Reconciliation
Chapter 12 of 16
jmlane57Harry and Ron manage to reconcile; everyone learns of Luna's new pregnancy, and Harry officially proposes to Ginny...again. But this time, he intends to go through with the wedding!
Reviewed12 Reconciliation
It was late the next morning that Harry and Ginny decided to go visit Ron at the rehab clinic. Of course, neither could be sure Ron would consent to see him, especially now that he knew that Harry was seeing Ginny again, but Harry cared too much about him to stay away. When they reached his room, they looked through the window in the door and saw that Luna was there with the children. She was holding one of his hands while Ron was holding his little daughter Molly with the other. Their five-year-old son, Ron Jr., stood beside his mother trying to get his father's attention.
Ginny recalled that there was a limit as to how many visitors patients could have, so she thought she'd better go in alone, at least at first, promising Harry she would invite him in if she could manage to get Ron to agree to see him. Meanwhile, the best he could do was observe through the door.
She knocked on the door, and Luna invited her in.
"Good to see you, Gin. Oh, guess what I just found out!"
Their eyes met, Luna's asking an unspoken question as to whether or not Harry was with her, and Ginny nodded. Luna looked at the door and saw him looking through, smiling and waving. Harry smiled and nodded back.
"What did you find out, Luna?"
"I'm pregnant again! The Healer says it happened just recently, around two weeks ago. That's just about the time Harry gave me some money and told me to take Ron out for a nice dinner, then come home and have a bit of fun and games." Luna looked at her husband, smiled and blushed, then returned to finish speaking to Ginny. "Who would have thought I would have him to thank for a new child?"
"Harry should be pleased to hear that. Do you think Ron would mind him coming in?"
Luna looked troubled, wanting to bring the two estranged friends back together but not knowing just how to go about it. She loved Ron to distraction, but he was one of the most stubborn men she had ever known, bordering on pig-headed. Until and if he decided otherwise, he wasn't about to give in...especially if he thought he was in the right. It wasn't fair to Harry to shut him out when he cared just as much for Ron as any of them, but the question was how to convince Ron of that.
"I think as long as the two of us are here, and Ron neither has his wand or his hands free, it might be safe enough," Ginny opined, smiling and gesturing to Harry to come in.
His face lit up as he opened the door and began approaching them. When he reached Ginny on the right side of Ron's bed, he slid an arm around her and nuzzled her nearest ear, then squeezed her before kissing her deeply. He kept his hands in discreet places since he was taking enough of a chance doing what he was doing, especially in front of Ron. He wasn't as good with wandless, nonverbal spells as Harry was, but there was no sense taking unnecessary chances.
Finally Ron handed Molly to Luna and said, "Cut it out, Harry! The last thing I need is to watch you and Ginny snogging in front of me like a couple of bloody rabbits!" Even with his lingering anger and hurt, Ron could see that Harry truly loved Ginny, and his heart softened, if only a little, toward him.
Harry reluctantly dropped his hands and simply stood next to Ginny for the next few minutes. "Sorry, mate. I forgot how much it bothers you." He did his best to make his tone properly apologetic. "Hope you didn't have too bad a hangover. I know what swilling six bottles of Ogden's can do to a bloke."
"Why would you need to drink? I thought you and 'Mione had a fairytale marriage!"
"Not nearly as much as you might think. She ... even cheated on me. I also had to basically take care of our girls by myself. Drinking was the only way I could forget Gin, even for a little while...but I did my best to make sure the girls never saw me drunk."
"Sorry that things didn't work out for you...but you have to admit both of you had it coming. Even at that, Luna's been telling me that Gin has even met the girls, not to mention the fact that you've met the daughter you had with her. I can imagine how Draco feels about that!" The laughter prompted by that was music to Harry's ears; he had never imagined he would ever hear his friend laugh again.
"What matters is that things are being straightened out little by little. Mum always did say that life was too short and uncertain to hold grudges, right, Gin?" Ron exchanged a knowing glance with his sister, as she nodded in agreement, having taken Harry's nearest hand and entwined her fingers with his.
"Can't say it'll be easy to be around you for a while ... 'Mione, either, but I guess reconciliation has to start somewhere. It's going to be pretty hard to stay mad at you since I have you to thank for my new child. Let's just say that forgiveness is far easier than forgetting. Have you any idea whether or not 'Mione intends to come see me, Harry?"
"I have no idea, though I suppose I could have Gin ask her. She sees her more than I do nowadays."
"Might be a good idea," Ron agreed. "Just the same, I'm afraid my declaration regarding your girls will have to stand, at least for the time being, because it's just too hard for me to look at them and know that they could so easily have been mine."
"I understand, mate," Harry returned solemnly. "As I've said, neither of us ever truly meant to hurt anyone, and I hope we can eventually become friends again. I've never stopped caring about you, and I never will."
Even as much as Ron didn't want to, he had to admit that despite his pain, anger and bitterness, that he still loved Harry like another brother. Just the same, it would take longer than overnight for them to get back to what they were. For the time being, though, what would it hurt to at least be on speaking terms again, as long as they stuck to subjects of mutual interest, like Quidditch, their work, their wives and families, things like that.
"I've missed you, too, Harry." Ron's voice was almost too quiet for those in the room to hear, but Harry heard it. The next moment found them locked in a fierce, albeit brotherly, hug; the girls found their eyes filled with happy tears at the heartwarming sight.
"I'm also sorry to have driven you to drink again, mate," Harry murmured into his friend's red hair, unable to keep from crying with a mixture of happiness and relief himself. "I should have remembered how much you disliked having things kept from you."
"That just proves that I left rehab too soon last time," Ron assured him. "But I assure you, I don't intend to let it happen again. After all, I've got a new baby coming, and a wife and family to think about."
"Maybe one of these days our respective families can even get together, Gin's and my three and your three," Harry remarked carefully, waiting with bated breath for Ron's reaction. "Or maybe Gin's and my five, depending on whether or not we can get Draco to let the boys join us."
"Maybe. Let's get my third born first, though," Ron joked, lifting his hand so he could share a high-five with Harry, both of the newly reunited friends laughing with sheer delight.
"I'd also prefer to actually get married to Gin this time," Harry remarked, more confidently this time.
"You'd better be, mate," Ron warned. "Otherwise I'll get Fred and George to put their nastiest joke on you!" That was when everyone knew that the worst was behind them. Now it was only a matter of time before Harry and Ron were back where they once had been. Even at that, who could be sure just how things would go between Hermione and Ron when they saw each other one-on-one again? All they could do was keep their fingers crossed, as it were, and hope for the best.
* * * * *
This time it was only a month before Ron was back on his feet, emotionally and physically, although he had to keep taking antidepressants and have counseling. Luna had also been admonished to not keep Ogden's around anymore, that the most potent drink he should imbibe was an occasional butterbeer, and even then, only under strictly controlled conditions. That meant that any others associating with him would have to toe the line as well, if only for his sake.
Once Luna told everyone that Ron was due to come out of rehab, Harry suggested that they have a home-coming party for him...but all made it their business to keep an eye on him, see to it that the most potent drink he had was butterbeer or pumpkin juice. And naturally the older Weasleys were thrilled to hear of Harry and Ron's reconciliation. Now if he could manage to do the same with Hermione, their little circle would once again be complete.
Of course, considering Ron's newly rekindled love for Luna, which had resulted in their new child, it was unlikely that she and Ron would split up and he and Hermione get together. Of course, one could never tell about the future, but there was no sense tempting fate. What mattered was that life was finally settling down again and that the majority of, if not all, the people concerned were happy.
* * * * *
Within another month after this, Hermione had managed to meet with Ron. They reconciled, at least after a fashion, and were able to be in each other's company and be civil to each other, if nothing else. As said before, Ron might have finally managed to forgive his friends, but forgetting was another matter...especially considering the fact the children looked so much like their parents ... almost painfully so.
Ron also finally acknowledged that while he would probably always have feelings for Hermione, Luna was the one he had married and had children with, and therefore she was the one he intended to stay married to. Hermione was somewhat disappointed at this, for she had been hoping that she and Ron could eventually rekindle their romance, but she had to accept his decision and be thankful that they were at least friends again, even if they could never be more.
Harry and Ginny's relationship escalated almost geometrically. It was scarcely another month later that he officially proposed to her again ... and this time, he intended to go through with the wedding. They decided to have their two oldest daughters as dual flower girls and one of Draco and Ginny's sons, David, as ring-bearer. Of course, for Draco to agree to the boy's participating, they had been obliged to invite him, but as long as Draco behaved himself and didn't shoot off his mouth too much, they didn't think there would be any problem.
Hermione even offered to come to the wedding, if only to act as sentry and keep an eye on Draco. While he still wasn't overly fond of her, he did respect her magical abilities. What's more, upon learning that she was to be present at the wedding of Harry and Ginny, Draco told himself it would be prudent to put on his company manners, if only to keep from embarrassing himself or his company in the eyes of the wizarding world. They even gave him leave to invite one guest, which they surmised would be Pansy ... and all would be in for a surprise once they renewed acquaintances...but they wouldn't learn it until the wedding actually took place.
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31 Reviews | 8.45/10 Average
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Oh I am so happy for Hermione, it's good to see she is also making a life for herself.
Now that I've read this chapter, I can say without hesitation that I was right in my last comment about your characterization of Harry and Ginny. You've made Ginny such a doormat that she's ready to jump into bed with Harry even after all of the things that he's done wrong. She has no self-respect.
You might also want to examine your sentence structure. You have sentences that are excessively long; their length does not add to the reader's comprehension. At times, you have misplaced modifiers. Look at the first sentence of this chapter:
<i>When they saw each other again, Ginny wasn’t pleased with Harry’s actions of the previous day shortly after she’d seated herself facing him.</i>
Are you trying to say: <i>As she sat down, Ginny considered her displeasure at Harry's impertinent kiss. </i>
Much of your difficulty stems from the way you try to make your narrator understand everyone's feelings and point of view. If you look at JK Rowling's works, you'll see that we understand the story from Harry's point of view. We don't know what everyone is thinking and feeling, but that doesn't matter. In fact, the story of Harry Potter is stronger because JKR doesn't try to explain every little feeling that the characters have. She is true to the characterization she has created. Harry changes as he gets older, but he is still the same person from Book One to Book Six. JK Rowling's Harry Potter is not the person you are writing about.
I can see that you continue to make Harry the "one in charge" of everything. In your stories, he's always rich and he's always telling everyone what to do.
I had hoped that Ginny would be something like the Ginny we see in JK Rowling's works--a young woman with backbone! My hope was dashed when I saw that once again, you have made Ginny a door mat. She mildly protests his kiss, then she pretty much gives in and accepts all that Harry has done in the past.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Are you sure you've read the entire story? To a degree, you're correct, but if I remember correctly, Harry's parents and Sirius left him a lot of money, and in addition to that, he's earned his share in his work. So he's rich. Something wrong with that? And the people he associates with, he's NOT demanding or dictating everything to everyone; he's asking politely, as with the letter to Luna asking her to look after his girls while he was working. He even offered to pay her.
And I do NOT have Ginny accept Harry back right away. It takes six chapters before he can even touch her, much less kiss her. She told him flat out at the get-go that SHE was the one who was going to be in charge of their relationship and that if he couldn't handle that, that he could leave again right now.
She was even the one who told the Daily Prophet that he and Hermione had returned from America. In fact, Harry's had a lot of trouble in the story, and rightly so...and in Chapter 4, I believe it was, Remus disowned him, basically renounced his position as surrogate godfather (and even took back Sirius's own) until Harry shaped up. If that's not enough for you, so be it. To each his own.
Locking charms? Are we to believe that McGonagall would intentionally hold Hermione against her will? I can't see any of the Hogwarts professors getting involved in a personal matter. It's not at all like them.
Erstwhile wife? Erstwhile means "former" and Harry and Hermione are still married; therefore, Hermione cannot be an "erstwhile wife."
Have you considered using a Beta to help you with your writing problems? While your punctuation and grammar are generally good, you could benefit from someone who could help you with your redundancy issues and with word usage. It seems that you try to use words that are supposedly "educated" but if they're not a natural part of your vocabulary, you will continue to risk using words inappropriately.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Oh really, so "none" of the Hogwarts professors get involved in a personal matter? What about Dumbledore, or doesn't he count? And I seem to recall in the fifth book that McGonagall offered to help Harry become an Auror, despite Umbridge's attempts at interference. Or don't you consider Harry's potential future career a "personal matter"?
No, I don't mean to imply that Hermione would be held against her will; it's just that Harry has been trying to get her to sit down with him to discuss the disposition of their marriage and what to do about their children, and she's been avoiding him. He just wants to make sure she'll stay long enough to get a few important decisions made. Maybe I should have just had the threat made instead of actually carried out.
Okay, and maybe I should also have put 'estranged' instead of 'erstwhile.' Don't worry, I've got a beta who has already mentioned to me about the issues you've mentioned--or at least the majority of them.
Of course, at the moment I'm waiting on the beta'd chapter 6, so there are bound to be changes. Neither have any of the admins said anything to me in regards to things you've mentioned in their messages, and I happen to know that southern_witch is very good at that sort of thing!
My beta has also not mentioned anything about supposed 'mischaracterisation' and I know her style well enough by now to know that she would say as much if she felt the characters were misrepresented in any way. I have read the books umpteen times, so I think I have a pretty good idea how the characters act, think and feel.
In fact, I think I'll even send her some of these reviews and see what she thinks of them. And is there something wrong with representing the feelings of everyone concerned instead of just those of one person? I've written fanfic for 20 years; that's how I've always done my stories and no one's complained about it until now. And maybe the books (for the most part) tell things from Harry's point of view, but they DO delve into the feelings of other characters as well as him. I've seen passages on Hermione's feelings, Ron's feelings...just to name two.
Also, you would do well to keep in mind that at least part of the reason the characters act as they do here is because this is an AU story! People can act differently in AU stories. Maybe it's not precisely as in the books, but the characters are hardly unrecognisable.
One last question--do you have an English degree? I've seen people even with an English degree have no more knowledge of proper punctuation, capitalisation, grammar, spelling or word usage than the average third-grader. (Not you so much, but others I've seen. Makes me wonder how they ever managed to get it!)
Do you really think that your readers needed an explanation of what alimony is?
You repeat yourself a lot when you write. It's almost as if you feel the need to pad your chapters, yet since there is so much redundancy, you actually make the story plodding in nature.
I'm happy to se Harry and Ginny back toghther and fences being mended so to speak. However, I would like to see Hermione get on with her life. She is still a young woman and she wasn't evil, just misguided. Let's see if she can get hooked up with some one so she doen't wind up bitter.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Don't worry, she will be...it'll just take a little while yet.
why isn't hermione watching the kids while harry is off playing house?
good chapters.
more please.
Another great chapter, but what's happening with Hermione?
I'm happy that Molly was able to forgive Harry, but even Happier that Ginny is making him tow the line.
Another great chapter! I'm so glad Molly excepted Harry back into the family. I can't wait until Harry meets his daughter. And when Helen and Lily meet the older Lily.
what a huge mess they have created..
too bad this story couldn't be given to teenagers. maybe they could learn something from it. then again...
great story.
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WOW! This is a really great story. Definitely going to add it to my faves. I can't wait for an update. I just hope it has a happy ending. Harry/Ginny are my favorite.
This is a great transitional chapter, off with the old on with the new. This being off with a mistake that should never have happened to reperaion of said mistake and building new bridges.
So, exactly why is Draco angry with Harry? It seems that Harry's departure gave Draco the ability to pursue and marry Ginny. That would be a good thing.
On the other hand, now that Draco and Ginny are divorced, he shouldn't care about Harry's return.
And what kind of father would lay out his marital difficulties to his young daughters? That's poor parenting!
It seems like their decision to go to America without telling their friends the truth was hardly worthy of two Gryffindors.
How sad for everyone, I can't understand why those two ran off, maybe P.T.S.S.?
awwwww, how sweet! Can't wait for more.
I really liked this chapter. I just love weddings. One question, though... When did Draco become head of Slytherin. I thought he was a business man. Is he a teacher now, too?
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Draco IS a businessman, at least in this story. It's just that he recently gave a hefty financial contribution to the school (remember all the times Lucius did things like that?), enough so that he was granted an honorary professorship at Hogwarts and thus was able to become Head of Slytherin House. He can't always be there, of course--after all, he does have a business to run--but he does drop by several times a week. (On one of those times he just happens to run into Harry and confront him about Ginny, as shown in Chapter 8.) Hope that answers your question.
Hermione caught the bouqet, traditionally that means she is next to marry. Since Ron and Ginney are finally together I am assuming that Hermione's story is going to pick up. I'm happy for tthe newlyweds and can't wait to see more.
ohhhh could Hemione and Draco make a go of it???
Nice chapter, but how's Hermione? Is she and Ginney going to be friends again? Good to see Harry fixing his life back up too.
I really liked this chapter. I sure hope Ron comes 'round soon.