Talks with Rose
Chapter 11 of 16
jmlane57Upon her return home, Ginny has a talk with her and Harry's daughter, Rose, and later on a discussion with him which leads to father and daughter meeting for the first time.
ReviewedChapter 11 Talks With Rose
Her own daughter, Lily Rose (or Rose, for short), was waiting for her when Ginny stepped out. She looked as though she'd been standing by the fireplace for hours, and was tapping her foot impatiently. "Sorry to make you wait, love. I had to help a friend of mine with something."
The girl's expression didn't change, but she nodded in acknowledgment. "I'd like to eat now, Mummy."
"Of course, darling." Ginny turned for the kitchen, sure that Rose knew what 'friend' her mother referred to but unsure that she was ready for questions just yet. It was for that reason that she made sure to busy herself with preparing supper for herself and her daughter (the boys were visiting Draco for the weekend). Once they got to the table and were eating, Ginny still found herself unable to meet her child's eyes, which seemed to literally read her mind.
"Have you heard from your brothers today?" Ginny made herself ask conversationally.
"No, Mummy, but that's to be expected when they're with Daddy Draco." Rose was silent for a time, and then she looked up from her plate and stared intently at her mother...for long enough to make her look up.
"Something on your mind, love?"
"You've been quite ... happy lately."
This time it was Ginny who looked intently at her daughter. "I have. Is there something wrong with that?"
"No. I was just wondering if there might be a reason for it."
Ginny couldn't help thinking, The best reason in the world. Your father and I are back together, but said, "Do you have a specific reason in mind that you want to talk about?"
"No, Mummy. It's just that I heard..." Rose broke off, as if she were afraid of saying too much and getting her mother upset with her ... and even the nine-year-old knew better than to rile a redhead.
"What did you hear?"
"That you're dating again. What's more, that you're dating the bloke you used to be engaged to, Professor Potter, the DADA teacher at Hogwarts."
"I am. What of it? That doesn't mean I love you any less."
"I was told ... he's my father," the girl finally blurted.
"Who told you that?" Ginny demanded, although she suspected she already knew. Draco was definitely overdue for a Bat-Bogey Hex, that was for sure!
"David. He said Daddy Draco told him and Daryl during their week together for their birthday."
"Just because Draco says it doesn't necessarily make it true. He and Professor Potter dislike each other, and they have for years. It sounds to me like he's just trying to start a rumour."
"But you did date Professor Potter, didn't you?"
"Of course, and yes, we were engaged at one time, but it doesn't necessarily follow that he's your father."
"You would tell me if he was, wouldn't you?" the girl entreated, her green eyes pleading with her mother. "Especially since Daddy Draco even once said that you were in love with Professor Potter."
"When we were engaged, yes, that was true, but that doesn't mean it's true now."
"But you do like him. Otherwise you wouldn't be dating him," the girl persisted.
"Yes. I ... like him very much, and I intend to continue dating him. In fact, we're supposed to see each other tomorrow night."
"In that case, will you be gone all night again? I've noticed that's what usually happens when you're on a date with him."
"Quite possibly. Why?"
"I just wanted to make sure not to wait up for you, that's all." Rose was already mentally figuring her next day's dinner menu even as she decided to finish both her non-magical homework, such as math, and her magical homework, such as the Summoning Charm she and her mother had been working on. She wanted to get as much use out of the wand her mum had recently bought her as she could.
Ginny was hard-pressed not to look suspiciously back at her child as she returned to her meal, certain that the statement had been a veiled confession that she suspected Ginny's relationship with Harry had once again become an intimate one. Sometimes it was positively scary just how perceptive Rose was. In fact, Ginny was all but convinced that she was a Legilimens, if not a Seer, and she told herself to have her checked at the earliest opportunity. She also intended to discuss this conversation with Harry the first chance she got.
Mother and daughter didn't speak on the subject after that; however, Ginny was sure that it was still very much on Rose's mind. She would have to get her together with Harry as soon as possible to see how they got along. Ginny prepared for bed herself, feeling it keenly that Harry could not be here with her, that they could not be together as a family as they should be.
With luck, they would be one day; but for the time being, she supposed she would just have to make the best of it and enjoy what time she and Harry could spend alone rediscovering each other. What mattered was that they were together again ... and if Ginny had her way, they would remain together as long as they lived.
* * * * *
Fortunately her dreams took her away into a world of tender love, sweet contentment and fiery passion, so Ginny didn't think about the conversation with Rose again until she joined Harry outside under a tree next to the Black Lake the following day. Once they finally stopped snogging, however reluctantly, Ginny knew she'd better get things out in the open before he heard it from somewhere else...such as from Draco.
"Harry?"
"Yes, luv?" His arms gently tightened around her, his cheek resting on her hair for a time before moving to nuzzle her neck. "Mmmm. I swear, you're delicious enough to eat. I can hardly wait for tonight."
Ginny moaned involuntarily and squirmed. "Harry, I can't think straight when you do that...and I need to talk to you. It's important." The tone of her voice told her companion as much, so he refrained from any further physical demonstrations of his feelings ... at least for the present.
"What's on your mind?"
"I had a very disturbing conversation with Rose last night."
"Disturbing in what way?"
"She says she was told that you were her father."
That made Harry sit up and take notice. "Who told her that?" Before Ginny could reply, however, he answered his own question. "Draco. It has to be."
"More accurately, she said she heard it from one of the boys, who said that Draco told him."
"That big-mouth git. He's going to spoil everything." After an interval of silence, Harry remarked, "What did you tell her?"
"I tried to throw her off, but she wasn't easily persuaded. I suspect that she knows we're sleeping together again, especially since she also said that she knew of our previous engagement ten years ago, not to mention the fact that when we go out, I usually stay out all night. I had to admit to that much, but since I wasn't ready to admit to anything more, at least not at that point, I tried to convince her that Draco was just trying to make trouble for you, since you've always disliked each other."
"Did she buy it?"
"I can't be sure. We didn't talk any further about it. That reminds me: It might be a good idea if we get you two together soon, so Rose can see the truth for herself. Would you be willing to do that after our date tomorrow?"
"Sure, if you think it'll help. But can we get back to snogging now?" Ginny looked up into her beloved's eyes. The hunger in them was palpable as he all but devoured her lips with his hot gaze.
"Of course. I just needed to talk to you about this before we could go any further." With that, she reached up to pull him down to her, and they resumed their extremely pleasurable interlude. This eventually led to their moving to Harry's flat for the remainder of the night...or at least until it was time for him to go meet his oldest daughter for the first time.
* * * * *
It definitely was not easy for the lovers to stop what they were doing and move to Ginny's flat, but Harry was determined to keep every promise he made to her...or at least as many as he possibly could. They showered together (but all they did was wash each other), dressed in fresh clothes, and made their way to her flat as quickly as they could. When Ginny arrived, the flat was quiet, so she thought she'd better check Rose's room to make sure she was all right.
"Rose? Honey, I'm back," she called softly after knocking on the door.
The child answered with a sleepy smile. "Sorry, Mummy. I meant to be up, but after finishing my homework, I got tired and decided to lie down." Ginny looked at her and saw that she was wearing her favourite nightie, a miniature version of Ginny's own favourite. Not what she'd expected to introduce Harry to her in, but it would likely take too long for her to change, and besides, it was late enough that it wouldn't be practical anyway.
"Well, put your nice robe and slippers on. We have company, and there's no time for you to change." Rose nodded and turned back to retrieve said items while Ginny headed back to the living room.
When she caught Harry's eye, he looked around questioningly upon realising she was alone. Ginny answered his unspoken question. "Don't worry; she's coming. It's just that she'd already changed into her nightclothes. I told her to simply put her robe and slippers on and come out."
Harry smiled in spite of himself. If the picture he had was any indication, her hair was likely to be just as messy as his after sleep. He was even considering grabbing a quick kiss from Ginny when he heard a childlike, albeit feminine, voice. "Mummy, I'm here. Where's the company?"
"Right here," Ginny said, gesturing in Harry's direction. "Harry, this is Rose. Rose, this is Harry. And to answer your earlier question, you were right. He is ... your father."
The two smiled at each other and shook hands, unsure of what to say after that. "Hi," Rose finally said.
"Hi. You're very pretty. Every bit as pretty as your mum."
"Thanks. Mummy tells me you look very much like your father."
"That's true...but I have my mum's eyes. Enough about me, though. Tell me about yourself." With that, Harry managed to break the ice, even as he moved to place a tentative hand on his daughter's shoulder and led her to the nearby couch. As they sat down together, Ginny offered to get them all something to drink. By the time she returned with three glasses of pumpkin juice, Harry and Rose were laughing about something he had told her that had happened to him while playing Quidditch, even though Ginny knew he hadn't played in years. However, Rose didn't know that. What mattered was that father and daughter were finally getting to know each other.
"Mummy says that you and Daddy Draco don't like each other," Rose remarked.
Harry's face hardened. "We ... tolerate each other, but that's about it. Mainly for your and your mum's sake."
"Did Mummy also tell you that Daddy Draco gave me his name?"
"She did ... but you don't have to take mine if you don't want to. It's your choice." Harry also recalled the writing on the picture of Rose in Draco's office sitting on his desk. He was frankly hoping Rose would choose to take his name anyway, or if nothing else, hyphenate her present name to "Malfoy-Potter" to please both fathers.
"I was thinking of hyphenating the name at some point, but not right now. Maybe once I start at Hogwarts," Rose speculated. She couldn't help noting that Harry's face had taken on a disappointed look. "Don't worry. What matters is that we've met and are getting to know each other. Oh yes, something else I meant to ask you ..."
"Yes?" Harry prompted.
"Do you intend to marry Mummy this time? She said you married her friend instead last time."
"I did, but that's over now. And yes, I'd like to marry your mum someday, as soon as she's...and you are...ready."
"I also understand that I have two half-sisters from your other...relationship."
"Right. They're just a little younger than you. If you like, you can meet them one day, but I think it would be better for us to get to know each other better first," Harry suggested.
Rose nodded and frowned thoughtfully. "Do you think you could come here again?"
"If you like, but owing to my work and my seeing your mum, I won't be able to do it all the time," Harry warned gently.
"As long as we can spend some time together with Mummy once in a while," the girl replied, punctuating her statement with a deep yawn. The adults looked at each other, suspecting that the child wasn't going to be able to stay awake much longer...and it was all the better for them.
"I think that could be arranged," Harry returned with a smile. "Meanwhile, I think it's time you went back to bed, young lady. It was nice to meet you."
"You, too," the girl smiled. She hugged and kissed her mother, then simply held out her hand and Harry, somewhat disappointed, shook it...then she giggled and threw herself into his arms for a big hug. "Just teasing. Good night ... Daddy Harry." With that, Rose took her leave.
Harry gave Ginny a funny look once Rose had gone. "I'd almost swear she did that on purpose."
"She does things like that on occasion to throw people off balance," Ginny admitted. "She's usually just teasing them, though. If she didn't like you already, she wouldn't have bothered, just said goodnight and that would be it."
"Then may I assume I met with her approval?" Harry asked questioningly as he reached out to intricately entwine Ginny's nearest hand with his.
"I'd say that's a safe bet. After all, she's already called you 'Daddy'." Ginny winked provocatively. "Of course, if you actually marry me this time, we could have more like her."
"Are you trying to scare me off, wench?" Harry threw back playfully, smiling reassuringly at the look he got back. "Don't worry, luv. You couldn't lose me this time if you tried ... and incidentally, I'd love to have more like her...of both genders this time."
"I believe that could be arranged," Ginny returned saucily, reaching to stroke the back of her companion's neck lightly enough to make him shiver. "But as I said, you've got to marry me this time."
"Oh, that reminds me ... I heard from the hospital. They said Ron's settling in nicely, and they don't think he'll have to be there nearly as long this time. Just the same, they've warned Luna not to keep any Ogden's around at all if she can help it, and even to start lobbying the Ministry for anti-Apparition wards on all Wizarding bars."
"Has she told her kids anything of what happened yet?"
"Only that he needs to be away for a while, but that they can visit him whenever they want...within reason."
"What about his work?"
"Luna's made arrangements for him to have a job he can do at home. It may even require him to learn to use a Muggle computer, even if it has to be charmed to work with magic rather than electricity. I've already told her to suggest that he talk to your father about that, since he's a nutter about those kinds of things."
"That's good. But what about your relationship with him? Does he know that you were there, that you helped when Luna needed you?"
"I think he does, but Luna says he hasn't mentioned anything about me one way or the other, so I can't be sure of anything at this point."
"If you can win Mum over again, it should only be a matter of time before you get Ron back."
"I hope so," Harry opined wistfully. "Until then, I'd rather further my relationship with you. Come here, minx." The pair began to kiss, at first sweetly, then the kisses became hot and open-mouthed. Within a fairly short time, though, Harry's caresses turned into merciless tickling, making Ginny laugh and squirm, especially when his wandering hands found some intimate (and very sensitive) spots.
"Har-ree!" she squealed. "Stop that! Stop it, I say! If you don't, we're going to wake up Rose, and I don't think you want her to come out and catch us like this."
"I bloody well don't give a damn who catches us," came the husky retort as he nuzzled her neck. "But if it'll make you feel better, we can move into your bedroom."
"As long as you make sure to put a Silencing and Locking Charm on the door."
"No sooner said than done." With that, Harry deftly scooped Ginny up into his arms and carried her down the hall to her room, which was across the hall from Rose's. Once behind the door, he kept his word, and the lovers resumed what would turn out to be the longest, loveliest night they had ever spent together.
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Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Oh I am so happy for Hermione, it's good to see she is also making a life for herself.
Now that I've read this chapter, I can say without hesitation that I was right in my last comment about your characterization of Harry and Ginny. You've made Ginny such a doormat that she's ready to jump into bed with Harry even after all of the things that he's done wrong. She has no self-respect.
You might also want to examine your sentence structure. You have sentences that are excessively long; their length does not add to the reader's comprehension. At times, you have misplaced modifiers. Look at the first sentence of this chapter:
<i>When they saw each other again, Ginny wasn’t pleased with Harry’s actions of the previous day shortly after she’d seated herself facing him.</i>
Are you trying to say: <i>As she sat down, Ginny considered her displeasure at Harry's impertinent kiss. </i>
Much of your difficulty stems from the way you try to make your narrator understand everyone's feelings and point of view. If you look at JK Rowling's works, you'll see that we understand the story from Harry's point of view. We don't know what everyone is thinking and feeling, but that doesn't matter. In fact, the story of Harry Potter is stronger because JKR doesn't try to explain every little feeling that the characters have. She is true to the characterization she has created. Harry changes as he gets older, but he is still the same person from Book One to Book Six. JK Rowling's Harry Potter is not the person you are writing about.
I can see that you continue to make Harry the "one in charge" of everything. In your stories, he's always rich and he's always telling everyone what to do.
I had hoped that Ginny would be something like the Ginny we see in JK Rowling's works--a young woman with backbone! My hope was dashed when I saw that once again, you have made Ginny a door mat. She mildly protests his kiss, then she pretty much gives in and accepts all that Harry has done in the past.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Are you sure you've read the entire story? To a degree, you're correct, but if I remember correctly, Harry's parents and Sirius left him a lot of money, and in addition to that, he's earned his share in his work. So he's rich. Something wrong with that? And the people he associates with, he's NOT demanding or dictating everything to everyone; he's asking politely, as with the letter to Luna asking her to look after his girls while he was working. He even offered to pay her.
And I do NOT have Ginny accept Harry back right away. It takes six chapters before he can even touch her, much less kiss her. She told him flat out at the get-go that SHE was the one who was going to be in charge of their relationship and that if he couldn't handle that, that he could leave again right now.
She was even the one who told the Daily Prophet that he and Hermione had returned from America. In fact, Harry's had a lot of trouble in the story, and rightly so...and in Chapter 4, I believe it was, Remus disowned him, basically renounced his position as surrogate godfather (and even took back Sirius's own) until Harry shaped up. If that's not enough for you, so be it. To each his own.
Locking charms? Are we to believe that McGonagall would intentionally hold Hermione against her will? I can't see any of the Hogwarts professors getting involved in a personal matter. It's not at all like them.
Erstwhile wife? Erstwhile means "former" and Harry and Hermione are still married; therefore, Hermione cannot be an "erstwhile wife."
Have you considered using a Beta to help you with your writing problems? While your punctuation and grammar are generally good, you could benefit from someone who could help you with your redundancy issues and with word usage. It seems that you try to use words that are supposedly "educated" but if they're not a natural part of your vocabulary, you will continue to risk using words inappropriately.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Oh really, so "none" of the Hogwarts professors get involved in a personal matter? What about Dumbledore, or doesn't he count? And I seem to recall in the fifth book that McGonagall offered to help Harry become an Auror, despite Umbridge's attempts at interference. Or don't you consider Harry's potential future career a "personal matter"?
No, I don't mean to imply that Hermione would be held against her will; it's just that Harry has been trying to get her to sit down with him to discuss the disposition of their marriage and what to do about their children, and she's been avoiding him. He just wants to make sure she'll stay long enough to get a few important decisions made. Maybe I should have just had the threat made instead of actually carried out.
Okay, and maybe I should also have put 'estranged' instead of 'erstwhile.' Don't worry, I've got a beta who has already mentioned to me about the issues you've mentioned--or at least the majority of them.
Of course, at the moment I'm waiting on the beta'd chapter 6, so there are bound to be changes. Neither have any of the admins said anything to me in regards to things you've mentioned in their messages, and I happen to know that southern_witch is very good at that sort of thing!
My beta has also not mentioned anything about supposed 'mischaracterisation' and I know her style well enough by now to know that she would say as much if she felt the characters were misrepresented in any way. I have read the books umpteen times, so I think I have a pretty good idea how the characters act, think and feel.
In fact, I think I'll even send her some of these reviews and see what she thinks of them. And is there something wrong with representing the feelings of everyone concerned instead of just those of one person? I've written fanfic for 20 years; that's how I've always done my stories and no one's complained about it until now. And maybe the books (for the most part) tell things from Harry's point of view, but they DO delve into the feelings of other characters as well as him. I've seen passages on Hermione's feelings, Ron's feelings...just to name two.
Also, you would do well to keep in mind that at least part of the reason the characters act as they do here is because this is an AU story! People can act differently in AU stories. Maybe it's not precisely as in the books, but the characters are hardly unrecognisable.
One last question--do you have an English degree? I've seen people even with an English degree have no more knowledge of proper punctuation, capitalisation, grammar, spelling or word usage than the average third-grader. (Not you so much, but others I've seen. Makes me wonder how they ever managed to get it!)
Do you really think that your readers needed an explanation of what alimony is?
You repeat yourself a lot when you write. It's almost as if you feel the need to pad your chapters, yet since there is so much redundancy, you actually make the story plodding in nature.
I'm happy to se Harry and Ginny back toghther and fences being mended so to speak. However, I would like to see Hermione get on with her life. She is still a young woman and she wasn't evil, just misguided. Let's see if she can get hooked up with some one so she doen't wind up bitter.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Don't worry, she will be...it'll just take a little while yet.
why isn't hermione watching the kids while harry is off playing house?
good chapters.
more please.
Another great chapter, but what's happening with Hermione?
I'm happy that Molly was able to forgive Harry, but even Happier that Ginny is making him tow the line.
Another great chapter! I'm so glad Molly excepted Harry back into the family. I can't wait until Harry meets his daughter. And when Helen and Lily meet the older Lily.
what a huge mess they have created..
too bad this story couldn't be given to teenagers. maybe they could learn something from it. then again...
great story.
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WOW! This is a really great story. Definitely going to add it to my faves. I can't wait for an update. I just hope it has a happy ending. Harry/Ginny are my favorite.
This is a great transitional chapter, off with the old on with the new. This being off with a mistake that should never have happened to reperaion of said mistake and building new bridges.
So, exactly why is Draco angry with Harry? It seems that Harry's departure gave Draco the ability to pursue and marry Ginny. That would be a good thing.
On the other hand, now that Draco and Ginny are divorced, he shouldn't care about Harry's return.
And what kind of father would lay out his marital difficulties to his young daughters? That's poor parenting!
It seems like their decision to go to America without telling their friends the truth was hardly worthy of two Gryffindors.
How sad for everyone, I can't understand why those two ran off, maybe P.T.S.S.?
awwwww, how sweet! Can't wait for more.
I really liked this chapter. I just love weddings. One question, though... When did Draco become head of Slytherin. I thought he was a business man. Is he a teacher now, too?
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Draco IS a businessman, at least in this story. It's just that he recently gave a hefty financial contribution to the school (remember all the times Lucius did things like that?), enough so that he was granted an honorary professorship at Hogwarts and thus was able to become Head of Slytherin House. He can't always be there, of course--after all, he does have a business to run--but he does drop by several times a week. (On one of those times he just happens to run into Harry and confront him about Ginny, as shown in Chapter 8.) Hope that answers your question.
Hermione caught the bouqet, traditionally that means she is next to marry. Since Ron and Ginney are finally together I am assuming that Hermione's story is going to pick up. I'm happy for tthe newlyweds and can't wait to see more.
ohhhh could Hemione and Draco make a go of it???
Nice chapter, but how's Hermione? Is she and Ginney going to be friends again? Good to see Harry fixing his life back up too.
I really liked this chapter. I sure hope Ron comes 'round soon.