Full Circle
sunny33537 Reviews | 5.4/10 (537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Full Circle
Your story is wery interesting and well written . I am following it from the start . I hope that will develop an interesting relationship between them in the end. Update soon .
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, they will develop a relationship. Thanks for reviewing:)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, they will develop a relationship. Thanks for reviewing:)
Update Soon!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
will do. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
will do. Thanks for reviewing! :)
I know I read this before but I very much enjoyed it the second time around.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you. :D
Love this story!!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing! :)
Now I can't help but wonder how shocked poor Severus would be if he googled himself. ;-)Lovely interaction between him and Hermione, and it's good to see that a start has been made on the research.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm pleased you like their interaction. Writing their dialogue is fun! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm pleased you like their interaction. Writing their dialogue is fun! :)
That's great! Very natural interaction with Hermione. Severus has planned well for his privacy.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thaks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thaks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
! :)
Severus is a bit slow, the patronus changing from a doe to a otter... hmm I wonder what that means? :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Ahh... but did I say what it had changed too? Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kelly! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Ahh... but did I say what it had changed too? Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kelly! :)
K, I don't understand her rational for not seeing Harry and Ron? So they wouldn't recognise her, but Servus could explain the situation.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Maybe she will change her mind, maybe she won't. Maybe she is still not thinking rationally. Maybe she can't cope with more than one person reminding her of all she has lost? Thanks for reviewing, you ask thoughtful questions! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Maybe she will change her mind, maybe she won't. Maybe she is still not thinking rationally. Maybe she can't cope with more than one person reminding her of all she has lost? Thanks for reviewing, you ask thoughtful questions! :)
Why wouldn't he take her to her friends? I mean sure they won't recognize her but he could tell them what happened to her. Continuing on....
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
But where's the fun in that? How can I develop a nice relationship between them if he has to share? :PDammit, the plot bunny made me write that!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
But where's the fun in that? How can I develop a nice relationship between them if he has to share? :PDammit, the plot bunny made me write that!
I wonder what the point of giving her the galleon was in the first place?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hope. It was to give her hope. He was aware that she would eventually doubt herself. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Hope. It was to give her hope. He was aware that she would eventually doubt herself. :)
Severus was a bit slow on that. Continuing on...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Yes, do stay away from Potter Place.... they'll make you fall in love with Severus. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL, 'tis a dodgy place, for sure!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL, 'tis a dodgy place, for sure!
LOL I would questing the kind of care SEverus was getting if they didn't shave him for weeks - lazy witch nurses!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Perhaps they thought a bit of stubble was sexier? Maybe they were Miami Vice fans? - the Wizarding version of course (MoM Vice!) :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Perhaps they thought a bit of stubble was sexier? Maybe they were Miami Vice fans? - the Wizarding version of course (MoM Vice!) :)
And the story progresses. Just one thing I wanted to point out. I got a little confused on who was actually speaking in the coversation about Hermione ( refering to Psych ward employees).
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Sorry about that. I hate a list of "he said, she said etc." I had hoped that the dialogue itself would give enough clues as to who was speaking, and to whom. Perhaps it was not clear enough. My bad! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Sorry about that. I hate a list of "he said, she said etc." I had hoped that the dialogue itself would give enough clues as to who was speaking, and to whom. Perhaps it was not clear enough. My bad! Thanks for reviewing. :)
So she takes the potion, but it effects those who have not taken it either??? Little confused... continuing on.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
You are smarter than you think, Kelly! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
You are smarter than you think, Kelly! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Great interactions between Hermione and Severus. I'm glad she's not one bit afraid of him. He needs someone to Molly him IMHO. What's his Patronus now?!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Errmmm... I haven't decided yet. Any suggestions? Thanks for the review! :)
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
Oh, an otter of course! Just kidding. Such a wimpy, but cute Patronus would never fit him. How about a dragon, a phoenix, a cougar, a bat, lol. A lion would be ironic. Okay, I've had my fun.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Errmmm... I haven't decided yet. Any suggestions? Thanks for the review! :)
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
Oh, an otter of course! Just kidding. Such a wimpy, but cute Patronus would never fit him. How about a dragon, a phoenix, a cougar, a bat, lol. A lion would be ironic. Okay, I've had my fun.
Severus had a remarkably productive day! With Lucius' books and Albus' Pensieve, Severus and Hermione are set to begin their research. I'm sure there will be times when it will seem like "three steps forward and two steps back," but end the end they cannot fail... not when Severus has his mind made up!And I think he loves her a lot.It was good to see him return to Hogwarts even if only for a short visit to see Minerva and visit the library. That had to be a chilling memory to confront, and I'm happy for him that he prevailed. One less thing to have to fear confronting.I'm enjoying your tale so much!!!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They are ready to get started, but all may not be as it seems. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They are ready to get started, but all may not be as it seems. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Great!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks! :)
i love this story! thanks so much and i look forward to all you have to offer.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, kimjo! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks, kimjo! :)
I laughed at so many lines this time around! One of my favorites was Severus' horrified: “Do not tell me any more. I do not need to know what other secrets of mine are available to be Googled!” 
Liked that he told the truth as much as possible, it always seems the smarter way to go especially for a 'professional spy'. 
Looking forward to the next! 
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I had so much fun with this chapter! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I had so much fun with this chapter! Thanks for reviewing. :)
I love that your Severus knows about google-- wonder what a vanity seach would find. Are you sure Lucius is reformed? No plotting or plans to grab someone else's powers? Anyway, love the story!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I wonder, too! Thanks for the review :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I wonder, too! Thanks for the review :)
I've been following this story since the beginning and really enjoying it. I like the changes in Severus post-Voldemort and your portrayal of both him and Hermoine. I look forward to future installments, keep up the great work!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. I am trying to soften him up a bit without losing his essential Snapeness. Hope it's working! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. I am trying to soften him up a bit without losing his essential Snapeness. Hope it's working! :)
I just read this peace and enjoyed it a lot! There's a lot of love hanging in the air :). I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks you for your review :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks you for your review :)
Oh, how lovely. But I want MORE. So much more. :-)It's so good to see Hermione no longer alone and lonely, but hopeful and happy-ish.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
more is on it's way soon. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
its its its!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
more is on it's way soon. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
its its its!
Excellent place to pause their research! I like that the Malfoys do seem to truly be trying to clean up their acts.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Well, it is about time the Malfoys took responsibility for their actions and contributed to society. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Well, it is about time the Malfoys took responsibility for their actions and contributed to society. Thanks for reviewing :)