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Full Circle
sunny33537 Reviews | 5.4/10 (537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Full Circle
Really liked your closure.the combination of ss/hg - and keeping it in canon with ....19 years later .... and (even if i like it ordinary) without ron-bashing
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
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! :)
Good, now you finally allowed them find each other.I'm totally hooked, can you tell?
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Yes! :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes! :D
Oh, so close... I'm just glad I'm reading this now when the story already is finished. The poor souls who had to wait for the next update ...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, you don't have to wait! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, you don't have to wait! :)
I think everyone would start to questions his or her sanity in that situation. Good you let her have a reminder of her past, so she can have hope again.Snape's sudden change from bastard to human was ... unsuspected, but very welcome :-)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Well, I supposed a near death experience, then finding one of your only friends is dead would tend to change someone's point of view. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Well, I supposed a near death experience, then finding one of your only friends is dead would tend to change someone's point of view. :)
Well done! I've just read the prologue and you already have me hooked completely.Poor Hermione! I wonder how she will deal with that.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Not well, initially! But things will look up! Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
No, I mean how you managed to get me hooked completely with just a prologue. Normally it takes longer to catch me :-)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Not well, initially! But things will look up! Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
No, I mean how you managed to get me hooked completely with just a prologue. Normally it takes longer to catch me :-)
Things look good for Severus ... but not so good for Hermione.Very, very intriguing story!
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
Oh, and I liked the Potter Place reference. LOL Suspicious activity, indeed
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
That was for all the Potter Place residents out there! :)
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
Oh, and I liked the Potter Place reference. LOL Suspicious activity, indeed
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
That was for all the Potter Place residents out there! :)
Both team meetings were very believable. I'm really looking forward to more news about the patients. Both of them.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Been to a few in the past... :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Been to a few in the past... :)
Very nice wrap up. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. I am busy writing one now! :)
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Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. I am busy writing one now! :)
A lovely epilogue, and very fitting to the story! I really enjoyed this.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you. And thanks for all the reviews! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you. And thanks for all the reviews! :)
Awww, I am always glad SS and HG have children together. It is like the story will always continue somehow! I enjoyed your story and look forward to others!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, Geomancer! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, Geomancer! :)
I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end, and the little Snape-on-the-way had me grinning from ear to ear!Well done!!! I'll be on the lookout for your sequel!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, Beth. Congrats on the best reviewer, as you certainly are!)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, Beth. Congrats on the best reviewer, as you certainly are!)
this was a most delightful and intriguing story. as i said before (or meant to) i like the non-prat ron for a change if not for a steady diet. thanks so much and i will enjoy the sequel when you write it. (me blowing kisses)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for all your lovely reviews, and kisses! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for all your lovely reviews, and kisses! :)
Lovely.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for all your reviews. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for all your reviews. :)
The end of a very nice story. I enjoy it immensely...great job!
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Thank you,
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Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you,
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I really, really like this story! And i am so pleased you have more plans for these characters! You took the prompt and really made it your own! wonderful and well thought out from start to finish! I love stories that are well thought out! you didn't have Hermoine slip seemlessly into some high-paying muggle job with no muggle education and no magic to help her. Where would a person in her postion end up? YES a psych ward, naturally. and when she gets out, no executive position, but waitressing. And she uses her brains instead of wishin' and hopin' that someone will rescue her! And the romance bewteen HG and SS is slow in coming, but that is all the more natural. Good job!Thank you for sharing this with us!
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Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. *hugs* :)
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Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. *hugs* :)
So nice to see everyone living a good life and happy about it.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I didn't want to torture them all too much! Thanks for reviewing, deb! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I didn't want to torture them all too much! Thanks for reviewing, deb! :)
Splendiferous? Interesting creation. But the story is great. Period.
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Thanks,
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. :)
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Thanks,
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That was lovely.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, blue! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, blue! :)
a very interesting story. I find snape really non-canon, but I guess you did give a lot of explanation for that. it all seemed to work out very happily-ever-after-ish. I think I probably would have included more character development in between the main scenes. but overall, a fun read! can't wait for the epilogue!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for the review. Glad you had fun. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for the review. Glad you had fun. :)
Very nicely done. It is good to see it work out for everyone, especially since I really don't think Ron and Hermione are completely compatible.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you for all the reviews, Phoenix! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you for all the reviews, Phoenix! :)
How very mature and sensible of Ron. And it was good there was a friendship between them. :) he was right about her needing to wait until she was older.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm glad you see that too! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm glad you see that too! :)
Nice way of working canon into this story. And out of the mouth of babes...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Sometimes takes a little kid to point out the obvious! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Sometimes takes a little kid to point out the obvious! :)
Oh, Severus you sneaky bastard you. LOL I love the idea of him giving her 'cute' PJs. LOL And how hard for Hermione having to see her parents like that and be faced with the choice of giving them back their obligation filled life.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL he is sneaky! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL he is sneaky! :)
Wonderful, Hermione! I love how it was something so seemingly simple. I can only hope that she was on the right track with the spell, which does seem to be the case given the potion was identified. Of course, this spell might be one that can't be ended so easily.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Would I do that to her? You will find out! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Would I do that to her? You will find out! :)
You have done a really good job with the banter between the two of them. I can see Hermione's suspicion, but can also see that as Severus's only long time friend he would be worried.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
She is not going to forgive Lucius easily. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
She is not going to forgive Lucius easily. :)