the first one.

"I'm the know-it-all!" that was great!

Really a great chapter.

"I'm the know-it-all!"

LOL! That was priceless!

Livvy

Oh, thank Merlin! He has finally come to his senses!

I love this story. It gets my heart pumping.

I'm glad he finally accepted the love that is bestowed upon him. Gos knows he deservee it. I just wonder if he will stay in his teen form and go back to his old self. ANd his last "thing to do" makes fear for the worst, knowing him.

Yay! I'm so happy they're back together! Their reunion was very sweet, by the way. And, of course, well-written as is to be expected. :) I can't wait to see what Severus is up to! Thanks for sharing! -CC

This was a wonderful chapter.  The angst was just enough.  Finally the inner dialogue between Adin and Severus appears to coincide.  They both want Hermione.  Can't wait to see which version of Snape she ends up with.

as i was reading, i was thinking, oh, i want to mention this or that moment in my review! but there are too many to remember, and by the time i get to the end of the chapter, all i can think of is how much i've loved it.  it was sad the way he kept thinking how he, snape, doesn't deserve anything.  i know you will make it all perfect, i'm just not sure exactly how perfect looks until you show it to me.  :D

great update... wonder what severus is up to?

Why go back?

*wringing hands* OMG, I hope the thing he has to do does not include fleeing to Iceland or something similar...

dum, dum, dummmmmm......please no more angst, am praying for a happy outcome for the pair of them.

Brilliant writing as usual.

Lu

Amazing, as always.

Personally, I think the best outcome would be for him to be cured of the Mark, but continue on as Adin. Severus Snape deserves a fresh start more than any other character in the HP universe.

I am positive that your Hermione would love him either way, but Severus likes himself best as Adin Prince. I hope that he's on his way to tell Dumbledore that he is happy as he is.

I think this is the best of all of your stories and that is saying a lot, because they are all wonderful.

~arynwy

I have the impression that he might perform the enchantment on himself while she goes to class.  I wonder how she'll take that.

Great chapter.  I've really enjoyed the story.

This is a great story! When will you finish it?

Hermione's tacit forgiveness is the very best of a mature, canon Hermione, even if Sev considered it a filthy tactic.  His knowing the number of days since their last kiss was a great touch.  I rather doubt, though, that her recent discovery bodes well.  *tries to be patient*