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Full Circle
sunny33537 Reviews | 5.4/10 (537 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
Hermione is captured by Death Eaters just before the Final Battle. Voldemort forces her to take an ancient potion he has been experimenting with, which effectively transforms her into a Muggle. Bereft of all but her memories, how does she react?
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Full Circle
That was a lovely chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you! :)
I am enjoying this story very much, it is much more light hearted than many other stories about this pairing. I did notice a flaw however, how could she have cast an ampliflying charm on his bedroom door? She is incapable of performing magic and has no wand. Keep up the great work!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, that has been pointed out by two other clever reviewers. I have fixed it now. Thanks for your input! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, that has been pointed out by two other clever reviewers. I have fixed it now. Thanks for your input! :)
Hi,I like this story very much and it is always a joy to see anther chapter appear!! But in this chapter there is a error that you must correct. Hermione have lost her abilities right? But, in the first paragraph you made her use a charm... Maybe she could have use a WWW product or some muggle trick instead? That for you to correct as you see fit, just some suggestions to help! Hope to see another great chapter soon!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
OMG you are right! I will have to have her put her ear against the door instead. Thank you! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
All fixed :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
OMG you are right! I will have to have her put her ear against the door instead. Thank you! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
All fixed :D
Yay! They're awake!!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Alive and kicking! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Alive and kicking! :)
I loved the bit about the house at Grimmauld Place... very poetic, colourful, and humorous! Great chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks! :)
Oh my goodness, that was heartbreaking.*off to read the next*
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It was. Imagine if you only discovered magic at 11, and then just when you were coming into your full power, it was stripped? Thaks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
It was. Imagine if you only discovered magic at 11, and then just when you were coming into your full power, it was stripped? Thaks for reviewing! :)
spanking the monkey. ROFLMAO!You know, they had best start lusting openly for each other or they will just be friends. There is a window of opportunity where familiarity decreses the chance for romance. I hope the next chapter will have some sexual tension, not just joking about with friends, at least that is my wish.Thanks!Livvy
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
You are very perspicacious, my dear Livvy! Trust me! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from livvy6 (Reviewer)
Okay, I had to look that word up. I swear, one of the perks of writing fanfiction is that I have learned so many new words. Now that I know the definition, I'm sooo ready for the next chapter.Thanks!Livvy
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
You are very perspicacious, my dear Livvy! Trust me! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Response from livvy6 (Reviewer)
Okay, I had to look that word up. I swear, one of the perks of writing fanfiction is that I have learned so many new words. Now that I know the definition, I'm sooo ready for the next chapter.Thanks!Livvy
Um...Concerned that he might be unwell, but not wanting to open the door in view of her previous experience, she cast an amplifying charm on the door.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, well, I suppose if he had been emptying the contents of his stomach it would have been obvious and she could have raced in and looked after him. As it was, just as well she didn't! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
OK got it now! Thanks, will fix!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Yes, well, I suppose if he had been emptying the contents of his stomach it would have been obvious and she could have raced in and looked after him. As it was, just as well she didn't! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
OK got it now! Thanks, will fix!
i just love their banter. you have such a talent for dialogue both inner and outer. thanks so much
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Aww, thanks, Kimjo. Probably just shows that I talk a lot LOL! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Aww, thanks, Kimjo. Probably just shows that I talk a lot LOL! :)
This is a fun read. I really like the friendship they have developed. Can't wait for the next update!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I am endeavouring to finish the story before October, so it shouldn't be too long! Thanks for the review :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I am endeavouring to finish the story before October, so it shouldn't be too long! Thanks for the review :)
LOL nope! You can't blame the man at all!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
He is teasing her, just like she teased him! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
He is teasing her, just like she teased him! :)
I love the way you have written the banter between Severus and Hermione. They seem very relaxed with each other and don't even realize that they are growing closer and how hard it will be to part when Hermione is whole again. At least that is how I am seeing it play out. Of course I could be totally off base, but won't it be fun finding out. Thanks for posting, JoAnne
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing, Jo! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thanks for reviewing, Jo! :)
The end of that was really amusing.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I laughed at my own jokes. Is that bad? :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I laughed at my own jokes. Is that bad? :)
I have been reading this all along and I am sorry I haven't reviewed before. I love the concept, and your writing (whoever you are!) is brilliant! And of course it's SS/HG, which means I would read it no matter what!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you so much! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you so much! :)
Beautifully written - your style is vaguely familiar... almost bird-like in nature, and yet grounded. ;-)(That's going to sound REALLY odd if you're not who I think you are!)Either way... lovely chapter. Well done!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
HaHa! Thanks for reviewing, now go read the rest! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
HaHa! Thanks for reviewing, now go read the rest! :)
Bound means it's not gone ... so there might be hope yet! Semi-hoping it'll take a bit more time to find a cure though - enough to have Hermione realise Ron's the only worthy male out there. ;-)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL, you will see! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
LOL, you will see! :)
Oh, that ending was hilarious. I really like their banter together. I'm eager to see what this next trip into the Pensieve will bring. It was nice to see them reassuring each other in the first trip.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They have realised that they have common ground. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
They have realised that they have common ground. :)
Bound has to be better than gone. I hope they can figure it out. Do they have access to other books? I wonder where Voldie found the potion to begin with. Eagerly looking for the next installment.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Voldie was a devious critter. Just remember that. Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Voldie was a devious critter. Just remember that. Thanks for reviewing :)
Purely genius.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Why thanks, Arabella! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Why thanks, Arabella! :)
Nope, can't blame him at all! My husband always says every tease or joke is 50% truth. So, yeah, he was joking... right. :) Hmmm. Friends, huh? Hopefully more!?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Patience, dear
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
, patience! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Patience, dear
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
, patience! :)
????? I just had to make sure I have my glasses on - was this Severus Snape joking? And taking a joke about himself without getting a seizure? Very OOC, but funny...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
This is a postwar, no longer a spy under constant threat of death, no longer teaching ungrateful students Snape. Gotta be a sense of humour under all that somewhere LOL! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
This is a postwar, no longer a spy under constant threat of death, no longer teaching ungrateful students Snape. Gotta be a sense of humour under all that somewhere LOL! :)
Interesting happenings going on here. I thought it was particularly telling that they were able to deduce that Hermione's magic had not been removed but that it had only been bound. It is still there, they just need to figure out what the potion was that DL had used and Severus could brew the antidote.Their shared journey into her memory of the night that Voldemort forced her to drink the potion was quite satisfying to me because it lead to their depending on each other to gain the strength for Severus to observe Nagini and Hermione to witness her suffering Voldy's Crucio curse and being Imperioed to drink the evil potion.Their light banter at the end of the chapter is fun, and I detected Severus' laying the foundations for wooing her as time passes: “Come along, old man. Let’s get you into bed,” she teased.He wiggled his eyebrows suggestively and growled, “Your place or mine, little girl?”For that he received a sound whack on the arm and no help at all in climbing the stairs.“Can’t blame a man for trying,” he grumbled, extinguishing the lights.I love your tale, and can't wait for the next update!Well Done!!!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
And I love your reviews! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
And I love your reviews! :)
Great story. I like the way the characters interact. I'm guessing any romance will have to wait until she gets her powers back.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm guessing you may be surprised. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
I'm guessing you may be surprised. :)
Another wonderful chapter. I especially like Severus' explanation to Hermione his thoughts and feelings after waking in the hospital and how he made the decision to be thankful for living through the final battle. It really humanized his character.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
Thank you,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Full Circle)
. :)