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Full Circle

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One: Team Meetings

3: Chapter Two: Awakenings

4: Chapter Three: Grieving

5: Chapter Four: Hope

6: Chapter Five: Searching

7: Chapter Six: Found

8: Chapter Seven: Safe

9: Chapter Eight: Favours

10: Chapter Nine: Fear

11: Chapter Ten: Closer

12: Chapter Eleven: Progress

13: Chapter Twelve: Surprises

14: Chapter Thirteen: Choices

15: Chapter Fourteen: Friends and Lovers

16: Chapter Fifteen: Revelations

17: Chapter Sixteen: Wonder

18: Epilogue

Full Circle

sunny33

537 Reviews   |   537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 44,221 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Harry Potter Kingsley Shacklebolt Minerva McGonagall Ronald Weasley Molly Weasley Lucius Malfoy Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley Luna Lovegood

Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Team Meetings

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: Awakenings

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Grieving

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Hope

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Searching

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Found

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Safe

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Favours

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Fear

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Closer

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Progress

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: Surprises

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Choices

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Friends and Lovers

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Revelations

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: Wonder

Chapter 18: Epilogue


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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Reviews for Full Circle

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10/10

Muggline

Honey, you have written a dream. Alas, selflessness is not a feature many people express when divorced...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hey, that's why they call it fiction LOL! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hey, that's why they call it fiction LOL! :)

10/10

makaem

Nice ending.  This has been a pleasure to read.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

! :)

10/10

luvsev

It is official, Hermione is brilliant. I love, love, love this chapter!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

What? Did you not know that? :P

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

What? Did you not know that? :P

10/10

luvsev

Poignant and beautifully done. I am glad that Hermione now has some hope to brighten her days.                               

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hope's a great thing! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hope's a great thing! :)

0/10

kimjo2

that was superb!  The epilogue will just be the whipped cream on the turtle sundae.  thanks so much for this wonderful story.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

I'm pleased you enjoyed it, kimjo! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

I'm pleased you enjoyed it, kimjo! :)

10/10

luvsev

I like how you brought up Potter Place, that was quite clever. It was strange to see Severus cry, but it showed that he was human and not the emotionally cut off man that so many assume him to be. Lovely job as always.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thank you for your kind words.  Potter place is the place to be! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thank you for your kind words.  Potter place is the place to be! :)

10/10

luvsev

Hermione is so strong, I hope that she can figure out a way to get her magic back, and if not, that she can at least live a normal life with happiness. I am also glad that people got to see Sev the way he truly was, a hero. Great job, dear.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Yes.  It is good the troops are on his side! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Yes.  It is good the troops are on his side! :)

10/10

luvsev

This chapter is just as good as the first. You certainly have seemed to create a nail-biter here. :) I can't wait to see what happens.  

             

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Why, thank you,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Why, thank you,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

. :)

10/10

luvsev

Holy crap, that was an awesome chapter. You already have me riveted to the edge of my seat.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

LOL.  And you have just started.  I hope it continues to hold your interest! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

LOL.  And you have just started.  I hope it continues to hold your interest! :)

10/10

countrymouse

Glad to see them happy together at long last.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Took them a while, didn't it? :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Took them a while, didn't it? :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love the banter between them.  Brilliantly done, my dear. I look forward to the epilogue. Until then.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thank you, Arabella. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thank you, Arabella. :)

10/10

luvsev

Looks like they both did their detective work, too bad that they missed each other though. As always, I am looking forward to more.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Couldn't have them meet up too soon, now could we? :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Couldn't have them meet up too soon, now could we? :)

10/10

luvinthunder

Fantastic story!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks, luv! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks, luv! :)

0/10

debjunk

Thank you for having them wait until Ron and she were divorced and they were married to actually 'do' it.  I still think the whole thing is a bit wierd.  Infidelity is infidelity, even if it's only cuddling and kissing, and encouraged by the ex-spouse to be.I am glad that Severus found happiness after so very long, and I've always liked the thought of Ron and Luna together.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks for the review, Deb. I like Ron and Luna as a couple too. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks for the review, Deb. I like Ron and Luna as a couple too. :)

0/10

kimjo2

that was breathtaking.  loved seeing a non-git ron for a change (just a brief change).  i'm so glad i trusted you and didn't send terrible chocolate destroying hexes in your direction.  thanks so much and i look forward to the next chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Oh, No! Not the dreaded chocolate destroying hexes!  If you like the next chapter, can you send some chocolate creating hexes? pretty please? :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Oh, No! Not the dreaded chocolate destroying hexes!  If you like the next chapter, can you send some chocolate creating hexes? pretty please? :)

0/10

elsolel

Beautiful.  I adored Ron being so wise!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

!  :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

!  :)

0/10

baseballbabe122

Hmm...I don't think I like the calm, wise, collected Ron.  Although I understand he had to be the one to pitch the idea...But I AM happy that Sev & Herms are together, now.  :)I especially enjoyed the scene you created with Severus sitting in his chair and Hermione walking in.... that moment just sparks. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks!  Poor old Ron,  I wanted him to be the good guy for once. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks!  Poor old Ron,  I wanted him to be the good guy for once. :)

10/10

blue artemis

Wow, that was so amazingly understanding of Ron.  I hope that everyone can deal with that.  I like an adult Ron better than the immature cheating child most people make him out to be. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Poor guy has to be allowed to grow up some time!  Thanks for reviewing! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Poor guy has to be allowed to grow up some time!  Thanks for reviewing! :)

0/10

Mint Stick

Coming full circle, indeed!It's always good to see Ron actually matured and intelligent - it's something I felt was sorely missing in canon, epilogue included.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

True, everyone grows up, even hormonally driven redheads! Thanks for reviewing. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

True, everyone grows up, even hormonally driven redheads! Thanks for reviewing. :)

10/10

beaweasley2

I can't believe how mature Ron is in this. I liked how Severus reacted and Hermine's although not, maybe, she could have debated against his thory more, simply caved in. I suppose their marriage wasn't built on anything more than friendship.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Exactly. Friendship and a little youthful lust.  However, as Ron says, although that is often enough, in this case Hermione's passion was elsewhere.  They were great friends and not having sex anyway, so he stood to lose little, and gain a lot by letting her go, as well as knowing he would be free to find his own spark.  Thanks for reviewing, Bea :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Exactly. Friendship and a little youthful lust.  However, as Ron says, although that is often enough, in this case Hermione's passion was elsewhere.  They were great friends and not having sex anyway, so he stood to lose little, and gain a lot by letting her go, as well as knowing he would be free to find his own spark.  Thanks for reviewing, Bea :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Another brill' chapter, awesome job.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks, Tam! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks, Tam! :)

10/10

mia madwyn

When I saw "we've come full circle" it hit me--this was where you were going all along. PERFECT title and perfect reveal!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well done, Mia.  You spotted it! Thanks for the review! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well done, Mia.  You spotted it! Thanks for the review! :)

0/10

SeleneDianara

That was really nice loved it .

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks! :)

10/10

braye27

Ron has been amazingly astute and non-judgmental in his understanding of what has changed in his relationship with Hermione.  His willingness to even bring up the topic with her is surprising, but as you have pointed out, he stands to gain as well.I can't wait to read the next chapter you post and find out what happens when Severus and Hermione enter the bedroom door.My compliments, you have handled a difficult situation with sensitivity and attention to detail that all of the characters deserve.  Well done!Beth

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks for a lovely review as always, Beth. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks for a lovely review as always, Beth. :)

10/10

FlittterKat

I'm surprised Ron is being so mature and understanding. Really surprised, lol. I can see how Hermione and Severus could have grown and fallen in love later in their lives. Can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

I'm modelling Grown-up!Ron after Bill and Charlie.  They were OK dudes! Thanks for reviewing. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

I'm modelling Grown-up!Ron after Bill and Charlie.  They were OK dudes! Thanks for reviewing. :)

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