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Full Circle
sunny33537 Reviews | 5.4/10 (537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Full Circle
Anonymous
At least Hermione's kept her mouth shut. I hate it when she goes all hysterical. Can we just punt Ron out the window?
Author's Response: My Hermione has learned a lot while running around searching for Horcruxes. :)
Anonymous
You know, I'm a Muggle, but I can't imagine having one's magic stripped and then left out in the cold. *shudder*
Author's Response: A bit like being left nekkid , really! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Wow - I really like how this story is progressing. I know that your choice for Hermione to not tell Harry and Ron is most likely for the plot to move along but I do think that they should know about her being alive. I kind of feel badly for them - thinking their friend is dead but isn't really. That said, I still am really enjoying this story and look forward to an update!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Remember, even if they did know she was alive, they would not be able to recognise her. She is fearful that if her magic cannot be restored that she would never fit in again with the magical community, and is protecting herself to some extent at this stage. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Remember, even if they did know she was alive, they would not be able to recognise her. She is fearful that if her magic cannot be restored that she would never fit in again with the magical community, and is protecting herself to some extent at this stage. Thanks for reviewing :)
Severus can be such a caring man, all he needed was the opportunity and the freedom from Voldemort. Why, I believe he is falling in love..... Rousing himself some time later, Snape carefully lifted his now sleeping charge and carried her up the stairs to her room. Removing her shoes, he tucked her into bed and brushed her forehead with his lips. “Sleep peacefully, Hermione,” he whispered...And of course, Hermione is drawn to Severus. She has spent so long looking forward to the charmed Galleon warming in her pocket twice daily, and each time she thought of him. I loved his reaction when she walked in on him standing in his room clad only in a towel. Then her thoughts really did center on him! Who knew the dour Potions master had a body like that? Just as well he is twenty years older than me, or Ron might have competition. She has so much to ponder, and I understand completely her decision not to reveal herself to Harry of Ron until she knows whether or not Severus can recover her magic for her. I would have come to the same conclusion.Somehow I don't think it will bother her for too long if Ron has found someone else. I think she and Severus have much more in common, have more of a foundation on which to build a life long relationship. After all, There seemed to be a bond of grief and succour they had formed the previous night, which was never to be sundered.I love this story!!!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, that bond will become the basis for a strong relationship between them. Thanks for reviewing, Beth, your reviews are always lovely to read. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, that bond will become the basis for a strong relationship between them. Thanks for reviewing, Beth, your reviews are always lovely to read. :)
oh very lovely chapter I like the idea that Hermione isn't perfect in everything!and the reaction to halfnaked Snape... (I would have jumpt him but...)Up date fast please I cant wait to read the next part
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It's on it's way. At the beta right now. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It's on it's way. At the beta right now. Thanks for reviewing :)
that is the difference in Hermione and me where she blushes, I would have jumped him Oh well she is young after allhow they behave towards each other is really sweet with him allowing her to hug him and just the closeness of it all is wonderful to readI really look forward to more of this amazing story you have my vote
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wow! Thanks, Arabella! Now, there will be no jumping Severus just yet, I'm saving him for better things... :P
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wow! Thanks, Arabella! Now, there will be no jumping Severus just yet, I'm saving him for better things... :P
Anonymous
I like Out Of Hospital Severus. Or Post Spy Severus. Or maybe he's just I'm Sick of Coffee Severus...
Author's Response: He is Off-The-Adrenaline-Kick Severus :)
oh yes...the image of severus in a towel will stay with be quite a while. love this story and thanks so much. i'm looking forward to the next chapter. are harry and ginny married? to each other? has ron moved on? are he and harry lovers? i'll tune in next time!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
By my time line we are only at the end of August here, some four months after the final battle. Hermione left the hospital mid-late July and a few weeks have passed. Ginny is about to start her final year at Hogwarts, so won't be getting married for a while yet. Ron is still grieving for Hermione. Severus in a towel... well I had to throw that in for the reader's pleasure LOL! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
By my time line we are only at the end of August here, some four months after the final battle. Hermione left the hospital mid-late July and a few weeks have passed. Ginny is about to start her final year at Hogwarts, so won't be getting married for a while yet. Ron is still grieving for Hermione. Severus in a towel... well I had to throw that in for the reader's pleasure LOL! Thanks for reviewing. :)
So sweet. I love how he comforts her. :-) Finally hope! A ray of sunshine amidst the darkness of angst!I think her wish not to tell Harry & co about her survival just yet makes a LOT of sense. However, the way she arrives at that conclusion is a bit sudden. I would have liked to see some more of her thoughts ...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for your comments, Juno. This may come up again later. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for your comments, Juno. This may come up again later. :)
Oh silly girl, You'll fall for him hard. and he for her - It's just a matter of time! Yeah.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing, bea! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing, bea! :)
I haven't commented yet here, usually I read this while nursing the baby and have no free hands! But I wanted to let you know that I love how this story is going and am so excited to see each new chapter in my inbox! Thanks so much, and please, keep them coming!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for the lovely review! More are coming soon. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for the lovely review! More are coming soon. :)
That was nice interaction between Severus and Hermione. It seems the war has softened Severus and he can be a nicer person, even funny. I liked the wand flourish. I can understand Hermione's not wanting to tell Harry and Ron. I think it would be harder on all of them if Severus couldn't find a way to restore her magic. I hope he can.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, he has changed somewhat. His epiphany in the ward when he was told of Remus Lupin's death has put things into perspective for him. He is learning to live again, and enjoy it. His basic personality is the same, but in saving Hermione he has found his reason for living which makes their relationship special. Thanks for reviewing, deb. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, he has changed somewhat. His epiphany in the ward when he was told of Remus Lupin's death has put things into perspective for him. He is learning to live again, and enjoy it. His basic personality is the same, but in saving Hermione he has found his reason for living which makes their relationship special. Thanks for reviewing, deb. :)
Mmmmmm... lovely.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Mmmmmm... thanks! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Mmmmmm... thanks! :)
Ah the easy part is over (finding each other) now all they need is to find a cure you are brilliant
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Awww, thanks, sweetie! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Awww, thanks, sweetie! :)
How frustrating.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL, wasn't it? :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL, wasn't it? :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Nice cheerleader! I like her!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Nice cheerleader! I like her!
I love how you used Potter Place in this chapter, even if its a strange place. (hm which one is stranger, I wonder)lol
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It's a silly place Camelot Potter Place, but let's go there! Thanks for the review. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It's a silly place Camelot Potter Place, but let's go there! Thanks for the review. :)
this is so intriguing keeps me wondering whats next so i will go see
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I try to keep you on your toes. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I try to keep you on your toes. :)
Oh man another awesome chapter I so need to read more goijng now
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Keep it up. Thanks for reviewing! ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Keep it up. Thanks for reviewing! ;)
This is going to be a great because chapter is a super start.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, Arabella! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, Arabella! :)
Yippee! I was so very glad when he revealed himself to Hermione and then offered to take her home with him - I can only imagine the joy Hermione must have felt!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
The relief too, I would imagine! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
The relief too, I would imagine! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Vety good chapter look forward to mroe soon I hope
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Will be posted very soon I hope. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Will be posted very soon I hope. Thanks for reviewing :)
Great chap! I am so happy they have found eachother!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm happy, you are happy. Thanks for reviewing. Chap 7 is with the beta, and chap 8 is waiting to go. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm happy, you are happy. Thanks for reviewing. Chap 7 is with the beta, and chap 8 is waiting to go. :)
"But Hermione Granger isn’t dead!""That was what had been nagging at his mind for weeks, the unfinished task he could not remember. His life was no longer meaningless – he had a witch to save."I can't tell you how happy I am!!! Severus has remembered, and now he has a reason to live — to truly live. This is his mission now! He has a purpose...Hermione felt the warming of the charmed Galleon she carries and she now feels hope...There is something about having a purpose and having hope that energizes our kind, Wizard or Muggle, and now both of my favorite characters, together, have become energized!This is a great story! Very well done!! Lots and lots of points to your House!!!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wow! Thanks Beth! I'm delighted you are enjoying my story! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wow! Thanks Beth! I'm delighted you are enjoying my story! :)
Sweet! I am so glad that Severus finally remembered. I'm now bouncing in my seat, wishing there was more!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Don't bounce too hard, you will fall off! More is on the way. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Don't bounce too hard, you will fall off! More is on the way. :)