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Full Circle
sunny33537 Reviews | 5.4/10 (537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Full Circle
I hope Snape remembers Hermione when he isn't sleeping!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
He will. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
He will. :)
An excellent take on the prompt.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks. :)
I know you intended the ending to be serious and befitting of such a tragedy, but I am just in one of those moods, and as soon as I read Snape's "Never stop believing" line, I immediately started singing Journey. Thanks for that. That's awesome. Really. But it was a great start to this story, and I am sure there won't be any more Journey-outbursts in later chapters.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing, CF. I don't know what Journey is, though! :)
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
It's an 80s band that is addictive!http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CNB1EUJg1-wSkip to about the 3 minute mark to catch the chorus of the song.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing, CF. I don't know what Journey is, though! :)
Response from CharmedForce (Reviewer)
It's an 80s band that is addictive!http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CNB1EUJg1-wSkip to about the 3 minute mark to catch the chorus of the song.
I like this "new" Snape. He seems to be the mentor Hermione needs at this time, and he is willing to also be the emotional and physical connection she needs.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It's probably the first time anyone has ever relied on him in that way. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It's probably the first time anyone has ever relied on him in that way. :)
Fluffy - I like happy endings.While I am glad your portrayal of Ron was outside the 'Ron-the-jerk' box, I think it was a bit over the top. Call me cynical, but I have some doubt that such altruism exists where a person's ego, emotions and children are concerned.In any case, it was a fun and interesting story. Thanks.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, I absolutely agree. I real life this situation is highly unlikely. Just as well it's fiction, and the characters just have to behave as they are told LOL. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, I absolutely agree. I real life this situation is highly unlikely. Just as well it's fiction, and the characters just have to behave as they are told LOL. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Yay! Very happy for our couples. May they live happily ever after. I love that you didn't portray Ron as a prat, he was a great friend and strong man to realize the situation. I have enjoyed this story a whole lot. Well done, looking forward to the epilogue.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you for you review! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you for you review! :)
Private research, huh?
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Yep, very private ;)
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Yep, very private ;)
How sweet, they both fell in love with each other around the same time. Ron was a very selfless friend to let Hermione go to have her happiness. It is wonderful he found the woman for him so soon. She had probably been waiting in the wings for him, as Severus had been for Hermione.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They both grew up in different ways over the years. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They both grew up in different ways over the years. Thanks for reviewing. :)
A lovely ending (or almost-ending) to a great story! It was so good to see Severus and Hermione finally happy together (and Ron finding his own happiness with Luna, too).
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Couldn't leave Ron unattended to, after all his generosity to his friends, now could we? :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Couldn't leave Ron unattended to, after all his generosity to his friends, now could we? :)
This was a great story! I enjoyed every chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you! :)
The end of a sweet story. I just love 'happily ever after'.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Me too, no weird endings for me! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Me too, no weird endings for me! Thanks for reviewing! :)
This was a great story and I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. I could not put it down even though I was tired; my body was telling me to go to sleep, but my brain kept telling it to wait til I finished reading. I just had to know how it ended.I can't wait until the voting is over so that I can find out who you are, read your other works, and put this story into my favourites (I will be reading this again, that much is certain. I mean, how could I not? It was and is fabulous). I also wish that I could give you more than 5 stars, but alas, that is all that is available. Just know that on my rating system you deserve an 11.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Aww *hugs*. Thank you for all your wonderful reviews. I hope you catch up on some sleep now! I have an idea for a sequel where Hermione's enhanced powers feature, but at this stay it is only germinating! :)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
You are most certainly welcome, dear, after all, you deserve it! I did get a chance to catch up on my sleep. When you do write a sequel, let me know, because I want to read it!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Aww *hugs*. Thank you for all your wonderful reviews. I hope you catch up on some sleep now! I have an idea for a sequel where Hermione's enhanced powers feature, but at this stay it is only germinating! :)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
You are most certainly welcome, dear, after all, you deserve it! I did get a chance to catch up on my sleep. When you do write a sequel, let me know, because I want to read it!
I never expected that out of Ron. He has shown real maturity and is letting her go so that she can be truly happy with someone, even if that person is not him. I have read a lot of stories to where he is an immature arse, hell, I have even written one of those myself, but what you have done here is refreshing to see. Brava, dear, brava!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I thought it was time someone gave him credit for actually growing up. No-one stays 17 forever! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I thought it was time someone gave him credit for actually growing up. No-one stays 17 forever! :)
Excellent chapter, and I'm looking forward to the epilogue. Of course I'm also NOT looking forward to the epilogue, if that makes any sense. I really have enjoyed reading your story.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL, I think I know what you mean. I have an idea for a sequel, where Hermion's enhanced powers come into play, but we will have to wait and see how that develops. Thank you for your reviews :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL, I think I know what you mean. I have an idea for a sequel, where Hermion's enhanced powers come into play, but we will have to wait and see how that develops. Thank you for your reviews :)
*Sharply inhales* That was one hell of a chapter! Ron knows, I know he does. Hermione is in love with Sev, I can so see it.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Ron isn't silly. He is smart, and caring, and knows which side his bread is buttered on! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Ron isn't silly. He is smart, and caring, and knows which side his bread is buttered on! :)
"Lovely. Just the sort of bedfellow I need: soft, small, and silent." This was priceless; I just adore your humour.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
A soft toy never leaves the toilet seat up...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
A soft toy never leaves the toilet seat up...
Wow, she is stronger than what she was before. How cool is that! Also, I love how you put Sev in low slung jeans that would be a sight, one that I might be tempted to take a picture of.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Dressed or undressed, gotta want a picture! :) P.S. Have you had any sleep, woman?
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
Nope, no sleep for the wicked I daresay. I have been up with your wonderful story. You see, I can't quite put it down...it is addicting. I have to find out what happens before I sleep.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Dressed or undressed, gotta want a picture! :) P.S. Have you had any sleep, woman?
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
Nope, no sleep for the wicked I daresay. I have been up with your wonderful story. You see, I can't quite put it down...it is addicting. I have to find out what happens before I sleep.
Hermione's reaction to Sev petting the one-eyed snake was rather funny. Surely she couldn't expect him to not find a stress reliever, he is a male after all. Mmmm... naked Severus, what a sight that would be.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Mmmm... just makes one's imagination work overtime, doesn't it? ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Mmmm... just makes one's imagination work overtime, doesn't it? ;)
Very enjoyable and all wrapped up nicely. Thanks.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. :)
I like how you came up with the idea to bind her magic, instead of simply stripping her of it completely. I'm just speculating here, but maybe this will be easier to solve once they find an answer sense her magic is only bound and not gone entirely.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
You will find out soon, no doubt! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
You will find out soon, no doubt! :)
A wonderful ending to the wonderful story I have delighted in following from its beginning! You have written with the utmost understanding of your characters and have given me hours of contented reading... for that I wholeheartedly thank you.I am looking forward to the epilogue... after the voting, of course. Will there be any Snapelettes in their future? Any little radish-loving children in Ron's and Luna's future?Well done, Oh Goddess of the Quill!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you, Beth. Your lovely reviews have been wonderful themselves! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you, Beth. Your lovely reviews have been wonderful themselves! :)
I love how they tease each other and how they seem to have a natural chemistry with one another, which is quite refreshing to see.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It was fun writing it! Thanks for your review! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It was fun writing it! Thanks for your review! :)
Yes, we do love the deliciously snarky Snape--he is too irresistable! I especially love the thought of him clad only in a damp towel.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Psssst! Don't tell anyone, but he didn't have a towel, he was nekkid! :)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
Oooh, that makes it even more fun! Yes! I'm mildly jealous that Hermione got to see him and we didn't. ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Oops, you were right. He did have a towel. Nekkid Snape is later! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Psssst! Don't tell anyone, but he didn't have a towel, he was nekkid! :)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
Oooh, that makes it even more fun! Yes! I'm mildly jealous that Hermione got to see him and we didn't. ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Oops, you were right. He did have a towel. Nekkid Snape is later! :)
I am pleased that Hermione is now living with Sev and that he is going to help her recover her magic. I love this story more with every chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They will make a good team! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They will make a good team! :)
Congratulations on finising your story! Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck!YOu did a good job with this, it was enjoyable from the exciting start to the ending with friendship overriding jealousy. I agree with Debjunk that the story is better for their not having had sex while she was still married to Ron. and once more, thank you for not making Ron a jerk.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
, for your lovely review! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
, for your lovely review! :)