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Hurt
livvy6123 Reviews | 5.11/10 (123 Ratings, 0 Likes, 75 Favorites )
A story in three parts, of three decades, and of three women. Inspired by Johnny Cash's rendition of Trent Reznor's "Hurt".
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livvy6
Member Since 2007 | 17 Stories | Favorited by 655 | 625 Reviews Written | 6,131 Review Responses
I am a grateful fan of Ms. Rowling and of her overwhelming Byronic Character, Severus Snape! Please check out the first chapters of each fic (except for "How Can I Tell You," which is on Chapter 2) to see pictures of the Heroines.
Admins' Note: Livvy6 died suddenly on February 22, 2012, leaving behind her husband, six-year-old daughter, and seventeen stories well-loved by the TPP community. All who knew her—including those in Harry Potter fandom and all of us, here—are richer for having known her.
Requiescat in pace, Livvy. Always.
Reviews for Hurt
It can't be the end!You have to write a part two.I'm glad Severus was finally able to tell Hermione everything,He may still have days where the memories are worse than others.But with Hermiones help(and lips!)he'll make it through.I loved this story and hope you write more.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Thanks! I had to leave it this way unfortunately, because the whole premise was about Severus and the pain and hurt he caused and had to come to grips with it. There isn't a quick fix, so leaving it hopeful was what I was shooting for. Severus thought his life was over, but he found a way to live again.I'll keep what you said in mind, you never know when a plot bunny may bite!:)Livvy
I loved the story! Although I do enjoy angst to a point, I enjoy it much more with a happy ending, so I will look upon this as a "beginning" to healing and good life. :-) Talented writers are far and few between (which is why I don't write) and I appreciate you sharing your stories with us. Keep up the good work! I look forward to anything else you have to offer.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Thank you so much! I am always uploading new stories. I've got "I'll be There" just newly posted. I hope you'll check it out!Livvy
Response from Morganabythesea (Reviewer)
I already did and it is on my update list! Again thanks so much.
yet I do believe that the love of a good woman can make a hell of a difference in a man's life if he is open to that love.What a wonderful way to put it. No easy/automatic answers, but hope and understanding and the courage to move forward.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Thanks. I knew there could no way be a pat resolution to all of the guilt and pain Snape has to overcome, but the point of the story was for him to "find a way". I think, with Hermione, he has a very good chance.Livvy
Brava Hermione. She took a risk, and it worked!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Thanks!Livvy
you go, girl! It's nice to come across a Hermione who doesn't coddle and enable Severus.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Yes! And the next chapter, he is going to finally come clean about everything to her. so, will Hermione stay or will she go?Livvy
You've definitely taken Severus in a different direction and created a Hermione who is able to handle him--well done, you!I loved how she put him in his place (in both the verbal and physical sense)!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
I have always seen canon Hermione as an inventive, calculating, and intelligent young woman far more mature for her years. If any woman can deal with Severus, she would be it!Livvy
Good for Hermione!Severus needed some one to take him down a peg.It's been a long time scence Severus has had anyone stand up to him and it did a world of good.But things should'nt start off to fast,Severus still needs alot of time to get over the past.By the way very good lemmons!I hope theres alot more in the fiture.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Oh yes, this isn't done. THe next chapter will be the one where he comes clean to Hermione and she has to make that decision if she stays or leaves.Livvy
clever girl, she can read him like a book!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
She's not known as the brightest witch of her age for nothing! If anyone can get through to Snape, she can!Livvy
I hope Hermione can heal his broken heart!I fear if she can't do anything for Severus soon he will trellly be lost.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Hermione is a really tough gal! If anyone can reach Severus, my money is on her! :)Livvy
reviewing backwards from chapter 6. Awesome Chapter glad you kept it huge ;)Fav parts"you don't get it at all, and still don't get it?" and "more than lily"when Claudia found the letter sceneNOOOO you killed her (ok so you had to for cannon compliance) J.K. did say he was loved by someone but i don't think she had said who.Thanks
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
It was really hard. I hated having to do that to Claudia. I think that's why I placed the pic on the last chapter of Part 1 with the lyrics to Moby's song "one of these mornings". That song is so haunting and so perfect for how Snape felt after her death.Thanks for reviewing!Livvy
First fan fic that has made me cry and that's a good thing. reviewing backwards from chapter 6. That's how much I like your story... I like how you kept everyone in character and all the extra scenes I would have liked to have seen from the books. Thanks
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Thank you so much! I really wanted to fill in those "missing pieces". I hope you continue to like this fic!Thanks,Livvy
omg, I actually cried! brilliant because I usually don't cry at all (not at movie notebook, titanic, ect...)
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
I am very humbled! Thank you for such a lovely review. I hope you keep on enjoying it!Livvy
I'm not entirely convinced by that mild and tame Lucius Malfoy, but I still enjoy the tale. I'm looking forward to Hermione's confrontation with Severus.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
I only hope after all this angst, I will do it justice.Livvy
Gads! Even I had a flash back the way you described her! Poor Severus. All he needs is a good shagging!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
All in good time! LOL!Livvy
if she wants him she's going to have to take charge, he is too busy running away from his emotions to sort himself out!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
I agree, that's precisely what she is going to do too!Livvy
*guh* All I want to do is give our beloved Potions master a great big hug, whilst telling him its okay to grieve for a lost love, yet tell him also its okay to find love with someone else.
I love your Snape snarky yet also incredibly needy and wounded.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Yeah, that's how I see him best! Well, he's going to get a 2x4 upside the head by someone real soon! I hope that does the trick! :)Livvy
Wow. He just goes deeper and deeper into madness, doesn't he? I'm not sure I don't agree with him; he certainly doesn't act like he's capable of being a good match for Hermione.
But I have faith you can make me believe, Livvy!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Thanks! I hope you liked the conversation he had with Lucius. I also hope you will like the coming confrontation Hermione has with Severus!Livvy
So Lucius spilled the beans. Now, how will Hermione react to that? If anything it may make things worse.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Well, Lucius and Severus will have a couple of talks that will bring a lot of things to a head for Severus. Hermione is going to demand answers and won't let him get away with not coming clean. It's going to be a huge confrontation! I hope you'll like it!Livvy
Now that's the best sort of Lucius, reformed and out to make amends, hopefully he sorts the two of them out!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Yes, I wanted to portray a different kind of Lucius, one that is able to change and be humbled. He will play a part in helping Severus to deal with his emotions over Hermione.Livvy
At least Hermione knows now some things Severus goes through.Maybe now he will talk to her.Hopefully he will listen to Lucis and start telling Hermione about his past.I want to thank you for this story,it is very well written and you can tell that you put alot of thought into it.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Thank you. The next chapter will be a very insightful conversation between Lucius and Severus and then there will be the apex of the story and Hermione will get to the bottom of it allThanks,Livvy
Why do I smell Hermione's come back in Severus's vicinity?
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Well, the next chapter will have Hermione putting her foot down with Minerva over Severus. She sat for her N.E.W.T.s just before the Christmas holidays and she is leaving. Minerva is PO'ed at Severus for acting like a ruddy jackass! But something will happen at this Victory Celebration in the next chapter that will bring Hermione back to her fighting, take no BS attitude. She's going to get this story out from Severus and he will have a formidable witch to contend with! Gosh- I almost feel sorry for the prat! :)Livvy
The sod. I hope Lucius can talk some sense into him. At least Hermione sees a bit of the picture now.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Yes, it's going to get clearer real fast! And Lucius will strike a nerve with Severus.BTW, congrats on the DH Prompt Challenge!Livvy
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Yhank you. that's sweet.
that man needs counselling, badly!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
LOL! I agree!Thanks,Livvy
I felt so bad for Severus in this chapter.I hope you let Severus and Hermione be togeather.Byn the way loved the chapter it just made me sad.
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
Yes, it is sad. I hope you like the next chapter. Hermione and Lucius will have a conversation then things will start to really get rolling!Livvy
Oh, wow what a wanker! He's so emotionally inept and so morally defeated that he's destroying not only her but himself. And Minerva thnks this was a good idea? PUtting them together like this? I surely hope Hermione goes to Minerva to cry so that at least someone who knows can comfort her. Poor girl!
Response from livvy6 (Author of Hurt)
This is the only way for Severus to work this out. Lucius is going to play a role in this as well. I hope you like how it develops.Livvy