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Full Circle

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One: Team Meetings

3: Chapter Two: Awakenings

4: Chapter Three: Grieving

5: Chapter Four: Hope

6: Chapter Five: Searching

7: Chapter Six: Found

8: Chapter Seven: Safe

9: Chapter Eight: Favours

10: Chapter Nine: Fear

11: Chapter Ten: Closer

12: Chapter Eleven: Progress

13: Chapter Twelve: Surprises

14: Chapter Thirteen: Choices

15: Chapter Fourteen: Friends and Lovers

16: Chapter Fifteen: Revelations

17: Chapter Sixteen: Wonder

18: Epilogue

Full Circle

sunny33

537 Reviews   |   537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 44,221 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Harry Potter Kingsley Shacklebolt Minerva McGonagall Ronald Weasley Molly Weasley Lucius Malfoy Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley Luna Lovegood

Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Team Meetings

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: Awakenings

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Grieving

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Hope

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Searching

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Found

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Safe

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Favours

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Fear

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Closer

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Progress

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: Surprises

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Choices

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Friends and Lovers

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Revelations

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: Wonder

Chapter 18: Epilogue


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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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http://sunnythirty3.livejournal.com

Reviews for Full Circle

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phoenix

Nice to see they have a better idea of what her affliction is and that her magic is just hidden. I loved the interchange at the end. He fully deserved that swat. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

He certainly did, the cheeky bugger!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

He certainly did, the cheeky bugger!

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phoenix

Good set up for solving the mystery. And I like how they are looking after each other. Interesting how this time the Malfoy repentence seems absolutely genuine, unlike last time.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Lucius nearly lost his family, and his MONEY!  He saw the light!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Lucius nearly lost his family, and his MONEY!  He saw the light!

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phoenix

Nice to see Hermione warming up to her one contact in the WW. And I can see her POV of not letting anyone else know she's alive. I can also completely understand Severus wanting to take care of her because I think he is probably partially or wholly responsible for the potion that left her magically impotent.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Can't say too much yet.  He knows that he is the only person in the WW that can help her, and he needs a purpose.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Can't say too much yet.  He knows that he is the only person in the WW that can help her, and he needs a purpose.

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phoenix

LOL Nice to see they both have as sense of humor. I do think he is right that she needs time to be young and stupid before settling down. Her comments about who he should date were priceless. She should have mentioned Minerva though. LOL

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Didn't even think of Minerva! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Didn't even think of Minerva! :)

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phoenix

Yay!!! I know, repititious, but that's my initial reaction. LOL I love how she was almost recognizing him but not quite and just when she was going to approach him he was gone. Quite sneaky how he revealed himself to her, though if some guy stepped out of a doorway late in day to surprise me I might scream bloody murder. Nice to see her regaining some touch wiht the magical world and I hope that Severus can succeed.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

She has her foot back in the door, so to speak.  Thanks for all the reviews so far, Phoenix! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

She has her foot back in the door, so to speak.  Thanks for all the reviews so far, Phoenix! :)

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phoenix

So close yet so far for each of them. Hopefully Snape's decision to return the following day will pay off. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Can't make it too easy! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Can't make it too easy! :)

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phoenix

Yay!!! Snape remembered and Hermione noticed the coin. If only she could send him a message letting him know where she was. It's nice to see the hope.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hope is always good! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hope is always good! :)

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phoenix

Nice to see that Snape is still human and that he was affected by the deaths. I have to say that I just loved the mention of Potter Place and recommendation that Hermione avoid it. LOL That was really wonderful little nod to the community.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hehe , pleased to see you caught the reference! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hehe , pleased to see you caught the reference! :)

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phoenix

Yay! Snape's cleared. Now he just needs to recover enough to remember Hermione. And it's good to see her coming to terms with what has happened to her. Hopefully she won't have to play Muggle for too long.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

At least she knows how.  Imagine if she had not been Muggle-born.  But then Voldie wouldn't have done what he did! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

At least she knows how.  Imagine if she had not been Muggle-born.  But then Voldie wouldn't have done what he did! :)

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phoenix

Nice snapshot of the rebuilding. I like the Harry took up Hermione's mantle in trying to clear Snape, finally doing the research and other legwork that he should. it is a fitting tribute to her. I do hope that Snape, when he recovers, remembers about Hermione and can find a way to help her. I hope that the Muggles haven't taken her Galleon away because I think that might be the key to finding her.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

You're good! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

You're good! :)

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phoenix

Oooh, I like this. That is nearly a fate worse than death. She has nothing or no one. I do wonder what was up with the Galleon Snape gave her. I know it's significant, but I can't wait see how.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hi, Phoenix.  Welcome aboard! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Hi, Phoenix.  Welcome aboard! :)

10/10

RedsAttic

WOOT!!!!EXCELLENT!!!I look forward to the epilogue...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks! I will post it after the voting is over. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks! I will post it after the voting is over. :)

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CharmedForce

Beautiful... just beautiful.I love that you managed to keep them friends for so long, on such a personal and intimate level without adding sexual intimacy to the mix. Having Ron be so unselfish and mature was a pleasurable surprise. Very well done!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks for all your lovely reviews, CF! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks for all your lovely reviews, CF! :)

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CharmedForce

YES! Woo-hoo. I had hoped this is what would happen when Severus made the comment about maybe in ten or twenty years.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

She was a bit young to start with. But people change. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

She was a bit young to start with. But people change. :)

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CharmedForce

Sparkly? Oh boy... I don't know where this is going, but it ought to be good!I liek that you have managed to include most of the canon epilogue information, even if it is set up a bit differently. I hate that Snape died.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well, without him there would be no story... :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well, without him there would be no story... :)

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CharmedForce

I love the friendship those two have, and though I love a romance between them, I can be happy that they are just friends.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well, all good and lasting relationships should have friendship as a base, don't you think? :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well, all good and lasting relationships should have friendship as a base, don't you think? :)

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CharmedForce

Oh no... another baby. Poor Hermione! Not because she is being "replaced", but because she will definitely agonize over whether to proceed with the reversal if there will be any chance of damage to the fetus.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

You know, I never thought of the effect on the fetus, more the psychological impact. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

You know, I never thought of the effect on the fetus, more the psychological impact. :)

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CharmedForce

Oh dear god... is it relly that simple? Ingenious... positively ingenious!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

 I work on the K.I.S.S. principle, myself. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

 I work on the K.I.S.S. principle, myself. :)

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CharmedForce

Lol... I can totally picture Snape standing there shaking his thing around. Great visual you described!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Oh, yeahhhh!  ;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Oh, yeahhhh!  ;)

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CharmedForce

ROFL! I love Hermione's little quip to her dad, and Severus flirting right back to her.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

I can see him doing some of the things he had never had a chance to do while he was younger.  :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

I can see him doing some of the things he had never had a chance to do while he was younger.  :)

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CharmedForce

The banter between the two of them is so pleasant to read. Very well written.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

It's fun to write! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

It's fun to write! :)

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CharmedForce

Fabulous! I love how they are both learning to be real now that they have found each other.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Yes, the brushes with death and despondency has altered their perception of each other. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Yes, the brushes with death and despondency has altered their perception of each other. :)

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CharmedForce

Oh my god... how cruel! So close to each other.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Can't make it too easy! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Can't make it too easy! :)

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CharmedForce

Yay! He remembered, and has sent her the hope she needs. hermione is strong and will fight her depression until someone comes for her, as long as she knows someone is coming.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Yep. She has hope now, so things are looking up. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Yep. She has hope now, so things are looking up. :)

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CharmedForce

He didn't notice the comment about Hermione dying... I wonder when he will remember.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

He was so devatasted that Remus had died, but he will start thinking soon. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

He was so devatasted that Remus had died, but he will start thinking soon. :)

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