Chapter 6
Chapter 6 of 45
star_girlWhat happens when two types of magic collide? Severus Snape is about to find out...
ReviewedThe look of surprise on Severus Snape’s face would have been priceless to any of Hogwarts students. He’d looked as if someone had put Doxy eggs in his tea. Sarah’s heart hammered in her chest as she awaited his response.
“You want to perform the Great Rite, with me, tonight?” he repeated slowly, as if he’d misheard or that she was in some way simple.
“Yes. You want to know more about Wiccan ritual, so I’m giving you the chance to see my magic first hand. If you cannot show me your magic, it would benefit me if you could assist me in mine. Plus, you are clearly a very magical man; I can sense it.” And if there is any foolproof way to see if you are my true love, this has to be it, she thought.
The corner of Snape’s mouth twitched. The girl wasn’t backwards in coming forwards, was she? Slytherin fortune again, handing him sex on a plate, all in the name of research! He cleared his throat before speaking.
“And how does one go about this Great Rite? Are there any documented procedures on how it is to be enacted?” He fought hard to keep the tone of amusement out of his voice.
“Actually, there is,” she answered breathlessly, reaching for her bag. She rummaged around and pulled out a book. It was bound in black leather and had “Book Of Shadows” along with a five pointed pentacle embossed on the front cover in gold. She handed it to Severus, whose face remained impassive, although inside his stomach gave a triumphant whoosh. Now this is what I call research, he thought.
“Chapter eleven,” she said quietly, looking at her hands. There was silence while Severus flicked to the appropriate page and began to read. She watched his face for any sign of shock or disgust, yet he carried on reading without a flicker of emotion on his face.
Sarah was glad for the opportunity to study him. He wasn’t what you would call classically handsome, yet his dark features held an intense, almost magnetic kind of attraction to her. He was wearing a crisp white high-collared shirt with ruffles at the sleeves with smartly tailored black trousers. Very Goth, very Karl Lagerfeld, very nice! Her eyes flicked to his lips which, she now noticed, looked soft and sensual within his hard face. Is this man really my true love? she asked herself.
Severus looked up. “You have never done this before?”
Sarah smiled. “Not in the ritualistic way of the Grand Rite, no,” she replied. Severus breathed deeply through his nose.
“Are you quite sure you want to do this?” he asked her quietly.
Her eyes found his. “I absolutely want to do this.” He gazed back at her for a few heartbeats. “Do you want to do this?” she batted the question back at him.
“I see nothing unpleasant in this ritual, and I think it would enhance my knowledge,” he answered steadily. And I haven’t felt a woman’s flesh in years, and you’re offering yourself to me wholeheartedly, you pretty young thing, and I need the sweet release, he thought, slightly ashamed.
Sarah looked at him. “You do realise that the rite must be continued to the very end? That we would be unable to stop once we’d started?”
Severus nearly laughed, but raised an eyebrow instead. Is she getting performance anxiety on my behalf?
“It’s written that, as this is a powerful rite, you should see it through to the end as the power it produces can backfire if the rite is performed but left incomplete.”
Severus nodded. Yes, we’ll do all your mumbo-jumbo by the book, my dear, and you will get a thoroughly good shagging at the end of it! “I assure you, Sarah, I have no intention of leaving you… incomplete,” he drawled. The suggestion of his voice sent a shiver of pleasure down her spine.
“And you do realise you will have to be fully naked, like me, for this ritual?” she asked carefully. Snape paused for a second, thinking of the Dark Mark. Damn thing can be passed off as a tattoo, he decided. It still irritated him that with the Dark Lord now deceased, the bloody mark was still there, clear as ever. He’d got used to the idea of having it for the rest of his life, as a reminder of the era of cruelty of which he’d been a part of.
“I’d find it difficult to conceive of enacting the ritual thoroughly if this were not the case,” he replied smoothly. Once again, she shivered with anticipation.
“Then we must prepare. It’s already dark and the ritual must be completed by midnight.”
Merciful Goddess, she thought. What am I doing?
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Kind Of Magic
345 Reviews | 6.06/10 Average
What a beautiful, beautiful, BEAUTIFUL ending! *can't stop gushing*
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Please let me know whether there is a sequel to this... Would love to read it!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Thank you so, SO much for taking the time to read and review. I am amazed people are still reading and enjoying after all this time. There isn't a sequel I'm afraid but if you fancy another long fic I have an SS/GW on here called "A Second Chance for Happiness" if that floats your boat. Thanks again for your support, it made me grin from ear to ear getting your reviews :)
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
Ah, I'm quite a newbie here, tbh... I discovered fanfiction pretty late (late 2015 :P)... but then, better late than never! You should have seen MY grin as I read your story and was quite fascinated to note how alike we think (I mean, I was just writing an SS-centric Parvati Patil story inspired by the Gandhamadana herbs mentioned in the Ramayana, which also deals with alternative magic, you could say!) Oh, and I'll definitely check out the SS/GW fic. I'll read anything that's not SSHG (love to LOATHE that one!), though SS/OC remains my all-time fav! Nice meeting you
BUNSEN BURNERS!!!! On a more serious note, this chapter was adorable. Strongly reminds me of MY own girlfriends and the unadulterated girl talk!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Well, a girl's got to tell her secrets to someone, right?
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
But she didn't. At least, not fully! *wicked grin*
You've made Dumbledore very likeable here for me, more than in canon; being a portrait becomes him more - HA! Lovey moments and suspicion on Sev's part. Look forward to Sarah's reaction to the revised history book
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
The interaction between Snape and Dumbles is such fun to write.
Lovely - you capture all of the excitement and magic of going to Hogwarts through Sarah's eyes so sweetly & smoothly - you can just feel her feelings and hear Sev purring his tom-cat purr in pride showing her around! Can't wait for their private lessons!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Thank you :)
Love your sizing Severus' own feelings of himself and the (im)possibility of being loved/loveable - you precisely zing us wih it; and love your Dumbledore being Dumbledore to the fullest - lovely chapter!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
I do love writing Dumbles I must admit!
Oh, ye gods, this is not going to be easy - for either of them! *evil grin* Love it!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
The path of true love never did run smoothly...
Love the development and all the possibilities going & being at Hogwarts will present!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Thank you again, I'm so pleased you're enjoying it the second time round :)
Love his reflections and that, after all he's been through, he accepts that he believes in love...
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Of course he does... he's a pussycat really ;)
Love the natural flow of their magical revelations!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
It was time to be honest!
Mmm... love the banter and passion - the entire set-up is just brilliant! Love his coming down a peg or two and Sarah's powers bursting forth!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
This is where it really kicks off!
Wonderful - I remember this, and it's all the more special; such a wonderful rital enactment, and the wonderful cliff-hanger!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Thank you! :)
Yes, yes, and yes! I feared he wouldn't play along, but I'm glad his, um, curiousity is up and willing! And Sarah does seem keen on confirming the man from her dreams is a part of her future-wonderful chapter!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
He still thinks he has the advantage here... how wrong he is ;)
*happy dance* - Merlin, I love this chapter, the overlapping and blend of Wicca & Wiarding Worlds, and I have a feeling Sev is truly going to benefit soon in more ways than one - let the Great Rite begin! xx
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Awww, thank you! Reading your revies as you revisit the story makes me want to re-read it too, hehe.
Oh, yes, too close for comforts that spell sounds... Severus can't help his reflexes for survival, after all he's been through! reading on! xx
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
:)
I love the dynamics & pace set, and the Flinch and Madam Pince imagery is just priceless *evil grin*; love that the book contains so straightforward information - just enough but not too much - to really urge Severus onward! xx
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Filch and Pince are an unholy union!
Hey, love! I'm snuggling down this evening and enjoying this story that I read many moons ago on another site, and now, I'm so happy to experience it again - wonderful Wicca set- up, and am guffawing & relishing Sev watching every moment & move of Sarah's!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
hey nag, I'm honoured that you decided to revisit this story, which is my first ever fanfic! Thank you :) xx
Absolutely Sev, turn this lovely new discovery to your advantage - hehe! Wonderful scenario - I have a feeling that he's going to watch, learn and enjoy his research (it's about time;-) xx
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Well, he is a Sytherin after all ;)
Started your story last night. What a wonderful Christmas present to myself. That is to enjoy the happiness that Severus so deserves. Thank you for giving Severus the love and attention that JKR so overlooked.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Thank you so much for reading, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it enough to read it all in one go!
It just came to my attention that I never congratulated you for fnishing this story in a so wonderful manner. good job!!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Thank you so much for sticking with it, and all your reviews and support. Means alot :-)
Wicca being the one great advantage she has over him, this is a wonderful approach. Meddling though! Let's hope she can keep quiet for a while. Severus was already responding to her rite: "he had come to realise, she soothed his soul"I wonder will he ever watch her memories; will he find a way to heal her, too?
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
There are only a few chapters to go, so I hope you enjoy where this heads. Thanks so much for the review.
Will Severus feel anything different as Sarah completes her ritual? I am all sorts of curious!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
You'll have to wait and see ;-)
What a lovely idea of her wanting to heal him, body, heart and soul. Beautiful.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Thank you, sis. I don't think the dear professor desrves anything less than total adoration :)
I'm sure he'll forget all about it once she's there in his arms.
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Naww. Best place to be.
Yes someone will need cheering up, I know just the witch to do it!
Response from star_girl (Author of A Kind Of Magic)
Any offers? ;)