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Full Circle
sunny33537 Reviews | 5.4/10 (537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Full Circle
Oh! Wake up, Severus!!!!!! There's a girl out there needs helping!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
There is indeed. Thanks for reveiwing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
oops, reviewing, I meant
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
There is indeed. Thanks for reveiwing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
oops, reviewing, I meant
Poor Hermione. Maybe now she'll get out and fend for herself. This still look grave for her though. I'm glad Sev woke up. The first word he spoke was Granger? Interesting. Maybe he'll get better and go find her and help her... I hope.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Keep sending him those vibes; he needs all the help he can get! Thanks for your review :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Keep sending him those vibes; he needs all the help he can get! Thanks for your review :)
Very interesting. I hope that all ends well. I can't wait to read more!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you for the review, the next chapter is at the beta now. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you for the review, the next chapter is at the beta now. :)
That was wonderful~
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you for that :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you for that :)
MORE MORE!! Can't wait for more!! Great start. Poor, Hermione!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Coming, coming!! Thanks tex!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Coming, coming!! Thanks tex!
What a strong sence of evil, horror and loss. You have started to weave a very intrigueing story that has really cought my attention, I can't wait to see where you take it.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
She has a long way to go before she is whole again, that is all I am going to say! Thank you for your kind review and stars.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
She has a long way to go before she is whole again, that is all I am going to say! Thank you for your kind review and stars.
How awful and disturbing to have everything you know and love stripped from you in an instant. That is indeed a fate worse than death.How will she survive without her magic, not knowing where she is or not having any money. And where are the boys??
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
By my reckoning, they are in Hogwarts by now finding those last Horcruxes, by themselves as I have nabbed Hermione! I am trying to make this DH compliant, except for the absence of Hermione at the Final Battle. Thank you for your review :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
By my reckoning, they are in Hogwarts by now finding those last Horcruxes, by themselves as I have nabbed Hermione! I am trying to make this DH compliant, except for the absence of Hermione at the Final Battle. Thank you for your review :)
Brilliant start - I'm looking forward to more!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, pretty stars, more coming! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, pretty stars, more coming! :)
Great beginning, a little disturbing, but very good. To be so alone and afraid, and not be able to speak to anyone about.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I think I disturbed myself when I wrote it LOL. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I think I disturbed myself when I wrote it LOL. Thanks for reviewing :)
I'm so worried for Hermione, but I'm glad that Snape gave her something from the wizarding world. I wonder how she'll get it back. Hm.... Good job!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks Chrissy. Keep watching this space. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks Chrissy. Keep watching this space. :)
Very nice start! I'm quite looking forward to the next chapter. Just a a little suggestion: a few bits felt a bit repetitive, those where Hermione didn't know what was happening (words like undefiniable and unrecognisable are used a lot) maybe show us more of how Hermione is feeling instead (say she's disorientated, time had passed, she knew that much, but how long was any one's guess). All in all a great read though :D Thank you for sharing this.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wow! Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I appreciate them. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Wow! Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I appreciate them. :)
Very disturbing and very mysterious. I take it Severus reappears along the way????? (Pretty please??? lol) :-D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hmmm, maybe, possibly, could do... Thanks for your comments. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hmmm, maybe, possibly, could do... Thanks for your comments. :)
Very chilling description. Good work. I look forward to more.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for that. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for that. :)
This is quite interesting.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Ooh, lovely stars! Ta muchly! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Ooh, lovely stars! Ta muchly! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Intriguing. So many questions. I await answers.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Answers coming, thanks for your review. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Answers coming, thanks for your review. :)
Interesting beginning. Can Hermione survive without her magic? Interesting that you set it up so that those in the cave will recognize her, but if I understand it correctly no one else of her acquaintance will know her any longer. Where does that leave her? She has no muggle history, no school or work record what will happen to her? And what was the galleon for? I look forward to finding out the answers to these and I am sure other questions next time. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Well someone will have to save her, no prizes for guessing who! The galleon will get its minute or two of glory later in the story. Thank you for your thoughts :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Well someone will have to save her, no prizes for guessing who! The galleon will get its minute or two of glory later in the story. Thank you for your thoughts :)
Very good, excellent way to spent 2 1/2 hours.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
That was a marathon effort on your part! Thanks for all the reviews. :)
Well that was a hunky dorey little family group. I know I definately never finished this before. I'm very glad to have re discoverd this story tonight good work Sunny
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, dear. :)
well thats quite a change
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, well, he can't always be a prat! LOL
LOL okay I'm dosappointed in the freinds only thing but the friednship is just FUN!!!!.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm pleased you think so. :)
ahhhh was hoping for more of their relationship before she returns to her life
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It will come. :)
LOL That was priceless LOL
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Was fun to write, too. :)