Excellent chapter! 

oh no what a way to give yourself away!!! LOL that was great!

I love Luna. She is a very clever girl. A jealous Adin is making many mistakes. Thanks for posting this chapter!

Great chapter - as per usual.

While I got the part about the sexual tension and the quills, I was waiting for at least one dance. It seemed a bit odd that she would not at least put herself in the position to be asked by Adin.

At last, all of his irritation and indignation spilling over, he rose to his feet, straightened to his full height and said in his iciest voice, ‘Do you mind, Miss Granger?’

He regretted the action the moment the words left his lips, for he heard himself, Severus Snape, Potions master, in the tone and delivery of the rebuke—and when Granger turned her shocked, wondering face to his, he knew she had heard him, too.

OOPS! (He He)

While there is a part of me that is hoping for the reveal, I admit I am in legue with other readers who are hoping that Adin has a bit more time to enjoy his youth...
Cheers.

HA! Awesome chapter... jealous Teenaged Severus is just wonderfully written. So cannot wait for the next installment... she cannot fail to know who he is now!

The next chapter should be interesting! Can't wait.
Livvy

Oh NO!  I can totally see Aidn/Severus doing that last bit.  It made my heart skip a beat!  I wonder how she'll react!  This is so awesome!  Thanks again for the wonderful fic!  Much Love ~ Brena

Wow, gotta love the teenage angst. Although, I was sad that Severus so easily passed over all the horrible things Ron said to Hermione and instead grumbled with him about "witches."
That was cold. Ron was was so verbally abusive to her. He deserved to get hexed.
Livvy

Evil, evil cliffie!!!

I mean, Oops. Now Sev's gone and done it. Maybe he should take Luna's advice and tell Hermione now. On the other hand, she is in his room... Bravo on the brilliant Luna. Another chapter of lovely emotion and fun plot. How great for Sev to have the chance to be one of the popular kids.

Maybe she'll be too flustered to notice. This is so neat.

cool

Uh.  Oh.  And then some!  Looks like Adin (or Severus) has some splainin' to do!  I hope that Hermione doesn't launch her flock of Killer Canaries at him (then again, a man who's clever enough to foll Voldemort is hardly likely to be in any real danger from a few ballistic birdies).  I like the fact that his adolescent interest in her is clearly returned (evidenced by the fact that she snapped her quill when he paid too much attention to Allison, just as he had snapped his when Jozef was flirting with her).  Wait until Severus finds out that Hermione is the girl he noticed on the train with the saucy little gryphon tattoo on her back (for I'm almost positive that she is)!

Well, looks like Luna was right in that Severus needs to tell Hermione who he is. And now he knows it too. I  don't think all is as it seems with Hermione and her date. I think Jozsa tried something with Hermione, and she managed to get away. I'm looking forward to more.

A small slip of the tongue, so to speak! :)

Woot!

Tell her that snarkines runs in the family, Adin!

Is it wrong for me not to want Hermione to find out so soon?
Severus is having such a splendid opportunity to experience teenagehood (is there such a word?) from a different angle, it would be a pity if he missed out the trials (trills?) of wooing and dating. If, as I suspect, Hermione has a serious case of Snape-crush, dropping a defenseless, de-aged potion master in her lap would be just too easy.
Make Adin work for it! (and scramble for credible explanations every once in a while)

I love a jealous Severus. I wonder if Hermione will catch on? Of coure she's a know-it-all right?

I love Jealous Severus. He is one of my favourite. An I'm so glad Hermione chose to flee her dates rather than hex them *grin*

i had other things to say, and then - well, all i can think at the moment is, evil cliffie!  let me think - oh, yeah, i liked the quidditch tryouts - sev getting to be kinda popular and all.  and the scenes of his jealousy and then his cluelessness at the dance felt very real.  oh, and of course, i liked the luna somehow sees through him.  :)

Now things are starting to get exciting..wonder if Hermione will twig onto who Adin is..hmmm..

Things are hotting up now, I wonder what Hermione will do in her moment of recognition?  Am imagining the patented Granger dressing down and hopefully some passionate making up.
Loving this story.

I have to say, this is a very interesting story. I love it! Please update soon!

I have not been reviewing many stories lately, but I absolutely had to leave a comment. This is fantastic!! Your writing is smart, funny and completely believable. In this chapter I loved the beginning line, "What he had thought of them as their teacher—that they were a group of thoughtless, arrogant dunderheads—now, from the vantage point of their peer, seemed much more as if they were a group of spontaneously friendly people." The way you portray Snape navigating Howgarts for a second time is absolutely hilarious and spot on. I cannot wait to see where this story goes, fortunately I know you are such a brillant writer that it will only keep getting better! Update again soon!

A very interesting development, I'd say...

Oh my god, you are so funny... I loved, specially, Dumbledore's line about the quills. Brilliant! Can't wait to see where this is going...I mean, you've come up with a brilliant plot after all though I think it's rather evil of you to leave us with such a cliffhanger!

He's been sorted into Gryffindor!  It was fun to see the interactions among the students we already know, although the part where Dean was talking about Seamus was a bit of a tear-jerker.