until all that was left was his amazement that this woman wanted him as he wanted her—with every cell of his being

Again with the tears.  Why do you have to be so good at this?  But Hermione is right: he is impossible.  It seems she's getting smarter about it.  Asking directly was definitely the way to go.  Oh, what I'd give to be able to see the puzzle pieces forming together in her mind.

oops- perfect

OUCH!  Hermione is totally right--I was practically holding my breath for a few moments there.  She's right to be confused, and I hope that little slip up about his age clues her in.

Can I just say that my heart is racing and I was moved to tears.  I don't suppose that such perfection can last, but, wow.  He really hadn't made the connection before?  I guess he is capable of powerful self-delusion, poor thing.  I wish I had time to read the next chapter right now and see what is going to happen now that he's told her he wants her.

I do hope she works it out now. Or he tells her the truth.

Uh-oh, wonder if she figures it out this time.  Fight after curfew resulting in them getting sent to Dumbledore who will find the whole thing hilarious?  Who knows, except you of course since you're the writer and all.

Like how Snape was right, but Hermione couldn't help but point out that she was as well.  Pride seems to be one of the prevelant virtues in these two.

Looking forward to the next chapter.  =)

He's going to torment himself forever thinking he doesn't deserve any sort of happiness, just hope it doesn't destroy everything that could be.

I laughed when Luna came up to Snape with her request.  I can see him dashing off to avoid the rest of that conversation.

Snape seems to developing split personalities, that's not good.  Maybe he can reconcile them one way or another instead of running hot and cold...course, that would be the way that some teenage boys are wired, so maybe it isn't all that bad.  Seems to be confusing Hermione though.

Oh good, he didn't run away this time.  I bet that a 17 year old Snape that takes care of himself would look really good in that costume.  And yay! we finally know that the tattoo does in fact belong to Hermione.

Hope Snape enjoys his hour of allowing himself to be a teenager.  ;)

And when life becomes uncomfortable, Snape pushes life away...great characterization. 

Hopefully Luna's mom's notes turn out to be helpful, Snape seems to becoming more confused with himself every day.

So Luna figures everything out and Snape may have just given himself away, wonder what explanation he's got for that.

I feel bad for Allison, but Snape seems to lack social graces.  Of course, not being a teenager for 20 years may have something to do with it, but still. 

That's funny how you had the boys looking like they were going to come after Snape for getting a kiss, when in fact they were looking for a beater.  One of the few things that will distract boys over all else, sports is definitely one of them.

Wondering if Snape's going to find out the girl's Hermione soon.  (unless I'm completely off base, but I don't think I am...feel free to tell me otherwise and that I'm a fool.)  ;)

You'd think Dumbledore would be a bit more understanding of the fact that Snape's godson died because they hadn't found a solution and by rights that Snape should have died first.

Lets see if this group of students is able to solve the Death Eater problem.

The Sorting Hat seems to take on a smug personality whenever I come across it in stories, I like it that way and glad that your personification/animation? of it did as well.

I wonder if Snape is going to take pleasure in irritating his former students while incognito, or whether he'll be drug into their lives despite his best efforts. Guess I'll just have to keep reading.

I like the choice of name,it suits Snape very well.  Maybe the exile has met some friends in his travel companions.

$10 (or currency equivalent of your choice) that our mysterious female is one Hermione Granger.  Looking forward to see where things go from here.

I have to say I'm proud of myself for catching the meaning of Menelaus' daughter, looks like I learned something last quarter after all.

Looks to be another promising story, come to it a bit late but I'll do my best to catch up. I've enjoyed your other stories, this one doesn't look to be different in that regard.  =)

niice job - thanks for your work!

Bahahahahahaha nice one sevvy, & how will he smoothe this one over hmmmmm...

Oops, what a giveaway! :)

AHHHHHH don't stop there, we need another chapter ASAP.  She's about to find out weeeee.... it's so exciting.

oh oh.  somebody's been caught out!  now will he confess or come up with some sort of plausible excuse, i wonder?

other things i loved this chapter - neville, luna, and bother.  and pretty much everything else, too.  :D

Bit of an evil cliffie there.  Yes, how will Adin explain himself out of that mess?  Inquiring minds love the speedy updates.

Oh shit! I love how perceptive Luna is! If anyone knew Severus in disguise from the beginning, of course it would be her. Now that Hermione's discovered his old Transfiguration notebook, now would be a good time for Severus to come clean about who he is. Luna really did give sound advice, if he's brave enough to follow it. I think it would be better for her to know now, than find out the hard way later.

Oh shit! I love how perceptive Luna is! If anyone knew Severus in disguise from the beginning, of course it would be her. Now that Hermione's discovered his old Transfiguration notebook, now would be a good time for Severus to come clean about who he is. Luna really did give sound advice, if he's brave enough to follow it. I think it would be better for her to know now, than find out the hard way later.

Another fantastic chapter. The prevarication between Adin/Severus and Hermione is a little frustrating BUT so completely right.

I like the twist at the end with Severus' old parchment. A mistake perhaps? A chance find?  But interestingly you have put that little reveal out when they are in the Room of Requirement - so it may actually be more a need for him to come clean rather than just a chance happening...Ah I am enjoying this so much. And the unfettered snog beforehand...nice touch. As always looking forward to more.

Cheers.