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Full Circle

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One: Team Meetings

3: Chapter Two: Awakenings

4: Chapter Three: Grieving

5: Chapter Four: Hope

6: Chapter Five: Searching

7: Chapter Six: Found

8: Chapter Seven: Safe

9: Chapter Eight: Favours

10: Chapter Nine: Fear

11: Chapter Ten: Closer

12: Chapter Eleven: Progress

13: Chapter Twelve: Surprises

14: Chapter Thirteen: Choices

15: Chapter Fourteen: Friends and Lovers

16: Chapter Fifteen: Revelations

17: Chapter Sixteen: Wonder

18: Epilogue

Full Circle

sunny33

537 Reviews   |   537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )

Drama Romance Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 44,221 Words 18 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Harry Potter Kingsley Shacklebolt Minerva McGonagall Ronald Weasley Molly Weasley Lucius Malfoy Hugo Weasley Rose Weasley Luna Lovegood

Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter One: Team Meetings

Chapter 3: Chapter Two: Awakenings

Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Grieving

Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Hope

Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Searching

Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Found

Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Safe

Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Favours

Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Fear

Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: Closer

Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: Progress

Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: Surprises

Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Choices

Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: Friends and Lovers

Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Revelations

Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: Wonder

Chapter 18: Epilogue


About sunny33

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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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http://sunnythirty3.livejournal.com

Reviews for Full Circle

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10/10

Maddie

What a dilemma over Hermione's parents. Perhaps it would be best to walk away and let them have their second chance at a life they were not able to have previously.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks for reviewing,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thanks for reviewing,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

. :)

10/10

FlittterKat

I'm so glad Hermione has her magic back. I've really enjoyed your story. I like what you've come up with based on the prompt. I hope she does go ahead and remove her memory charm. Her sibling could very well be a witch or wizard, hmm. Also, I can't wait to see what's been happening in Harry and Ron's lives. Great story. I also like your playful Severus.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thank you for your kind comments, Flittterkat! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thank you for your kind comments, Flittterkat! :)

0/10

Rowane

I can see so many possibilities with Hermione's returned and expanded powers...good springboard. Between her newly returned powers and her decision concerning her parents...you've really opened the door to developing her character and maturity. And the deepening friendship between Hermione and Severus is at a very believable pace. Once again, an really enjoyable chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thank you,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Thank you,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

. :)

10/10

Anonymous

Pink fluffy slippers?  That's not right!

Best chapter yet.  I like the fake wand thing.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Harrods is a great place. You should go there sometime! :)

10/10

Anonymous

But do you really think Severus would waggle his eyebrows suggestively??? 

well, maybe he would if he'd changed his ways, i suppose.
good chapter.

Author's Response: Miy Sev does; does yours? Thanks for reviewing, oh Queen of Wicked Fun! :)

rdholmantx's response: OMG you know who i am!!!!

10/10

Anonymous

Oh and you spelled favors wrong.  Did you know that?  ?

Author's Response:

Haha! You have such a great sense of humoUr! :P



rdholmantx's response:





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10/10

debjunk

Yay, she's back.  (Jumps around and does the happy dance.)  What a dilemma.  I think if it were me, I would leave them be.  They seem so happy, and if they truly would feel obliged to return to their old life, that would probably not be for the best.It's so nice of Severus to help her out in all of this.  He is being quite a good friend.  (Loved her comment about the jeans.) Lol

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Just imagine how his nice butt would look in tight jeans ... Thanks for reviewing! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Just imagine how his nice butt would look in tight jeans ... Thanks for reviewing! :)

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, I enjoyed that chapter.  I wonder what she will do about her parents.  

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Stay tuned, next chapter is with SW now. Thanks for reviewing :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Stay tuned, next chapter is with SW now. Thanks for reviewing :)

10/10

Anonymous

Will this unresovled sexual tension never be resolved?
Oh, wait.  there isnt any.  They're just friends, arent they?

Author's Response: Well, you will have to wait to find out, won't you.  ;)

10/10

Anonymous



I find it interesting that the eyes popping out of the head emoticon is supposed to be LMAO, and yet, i felt it was appropriate to what Hermione must have looked like when she saw naked severus.

Author's Response: That is true! :D

10/10

Mirlanthiriel

Whooooo! She has her magic back... and then some... Update soon.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well, it's like putting your money away in a bank. When you get it out, you have earned interest! ;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well, it's like putting your money away in a bank. When you get it out, you have earned interest! ;)

10/10

color

Oww!  Wonderful chapter.  Sweet, uplifting, and philosophically challenging.  While Hermione has the power to leave her parents in their new personalities/lives, does she have the right?  Isn't it her parents' choice to make?  After all, they can decide to stay in Australia and in their new lifestyle (and they probably should).Playful Severus is truly enjoyable.  It's nice to see that Hermione's parents aren't the only ones who have relaxed.  I also appreciate that HG and SS clearly communicated that they both want her to continue to live at Spinners End.Hum.  Wonder what Ron's gotten up to?  Has he moved on?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Problem is, as soon as she decides, she effectively makes their decision for them.  So it is a tough one.  I do like my Severus. I think I will keep him! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Problem is, as soon as she decides, she effectively makes their decision for them.  So it is a tough one.  I do like my Severus. I think I will keep him! Thanks for reviewing! :)

0/10

JunoMagic

I think you've come up with a brilliant solution for Hermione's parents. A lot can happen in a year, especially if it's a happy year, unburdened by stress and memories and obligations.I really enjoy how you are developing this story. I can't wait to see how Severus and Hermione will finally develop feelings for each other...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

It will happen. May not be when you expect, but it will happen. Thanks for reviewing :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

It will happen. May not be when you expect, but it will happen. Thanks for reviewing :)

10/10

livvy6

Boy, did I ever get a flashback of Finding Nemo!Pretty cute chapter, liked all the little flirtations and arse patting ;)Livvy

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Finding Nemo. ROFL! You are so right! Thanks, Livvy! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Finding Nemo. ROFL! You are so right! Thanks, Livvy! :)

0/10

Mint Stick

Ooh - so it worked far better than expected!Hermione certainly has quite a dilemma there. I hope a good solution can be found.*giggles at thought of pyjamas with fluffy bunnies hopping around*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

She does.  And she has to make the decision from her 18 year old point of view. Which is not easy. Thanks for reviewing :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

She does.  And she has to make the decision from her 18 year old point of view. Which is not easy. Thanks for reviewing :)

7/10

Literary Fantasy

Sometimes.the simplest solution is the correct one.  Poor Hermione.  It seems like life has been progressing nicely for everyone around her.  Her parents are happy, carefree, and starting a family.  I wonder what her friends will say when they find out that she is alive and that she chose to keep them in the dark until she knew if her magic could be returned?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

You will find out.  Thanks for reviewing :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

You will find out.  Thanks for reviewing :)

0/10

pookah

I hope Hermione won't make the mistake of thinking her parents woukld be better off without her!  Speaking as a parent of  girl about Hermione's age in the story: even if we hwere haing another child and living the good life, we would never not want our darling child back.an interesting turn of events.   Thanks for the update!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Yes, but Hermione doesn't necessarily realise this. She can only see her parents happy and content as they are and blissfully unaware they have a daughter who is an eighteen year old witch!  Thanks for reviewin. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Yes, but Hermione doesn't necessarily realise this. She can only see her parents happy and content as they are and blissfully unaware they have a daughter who is an eighteen year old witch!  Thanks for reviewin. :)

0/10

sunny33

What?  That easy?

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Yep.  That easy. :)

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

Yep.  That easy. :)

10/10

Mirlanthiriel

Oh.... wonderful! I hope she gets her magic back. Will there be lasting effects from the spell? Will she have a recovery period?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

You will find out very soon. Thanks for reviewing :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

You will find out very soon. Thanks for reviewing :)

0/10

geomancer

Oh what a great cliff hanger! But if it works they wont need to be together anymore, when does the romance start? or does it? I still love this story.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

There is plenty of time for romance. Just wait and see. And trust me! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

There is plenty of time for romance. Just wait and see. And trust me! :)

0/10

sunny33

Spanking the monkey?

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

From a website on British slang!

Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)

From a website on British slang!

0/10

cmwinters

Gack!  What a horrible place to have to stop! *flail*Looking forward to the next chapter!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

LOL. What? You wanted more? Hehe.  Thanks for reviewing! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

LOL. What? You wanted more? Hehe.  Thanks for reviewing! :)

10/10

Anonymous



Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, RD :)

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I'm so curious as to see if it worked or not! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well, I suppose you will be one of first to find out! :P

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Well, I suppose you will be one of first to find out! :P

0/10

tinytexans

OOoooOOOOO!!!! Can't wait to see if THAT worked!!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Now how long can I drag this out?  No... tiny... put that big stick away! OK, OK, it's coming! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)

Now how long can I drag this out?  No... tiny... put that big stick away! OK, OK, it's coming! :)

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