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Full Circle
sunny33537 Reviews | 5.4/10 (537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
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Okay, unless you have left out a huge detail (like Severus is gay), that marriage is in serious trouble. Someone once told me that it is unreasonable to expect to stay in love with the same person your entire adult life, but that you make sure that your spouse is always in front of you so that when you do fall in love again, it is with the person you married. It looks like Severus was in front of Hermione. Do they realize it yet?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
People change as time goes on. Relationships change. Ron will sort it out, in my story he is a good bloke! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
People change as time goes on. Relationships change. Ron will sort it out, in my story he is a good bloke! :)
Trust you? You married off poor Hermione to that idiot Ron. Hmph! I hope you're planning on making that up to us! ;) Thanks for your work!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hehe. Knew some people would feel like that. I definitely will make it up to you, though. Promise! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hehe. Knew some people would feel like that. I definitely will make it up to you, though. Promise! :)
I'm a big HGSS fan but now I can't see Uncle Sev breaking up the family.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
He wouldn't, but that doesn't mean it won't be resolved. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
He wouldn't, but that doesn't mean it won't be resolved. Thanks for reviewing. :)
OMG – heartache ahead...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Not necessarily. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Not necessarily. :)
Ok, true...(hangs head in shame). Your chapter covered a lot of territory, I'm glad Hermione's life is working out for her. Severus certainly "seems" happy as well. I've always believed friendship is the basis of every happy relationship and you have to be able to talk with your partner. Lovely chapter, can't wait for the next installment.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for the review, Flittterkat! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for the review, Flittterkat! :)
I just can't see Hermione ever marrying Ron.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I actually agree with you totally, but I wanted the challenge of keeping the epilogue plausible. It will all turn out ok in the end. I believe in happy endings! :)
Response from JunoMagic (Reviewer)
I think you've done extremely well in keeping as much of that awful epilogue as possible. (Without switching the paternity of Rose and Hugo, which is what I keep doing in my own stories.) So, yay you!Oh, and I forgot to say how much I adored seeing Severus softer and more content!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I actually agree with you totally, but I wanted the challenge of keeping the epilogue plausible. It will all turn out ok in the end. I believe in happy endings! :)
Response from JunoMagic (Reviewer)
I think you've done extremely well in keeping as much of that awful epilogue as possible. (Without switching the paternity of Rose and Hugo, which is what I keep doing in my own stories.) So, yay you!Oh, and I forgot to say how much I adored seeing Severus softer and more content!
Keep reading? Well give us more to read! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
'Tis in the queue! Thanks for the review! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
'Tis in the queue! Thanks for the review! :)
She definitely deserves to be hexed for even mentioning Umbridge. Have you gone insane? And what if I don't drink? (Which I don't.) How am I supposed to calm myself after such an affront to my senses? Is there another chapter for me to ease myself with? No! I'll be waiting, oh, I'll be waiting.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Put that wand away, deb, or you will have to sit on the naughty chair with Severus! Hang on, that's not much of a punishment. Next chapter is in the queue! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Put that wand away, deb, or you will have to sit on the naughty chair with Severus! Hang on, that's not much of a punishment. Next chapter is in the queue! Thanks for reviewing. :)
You made me cry, and not for the good reasons.I'll not start looking for you yet, you've got amnesty from the governor until the next update.That really did come out of the blue, good job.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
*waving white flag* Forgive me. Next chapter will be up soon. Hopefully will redeem me! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
*waving white flag* Forgive me. Next chapter will be up soon. Hopefully will redeem me! :)
I'm going to remain optimistic about an eventual NON-platonic relationship. Once Hermione works through her relationship with Ron and has a chance to 'grow up' a little; and once Severus gets used to not having to remain aloof and on guard all the time -- well, who knows what could happen?Looking forward to more.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Ooh. You're good! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Ooh. You're good! :)
YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING! PLATONIC! IT FLET PLATONIC? I will admit I liked Hermione's solution for her parents. A lot sad and it's got to hurt, (not that she showed any) but it was for the best.No sparks at all, huh? If you hook her up with Ron, I'm taking back all my stars!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. Just have a bit of faith, bea! Read ALL the next chapter... ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. Just have a bit of faith, bea! Read ALL the next chapter... ;)
Well, i'd love to have a lie-in and read more! please give us more chapters sooooon!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Coming! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Coming! :)
So, she's as powerful as Dumbledore, maybe more so? er, ok.I feel sorry for her about her parents. Wonder what she'll do?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
She will make the decision that seems best to her at the time. Thanks for reviewing, bea! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
She will make the decision that seems best to her at the time. Thanks for reviewing, bea! :)
This was a hard chapter for me. I'm not worried about the no spark between SS/HG, as this feels like it will eventually be an SS/HG. I just really hate that she would do this to her parents. They deserve to know the truth, and wow, never to have a sibling relationship with the baby they never thought they could have?? So much has been taken from them: their daughter, their trade, their family history. Just... ah, I dunno. I hope she changes her mind and tells them.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
What can I say? She is nineteen. I think her viewpoint would be different from someone who is a parent themselves. She sees her parents as happier than they have ever been before and doesn't want to risk ruining that for them. I agree that knowing the truth would be the best for them, but having dealt with a lot of girls of her age, I am not sure they would think that way. Thanks for reviewing, SW! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)
I hear ya. I know how young girls can be and think. It's just that I don't put Hermione in class with most girls her age. You can't please everyone, doll.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
What can I say? She is nineteen. I think her viewpoint would be different from someone who is a parent themselves. She sees her parents as happier than they have ever been before and doesn't want to risk ruining that for them. I agree that knowing the truth would be the best for them, but having dealt with a lot of girls of her age, I am not sure they would think that way. Thanks for reviewing, SW! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)
I hear ya. I know how young girls can be and think. It's just that I don't put Hermione in class with most girls her age. You can't please everyone, doll.
Oooo...what a twist. Now that's definitely a cliffhanger. And a good job handling Hermione's parent's life in Australia. Loving the story...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. More coming soon. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. More coming soon. :)
I rather like their relationship. I would like it to turn romantic, but still.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I like it too. I think it is where it should be at the moment. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I like it too. I think it is where it should be at the moment. Thanks for reviewing. :)
I bet you are being sneaky and there is a "happy romantic" ending for Hermione and Snape. Even if there isn't, the banter back and forth between the friends is amazing and you write it very well.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hehe. I believe in happy endings. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hehe. I believe in happy endings. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Sacrilege! ;-)Well, I can still hope that there aren't any sparks with Ron either... *is forever optimistic*
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
*snigger* wait and see, dear! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
*snigger* wait and see, dear! :)
okay, okay. *breathes deeply* i'll trust you. but my patience is not unending...be warned! loved their bandanage(sp?) and loved the update...for the most part. thanks so much and remember...i'll be waiting.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Keep breathing. Next chapter is on it's way and will help. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Keep breathing. Next chapter is on it's way and will help. :)
What! No sparks? Surely you jest!!! Well, they have plenty of time to realize how much they mean to each other.Will Hermione find that Ron had formed an attachment to another witch and no longer have "those kinds of feelings" for her?Will Severus find that he is, indeed, completely attracted to Hermione? Were his remarks to Hermione about his feelings toward her not a true reflection of his need for her? Was he only trying to make it easier for her to feel comfortable around him while she connects with younger wizards to find "that special relationship" that denotes a love capable of being sustained over a lifetime?I think Severus really feels very strongly for Hermione. I think he loves her in every sense of the word! I think he wants her for his own for forever! But maybe that's just me, see... I KNOW that they will be happiest when they are together. Great story!!!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They are being completely honest with each other. But don't forget feelings can change with time, so don't give up hope. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They are being completely honest with each other. But don't forget feelings can change with time, so don't give up hope. :)
Hooray, not all stories must have Snape and Hermione in lurve. He is correct that she is far too young and inexperienced. She's turning nineteen! she should have a handful, or more, of young admirers buzzing around her like bees. I like the way this is going in that area.BUT I am fairly sure that her making her parents' decision for them will return to bite her in the butt someday. (if she leaves them like they are) and I bet they will be furious if they later find out they've lost years of having Hermione in their lives.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hopefully it won't, unless the memory charm fails. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hopefully it won't, unless the memory charm fails. Thanks for reviewing! :)
HA!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. :)
Hooray! Hermione has her magic back in spades! And Severus got her a toy wand... love that idea.I was surprised to find that Mr and Mrs Granger (aka the Wilkins) are expecting a baby. Will it, too, be a little witch or wizard? LOTS of possibilities there! In Chapter Ten, when they were talking in the kitchen after Severus had found out that Hermione had realized that he was wanking in his room, she had said, "But, seriously, I suppose it is like finding out your parents are still having sex. You know it happens, but you really don’t want to think about it." Now she had confronted that scenario in the present time. She is going to have a little brother or sister.Bruce, the wizard in the Brisbane pub, has just shown them to a room... they're sharing a room, if not exactly a bed. But can that be far behind?Great chapter, Hidden!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I knew I was going to make her mum pregnant when I wrote chapter ten, so it was a wee hint! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I knew I was going to make her mum pregnant when I wrote chapter ten, so it was a wee hint! :)
Dolores Umbridge? Bite your tongue Hermione Granger! LOL, great chapter. Well, I have to admit, I am disappointed there were no sparks but, he's right. She is young, even if she is the brightest witch of her age. So I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings. Thanks for the wonderful story.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for the wonderful review! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for the wonderful review! :)
That was wonderful. I have a a big grin on my face. She's too young, there is too much going on in her life, and she is dependent on him. It all fits. I think this chapter was perfect.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Aww, thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Aww, thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
! :)