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Darkness Within
neelix326 Reviews | 5.89/10 (326 Ratings, 0 Likes, 172 Favorites )
Severus Snape bumps into his ex-student Hermione Granger, but she's not the Hermione he remembers. Unwittingly pulled into her seedy world, he uncovers a shocking secret.
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Happily married to a sexy Irishman, one teenage son.
Work with teenagers.
Obsessed with Alan Rickman and SS/HG fiction.
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Reviews for Darkness Within
wow! she's a bit more snarky than him isn't she? The kitchen scene. I mean.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
lol.. she's a damaged soul...
Really Ive eaten chocolate cake while reading worse, some of the stuff people write! This is very sad, because it has happened to so many women.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I know.. It's quite depressing.
Such a beautiful story, so wonderfully written - loved reading it from start to finish (forgetting to eat, I was so absorbed) - the story made me well up with happiness as well. Well done, I completely loved it :) x
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thank you so much, I am really happy that you enjoyed it!
i love this story, it is amazing... tnx for writing it... :)))
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it x
I just wanted to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this little story! It was so wonderfully sad and beautiful and the same time. I hope to read more of your writing in the future!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks very much! If you go to my author page, my posted stories are all there :)
Hello, While English is not my first language I doubt that anyone would murmer all the time. It gets a bit irritating reading that word after every sentense of speehc. Also I think in this fic Severus is just too nice....
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
mmm, maybe I was a bit repetitive. oh well! As for Sev being nice - I like him that way!
Hey, first of all I want to say that I really like your penname. Star trek voyager and star trek in general is my favourite tv series. I am not sure if I can envision Hermione in this situation but this is still an interesting story to read nonetheless.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Well I wasn't trying to write a Harry Potter book, so Hermione will always be in different and probably OCC situations, to be honest.
Lovely story. I'll be sure to press the random fic button more often! This was a different take than what I've read before, and I thought I'd read all there was to offer, so thanks for making this one a different breed of SS/HG fic. i love how you built their relationships up slowly, giving them a strong foundation. usually when I've read a fic where Hermione has been raped or abused, the author wastes no time in getting them together as soon as possible - which is when I stop reading. Thank you for taking the time to share this wonderful fic.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I am very glad that you found it! I loved writing it and feel very stronmgly that there has to be a basis to the relationship or it's not real. Thanks for the lovely review.
This chapter left me with such a warm fuzzy feeling :-) Love in various forms everywhere. The passionate love between Hermione and Severus, the warm blanket of friendship with which Harry and Ginny are wrapping both of them and lets not forget the children's love towards them. They deserve all of this after what they have been through.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I thought so too. And Severus needs love in his life I think!
Thank god, for a moment I thought he would let her go.This was such a tender moment, their meeting again, the acknowledging of how much they missed each other and the not wanting to hurt her on Severus part. Well done!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks again... lol.. I never know what to say when people comment on most of the chapters, but I am glad you enjoyed most of it (I responded to your email).
Finally I have time to continue reading this story!I like it when correspondence is shown in stories - they convey so much. Like, in this case the tiptoeing around admitting how miserable they both are.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks!
I'm a sucker for happy endings, I have to admit. And if there ever was a happy ending, you have written it here.Thank you for writing and sharing a good story.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thanks very much.
I love happy endings and this one had it all.Thanks so much for this story. It made me smile.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thank you very much! I am very glad you enjoyed it.
Ahh, lovely ending. Cute surprise with Hermione being the Minister. At least there's someone with brains at the head now!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I just wanted her to have the best possible ending. Thanks for reviewing x
i loooved seeing their 25th anniversary! what a delightful end to a wonderful story. loved hermione as minister of magic. great story. thanks so much for sharing your time, tallent and vision.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thank you for revieiwng on a regular basis, it meant so much. There will be other stories so keep reading!
That was wonderful.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Ahh, thank you very much, so pleased you liked it.
Whew! About time! :)
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I know! lol.. well, you know how damn stubborn he can be... really, I don't know why I live with him at times...
Yay! Finally some kissing! My sentiments exactly, neelix!I was so afraid that Severus would allow her to leave, but thank goodness (and neelix) he didn't. Your writing of this scene is delicate and filled with hope. Can lemons be far behind? Lord, I hope not.Only three more chapters? *sniff* I love this story so much that I don't want it to end. It is beautiful.Beth
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
I don't think you'll be disappointed. I wrote the next chapters in the hope of instilling warm fuzzies, and I even grin myself when I am editing (and think... goodness me, that's lemony and I wrote that...!)Keep reading and thank you for consistently reviewing. It's been a pleasure.
I just found this story on the home page here at TPP yesterday. I finished reading it just now and would have finished it yesterday but my laptop froze up. This story is a real page turner. It started really dark but it has happily come out of the darkness. Great writing. I'm glad I found your story. You get gold stars for the best chapter title ever for chapter 17! Cheers,
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
lol... my beta likes my chapter titles too! I am very happy you found the story and that you're loving it... I sometimes wiat until a story is complete before I dive in so I am not disappointed when I get to chapter 19 and ... oh, it's not finished and I want to know what happens next! Keep reading, and thanks for reveiwing!
Yeah! I was getting a little depressed. Thanks for the update! Good chapter!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thank you... glad it made you smile! The next xhapter is in the q, so look out for lemons...
yay kissing! *sigh* i await the rest semi-patiently! thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
;p;/// the next chapter is in the q and last time i looked it was number 20... guess we will both need semi-patience!
You should see the smile on my face. As big Hermione's I think and he's not even leading me upstairs! (unfortunately!). Oh, Lemons my dear? licks lips. LOL.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
ooh yes, I think it's time for Severus Lemonade. He makes the best kind, don't you think?
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
I wonder which Severus quote would suit my agreement with that? 'Indeed' or 'Obviously' LOL.
Mmmm... that was delicious. I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Thank you so much! I'm happy that you enjoyed it!
I'm so glad Hermione decided to stay with Severus. I'm also very happy that they're finally taking that next step in their relationship. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
hehe... I can't wait either. Hope you're not disappointed with it...
*extremely cheesy grin* Love it!!!! I love that she was ready to walk and out and he stopped her at the last second. Real nail-biter there. Are there lemons on the way??? LOL (I am only slightly Severus addicted. Right, a bit more than 'slightly'.) Wonderful, dearest!
Response from neelix (Author of Darkness Within)
Lemons? Oh I don't know... maybe he pulled her upstairs to help change the duvet cover??I think you might be in luck, honey... Severusly juicy lemons on the way!