i was a bit lost in the middle towards the end.... perhaps a re-edit? And was there anal sex at all? Seems not, right? Love the open-ending because it only gives us hope that this fantastic story still has legs!

To me, as a reader, this must have been a difficult chapter to write. I don't know how you managed to do so yet keep it sincere and not shrugged off ..

I see this ff is marked as complete. I can't wait,.. but why didn't you kill off Rita Skeeter? We readers would rejoice. 

She seems very OOC and unHermione-like.

Fantastic story!

The end of the world, now they have to rebuild. Heartbreaking.

The beginning was so sad, I cried a lot...but their hope for the better, their efforts to make that hope a reality made me keep reading.

I think each couple of newlyweds goes through a period of transition but after a while they find a balance and things settle like in their case. It's a tumutuos period full of pasion and dispair but through talking, compromising and love it can be overcomed.

It was a great story. Thank you

I'm so glad the next chapter is up already because the way this was ended...I love the idea though.  I can't wait to read how Kingsley approaches it.  On that note...Here I go to read it! lol

A wonderful story!! It was great to see how their relationship developed and how lovely was Severus dealing with Hermione's insecurities. Congratulations!!!

What a great story! I like the way you left the ending on an up note and a little open ended. Are there any plot bunnies running around for s sequel? I hope so!

Yay! Such a wonderful story. I started following this on Ashwinder, so glad I found it here. The plot was unique and well-executed. Thanks for posting.

Very nice ending!  I like that you left the results of the memory re-modification a mystery.  I've enjoyed this story immensely!

This chapter was so sweet. Kingsley had a great idea. Glad to see the two of them run with it. Off to the next chapter. I would have given you a ten on another site, so double the stars please.

Oh that was so FUNNY! I can totally see Phineas falling OOC or eating some hallucinogenic painted mushrooms and saying something like that! Why not a scene where all the old headmasters get drunk as goats?

A perfect ending to a great story.  It was an amazing ride and I enjoyed every minute of it.  Thank you.

What a delightful story.

Thanks for writing it.

Love Sonia :)

Sabrebabe rec your story and I like what I've read so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh yippee... This is shaping up to be one interesting read, and it is complete too. All the better for me.Love Sonia :)

I love Simon and Garfunkel!  And I loved this fic!  And I think you should write a squeal :)Maybe Sound of Silence?  ^^

Wonderful story and such a happy ending.  I'm actually sad that the story is over.  Thank you for sharing!

A very sweet ending to a lovely story.  I really enjoyed it!

Very Good ending.  I loved Hermione's comment about the end of the day.  She's absolutely right, as long as they support each other things will be fine.  Will there be an epilogue?  I'd love to know if she's having a boy or a girl.

Thank you very much for this unusual story. Will there be a sequel?

OMG it is over... i just joined this little group and it is over.... it was perfect.... great ending... LOVED well done i think i have a little tear in my eye you made me bond with your severus and hermione great job.....you are a genius

Great job!  I had so much fun reading this. The chapter in which Rosie explained the role of the husband is still my favorite and actually has had an impact on my own writting. The ending is delightful and all that I could have hoped for, for them.  Not to rush you but what is you next story? Thanks again for writting such a wonderful story and I'll see you in the reviews.