Ron's Discovery
Chapter 9 of 16
jmlane57Ron discovers that Harry and Hermione have returned when the Disguising Charm put on their children wears off while Luna is babysitting. He reacts predictably, prompting Luna to contact Harry and the other Weasleys for help. Ginny even offers to look after Harry's girls while he's away.
ReviewedChapter 9 Ron's Discovery
Of course, with Harry being Harry, his good luck couldn't last forever. It was basically a minor thing which made Ron Weasley more than peripherally aware that his erstwhile best friend and his mate were back, but the fact of it was a major thing for him, especially considering everything he had endured on their account. And what was worse, Luna had aided and abetted him. He didn't blame the children, of course; they weren't responsible for their parents' perfidy, but that didn't make it any easier for him to endure their presence. Wasn't it enough that Harry and Hermione had lied, covered up, and made fools of not only him and Ginny, but their whole family and everyone who ever loved them? And now to learn that Luna had, in essence, been harbouring the children of that ill-fated relationship in his very own home!
He watched, silently seething the whole time, as Luna played with the girls and their eye colour, not to mention their hair colour, gradually changed. Luna had been too occupied with her playtime with the children to notice that the Disguising Charm was wearing off.
"Luna!" he called to her in a voice which summoned her immediately to his side.
"Yes?"
"Are my suspicions correct? Have Harry and Hermione returned?"
"What makes you say that?"
"I just saw the girls' hair and eye colour change. They're Harry and Hermione's children, aren't they? Aren't they?" he demanded, hands ready to shake the truth out of her if she didn't answer immediately...and be damned the fact that his own children were within earshot.
"Ron, don't blame the children for what their parents did. Harry needed someone to look after them. He and Hermione split up recently and he got custody of their children. What did you expect him to do with two nine-year-old girls, leave them home alone while he's working? Whatever else Harry Potter is, he's a good father and loves his children!"
"May I remind you that we have two children of our own that need your attention just as much?" Ron retorted.
"I've never neglected our children, not for a moment. You should know that," Luna threw back. "Besides, Harry's paying me to look after his girls so that I don't have to pester you for spending money."
"And I suppose you think that makes it perfectly all right to harbour them in our home? Bloody hell! Didn't he take enough away from me without putting living reminders right before my eyes?"
"Didn't you hear what I said earlier? Harry and Hermione split up. They're divorced. As in not together anymore. In fact, he's begun seeing Ginny again." Luna knew she was taking a risk telling Ron this in his present emotional state, but she had to at least try to get the fact of Harry and Hermione's marriage breaking up through her husband's thick head.
"What?! That effing bloody bastard! I'll hex him into next year! He's put her through enough without trying to worm his way back into her good graces again!"
"It's all right, Ron. He's reconciled with your folks and they're okay with the relationship. If they can accept it, you can, too. Besides, he was your best friend for six years. Do you intend to throw all that away because of one mistake?"
"Was is right," Ron almost spat, ignoring everything else Luna said. "What about Hermione? Has she been welcomed back into the fold, too?"
Luna had never heard such a mixture of pain and bitterness in anyone's voice but had to tell him the truth. It would only be worse if she didn't and he found out by accident later, just as he had this time.
"From what I understand, yes ... at least to a degree."
"What do you mean,'to a degree'? Either she has or she hasn't."
"She doesn't have free run of the Burrow. Neither does Harry. They have to call ahead, make sure it's safe to come and bring their children."
"Safe?" Ron shot back.
"That you're not around. It's done for your sake."
"You mean, it's done to keep me from killing them both!"
"Nothing you do now can change what's happened, Ron," Luna entreated. "No one knows what you've been through better than I do, and Harry knows how I feel about the whole matter. That's why I didn't name names to you when I originally accepted the responsibility of looking after his children, because I knew you'd go ballistic."
"So you just expect me to forget all the hell they've put me through, all their lying and cheating? I spent years in an alcoholic rehab clinic because of what they did and had to have just as many years of counseling for depression. Even now, I take antidepressants!"
"I know, my love, and I don't blame you one bit for feeling as you do, but you've got to at least try to forgive them and put the last ten years behind you. If you won't even try, you're no better than you believe they are."
"Bloody effing hell!" Ron swore. "Has everyone around here gone stark raving mental? These people have lied to us, made fools of us all ... and you expect me to forgive? For that matter, how could Mum and Dad possibly forgive what they've done to us? And you ... it's obvious you've been just as brainwashed as the others. What can I expect next? Are you going to leave me and run off with Harry, too?"
"Don't be ridiculous! I love you, Ron ... only you!" Luna insisted. "Not even Harry could make me feel any less for you!"
"'Mione claimed to love me too, and look what she did," he reminded her bitterly. "That does it. You're going to tell Harry tomorrow that you can no longer look after his children. I have no intention of being used any further!"
"He's not 'using' me. I'm doing this willingly."
"You're my wife. What's done to you is done to me. And the children of that mésalliance have had the hospitality of my home for the past month without my knowledge. If you don't end this fiasco now, I will...and if I have to step in, it won't be pleasant, to put it mildly!"
"But Harry's got no other child care option," Luna protested. "And if I stop now, I lose the money he's been paying me."
"Damn it, woman, what do I have to do to get through to you? I don't want those children in my house anymore!"
"Beloved, I can understand your grievances with Harry and Hermione but don't take it out on the children. It's not their fault they're here. If you don't want them in the house, I can take them elsewhere for a couple of hours. The only problem with that is that our son has taken a liking to them. If he can't see them anymore, he's going to raise holy hell, and he's got the same kind of temper that you do. And I can't leave little Molly alone, so she'll have to go with us."
"All right, all right! If it's that important to you, keep doing it. Just do it where I don't have to see them!"
"Gladly," Luna returned. "Now, if you'll allow me to owl Harry and explain the situation ..."
"Go ahead," Ron sighed. With that, he threw up his hands and whirled around to head in the direction of the kitchen, yanked open the door of the refrigerator, and grabbed a bottle of Ogden's, charming it open and beginning to drink. Luna didn't keep any more than a few bottles around at any one time and kept them under a Locking Charm, but he knew how to unlock it. Besides, it was enough for him to get good and sloshed, because Ogden's, being 100 proof, had a high alcohol content. With any luck, he'd pass out and forget this waking nightmare, at least for a while.
* * * * *
Luna immediately sat down at her desk upon leaving the room and told Harry everything, particularly the changes that had to be made, not to mention her fears that this could provoke a renewal of Ron's heavy drinking. When she finished writing, she thrust the envelope under Pig's beak and almost literally threw him into the air to send him off.
* * * * *
Harry had had a bad feeling all day during his classes despite his sweetly memorable interlude with Ginny on their mutual break. When Pig showed up as he was teaching the sixth-year Defence class, he felt his fears were confirmed, and when he read Luna's letter after class let out, he was sure of it. He should have known things were going too well to last. He could only hope that this wouldn't make Ron start drinking again; he had enough on his conscience without that. He could even tell that some tears had fallen onto the parchment since there were wet splotches mussing various words here and there, but despite the smudges, Harry was able to get the gist of what it said.
Harry,
Ron found out about your children. We argued, and he made me promise not to have the girls in the house anymore after I insisted that I intended to continue my care of them. I know you need my help, Harry. Just the same, I don't like the risk I took in not coming clean with my husband to begin with. Ron didn't take the news at all well in regards to your and Hermione's return, not to mention your dating Ginny, and I'm afraid he might have a relapse of his heavy drinking.
I make sure not to have too many bottles of Ogden's around and keep them under a Locking Charm, but that wouldn't necessarily stop him. You know how determined he is when he really wants something. If he has any money and sufficient motivation, he's likely to Apparate to the Three Broomsticks and start drinking there. If he does that, I don't know what I'm going to do, because I need to stay here with the children. I love him, Harry; I don't want to lose him. If worst comes to worst, can I call on you for help? If only for the sake of possibly renewing your friendship with him, I hope your answer is yes.
Your friend always,
Luna Lovegood-Weasley
Harry sighed heavily and laid down Luna's letter. Merlin, if that didn't lay a heavy guilt trip on him, nothing would. If Ron had a relapse of his alcoholism, Harry knew he would only have himself to blame for it. All the same, he knew he would be glad to help if Luna needed him, if only for the chance to reconcile with Ron. He scribbled a quick reply and sent it back with Pig after giving him a treat, deciding to give Hedwig a chance to rest. Harry thought it best to be prepared for the worst, so he sought out Ginny and told her to contact the elder Weasleys in order to have as much help available for Luna as possible.
* * * * *
Luna stood up from her desk, wiping her eyes with her plain white, violet-scented handkerchief, intending to apologise to her husband for snapping at him, even though he had started it. Ron was under a lot of pressure and didn't deserve her defying him. What he needed was her loyalty and support; Merlin only knew what he must think of her now. She headed back to the living room, unaware of the nasty surprise awaiting her there.
"Ron? I'm sorry for snapping at you. How about we go out to eat, then come back for a romantic evening together after leaving the kids with your mum?" At the doorway leading into the living room, Luna stopped, frozen in her tracks with horror. Ron was sprawled on the couch, unconscious, mouth open and snoring...and reeking of liquor. The six bottles of Ogden's she generally kept under a Locking Charm were scattered on the floor next to him.
Nothing she did roused him, not even the Ennervate incantation. Just the same, she felt for his pulse and knew he was alive, but he was far too heavy for her to maneuver alone. She needed help and fast. The last thing she needed was for the children to see him like this. She did all she could, cleaning up the floor near him and covering him with a blanket, stating a quick Scent-Masking Charm before heading to the fireplace to Floo Harry, first in his classroom, then if he wasn't there, at his home.
Her head popped into his classroom fire, but she didn't see him anywhere and there was no response to her repeated calls, so she backed out and tried to Floo him at his home. "Harry! Harry!" she called frantically.
However, it was one of the girls who responded. "Luna, what's wrong?" Helen asked.
"Is your daddy home, honey? I need his help," Luna told her.
"He just got here. I'll go get him. Be right back." The girl smiled reassuringly and left the room.
Moments later, to Luna's relief, Harry came running in, Helen on his heels, his forehead creased with concern when he saw the look on Luna's face and the tears on her cheeks. "Harry! Thank Merlin! I need your help! Ron ... he's ..."
"What's wrong, Luna?" Harry asked.
"I had just sent my letter to you and intended to suggest to him that we go out so he could forget his troubles, and I found him passed out on the couch, dead drunk. I did what I could, but I can't move him alone, and we need to get him to St. Mungo's right away."
"I'll be right there, Luna. Meanwhile, see if you can get Fred and George to come help." Harry then turned to his daughter. "I don't like leaving you and your sister here alone, love, but Luna needs me. Do you think you'll be all right until I get back?"
"Of course, Daddy. We'll be fine. Just put a Locking Charm on the door."
A short time later, Harry was ready to Floo to Ron's after a quick kiss and hug for both his girls and admonishments not to answer the door under any circumstances or approach the fireplace unless it was him or someone else they knew well. "Take care, darlings. I'll be back as quick as I can." Then Harry was gone after throwing Floo powder into the fireplace, stepping into it and calling out his destination.
* * * * *
Once he arrived, he found Luna standing over her unconscious husband in tears; when he stepped up beside her, she threw herself into his arms. "Oh, Harry, I'm so glad you're here! This is just what I was afraid would happen. You've got to help me!"
Harry held and comforted her, patting her on the back. "Easy, Luna. I'm sure everything's going to be fine."
Just then, Fred and George popped in, taking in the scene before them with frowns and shaking of their heads. "Stupid git. He should have known better," the former remarked as he and George each took one end of their unconscious sibling and prepared to Disapparate with him to St. Mungo's. They smiled and acknowledged Harry, who was still trying to comfort a distraught Luna. "Mum and Dad are on their way; they'll meet us at the hospital, Harry. So glad you came. We're going to be busy and Luna's going to need a shoulder."
With that, all of them Disapparated, appearing seconds later in front of the hospital, where a concerned Arthur and Molly were waiting alongside a mediwizard and witch with a stretcher. All followed the medical team into the Alcoholic Rehab clinic upon entering the hospital, Harry and Luna following the elder Weasleys and the twins. To Harry's shock and pleasant surprise, Ginny came running up and threw herself into his arms upon their arrival at the clinic.
"Harry! Is Ron all right?" she asked with concern upon releasing him.
"He's alive. Just dead drunk and out cold," he assured her, one arm around her and the other around Luna as the medical team went to work on Ron to get him sobered up again.
"What about your girls? Aren't they alone?" Ginny asked with concern. "Do you really think that's a good idea?"
"I put a Locking Charm on the door. That's the best I could do."
The next thing out of Ginny's mouth was something neither of them expected, but Harry appreciated it very much, nonetheless. "Would you like me to go and stay with them?" She ordinarily would have stayed with Ron and the others, but with Mum and Dad, Fred and George, and various Healers there, he would be fine. Besides, she knew that Harry would tell her all the details when he got back. All of this gave her a perfect excuse to go, meet Harry's girls, and get to know them as she had been meaning to suggest to Harry anyway. She also knew that Harry would feel a moral obligation to stay, if only because of his belief that he had driven Ron to this, even if unintentionally, in order to make sure he would come through it all right.
Harry frowned with concern for all the ladies he loved. "I don't know. You've not officially met them yet."
"Maybe it's time I did. It wouldn't be any trouble. There's just one condition."
"Name it."
"Kiss me goodbye and spend the night with me tomorrow night. It'll be Saturday. We can take your girls to Mum."
"You've got things all planned out, don't you?" Harry teased with a sly wink as he slid an arm around her waist before whispering to Luna that he'd be right back. Once they were out of sight, the two lovers melted into each other's arms for a lingering kiss, each moaning softly at the intimate contact. "Oh my God, Gin, don't tease me. Saturday's far enough away as it is."
"Sorry. Just impatient. Let's get back to the fireplace and call your girls now," she purred, nuzzling his ear and smiling when he shivered.
In moments, they were there; again, Helen seemed to be the one pulling sentry duty. "Helen?" Harry called.
"Daddy? Is everything all right?" she asked.
"I think it will be. I have a friend who wants to look after you until I get home. Not that you can't take care of yourselves, but it'd make me feel better for her to be there. Is it okay?"
"I suppose so," Helen agreed, somewhat unenthusiastically but she didn't argue. "Is the lady next to you your friend?"
Harry nodded and smiled. "Yes. Her name is Ginny, and she's Luna's sister-in-law. I'm sure you'll get along fine." At the other end, Harry whispered to her, "Let me know how it goes."
Then Ginny called, "Harry Potter's quarters!" after throwing some Floo powder into the fireplace and stepping into it, the heatless flame instantaneously transporting her to Harry's quarters and his daughters. Even as she left, she wasn't sure she was doing the right thing, but better sooner than later to meet them. She also made a mental note to do all she could to see that Harry met their Lily at the earliest opportunity, especially if this meeting with his and 'Mione's girls went well. Draco probably wouldn't be too pleased at her wanting Harry to meet their Lily, but she could deal with him. What mattered was that they each got to know their children from their other relationships.
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31 Reviews | 8.45/10 Average
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Oh I am so happy for Hermione, it's good to see she is also making a life for herself.
Now that I've read this chapter, I can say without hesitation that I was right in my last comment about your characterization of Harry and Ginny. You've made Ginny such a doormat that she's ready to jump into bed with Harry even after all of the things that he's done wrong. She has no self-respect.
You might also want to examine your sentence structure. You have sentences that are excessively long; their length does not add to the reader's comprehension. At times, you have misplaced modifiers. Look at the first sentence of this chapter:
<i>When they saw each other again, Ginny wasn’t pleased with Harry’s actions of the previous day shortly after she’d seated herself facing him.</i>
Are you trying to say: <i>As she sat down, Ginny considered her displeasure at Harry's impertinent kiss. </i>
Much of your difficulty stems from the way you try to make your narrator understand everyone's feelings and point of view. If you look at JK Rowling's works, you'll see that we understand the story from Harry's point of view. We don't know what everyone is thinking and feeling, but that doesn't matter. In fact, the story of Harry Potter is stronger because JKR doesn't try to explain every little feeling that the characters have. She is true to the characterization she has created. Harry changes as he gets older, but he is still the same person from Book One to Book Six. JK Rowling's Harry Potter is not the person you are writing about.
I can see that you continue to make Harry the "one in charge" of everything. In your stories, he's always rich and he's always telling everyone what to do.
I had hoped that Ginny would be something like the Ginny we see in JK Rowling's works--a young woman with backbone! My hope was dashed when I saw that once again, you have made Ginny a door mat. She mildly protests his kiss, then she pretty much gives in and accepts all that Harry has done in the past.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Are you sure you've read the entire story? To a degree, you're correct, but if I remember correctly, Harry's parents and Sirius left him a lot of money, and in addition to that, he's earned his share in his work. So he's rich. Something wrong with that? And the people he associates with, he's NOT demanding or dictating everything to everyone; he's asking politely, as with the letter to Luna asking her to look after his girls while he was working. He even offered to pay her.
And I do NOT have Ginny accept Harry back right away. It takes six chapters before he can even touch her, much less kiss her. She told him flat out at the get-go that SHE was the one who was going to be in charge of their relationship and that if he couldn't handle that, that he could leave again right now.
She was even the one who told the Daily Prophet that he and Hermione had returned from America. In fact, Harry's had a lot of trouble in the story, and rightly so...and in Chapter 4, I believe it was, Remus disowned him, basically renounced his position as surrogate godfather (and even took back Sirius's own) until Harry shaped up. If that's not enough for you, so be it. To each his own.
Locking charms? Are we to believe that McGonagall would intentionally hold Hermione against her will? I can't see any of the Hogwarts professors getting involved in a personal matter. It's not at all like them.
Erstwhile wife? Erstwhile means "former" and Harry and Hermione are still married; therefore, Hermione cannot be an "erstwhile wife."
Have you considered using a Beta to help you with your writing problems? While your punctuation and grammar are generally good, you could benefit from someone who could help you with your redundancy issues and with word usage. It seems that you try to use words that are supposedly "educated" but if they're not a natural part of your vocabulary, you will continue to risk using words inappropriately.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Oh really, so "none" of the Hogwarts professors get involved in a personal matter? What about Dumbledore, or doesn't he count? And I seem to recall in the fifth book that McGonagall offered to help Harry become an Auror, despite Umbridge's attempts at interference. Or don't you consider Harry's potential future career a "personal matter"?
No, I don't mean to imply that Hermione would be held against her will; it's just that Harry has been trying to get her to sit down with him to discuss the disposition of their marriage and what to do about their children, and she's been avoiding him. He just wants to make sure she'll stay long enough to get a few important decisions made. Maybe I should have just had the threat made instead of actually carried out.
Okay, and maybe I should also have put 'estranged' instead of 'erstwhile.' Don't worry, I've got a beta who has already mentioned to me about the issues you've mentioned--or at least the majority of them.
Of course, at the moment I'm waiting on the beta'd chapter 6, so there are bound to be changes. Neither have any of the admins said anything to me in regards to things you've mentioned in their messages, and I happen to know that southern_witch is very good at that sort of thing!
My beta has also not mentioned anything about supposed 'mischaracterisation' and I know her style well enough by now to know that she would say as much if she felt the characters were misrepresented in any way. I have read the books umpteen times, so I think I have a pretty good idea how the characters act, think and feel.
In fact, I think I'll even send her some of these reviews and see what she thinks of them. And is there something wrong with representing the feelings of everyone concerned instead of just those of one person? I've written fanfic for 20 years; that's how I've always done my stories and no one's complained about it until now. And maybe the books (for the most part) tell things from Harry's point of view, but they DO delve into the feelings of other characters as well as him. I've seen passages on Hermione's feelings, Ron's feelings...just to name two.
Also, you would do well to keep in mind that at least part of the reason the characters act as they do here is because this is an AU story! People can act differently in AU stories. Maybe it's not precisely as in the books, but the characters are hardly unrecognisable.
One last question--do you have an English degree? I've seen people even with an English degree have no more knowledge of proper punctuation, capitalisation, grammar, spelling or word usage than the average third-grader. (Not you so much, but others I've seen. Makes me wonder how they ever managed to get it!)
Do you really think that your readers needed an explanation of what alimony is?
You repeat yourself a lot when you write. It's almost as if you feel the need to pad your chapters, yet since there is so much redundancy, you actually make the story plodding in nature.
I'm happy to se Harry and Ginny back toghther and fences being mended so to speak. However, I would like to see Hermione get on with her life. She is still a young woman and she wasn't evil, just misguided. Let's see if she can get hooked up with some one so she doen't wind up bitter.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Don't worry, she will be...it'll just take a little while yet.
why isn't hermione watching the kids while harry is off playing house?
good chapters.
more please.
Another great chapter, but what's happening with Hermione?
I'm happy that Molly was able to forgive Harry, but even Happier that Ginny is making him tow the line.
Another great chapter! I'm so glad Molly excepted Harry back into the family. I can't wait until Harry meets his daughter. And when Helen and Lily meet the older Lily.
what a huge mess they have created..
too bad this story couldn't be given to teenagers. maybe they could learn something from it. then again...
great story.
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WOW! This is a really great story. Definitely going to add it to my faves. I can't wait for an update. I just hope it has a happy ending. Harry/Ginny are my favorite.
This is a great transitional chapter, off with the old on with the new. This being off with a mistake that should never have happened to reperaion of said mistake and building new bridges.
So, exactly why is Draco angry with Harry? It seems that Harry's departure gave Draco the ability to pursue and marry Ginny. That would be a good thing.
On the other hand, now that Draco and Ginny are divorced, he shouldn't care about Harry's return.
And what kind of father would lay out his marital difficulties to his young daughters? That's poor parenting!
It seems like their decision to go to America without telling their friends the truth was hardly worthy of two Gryffindors.
How sad for everyone, I can't understand why those two ran off, maybe P.T.S.S.?
awwwww, how sweet! Can't wait for more.
I really liked this chapter. I just love weddings. One question, though... When did Draco become head of Slytherin. I thought he was a business man. Is he a teacher now, too?
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Draco IS a businessman, at least in this story. It's just that he recently gave a hefty financial contribution to the school (remember all the times Lucius did things like that?), enough so that he was granted an honorary professorship at Hogwarts and thus was able to become Head of Slytherin House. He can't always be there, of course--after all, he does have a business to run--but he does drop by several times a week. (On one of those times he just happens to run into Harry and confront him about Ginny, as shown in Chapter 8.) Hope that answers your question.
Hermione caught the bouqet, traditionally that means she is next to marry. Since Ron and Ginney are finally together I am assuming that Hermione's story is going to pick up. I'm happy for tthe newlyweds and can't wait to see more.
ohhhh could Hemione and Draco make a go of it???
Nice chapter, but how's Hermione? Is she and Ginney going to be friends again? Good to see Harry fixing his life back up too.
I really liked this chapter. I sure hope Ron comes 'round soon.