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Full Circle
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Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
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Ooh, that was clever thinking! And yes, so simple once they realised it was a spell. Very nice - and I'm really curious about what will happen now.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They have to see if it works first! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They have to see if it works first! :)
And there's the cleverness of it all, the answer was so simple no one would have thought of it! Great solution to the problem. Now how is Severus going to feel about Hermione returning to the wizarding world after having her all to himself? Can't wait to find out.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
That is a very good question! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
That is a very good question! :)
“Finite Incantatem.” I certainly didn't see that coming! Now I can't wait till the next chapter!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. I didn't see it coming when I started the story either, it just came to me halfway through! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. I didn't see it coming when I started the story either, it just came to me halfway through! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Hmm, power bound, not stripped. There's hope then.
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There is always hope :)
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
There is always hope :)
I love that. I hope it works.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing :)
Hmm, hope that works! I am eager to see the next chapter now...
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Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing. :)
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!Okay, I really am anxiously waiting for the next chapter to see if Hermione's theory is correct.Waiting... Waiting...Okay, Update when you are ready.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Coming... coming! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Coming... coming! Thanks for reviewing! :)
“Finite Incantatem.”
Brilliant!!! This is a perfect example of the principle known as Ockham's Razor (sometimes spelled Occam's Razor). Loosely interpreted, it means "keep it simple."I can't wait to see how this all plays out. As usual, I loved this chapter, too.BethResponse from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Exactly, Beth. And what better way to fool them? Thanks for your wonderful reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Exactly, Beth. And what better way to fool them? Thanks for your wonderful reviewing! :)
no way! could it really be that simple? i dying to find out how this progresses. thanks so much!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wait and see! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wait and see! Thanks for reviewing! :)
When faced with multiple probabilities, the easiest and most simple solution is generally the correct solution. *shakes head* So simple it literally eluded them. Good turn.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yep. They couldn't see the wood for the trees. Thanks for your review, bea! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yep. They couldn't see the wood for the trees. Thanks for your review, bea! :)
How on earth can you leave this here? I'm aghast that you would do this to us. OMG! Okay, tantrum over. I'll wait like a good little witch for the next chapter......
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. Settle down, hon! Won't be long. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. Settle down, hon! Won't be long. :)
Don't leave it there!!!! You can't just drop the solution on us and not show us the result. So cruel. I'm glad Hermione figured it out and that the solution was so simple. Well, I'm assuming that it will work, and I probably shouldn't do that, because we know what happens when we assume... It will be interesting to see what happens now.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I must admit that I enjoyed that, LOL! Call me a meanie! Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I must admit that I enjoyed that, LOL! Call me a meanie! Thanks for reviewing :)
Coolio! that is great. How clever of Hermione. How clever of YOU! I love it. I hope it works. it's a wonderful plot twist.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Well, I suppose it really was old Voldie who was the sneaky one. He made me do it! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Well, I suppose it really was old Voldie who was the sneaky one. He made me do it! :)
Brilliant! Just incredibly brilliant ending. That was inspired. I am also so glad that Severus told Hermione about Lily. I think that will be so important as their relationship moves forward. YOu can't have a proper start unless you've finished with the past.Great Chapter! 100/100!Livvy
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wow, thanks , Livvy! I've never had a score before! :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wow, thanks , Livvy! I've never had a score before! :D
Wow! What a great ending to the chapter.
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Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
! :)
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Thanks,
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! :)
Bravo, Ingeniously done, Keep up the awesome writting.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you, Arabella. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you, Arabella. :)
OMG!!!!What an utterly, absolutely BRILLIANT solution. What a great twist.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Voldie was so complacent that she would never be able to contact anyone who could recognise her again. That'll teach him! Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Voldie was so complacent that she would never be able to contact anyone who could recognise her again. That'll teach him! Thanks for reviewing :)
OMG! If that is the solution - then I think that is so neat! Great story! I eagerly look forward to another update.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
'Tis coming soon. Thanks for your review! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
'Tis coming soon. Thanks for your review! :)
Ooh, Molly-channelling is scary!
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Sure is.
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Sure is.
Awwww, and the Grinch's heart grew 3x it's size... (Im talking about me, not Snape.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Don't explode now! :)
ARRGH! Frustrating. Its ok, I can wait.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. Hold in there! :)
WOW! This is very different and highly interesting. It's just an amazing and totally different ORIGINAL take on events. I'm very glad to see a new story that goes in this direction! Excellent work, keep it up! Im looking forward to reading more.~
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Knox
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks! :)
Now I've caught up on this story and I really am enjoying it very much. thanks for sharing it! If a bit OOC, it is still good. and who knows how their personalities might have changed after so much trauma?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I thought it would be interesting to explore how Severus would develop if he did not get all embittered about living, as he does in a lot of fics. Having someone like Hermione around, who has been out of school for a year and has "got over" the whole student/professor relationship, allows him to relax and be himself, show his sense of humour etc They are definitely OOC for the time of the books, but I figured that this is set outside of the scope of the books... Thanks for your thoughts! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I thought it would be interesting to explore how Severus would develop if he did not get all embittered about living, as he does in a lot of fics. Having someone like Hermione around, who has been out of school for a year and has "got over" the whole student/professor relationship, allows him to relax and be himself, show his sense of humour etc They are definitely OOC for the time of the books, but I figured that this is set outside of the scope of the books... Thanks for your thoughts! :)
I just love stories that the author puts some new magic in, or uses magic in a neat new way. Nicely done, the magic is there but bound.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks! I had to leave them some prospect of finding a solution! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks! I had to leave them some prospect of finding a solution! :)
I'm surprised that Hermione would prefer to stay in the muggle world if she won't look like herself. I would think she'd still want her friends back, and for them to know she's alive. Great story, though!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
The effect of Voldemort's actions is much like a "Do Not Notice" charm, in my mind. She looks the same but other just don't "see" her as herself. She wants to return to her friends, but is still pretty traumatised and unsure whether she can cope with being a Squib. At least in the Muggle world, her lack of magic does not matter. Besides, it suited my purpose nicely to keep her alone with Sev for a while! Thanks for your review! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
The effect of Voldemort's actions is much like a "Do Not Notice" charm, in my mind. She looks the same but other just don't "see" her as herself. She wants to return to her friends, but is still pretty traumatised and unsure whether she can cope with being a Squib. At least in the Muggle world, her lack of magic does not matter. Besides, it suited my purpose nicely to keep her alone with Sev for a while! Thanks for your review! :)