Conversations with Minerva & Albus
Chapter 5 of 16
jmlane57Harry seeks McGonagall's help in holding a discussion with Hermione regarding the disposition of their marriage and the welfare of their children. Dumbledore's portrait also offers assistance.
ReviewedChapter 5 Discussions with Minerva and Albus
To Harry's surprise, it was only two days later that McGonagall owled him as to the time of his and Hermione's meeting with her to work out their marital and legal problems. He knew 'Mione well enough to be at least fairly certain that she would not refuse a direct order from a superior. Just the same, once she realised the true purpose of the meeting, she might try to make a break for the nearest door, but if he knew McGonagall, she would use a Locking Charm so neither of them could leave.
It wouldn't bother Harry, of course; this was just what he had been after for some time...a chance to actually sit down with his estranged wife and discuss their options regarding their marriage, children, and futures. It would help a lot to have input from Minerva and Dumbledore's portrait as well.
He managed to get Luna to take the girls, assuring her he would pay her extra for doing so and making sure to place the longer-lasting Disguising Charm on them before she picked them up since the scheduling of the aforementioned appointment would mean they'd be there even after Ron returned home from work. Using the longer-lasting charm was the safest thing to do on short notice, especially under the circumstances in question.
He arrived shortly before the scheduled appointment; McGonagall assured him that Hermione was on her way after her last class of the day, which ended at 4 p.m. They had to allow her a little time to get to the office from the Transfiguration classroom. Harry still had a sneaking suspicion that she might try to weasel out yet again, but fortunately, almost as soon as he thought it, she walked in. It was for this reason that Harry exchanged glances with McGonagall, and she refrained from putting a Locking Charm on the door.
"Harry, what are you doing here?" Hermione looked between him and McGonagall and back again, a questioning look on her face for a moment. Then it dawned on her.
"We've got to talk, 'Mione. You've been avoiding me long enough ... and Minerva agreed to help me."
Hermione sighed exasperatedly. "I might have known. Well, I suppose you're right. Let's get to it."
Harry found it surprising that she would give in so easily after the many weeks of doing almost literally anything and everything to avoid having to talk to him. But he was glad that they would finally be able to get things out in the open and make some important, life-changing decisions.
"Would you not agree that it's time for us to go our separate ways, especially after the last six months and your affair?"
Hermione's cheeks burned and she bent her head, unwilling to meet Harry's eyes for long, but she made herself nod in agreement. "I'm sorry about that, Harry."
"I know you are and I forgive you. Now, I'm willing to give you an uncontested divorce as long as you give me custody of the girls. We can work out visitation rights later on if you like. In addition, since you're working and making good money, I feel that there's no need to give you compensation, such as alimony."
He stopped speaking for a while, just allowing her to think this over. After a few minutes, she said, "It might be a good idea for you to have custody of the girls, at least for the moment. As for visitation, how about alternating holidays, the occasional school function, and their birthday? And I agree, I don't think I'll need anything like alimony. When did you want to go and make it official?"
"How about tomorrow when we both get off early? Then after we get back, we can break it to the girls and go from there."
Hermione smiled in agreement and Harry exchanged a relieved glance with McGonagall and Dumbledore's portrait. It had gone much easier than expected, but what mattered was that it was finally out of the way. The breakup probably wouldn't be as hard on the girls as it might have been ordinarily, since they spent most of their time with their father anyway. "Did you want me to give you back the ring now or wait until tomorrow?"
"Might as well wait until tomorrow. One day more or less isn't going to make any difference." Even now, Harry felt like a great weight had been lifted from his shoulders. After tomorrow, he would be free to plan his strategy for winning Ginny back, although he fully expected it to take some time before she let him close to her again. He just hoped he had the patience to out-wait her. After all, ten years was a long time to wait to be reunited with one's true soul mate. Even at that, it was no more (or less) than he deserved since he had brought it on himself...or rather, they had.
Hermione sighed. "Well, Harry, it was fun while it lasted."
"But the price of that 'fun' turned out to be much too high. I just hope someday we'll be able to live it down," he returned solemnly. They then agreed to meet at 2 p.m. the following day, fly to the Ministry of Magic, and officially dissolve the marriage, while at the same time, make arrangements for their children's future. By the time it was over, Hermione would be "Ms. Granger" again, and Harry would officially be a bachelor once more. Luna would have the girls with her, having picked them up from school, and she would send them back once Harry had checked in with her.
After Hermione had departed, Harry turned back to McGonagall and thanked her for her help.
"Glad to do it ... and I'm pleased it went so well." McGonagall ordinarily wouldn't have been so helpful to one student in particular (or in this case, former student...even one such as Harry). She had always considered it showing favouritism and personally believed in treating everyone equally. But because of Dumbledore's affection for Harry and her own affection for the former headmaster, she figured it was the least she could do to steer the boy in the right direction, if only for Albus's sake.
"Much better than I expected, that's for sure," Harry opined. "Now what do we do about Remus?"
"I'll owl him tomorrow and see if I can't get him to come here so you two can have a real heart-to-heart. Then we'll see if we can't get him to reconsider disowning you. I can't make any guarantees, of course, but we'll do our best."
"What about the Weasleys?"
"I'll owl the ones in question and explain the situation as best I can to see if they wouldn't be willing to come here and sit down with us so we can, eventually, get you back in the fold again. Molly's the toughest nut to crack, though, so we'd better start with her. Agreed?"
"Agreed," Harry concurred. "Meanwhile, I'd better get home to meet my girls. Luna's going to be sending them through any time now. Thanks again for your help, Minerva."
McGonagall smiled and nodded in Harry's direction as he left for his home, his girls, and hopefully, to begin his new life with his one true love as soon as it could be arranged.
* * * * *
It took just over two hours for Harry and Hermione to officially dissolve their marriage and make arrangements for the care and education of their girls. After the final paperwork had been taken care of, Hermione handed back the diamond solitaire engagement/wedding set she had worn for ten years, and Harry pocketed it without a word, intending to possibly sell it or give it to one of his girls later on if she said she wanted to use her mother's wedding ring for her own wedding.
The girls seemed to accept their parents' breakup fairly well, and they seemed pleased with the visitation arrangements, at least for the moment. The arrangements could always be modified later if necessary. What mattered was that they would still get to see their mother.
McGonagall owled Harry regarding Remus and informed him that Remus had confessed to her that he still maintained great affection for Harry despite what he had done, but he was very displeased with his actions nonetheless. He also declared that the disowning would stand until and unless Harry could prove to Remus's satisfaction that he had truly repented and turned over a new leaf ... i.e. doing everything he could to win back Ginny's love. Just the same, Minerva had no intention of giving up, knowing well how stubborn Remus was, but also knowing that she was just as stubborn and intended to keep after him until he was willing to fully reconcile with Harry, albeit in an "iron hand in velvet glove" manner.
Harry was somewhat encouraged knowing that Remus still cared about him. He couldn't really blame Moony for being upset with him, but it hurt deeply to have been disowned. It felt almost as bad as if one of his own parents had disowned him, and for this reason, Harry intended to do everything he could to prove himself worthy of being reinstated as godson of both Remus and Sirius. He would make them proud of him again, whatever he had to do. Then once he had his surrogate father back, he intended to get his second mother, Molly Weasley, back ... again, by doing whatever he had to do!
It might be too much to ask to actually get Ron back as a friend, much less his best friend as they once were, but it would make him feel better if they could at least be on speaking terms again. Even that would take time, though, and they would have to move carefully, slowly, considering how delicate Ron still was, both physically and emotionally, because of what Harry and Hermione had done. But it was at least a step in the right direction for them to have gone their separate ways.
Not that he really wished for Luna to lose her husband, because Harry sensed that she really did love Ron, but if something did happen and they split up, he hoped that Ron and Hermione would either eventually get together ... or if nothing else, at least be on speaking terms again.
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31 Reviews | 8.45/10 Average
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Oh I am so happy for Hermione, it's good to see she is also making a life for herself.
Now that I've read this chapter, I can say without hesitation that I was right in my last comment about your characterization of Harry and Ginny. You've made Ginny such a doormat that she's ready to jump into bed with Harry even after all of the things that he's done wrong. She has no self-respect.
You might also want to examine your sentence structure. You have sentences that are excessively long; their length does not add to the reader's comprehension. At times, you have misplaced modifiers. Look at the first sentence of this chapter:
<i>When they saw each other again, Ginny wasn’t pleased with Harry’s actions of the previous day shortly after she’d seated herself facing him.</i>
Are you trying to say: <i>As she sat down, Ginny considered her displeasure at Harry's impertinent kiss. </i>
Much of your difficulty stems from the way you try to make your narrator understand everyone's feelings and point of view. If you look at JK Rowling's works, you'll see that we understand the story from Harry's point of view. We don't know what everyone is thinking and feeling, but that doesn't matter. In fact, the story of Harry Potter is stronger because JKR doesn't try to explain every little feeling that the characters have. She is true to the characterization she has created. Harry changes as he gets older, but he is still the same person from Book One to Book Six. JK Rowling's Harry Potter is not the person you are writing about.
I can see that you continue to make Harry the "one in charge" of everything. In your stories, he's always rich and he's always telling everyone what to do.
I had hoped that Ginny would be something like the Ginny we see in JK Rowling's works--a young woman with backbone! My hope was dashed when I saw that once again, you have made Ginny a door mat. She mildly protests his kiss, then she pretty much gives in and accepts all that Harry has done in the past.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Are you sure you've read the entire story? To a degree, you're correct, but if I remember correctly, Harry's parents and Sirius left him a lot of money, and in addition to that, he's earned his share in his work. So he's rich. Something wrong with that? And the people he associates with, he's NOT demanding or dictating everything to everyone; he's asking politely, as with the letter to Luna asking her to look after his girls while he was working. He even offered to pay her.
And I do NOT have Ginny accept Harry back right away. It takes six chapters before he can even touch her, much less kiss her. She told him flat out at the get-go that SHE was the one who was going to be in charge of their relationship and that if he couldn't handle that, that he could leave again right now.
She was even the one who told the Daily Prophet that he and Hermione had returned from America. In fact, Harry's had a lot of trouble in the story, and rightly so...and in Chapter 4, I believe it was, Remus disowned him, basically renounced his position as surrogate godfather (and even took back Sirius's own) until Harry shaped up. If that's not enough for you, so be it. To each his own.
Locking charms? Are we to believe that McGonagall would intentionally hold Hermione against her will? I can't see any of the Hogwarts professors getting involved in a personal matter. It's not at all like them.
Erstwhile wife? Erstwhile means "former" and Harry and Hermione are still married; therefore, Hermione cannot be an "erstwhile wife."
Have you considered using a Beta to help you with your writing problems? While your punctuation and grammar are generally good, you could benefit from someone who could help you with your redundancy issues and with word usage. It seems that you try to use words that are supposedly "educated" but if they're not a natural part of your vocabulary, you will continue to risk using words inappropriately.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Oh really, so "none" of the Hogwarts professors get involved in a personal matter? What about Dumbledore, or doesn't he count? And I seem to recall in the fifth book that McGonagall offered to help Harry become an Auror, despite Umbridge's attempts at interference. Or don't you consider Harry's potential future career a "personal matter"?
No, I don't mean to imply that Hermione would be held against her will; it's just that Harry has been trying to get her to sit down with him to discuss the disposition of their marriage and what to do about their children, and she's been avoiding him. He just wants to make sure she'll stay long enough to get a few important decisions made. Maybe I should have just had the threat made instead of actually carried out.
Okay, and maybe I should also have put 'estranged' instead of 'erstwhile.' Don't worry, I've got a beta who has already mentioned to me about the issues you've mentioned--or at least the majority of them.
Of course, at the moment I'm waiting on the beta'd chapter 6, so there are bound to be changes. Neither have any of the admins said anything to me in regards to things you've mentioned in their messages, and I happen to know that southern_witch is very good at that sort of thing!
My beta has also not mentioned anything about supposed 'mischaracterisation' and I know her style well enough by now to know that she would say as much if she felt the characters were misrepresented in any way. I have read the books umpteen times, so I think I have a pretty good idea how the characters act, think and feel.
In fact, I think I'll even send her some of these reviews and see what she thinks of them. And is there something wrong with representing the feelings of everyone concerned instead of just those of one person? I've written fanfic for 20 years; that's how I've always done my stories and no one's complained about it until now. And maybe the books (for the most part) tell things from Harry's point of view, but they DO delve into the feelings of other characters as well as him. I've seen passages on Hermione's feelings, Ron's feelings...just to name two.
Also, you would do well to keep in mind that at least part of the reason the characters act as they do here is because this is an AU story! People can act differently in AU stories. Maybe it's not precisely as in the books, but the characters are hardly unrecognisable.
One last question--do you have an English degree? I've seen people even with an English degree have no more knowledge of proper punctuation, capitalisation, grammar, spelling or word usage than the average third-grader. (Not you so much, but others I've seen. Makes me wonder how they ever managed to get it!)
Do you really think that your readers needed an explanation of what alimony is?
You repeat yourself a lot when you write. It's almost as if you feel the need to pad your chapters, yet since there is so much redundancy, you actually make the story plodding in nature.
I'm happy to se Harry and Ginny back toghther and fences being mended so to speak. However, I would like to see Hermione get on with her life. She is still a young woman and she wasn't evil, just misguided. Let's see if she can get hooked up with some one so she doen't wind up bitter.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Don't worry, she will be...it'll just take a little while yet.
why isn't hermione watching the kids while harry is off playing house?
good chapters.
more please.
Another great chapter, but what's happening with Hermione?
I'm happy that Molly was able to forgive Harry, but even Happier that Ginny is making him tow the line.
Another great chapter! I'm so glad Molly excepted Harry back into the family. I can't wait until Harry meets his daughter. And when Helen and Lily meet the older Lily.
what a huge mess they have created..
too bad this story couldn't be given to teenagers. maybe they could learn something from it. then again...
great story.
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WOW! This is a really great story. Definitely going to add it to my faves. I can't wait for an update. I just hope it has a happy ending. Harry/Ginny are my favorite.
This is a great transitional chapter, off with the old on with the new. This being off with a mistake that should never have happened to reperaion of said mistake and building new bridges.
So, exactly why is Draco angry with Harry? It seems that Harry's departure gave Draco the ability to pursue and marry Ginny. That would be a good thing.
On the other hand, now that Draco and Ginny are divorced, he shouldn't care about Harry's return.
And what kind of father would lay out his marital difficulties to his young daughters? That's poor parenting!
It seems like their decision to go to America without telling their friends the truth was hardly worthy of two Gryffindors.
How sad for everyone, I can't understand why those two ran off, maybe P.T.S.S.?
awwwww, how sweet! Can't wait for more.
I really liked this chapter. I just love weddings. One question, though... When did Draco become head of Slytherin. I thought he was a business man. Is he a teacher now, too?
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Draco IS a businessman, at least in this story. It's just that he recently gave a hefty financial contribution to the school (remember all the times Lucius did things like that?), enough so that he was granted an honorary professorship at Hogwarts and thus was able to become Head of Slytherin House. He can't always be there, of course--after all, he does have a business to run--but he does drop by several times a week. (On one of those times he just happens to run into Harry and confront him about Ginny, as shown in Chapter 8.) Hope that answers your question.
Hermione caught the bouqet, traditionally that means she is next to marry. Since Ron and Ginney are finally together I am assuming that Hermione's story is going to pick up. I'm happy for tthe newlyweds and can't wait to see more.
ohhhh could Hemione and Draco make a go of it???
Nice chapter, but how's Hermione? Is she and Ginney going to be friends again? Good to see Harry fixing his life back up too.
I really liked this chapter. I sure hope Ron comes 'round soon.