Way to go Neville, I never thought you had it in you.

Severus, a stalker?  I like how conflicted he is, it would be terribly difficult to be in such a crazy situation.  I hope he listens to the voice of Adin and lets himself find happiness with Hermione, she is so perfect for him.

I'm thrilled that they ended up together and that they didn't freak when they each realized who they were with.

I think it is so cool that Hermione has a tattoo.

I think it's time Adin stopped listening to the voices of Severus Snape and Albus Dumbledore, they have both forgotten what it is to be young.

It looks like Severus is busted, I knew it was only a matter of time before Hermione figured it out.  I have a feeling things are about to get interesting. 

Wonderful chapter.

This chapter was such fun, I can't wait to read the next one.

A "young Severus" and a "second chance for Severus" story all in one.  Excellent!!!

Much enjoyed.  Will add it to  my favorites as I'm sure it is worthy of a reread down the road.

Thanks for sharing and thank your hubby for letting Sev live with you all. 

Wonderful story. I love that 'Severus' got a chance to really live his life. It truely was a "second chance".

This was a great story! I am sad to see it end but it did not leave me wanting. Thank you very much for writing and I hope your muse continues be inspired in this genre.

This is simply a WONDERFUL story!  I thoroughly and completely enjoyed this piece of fan fic.  You are a wonderful writer.

I cannot wait to read more of your stories!!!


Thank you for sharing your talent!

:)

This was such a clever idea! Great job!

Very entertaining read, great story, nice writing - an altogether great job! I especially love the picture of young Severus... That's exactly what he must look like... I wonder how you did it, it looks so much like a young Alan Ricman! 

I've been reading this on my cell phone and I have enjoyed it so much.  Unfortunately I can't figure out how to leave a reveiw on the I-phone.  This was the best young Snape story I have read.  Its really excellent.  Thank you for sharing it with us all.

I enjoyed this immeasurably.  Thank you for sharing it!

A fun and sweet story!

FINALLY! YES!!!

I quite worried my husband as I've been trying to breathe, much less read, through the tears over this chapter.  It's all so breathtaking, so tangibly filled with longing--then the hope!

Oh, I had a review, but my computer crashed.  I don't remember what I said, just that I was crying.  After testifying to her faith in him, how can he not think that she will accept the older Severus as much as she had the young Aiden?

Yay, a happy ending! I'd been trying to decide if i thought you'd have him return to his previous age and life or not, and wether he'd be able to keep Hermione in the end. Thank you for sharing anther great story with us, this will be one to favorite. :)

Yay, a story from you I've not read before! (there are a good handful of authors i just read whatever they write when i find a new story, because I've loved everything else they've written). Looking forward to see what happens in this story. :)

Nice chapter, Hermione's jealousy made me chuckle.

Ahhhh! This is no place to end! Help, please finish this wonderful story! I knew Hermione would figure out who he was and love him as himself. :)

yay!  and yay ginny and luna and neville!  and yay you!  love this story and even tho i know how it's going to end i'm loving the ride.  thanks so much

oh wonderful! thanks!

Not to sound like a broken record, but I just LOVED the "I'M the know-it-all bit" I've never seen anyone use it like that in all the years I've been reading HGSS.  Brilliant.  
I cannot WAIT until the next chapter... Great cliffie! :)

Yay!  How silly am I to be in my thirties but absolutely loving this like a teenager?!  Looking forward to more, and so glad Hermione finally got past Severus' wall.  Having Neville offer a friendly ear was pretty chuckle-worthy, as well.

Great chapter!  But the cliff hanger, sigh....  I want it now...whine....