Wow -- great story and soooo well done!! I'm excited and anxious to read the next chapter!! I love the idea behind this story and how everything we love about Severus is so present in Adin, all his character traits and flaws up to his small habbits and demeanors. Awesome, thank you, Subversa!!

I was so happy to find an update to this story after a particularly trying day!  I love the tattoo and how Sev can't get it out of his mind : )

lovely update!  she and ron don't click, do they?  thanks so much

awesome

Ooo, I wonder if he is going to make the connection. Too bad her shirt didn't ride up a little as she brushed off under that tree.

Hmm. Interesting that he's beginning to distinguish his thoughts as Aiden from those of Severus. But, poor thing to have the singular joy of flying cut short by his reminder of Dumbedore; why does the old man need to even be in this story.

Tee hee! Someone's getting jealous of Ron already; that's a good sign. How hilarious that he thought so much more of the little kiss than the boys; of course they only think of Quidditch. Another amazing chapter.

This chapter had a bunch of awesome things going on that I found to be quite funny.  First, how Severus handled Ms. Vane was done really well.  It was very in character and yet not as cutting as Severus Snape would have been.  The other thing that was amazing was when Harry and Ron ambushed him about being a beater for the Quidditch team!  Quitle like being run over by the Hogwarts Express hahaha!  Thanks for the wonderful story Subversa, and keep those updates coming!!! Much Love ~ Brena

So...methinks Hermione wants to go to Club Night, hopefully with someone other than Ron? <hint, hint> I can't wait for the next chapter!

Think about it, Sev. :)

The more I read it, the more I love it. And the quick updates are a much appreciated bonus.

Thank you for the quick updates.  It's wonderful!!!!!

tee hee.  i love that you are giving severus a more positive teenage experience, whether he really appreciates it yet or not.  being called sexy, girls chasing after him, boys wanting him on the quidditch team.  and at some point, maybe a girl he likes thinking he might actually be boyfriend material, hmm?  it is so exciting to be reading another of your stories, to go on another adventure with the characters as you write them.   i know i could run off and read the whole thing, but then - i'd race through it, and it'd be done.  instead, i'm really enjoying savoring each new chapter as you post it here.  :D

Well, that was a revelaton! :)

mmm, looking hopeful now Ron is out of the way! Nice update, I am loving this story.

Another great chapter!!! I really like this story!

It makes me realize how sucky Snape's life had to be for staying 17 to have any appeal.

A quick update *smiles*

'Bleak House', must say a very good read and there was a very good series on it too.
I wonder how long its going to take Severus to find out that it's Hermione bearing that tattoo.
Look forward to more.

Yes! Now he knows that she cares for him enough to cry over the thought that he might be next. What a great clue and a great opportunity for Hermione to help him.

That is so terrible about Draco dying. Lovely little insight into their shared history, though, and Pansy.

Oh you HAVE to finish this.  I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!  Very very good so far.

This story is really good. I've read a few Hermione and Time Turner fics, but this is definitely a much different take on it. I can't wait until Severus realizes that the girl with the tattoo is Hermione. It would seem that Severus is

Ah, another wonderful update! I had to laugh about Severus thinking Harry and Ron would attack him when the one main thing in their mind were quiddich:-)

subversa, I always enjoy your stories!  This is so much fun.  I like seeing Snape get a second chance at his teen years.  It was so awful the first time around.

I can't quite imagine Adin as a beater.  Somehow I think the bludgers would end up taking out more of his teammates rather than fewer.

He wouldn't have thought that she cared for any of them, right? Surprise!

Great chapter.  I was suprised to have tears in my eyes reading about Draco's death and Severus' memories.  Very emotional.

I love to read your stories and look forward to reading more.

Thanks for writing and sharing them with us.

 

Just a quick question, because I'm OCD enough to let it bother me: Prince or Prinz?