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Potions Under Duress Darkness Within
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Darkness Within

1: Encounter

2: Consequence

3: On The Edge

4: The Calm Before

5: The Storm

6: Oblivion

7: Desperate Measures

8: Some Riot

9: Catharsis

10: The Heart of the Matter

11: Full of Spices

12: Reaquainting

13: Mending Fences

14: Butterflies

15: One Fine Day

16: My Best Friend

17: Parting Is Such Shit, Really

18: The Letters

19: One Day Like This

20: I Know You

21: Sunshine

22: Epilogue

Darkness Within

neelix

326 Reviews   |   326 Ratings, 0 Likes, 172 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Horror Psychological Potions Under Duress 33,678 Words 22 Chapters Complete
Ginevra Weasley Harry Potter Hermione Granger James Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Severus Snape

Severus Snape bumps into his ex-student Hermione Granger, but she's not the Hermione he remembers. Unwittingly pulled into her seedy world, he uncovers a shocking secret.

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Chapters (22)

Chapter 1: Encounter

Chapter 2: Consequence

Chapter 3: On The Edge

Chapter 4: The Calm Before

Chapter 5: The Storm

Chapter 6: Oblivion

Chapter 7: Desperate Measures

Chapter 8: Some Riot

Chapter 9: Catharsis

Chapter 10: The Heart of the Matter

Chapter 11: Full of Spices

Chapter 12: Reaquainting

Chapter 13: Mending Fences

Chapter 14: Butterflies

Chapter 15: One Fine Day

Chapter 16: My Best Friend

Chapter 17: Parting Is Such Shit, Really

Chapter 18: The Letters

Chapter 19: One Day Like This

Chapter 20: I Know You

Chapter 21: Sunshine

Chapter 22: Epilogue


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Reviews for Darkness Within

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10/10

HBAR

Yay!  Happiness all around!  Great story!

10/10

HBAR

Just from this short chapter, it is so very obvious how happy and in love they are.  Maybe it is good that she went away briefly.  They needed a kick in the pants somehow.

10/10

HBAR

He had one chance to make this perfect, and I think he did outstanding.  Yay!

10/10

HBAR

I think he finally realized that it is now or never.  Thank goodness!

10/10

HBAR

I love the contrast in the first letter she sends to Severus and the one to Ginny.  Why won't they just talk to one another?!  Ginny may have to intervene further.

10/10

HBAR

You're tearing my heart out with this chapter.  Love the last line!

10/10

HBAR

Doing something foolish?  Everything those two do these days is foolish.  I hope they cave soon.  This is too much for me!  I can't remember if she stays or goes.

10/10

HBAR

I get so mad at these two, but considering her past and how delicate the subject, I can appreciate the tip toeing that is going on.  Poor dears.

10/10

HBAR

Oh dear, he is going to explode.  I wonder who will cave and make the first move, and how it will be received.

10/10

HBAR

So glad that they are all on friendly terms.  That will help Hermione immensely.

10/10

HBAR

I sure hope the Potters take this well.  Hermione could use some friends.  Not that Severus hasnt been wonderful to her.  Onward and upward, I suppose.

10/10

HBAR

I agree, it is great to see her happy.  I just hope if their relationship progresses beyond just friends that they arrive there together with little drama. We'll see ...

10/10

HBAR

What a sad pair they are right now.  I think eventually when they stop working against one another, they will be able to sort themselves out.

10/10

HBAR

He may be sorry he asked. :(. But, it is good for her to talk about it.  She can't move on if she keeps it all bottled up.  Things can only get better from here, right?  Right?  *is worried*

10/10

HBAR

Well, looking in her head might be less painful than having to recount her whole story.  Hopefully they can work together to get her back to good.

10/10

HBAR

Bummer.  He shouldn't have let his guard down.  This poor girl is in bad shape, and I feel bad for her, her guilt warring with the need to drink.

10/10

HBAR

Why do I know she isn't going to like what he has to say?  Still, he is taking awfully good care of her ...

10/10

HBAR

Wow, she's in a bad place, and he seems I'll equipped to deal with it.  Still, they'll get through this.  Eventually.

10/10

HBAR

It is odd that he watched her for so long, neither deriving pleasure nor intervening.  Maybe he feels protective, but not quite ready to get involved.  I think this gets ugly before it gets good.

10/10

HBAR

I love this because it is so different than the usual Hermione.  Under the right circumstances, this could be her life.  Now get in there Severus, and fix this mess!

10/10

HBAR

It's been a long time since I read this, and I wasn't reviewing back then.  So, I'm ready to jump on this ride again (since I don't remember much but know it will be good).  Intriguing start.

0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Aww, a happy ending to a story with such a crappy beginning (circumstance-wise, not the actual writing!) is always a good thing to read. I loved the part where they write letters to each other, as well as when she came home on holiday and they finally said how they felt. :)

10/10

mick42

It is so very sad ,to see her fall so low.

10/10

mick42

" Miss Granger what happend to you?" that is the question ,isn't it.

0/10

marisamarinee

Awww I loved it. 

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